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A Report
高考应用文写作之活动报道
（真题赏析）
（审题与文章结构）
（典型错误）
（常用语料）
一. 报道真题赏析
题型特点：新闻、活动报道的特点是以事实为依据，
把所发生的事情记述下来，为期刊投稿。
假定你是李华，是你校英文报的记者。上周六你校学生会主办了一场英语经典作品朗诵比赛。请你以“An English Recitation Competition”为题写一篇英文报道，内容包括：
1.参赛选手；
2.比赛过程；
3.活动意义。
注意:
1.写作词数应为100左右；
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
1.（2024年新高考英语冲刺复习）
An English Recitation Competition
To encourage us students to appreciate English culture, last Saturday, an English Classic Recitation Competition was held by our school at the lecture hall . Representatives of each class took an active part in the competition.
Participants were required to recite an English classic within 5 minutes. Many classic works were recited, among which poems were the most popular choice. After fierce competition the first 8 winners were chosen and given prizes.
The competition was highly spoken of because not only did it enrich our school life, but also offered a wonderful opportunity for us to have a better understanding of English classics.
1.（2022年浙江·校联考一模）
假定你是李华，上周六你校举办了一场歌咏比赛。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1.参加人员；
2.比赛情况；
3.活动评价。
A Singing Competition
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【答案】 A Singing Competition
Last Saturday, our school organized a singing competition. It was a sunny day which was suitable for an outdoor activity. All the students and teachers in our school took part in it,which lasted for 3 hours. To our excitement,there were 40 participants competing with each other,including 6 teachers. It was our headmaster who presented the awards to the winners.
Through this competition, not only did we gain the courage but also we learned how to take chances and gain confidence. We all think it meaningful and necessary to hold such an activity.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就上周六学校举办的歌咏比赛，为学校写一篇英文报道。
第一步：词汇积累
举办：organize→hold/launch 参加：take part in→ participate in
愉快：excitement→ amazement 比赛：competition→match
第二步：句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Last Saturday, our school organized a singing competition.
拓展句：Last Saturday, our school organized a singing competition, which was greatly interesting.
第三步：高分句式
【高分句型1】
All the students and teachers in our school took part in it, which lasted for 3 hours运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】
It was our headmaster who presented the awards to the winners.（运用了强调句结构）
2.（2023年江苏统考一模）
假定你是李华，上周你校举办了中国传统文化周活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1. 活动目的；
2. 活动内容；
3. 活动反响。
A Traditional Chinese Culture Week
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【答案】 A Traditional Chinese Culture Week
A traditional Chinese culture week campaign was launched last week in our school to enhance students’confidence in our national culture.
During the campaign, we students were encouraged to participate in numerous cultural activities, including singing Chinese folk songs, attending Chinese calligraphy classes and introducing traditional Chinese festivals. Every one of us chose one to our taste and we enjoyed ourselves very much.
The campaign was a success and has gained in popularity among us students, which will encourage us tofurther spread Chinese culture in future.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生为上周你校举办的中国传统文化周活动写一篇报道，内容包括：活动目的；活动内容；活动反响。
第一步：词汇积累
增加：enhance→boost 参加：participate in→take part in
许多：numerous→masses of 获得：gained→obtained
第二步：句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：A traditional Chinese culture week campaign was launched last week in our school to enhance students’confidence in our national culture.
拓展句：A traditional Chinese culture week campaign was launched last week in our school, whose purpose was to enhance students’confidence in our national culture.
第三步：高分句式
[高分句型1]
During the campaign, we students were encouraged to participate in numerous cultural activities, including singing Chinese folk songs, attending Chinese calligraphy classes and introducing traditional Chinese festivals. (运用了非谓语动词作宾语)
[高分句型2]
The campaign was a success and has gained in popularity among us students, which will encourage us to further spread Chinese culture in future. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
3.（2022年山东潍坊·统考高三期末）
假定你是李华，你校近期举行了秋冬季体育运动会。请为你校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1.介绍运动会的情况；
2.你的感受。
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【答案】
As scheduled, our annual sport meeting was held last today. We went to the campus to watch the final of the 4 x100-meter relay. So extraordinary was the experience that I would never forget. I had never imagined that the atmosphere at a sports event could be so intense. The runners strained to run as fast as they could, while trying not to drop their batons at the change. I was also caught up in the excitement and cheered so hard that I thought my lungs would burst! It was so wonderful to be part of this sporting moment.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你校近期举行了秋冬季体育运动会。请为你校英文报写一篇报道。
第一步：词汇积累
举办、主办：hold→host 按计划：as scheduled→as planned
不可思议的：extraordinary→amazing 努力：strain→strive
第二步：句式拓展
简单句变复杂句
原句：As scheduled, our annual sport meeting was held last today.
