2026届高考英语二轮复习:高考复习读后续写-动作细节描写课件(共50张PPT)

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2026届高考英语二轮复习:高考复习读后续写-动作细节描写课件(共50张PPT)

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(共50张PPT)
高考复习-读后续写
动作细节描写
走、跑
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Part 1
哭泣、流泪
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头部动作
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眼部动作
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手部动作
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单 词 ①stride   大步走    
②rush/dash  冲   
③charge   猛冲   
④march   行军
⑤flee 逃跑
⑥pace 踱步
⑦drag 拖着脚走
⑧slip 溜
⑨hop 单脚跳行
⑩shamble 蹒跚
skip 蹦蹦跳跳地走
stumble 跌跌撞撞地走
tiptoe 蹑手蹑脚地走
词 块 ①force one's way to   挤到……  
②slide into/out   溜进/出…… 
③wander around   闲逛
④head for/toward 前往……
⑤pace up and down 来回踱步
⑥spring to one's feet 一跃而起
⑦drag one's leg 拖着(受伤的腿)行走
⑧raise oneself on tiptoe    踮起脚尖
句 型 1.After dinner,Brace left the hotel to wander the park nearby.
晚饭过后,布雷斯离开酒店到附近的公园闲逛。
2.She angrily dashed into the office,demanding an immediate apology.
她气愤地直接冲进办公室,要求立刻向她道歉。
3.He forced a passage through the crowd.他从人群中挤过去。
4.Tony unlocked the back door and tiptoed up to the yard.托尼打开后门,蹑手蹑脚地来到后院。
续写语料运用 [用表“动作细节描写:走、跑”的表达补全下面的微场景并背诵]
微场景:“体育比赛”主题下的“走、跑”
  ①____________________________________________(形容词短语作状语),I signed up for the city half-marathon three weeks before.After several days of hard training,finally came the big day.At the beginning of the competition,I was at ease and relaxed,②______________
_______________________(比喻句).However,the following parts began harder and harder for me.When it came to the last five hundred metres,my leg was as heavy as ice-blocks,
③_______________________________________________(比喻句).I almost fell apart and completely lost heart.④___________________________ I heard some voice shouting my name and excitedly cheering up for me.I determined that I wouldn't fail them.I ⑤_________________
___________________________________ with everything I had.Then came screams of excitement—⑥_________,tears of joy streamed down my cheeks.From this experience I learned that just work hard and efforts will pay off in the end.
Determined to build up my strength and willpower
rushing in front
of the crowd as an arrow
so I had to drag my legs,stumbling forward as if drunk
I was about to give up when
gathered all my
strength and dashed to the finishing line
I made it
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微场景:“体育比赛”主题下的“走、跑”
  决心增强我的力量和意志力,三周前我报名参加了城市半程马拉松比赛。经过几天的艰苦训练,重要的一天终于到来了。比赛开始时,我很放松,像箭一样冲在人群前面。然而,接下来的部分对我来说越来越难了。当跑到最后五百米时,我的腿像冰块一样重,所以我不得不拖着腿,跌跌撞撞地向前走,好像喝醉了一样。我几乎崩溃了,完全失去了信心。当我就要放弃的时候,突然听到有人喊着我的名字,激动地为我加油。我决定不能辜负他们。我集中了所有的力量,用尽全力冲向终点线。接着传来了兴奋的尖叫声——我成功了,喜悦的泪水顺着脸颊流了下来。从这段经历中,我了解到只要努力,付出总会有回报。
拓展语料积累 [动作细节描写:哭泣流泪(一)]
单 词 ①weep v. 哭泣   
②water v. 流泪   
③sob vi. 呜咽
④moan vi. 呻吟
⑤sniffle vi. 抽鼻子
⑥wail/bawl vi. 哭号
词 块 ①be bathed in tears       泪流满面      
②fight/hold back tears      抑制眼泪
③be in floods of tears 泪如泉涌
④shed tears of joy 喜极而泣
⑤choke up 哽咽
⑥cry one's eyes/heart out 悲痛欲绝
⑦burst into tears/burst out crying 突然哭起来
⑧cry bitter/lonely tears 留下痛苦/孤独的泪水
⑨eyes be red and swollen from crying 因哭泣眼睛红肿
⑩sob/weep with one's face buried in one's hands 掩面哭泣
句 型 1.When the girl heard the news,her heart ached,and she cried with a burst of tears.
