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教材版本：人教版2019
授课课型：高三总复习
授课课题：应用文写作复习---申请信
授课文本：
Dear Sir/ Madam,
My name is Kelly Xu. I’d like to apply for the position of camp helper.
To begin with, I’m enthusiastic and easy-going. I helped to organize a three-day tour of my city for visiting exchange students. It was successful and they really liked me! Moreover, as for my passion, I enjoy Chinese calligraphy and I’m still practicing it every day. I believe I could conduct classes for visitors to help them learn more about this beautiful aspect of Chinese culture.
All in all, I am keen to extend a warm welcome to them and share with them an unforgettable experience. I kindly look forward to your early reply.
Yours faithfully,
Kelly Xu
Our summer camp is building a team of keen young people to help us attend to hundreds of students from all over the world. Applicants should have the following:
a friendly attitude; (personality)
a passion for Chinese culture. (competence)
Send your application letter to: receptionist @FAFSC.com
Learning
Objectives
Review words and expressions to describe personality and competence;
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Review the elements and structure of an application letter;
Review and apply the “P.E.E.L.” writing logic to write an application letter;
Develop an awareness of career planning and self-presentation.
Writing Task
假如你是李华，潍坊国际风筝节正在招募英文志愿者，你对此活动特别感兴趣，请你写申请信去应聘，内容包括：
胜任理由；
希望入选。
I. [Lead in] Pop Quiz
Are you qualified to be a volunteer
II. [Read and Review] Review elements and structure
Our summer camp is building a team of keen young people to help us attend to hundreds of students from all over the world. Applicants should have the following:
Send your application letter to: receptionist@FAFSC.com
a friendly attitude;
(personality)
a passion for Chinese culture.
(competence)

Dear Sir/ Madam,
My name is Kelly Xu. I’d like to apply for the position of camp helper.
To begin with, I’m enthusiastic and easy-going. I helped to organize a three-day tour of my city for visiting exchange students. It was successful and they really liked me! Moreover, as for my passion, I enjoy Chinese calligraphy and I’m still practicing it every day. I believe I could conduct classes for visitors to help them learn more about this beautiful aspect of Chinese culture.
All in all, I am keen to extend a warm welcome to them and share with them an unforgettable experience. I kindly look forward to your early reply.
Yours faithfully,
Kelly Xu
Find key points that meet the requirements.
Write down the structure in the boxes on the left.
Beginning: Self-intro and purpose
Body: personality and competence
Ending: Commitment
To begin with, I’m enthusiastic and easy-going. I helped to organize a three-day tour of my city for visiting exchange students. It was successful and they really liked me!
Activity 1: Analyze the text and write down “P.E.E.L.”.
III. [Analyze and Apply] Review “P.E.E.L.”.
Point
Evidence
Explanation
Link
P____
Main point.
Facts,
Examples,
Experiences,
Statistics.
How evidence supports the main, points.
Linking words to connect points.
E____
E____
L____
Activity 2: Figure out what “P.E.E.L.” means.
Point
Main point.
Facts,
Examples,
Experiences,
Statistics.
How evidence supports the main point.
Linking words to connect points.
Evidence
Explanation
Link
Activity 2: Figure out what “P.E.E.L.” means.
Moreover, as for my passion, I enjoy Chinese calligraphy and I’m still practicing it every day. I believe I could conduct classes for visitors to help them learn more about this beautiful aspect of Chinese culture.
P
Point
E
Evidence
E
Explanation
L
Link
Activity 3: Mark “P.E.E.L.” in Kelly’s second point.
1) I am a patient and helpful person. I always take the time to listen to others and understand their needs, so that I can help them in the right way. Therefore, I believe I can work well with visiting students to our school.
P
Point
E
Evidence
E
Explanation
L
Link
Activity 4: Practice “P.E.E.L.” by yourselves.
2) Additionally, I have strong communication skills. As head of the English club, I organized debates and improved team cooperation. It taught me how to express ideas and work with others as a team.
P
Point
E
Evidence
E
Explanation
L
Link
Activity 4: Practice “P.E.E.L.” by yourselves.
Dear Sir/ Madam,
My name is Kelly Xu. I’d like to apply for the position of camp helper.
To begin with, I’m enthusiastic and easy-going. I helped to organize a three-day tour of my city for visiting exchange students. It was successful and they really liked me! Moreover, as for my passion, I enjoy Chinese calligraphy and I’m still practicing it every day. I believe I could conduct classes for visitors to help them learn more about this beautiful aspect of Chinese culture.