拓展句：As scheduled, our annual sport meeting was held last today,which turned out to be a huge success.
第三步：高分句式
【高分句型1】
So extraordinary was the experience that I would never forget. (运用了so+adj.+that引导的结果状语从句和部分倒装)
【高分句型2】
I had never imagined that the atmosphere at a sports event could be so intense. (that引导的宾语从句)
4.（2022年全国·模拟）
假定你是李华，你所在的学校上周末成功举办了一场有关阅读英文诗歌的活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道介绍此项活动，内容包括：
活动目的
2. 活动内容；
3. 活动的意义。
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【答案】
To develop students’ interest in learning English, an activity about reading English poems was successfully held in the lecture hall of our school last week.
During the activity, students were invited to share the ideas of the English poems they had read and what they had got from reading them. Some of the students even recited beautiful sentences, which left a deep impression on others. After the activity, more students had a strong desire to read English poems.
All in all, it was a meaningful and impressive activity.
【导语】本文是一篇应用文。要求考生用英文写一篇报道介绍上周末学校举办的一场有关阅读英文诗歌的活动。
第一步：词汇积累
邀请：invite→ask 观点：idea→opinion 获得：get→gain 总之：all in all→in a word
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：All in all, it was a meaningful and impressive activity.
拓展句：All in all, it was a meaningful and impressive activity, which made us learn a lot of knowledge.
第三步：高分句式
[高分句型1]
During the activity, students were invited to share the ideas of the English poems they had read and what they had got from reading them.(省略了that的定语从句，以及what引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]
Some of the students even recited beautiful sentences, which left a deep impression on others.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
5.（2023年新疆·统考一模）
假定你是李华，你们学校上周末举办了校园艺术节活动，请你为学校广播台写一篇报道。内容包括：
1.时间、地点;
活动安排;
3.活动意义。
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【答案】
Our school launched an art show entitled “The Most Beautiful Campus Art” last weekend, to which we students and all teaching staff gave an active response as well as a big applause.
The art works submitted assumed in various forms of photos, paintings, handcrafts and calligraphy works. All of them not only presented the beauty of intelligence and diligence but also reflected students’ aesthetic consciousness. The headmaster thought highly of the works, admitting that it was a symbol of new youth’s energetic style. The art show has far-reaching influence, through which students can learn more about Chinese culture.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为学校广播台写一篇报道，内容包括校园艺术节活动的时间、地点，活动的安排以及意义。
第一步：词汇积累
举行：launch →hold 除此之外，还……：as well as →apart from
呈现，展示：present →show 意识：consciousness →awareness
第二步：句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The art works submitted assumed in various forms of photos, paintings, handcrafts and calligraphy works.
拓展句：The art works which were submitted assumed in various forms of photos, paintings, handcrafts and calligraphy works.
第三步：高分句式
【高分句型1】
Our school launched an art show entitled “The Most Beautiful Campus Art” last weekend, to which we students and all teaching staff gave an active response as well as a big applause.（运用了过去分词短语作定语和“介词+which”引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】
The headmaster thought highly of the works, admitting that it was a symbol of new youth’s energetic style.（运用了现在分词短语作状语）
二. 审题与文章结构
假如你是李华，上周你班举办了英文歌曲演唱大赛。请你为校英语报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1. 时间、地点；
2. 比赛情况；
3. 活动反响。
注意：
1．写作词数应为100左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
三. 典型错误
体裁错误，写成了书信的格式。不明白报道是什么，以为自己真的是记者去做报道。
开头多写成了Hello everyone，I’m Li hua. 第一段结尾写成，Let me introduce it to you；结尾写成Thanks for listening!/ Looking forward to your reply./ How about you / Yours, Li hua.等；
要点详略判断错误，第一段大篇幅写活动目的；第二段活动情况
写的不详细；第三段活动反响或活动意义的拓展少且不够深入；
语法错误，如ln/At/On (the) last week; 时态错误, 没用过去时；时间地点类表达多语病。
句型简单，少高级句型；
未描写具体比赛情况，而去描写其他无关活动
7.写歌曲名错误地用了书名号
8. 单词拼写错误严重；冠词错误使用
9.段首不空格，字数不够字迹潦草，看不清楚，
10.文中出现真实学校名，班级名，甚至老师名；
An English Song Singing Competition
活动目的To arouse our interest in English, 时间、地点our class held an English song singing competition in our classroom last week.参与者All students took an active part in the competition in groups .
