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基于教材文本的应用文写作
—— 以译林B6U1 Wish you were here: Reading 为例
By the end of this section, students will be able to:
identify the structure and analyze the language features of the model article;
comprehend and grasp the four writing techniques used in the model article;
apply the four writing techniques to write an introduction to Weifang in class;
create an article on a new place with the learned techniques after class.
Teaching Objectives
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Wish you were here
In-class writing task:
Promote your hometown
随着全国多地旅游爆火，广大网友纷纷化身家乡宣传大使为家乡代言，请你为Chinese National Geography 写一篇短文来介绍你的家乡。要点包括：
Introduction
Conclusion
(B6U1 Reading)
Main body
Main body
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Introduction
02
Main body
03
Conclusion
Natural scenery
Unique cultures
Tourist activities
STRUCTURE
Writing tip 1: Clear Structure
Writing tip 2:
Descriptive language
Canada is like a blooming flower, unfolding with breathtaking beauty and richness to win the heart of those who enjoy what it has to offer.
Simile (明喻)
Rhetorical device (修辞手法)
Effect
Introduction
Descriptive adjectives
Weifang is like , unfolding with breathtaking beauty and richness to win the heart of those who enjoy what it has to offer.
a timeless and vibrant
(生动多彩的) scroll
Introduction
Main body
To the east of the Pacific coast rise the grand Rocky Mountains, which are home to high peaks and deep valleys carved by ice and water.
Inversion (倒装)
Natural scenery
Why
Rocky Mountains
To the south of the Shandong plains the famous Yunmen Mountain, which features a giant “shou” (longevity) character carved upon its cliff.
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Main body
Natural scenery
stands
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If you are looking for something off the beaten track, you may visit the Cape Breton Island, where you can dance to fiddle tunes and enjoy the cultures and traditions of Celtic settlers.
Main body
Unique cultures
Non-restrictive relative clause
(非限制性定语从句)
B6U1 Grammar and usage
the Cape Breton Island
If you want to dive into the profound cultural heritage, don’t miss the World Kite Museum and the Yangjiabu Folk Culture Village,
_____________________________
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Main body
Unique cultures
where you can discover a splendid
collection of kites from around the globe
and the art of traditional woodblock paintings.
Woodblock painting
In Montreal, one of the largest French-speaking cities in the world, you can sample the food with a typical French flavor and see the original buildings in the French style of architecture.
Main body
Tourist activities (What to do/eat)
Apposition
(同位语)
In Montreal, one of the largest French-speaking cities in the world, you can sample the food with a typical French flavor and see the original buildings in the French style of architecture.
Montreal
Main body
Tourist activities (What to do/eat)
In Weifang, ,
you can both
the Kite Capital of the World
witness hundreds of kites
coloring the sky during the annual
International Kite Festival and sample
the local delicacies like “Chaotian Pot”
and Hele Noodles.
Writing tip 3:
Varied sentence patterns
Main body
To the south of the Shandong plains stands the famous Yunmen Mountain, which features a giant “shou” (longevity) character carved upon its cliff.
(1)
If you want to explore the profound cultural heritage, don’t miss …, where you can discover a splendid collection of kites and the art of traditional woodblock paintings. (2) , in Weifang, the Kite Capital of the World, you can witness hundreds of kites coloring the sky during the annual International Kite Festival and sample local delicacies like “Chaotian Pot” and Hele Noodles.
Apart from its natural scenery, Weifang is also a city with unique cultures.
Besides/What’s more…
Writing tip 4: Proper linking devices
Apart from its geographical diversity, Canada’s many rural and urban areas reflect the diversity of its residents.
From the towering mountain peaks to the depths of the forests to the urban centers, Canada’s geographical wonders, ethnic groups and their cultures make it a unique place to live and visit, and visitors are always welcome!
Conclusion
Conclusion
From the giant “longevity” character on the mountain to the colourful kites in the sky to the delicious local cuisine, Weifang’s natural wonders, unique cultures, and appealing tourist activities make it a unique place to visit, and visitors are always welcome!
遇/见/最/好/的/你
Weifang is like a timeless and vibrant scroll, unfolding with breathtaking beauty and richness to win the heart of those who enjoy what it has to offer.
To the south of the Shandong plains stands the famous Yunmen Mountain, which features a giant “longevity” character carved upon its cliff. And the slow-flowing Bailang River gently embraces the city. Apart from its natural scenery, Weifang is also a city with unique cultures. If you want to dive into the profound cultural heritage, don’t miss the World Kite Museum and the Yangjiabu Folk Culture Village, where you can discover a splendid collection of kites and the art of traditional woodblock paintings. What’s more, in Weifang, the Kite Capital of the World, you can witness hundreds of kites coloring the sky during the annual International Kite Festival and sample local delicacies like “Chaotian Pot” and Hele Noodles.
Weifang’s natural wonders, unique cultures, and appealing tourist activities make it a unique place to visit, and visitors are always welcome!
(B6U1 Project)
After-class writing task:
Voice Its Charm
真题链接：
假定你是李华，你校英文网站新增了Amazing China 栏目，请你给该栏目投稿，介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。内容包括：
（1）该地方的总体介绍；
（2）该地方的特色（如文化、景点等）。
注意：
（1）词数不少于80词：
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
Introducing
a place
Introduction
…is like…, revealing/unfolding its… to win the heart of those who enjoy what it has to offer.
Main body:
natural scenery
unique cultures
tourist activities
… …
Apart from its natural scenery, … is also a city with unique cultures.
If you want to…, don’t miss…, where…
In…, a city/place…, you can…
Conclusion
From...to...to…, … is indeed a unique place to visit, and visitors are always welcome!
(B6U1 Integrated skills)
Form groups of four students;
Decide your roles:
Group leader: lead and supervise all team members to complete the writing task on time;
Structure designer: help design the structure and illustrate the key points when necessary;
Language master: provide suggestions concerning the word choice & sentence structures;
Reviewer: examine the writing carefully to avoid any grammatical mistakes.
Complete your own draft of the writing task (individual work);
Evaluate the drafts and provide constructive feedback for improvement (group work).
Writing circle
Thank you!
(B6U1 Welcome to the unit)

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