All in all, I am keen to extend a warm welcome to them and share with them an unforgettable experience. I kindly look forward to your early reply.
Yours faithfully,
Kelly Xu
IV. [Review and Expand] Review Useful Expressions
Activity 1: Underline useful expressions in paragraph 2
Activity 2:
Underline more useful expressions
ONLY in paragraph 2
of each given passage.
Activity 2: Underline more useful expressions in paragraph 2 of each given passage.
Passage 1: 2019全国I卷
假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：1. 写信目的；2. 个人优势；3. 能做的事情。
注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China during this summer vacation. I’m delighted to learn that volunteer students are wanted for a Chinese painting exhibition to be held in the local art gallery. Now I’m writing to apply for the position.
First of all, having been exposed to the English language since a young age, I’m now a fluent speaker, and I have cross-culture awareness. So I believe I can communicate freely with people in English. What’s more, my passion for Chinese art and related knowledge make me a brilliant organizer, which will help a lot to keep the exhibition in order.
All in all, my sense of responsibility will make me a qualified volunteer. I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
Activity 2: Underline more useful expressions in paragraph 2 of each given passage.
Passage 2: 重庆市巴蜀中学校高2023届高三第5次适应性考试
假定你是李华，国际绿色和平组织驻重庆办事处（Greenpeace Office in Chongqing）正在招募照母山生态环保宣传志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给办事处负责人写一封申请信。内容包括：
1. 写信目的；2. 个人优势；3. 希望获准。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80 左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear sir or madam,
I am Li Hua, a high school student in Chongqing. Having read the recruitment information for volunteers to publicize eco-environmental protection, I am so interested that I am writing to apply for the program, hoping to have an opportunity to make some contributions.
First, with a profound love for nature and a strong sense of responsibility for our environment, I am highly motivated to participate in the voluntary work. Besides, I have a good command of English, which enables me to efficiently introduce to foreigners our missions and measures in environmental protection.
I hope I’m a promising candidate. Thank you for your time and consideration. Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
Activity 2: Underline more useful expressions in paragraph 2 of each given passage.
Passage 3: 2023年辽宁葫芦岛高三联考阶段练习
假定你是李华，大学生运动会将在你居住的地方举办，现正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封信。内容应包括：
1. 个人情况；2. 胜任理由；3. 承诺提供最佳服务。
注意：1.词数在 100 词左右；2 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Hua. I would like to work as a volunteer for the FISU World University Games.
As a local resident, I am sociable, and I am familiar with the city’s environment and culture, which will help me serve the participants better. Besides, I am proficient in English, and I am fond of sports. I once organized a table tennis game for international students in my school. Therefore, I believe I’m a valuable addition to your team.
I believe these qualities make me a suitable candidate for this position. I promise I will do my best to provide the best service for the FISU World University Games.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
Activity 2: Underline more useful expressions in paragraph 2 of each given passage.
Passage 4: 山东省潍坊市2019-2020学年度高一上学期期中英语试题
假设你是李华，你校英语辩论社团招收成员，你想申请加入。请你用英语写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 个人简介（性格、特长等）；2. 表达期望。
注意：1. 词数在80词左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Hua, a student from Class 2, Grade 11. I’d like to apply to be a member in the English Debate Club.
To start with, I am an outgoing and responsible person with a strong interest in debate. I enjoy expressing my opinions clearly and listening to others’ ideas, which I believe are important qualities for a debater. Besides, my good English skills will allow me to communicate confidently during debates. I have won prizes in several school English speech contests and often serve as an English host at school events, which have enhanced my fluency and confidence.
I sincerely hope to become a member of the English Debate Club, where I can improve my speaking ability, broaden my horizons, and contribute to the team’s success.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
V. Writing Task
假如你是李华，潍坊国际风筝节正在招募英文志愿者，你对此活动特别感兴趣，请你写申请信去应聘，内容包括：
胜任理由；
希望入选
注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 适当添加细节，使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I’m Li Hua. I’d like to apply for the position of volunteer in the Weifang International Kite Festival. ____________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________
I hope you’ll take me into consideration. I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Sincerely Yours,
Li Hua
Check while you write
Language Have I used appropriate words and expressions to describe personality and competence
Coherence Have I organized my ideas clearly and applied “P.E.E.L.” properly
Content Have I included all the information required and kept it relevant to the task
Reader Awareness Have I written in a way that suits the reader’s expectations and purpose
Our life has no meaning. It is what we do that gives it meaning. Choose wisely and never regret.
THANK YOU!

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