活动过程/情况The competition started at 7 p.m. and lasted two hours. Students from each group were required to sing their favorite English song within 5 minutes. Their wonderful performances made all of us thrilled. After heated competition, the first 3 winners were chosen and given prizes.
活动评价/意义The activity was highly spoken of because not only did it enrich our school life, but it also developed our of love for English,evoking our love for English culture.
四. 报道特点及写作步骤
题型特点：新闻、活动报道的特点是以事实为依据，
把所发生的事情记述下来。
写作思路与步骤 ：
第一步：事件发生的目的，时间、地点、主办方和参与者。
第二步：事件的整个过程
第三步：对事件的评价或者自身的感悟。
1.Aimed at 活动目的, a/an 活动名称 organized by 主办方, which was/is themed by/on活动主题 will be/was/is being held at/in 活动地点、活动时间。
仿写：为了鼓励学生们走近大自然，我们学校在9月20日组织了一次以自然为主题的登黄山活动。
1.Aimed at encouraging the students to get close to nature, a mountain-climbing activity organized by our school, which was themed on nature was held in Mount.Huangshan on september 20th.
2.With the aim of getting close to nature, a mountain-climbing activity themed nature was organized by our school on september 20th in Mount.Huangshan, attracting many people’s wide-spread attention.
【Para 1句式】
目的、时间、地点、事件、主办方、参加者
活动目的: （左栏）
call on号召/appeal to呼吁 more students to..
....encourage students to...
spread the awareness意识/culture of...
raise提高/arouse激起 the students awareness of.
cultivate培养/nuture培养 the students habit of...
broaden students horizon/view/ vision视野
enable students to have a better/deeper
understanding of...
promote促进 mutual understanding/exchange of
experience the charm魅力 of
enrich the students school /campus life
ignite点燃/ kindle点燃/fuel燃烧/stimulate刺激 students
enthusiasm热情/passion热情/interest in ...
活动目的: （右栏）
strengthen/improve/boost/promote促进/enhance
students ability of...
ignite点燃/spark激起/trigger引发students’
enthusiasm/passion for
raise students' awareness of
foster促进 the concept概念,观念 of
appeal to呼吁 everyone to do
foster促进/promote促进/enhance加强 the sense of
responsibility
allow students to have a more comprehensive全面的
understanding of /gain deep insights洞察力 into
【Para 2句式】
2.As scheduled, the highly-anticipated activity/campaign started with a lecture given by an expert, making us have a better understanding of ...
3.As scheduled, the highly-anticipated activity/campaign kicked off with a lecture given by an expert, making us have a better understanding of ...
仿写：按照日程，这一备受期待的活动如期于周六上午8点举行，持续3个小时。
As scheduled, the highly-anticipated activity started at 8 am on Saturday morning and it lasted for three hours.
活动过程
【Para 3可用句式】
评价或自身感悟
1.This activity was undoubtedly a success, through which everyone's interest in/ enthusiasm for/ awareness of...was enhanced, with resolve to do sth.
2.Through/By joining/participating in the activity, you wil...
3. Joining in the activity will surely enable you to...
4. Exposed to the... , you will...(邀请信:参与活动的好处)3、From this activity,/Having participated in the activity, I realized that...(经历感受)
5. It was such a meaningful activity that students are looking forward to the next one.
或：It was so meaning an activity that it students are looking forward to the next one.
【Para 3 句式】
评价或自身感悟
6. Everyone thinks highly of高度评价 this activity, /The activity was highly spoken of for it is a good chance to...
7.The activity turned out to be/proves to be a great success. Not only does it.... but it also... 这次活动取得了巨大成功，它不仅....，而且.... (not only 倒装句)
8.It is through the activity that we...正是通过这个活动，我们......(强调状语)
仿写：直到晚上6点半， 活动才结束。 （强调时间状语）
It was not until half past six in the evening that the activity came to an end.

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