听到这个消息,女孩心痛如绞,眼泪哗哗地哭了起来。
2.She sobbed bitterly,tasting the salt from the tears that streamed/rolled/ poured down her face.
她痛苦地抽泣着,品尝着脸上流下的咸咸的泪水。
3.After a while she looked up,her eyes red and swollen from crying.过了一会儿她抬起头,双眼哭得又红又肿。
4.He stood silently outside her room,tears rolling/streaming/ pouring/ flowing down his cheeks.
他静静地站在她的房间外,泪水顺着脸颊流淌下来。
5.His mother,standing at the door,cried/shed tears of joy.他的母亲站在门口,高兴得流下了眼泪。
续写语料运用 [用表“哭泣流泪”的表达补全下面的微场景并背诵]
微场景:“陷入绝望深渊”主题下的“哭泣流泪”   Susan was caught in a car accident and fainted.She finally came to life after a chain of operations but went blind forever,①__________________________________.Scared to face the future,②____________________________________________ (with复合结构).Seeing his wife ③_____________(分词短语作宾语补足语),her husband,Mark,was heartbroken.He tended her with great care and ④________________________________ ______________ and step out of such a passive dilemma. He bought her a guide dog,encouraged her to learn Braille and accompanied her to join in community activities. Gradually,
⑤______________________________________.She whispered gently,“Mark,thank you.⑥___________________________ __________________________(强调句).”   苏珊在一场车祸中晕倒了。经过一系列的手术后,她终于活了过来,却永远失明,这让她陷入了绝望的深渊。因为害怕面对未来,她经常掩面哭泣。看到妻子泪流满面,丈夫马克心碎了。他非常细心地照顾她,决心帮助她恢复力量和信心,走出困境。他给她买了一只导盲犬,鼓励她学习盲文,并陪她参加社区活动。渐渐地,苏珊的紧张情绪被自信所取代。她轻声说:“马克,谢谢你。是你帮助我渡过了难关。”
which threw her in the depth of despair
she often sobbed/wept with her face buried in her hands
bathed in tears
determined to assist her to regain strength
and confidence
Susan's tension was replaced by confidence
It is you that/who carry me
through the tough situation
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拓展语料积累 [动作细节描写:哭泣流泪(二)]
单 词 ①misty adj. 泪眼模糊的              
②watery adj. 眼泪汪汪的
③tearful adj. 眼含热泪的
④crocodile tears 鳄鱼眼泪,假哭
词 块 ①tears cloud one's eyes     泪水模糊了双眼    
②tears well up in one's eyes  热泪盈眶
③be wet with tears/in tears 泪流满面
④break down 崩溃大哭
⑤be close to tears 快要哭了
⑥with a lump in one's throat 喉咙哽咽
⑦tears roll/stream/run/flow down one's cheeks
泪水滑落脸庞
句 型 1.He stood silently,tears rolling down his cheeks,while the music played.
(独立主格结构)
音乐声响起时,他静静地站着,泪水顺着脸颊流淌下来。
2.There was a lump in my throat and I didn't speak because I knew I would cry.
我哽咽了,没有说话,因为我知道我会哭的。
3.I left quickly,not wanting to break down in front of the children.
我赶快离开了,因为我不想在孩子们面前大哭。
4.Realizing she would never come back to the land and never see her dear friends and teachers,Emma's eyes went red and watery.
