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段考应用文写作
目录
contents
不定式作成分
评分标准
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段考真题作文拆解
语料积累
佳作赏析
评分标准
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第五档(很好) (13~15分):
完全完成了试题规定的任务。
(1)覆盖所有内容要点,表达清楚、合理;
(2)应用了较多复杂、高级的语法结构和词汇;
(3)语法结构或词汇方面使用准确,即使有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级
词汇所致;表现了较强的语言运用能力;
自然流畅地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。
整体而言，完全达到了预期的写作目的。
终极目标
1. 覆盖所有要点
2. 语法复杂，词汇高级
3. 衔接词流畅
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好 印 象—— 卷面整洁
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好 形 式—— 合理分段
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好 给 分—— 要点全面
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好 内 容—— 虎头凤尾
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好 逻 辑—— 巧用连词
好 语 言—— 语言华丽
目标分解
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佳作赏析
2.
Hearing that ......, I am writing to因为听到... , 所以...
So, withdraw your hesitation and join in, your presence is highly appreciated!
所以，放下你的犹豫，加入我们吧，你的到来将备受期待！
stimulate vt 刺激，激励
stimulate the passion for
launch vt 发起，开始
regarding prep 关于
The school will launch a course regarding ......
practical adj 实用的
I would be more than glad if you find my suggestions practical.
raise awareness of 提升意识
call on people to take action
呼吁人们采取行动
衔接词
morever adv 此外而且
thus adv 因此
Having read....
extend my hearfelt gratitude to
表达诚挚感激
immerse sb in 沉浸于
be totally captured / gripped by....
完全被吸引
最终，最后（衔接词）
Ultimately
Eventually
cordially adv 诚挚地
initially adv 最初地
vivid adj 生动的
boost n 增长，刺激
a boost for / to
Words fail to convey my gratitude for sth.
My gratitude to sb for sth is beyond description.
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段考真题作文拆解
(24年合肥一中段1)
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Ben得知你校开展了丰富多彩的校本课，请你给他写信介绍你最喜欢的体育校本课 (PE school-based course) 的相关情况，内容如下：
1. 上课的时间和内容；2. 喜欢的原因和收获。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
真题拆解
内容要点
背景介绍
Dear Ben,
My school has launched a series of school-based courses. I’m writing to share with you my favorite one, PE school-based course.
The course, scheduled to be held every Friday afternoon, is very colorful, including all kinds of sports such as basketball, soccer, volleyball, and badminton. It is also the best part of my week, because not only can it enhance my physical fitness, making me fresh and energetic throughout the day, but also help me make like-minded friends while learning. What’s the most important is that I have gained a deeper insight into team spirit.
How about your favorite school-based course Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
背景介绍
收尾
My school has launched a series of school-based courses. I’m writing to share with you my favorite one, PE school-based course.
范文拆解----开头
背景介绍：
Hearing/Knowing that you are interested in the school-based courses held in our campus, I am writing to share with you my favourite one, PE school-based course.
The course, scheduled to be held every Friday afternoon, is very colorful, including all kinds of sports such as basketball, soccer, volleyball, and badminton.
范文拆解—活动内容
安排在
be scheduled for
be scheduled to do sth
Scheduled for Friday afternoons, this course provides a variety of sports program that includes activities such as basketball, soccer, volleyball, and badminton.
非谓语！！
It is also the best part of my week, because not only can it enhance my physical fitness, making me fresh and energetic throughout the day, but also help me make like-minded friends while learning.
范文拆解—喜欢原因
“Not only” 部分倒装（助动词/情态动词/be动词提前，主语后置）
“But also”部分不倒装（保持正常语序）
倒装规则：
not only but also 练习
He forgot the keys.
He left the lights on as well.
Not only did he forget the keys, but he also left the lights on.
She is a talented singer.
She is also a skilled dancer.
Not only is she a talented singer, but she is also a skilled dancer.
助动词 did 提前
be 动词提前
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语料积累
Faced with challenging training, whatever challenges arose, she always insisted on using all her leisure time to voluntarily strengthen training until she entirely grasped it with high quality.
Suffering from stressful training, tough as it was, she became addicted to it.
非谓语写作运用
Faced with challenging training.
Facing challenging training.
be faced with 被动语态变成非谓语
tough as it was
形容词/名词/副词/动词 + as/though + 主语 + 谓语
让步状语从句
Child as he is, he knows a lot.
他虽然是个孩子，但懂得很多。
死扣一个例子记住！
Doggy as I am, I will not do such a thing.
Suffering from stressful training, tough as it was, she became addicted to it.
whatever challenges arose
whatever = no matter what 不论，不管
让步状语从句
Wherever you go, I will follow you.
Faced with challenging training, whatever challenges arose, she always insisted on....
no matter what challenges arose
好作文必备五大结构
1.分词的使用
2.with结构
3.It 句式
4.倒装句
5.定语从句
表时间先后（Having done 动作已完成） Hearing this, a few people began to run after him.
表逻辑关系（主动/被动） Encouraged by the fact that …, we made every effort to do …
描述人物、景色、事件或者状态
强调句 It is + 被强调部分+ that…
主语从句 It作形式主语的主语从句
形式主语 It is + adj./n. + for sb. to do sth.
Only/Not only... b. 地点状语放句首 c. As引导的倒装句
On the wall hangs a picture of our family.
引出新人物、新事物
a.两句合成一句（限制性定从）
b.用which指代前面整件事情（非限制性定从）
He was carrying a, with a large suitcase in his left hand.
Homework
假如你是李华，你在大学期间创建了一个社团（任意发挥，比如王者，金铲铲等），写信给你的朋友peter 介绍一下。
1. 社团名称和内容；2. 创办社团的原因与收获
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Thank you
THANK YOU FOR LISTENING

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