想到她将不会再回到这片土地上,再也见不到她亲爱的朋友和老师了,艾玛双眼发红,泪水盈盈。
续写语料运用 [用表“哭泣流泪”的表达补全下面的微场景并背诵]
微场景:“文化交流小天使”主题下的“哭泣流泪”   I still remember the time when ①_____________ ______________ an exchange student in this country. When getting the news,②__________________. Here,I had a very pleasant time, experiencing authentic France culture first hand and making a lot of great friends. However,as the saying goes,all good things come to an end.Even so,when thinking about the moment,③_________________________ _______. When the day really came, I almost broke down.④___________(独立主格),I finally picked up myself,gathered my courage and determined to bid farewell to all my friends in Paris.   我还记得我有幸被选为这个国家的交换生的时候。得到这个消息时,我几乎要哭了。在这里,我度过了一段非常愉快的时光,亲身体验了真正的法国文化,结交了许多极好的朋友。然而,俗话说,天下没有不散的筵席。即便如此,当我想起那一刻时,眼泪还是会顺着脸颊滚落。当那一天真的到来时,我几乎崩溃了。眼睛湿润,我终于振作起来,鼓起勇气,决心向我在巴黎的所有朋友告别。
I was fortunate
to be selected as
I was close to tears
tears would roll down my
Eyes watery
cheeks
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拓展语料积累 [动作细节描写:头部动作]
单 词 ①nod vi. & vt. 点头      
②shake vt. 摇头     
③scratch vt. 挠(头)
④pat vt. 轻拍
⑤turn/twist vt. 转
⑥bow vt.低(头) vi. 鞠躬
词 块 ①hang/drop/lower/bend one's head低头   
②raise one's head       抬头
③throw one's head back 头往后仰
④shake one's head 摇头
⑤with a nod 点头
⑥rest one's head on/against 把头靠在……上面
⑦put/hold/bury one's head in one's hands
双手抱头
句 型 1.Feeling ashamed,the boy lowered his head awkwardly.男孩感到羞愧,尴尬地低下了头。
2.Steven walked slowly to the bus,his head down,tears in his eyes.
史蒂文低着头,眼里含着泪,慢慢地向公交车走去。
3.He felt a gentle touch on his arm.It was his friend John who nodded and smiled at him/smiled at him with a nod.他感到有人轻轻碰了一下他的胳膊。是他的朋友约翰向他点头微笑。
4.Though he was in a bad mood,he dropped/hung/lowered his head to hide it and managed a smile.
尽管他心情不好,但是他低下头来掩饰,勉强笑了一下。
5.Steven rose,sat close to his mother,rested his head on/against her shoulder,and could hardly resist weeping.史蒂文起来坐在母亲身边,将头靠在她的肩膀上,再也忍不住哭泣起来。
续写语料运用 [用表“头部动作”的表达补全下面的微场景并背诵]
微场景:“乐于助人”主题下的“头部动作”   I was walking in the street when a foreigner stopped us,①___________________________(分词作状语).Not knowing what he was saying,I ②___________________ _____________ and _____________________.Fortunately,a shop owner ③_________________________________,I immediately headed him for help.The shop owner followed me to the foreigner and saw him sitting on the roadside,④___________________________________. The shop owner interpreted that he must be in need of medical help now and we'd better send him to the nearest hospital.Hearing that,the foreigner ⑤________________ _______and sighed with relief.   我正走在街上,这时一个外国人拦住了我们,焦急地说着些什么。我不知道他在说什么,尴尬地挠了挠头,扭过头来寻求帮助。幸运的是,一位店主正把头伸出店外,我立即走向他求助。店主跟我走到那个外国人面前,看见他坐在路边,把头靠在他的旅行包上。店主解释说他现在一定需要医疗救助,我们最好把他送到最近的医院。外国人听了,虚弱地点了点头,松了一口气。
saying something with anxiety
scratched my head with
embarrassment
twisted my head for help
was sticking his head out from his shop
resting his head against his huge travel pack
nodded his head
weakly
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拓展语料积累 [动作细节描写:眼部动作]
单 词 ①wink vi. 眨眼  
②stare vi. 盯着看  
③glance vi. 瞥一眼  
④glare vi. 怒视 
⑤scan vt. 细看;端详
词 块 ①eyes be wide with horror    吓得瞪大眼睛   
②look sb in the eye      直视某人的眼睛
③look straight into one's eyes 直视某人的眼睛
④with one's eyes fixed on sth 眼睛盯着某物
⑤one's eyes fall on... 目光落在……
⑥make eye contact 眼神交流
⑦narrow one's eyes 眯起眼睛
⑧squeeze one's eyes shut 紧闭双眼
⑨one's eyes shine/sparkle/glisten with...
眼里闪着……的光芒
句 型 1.Eyeing Anne come in,he eyed her up and down,confused.看到安妮进来,他困惑地上下打量着她。
2.We stared at each other for a while,speechless.我们面面相觑了一会儿,无言以对。
3.Learning the truth,he squeezed his eyes shut and bit his lip,with tears running/rolling/streaming/flowing down his cheeks.得知真相后他紧闭双眼,咬了咬嘴唇,泪水顺着脸颊滑了下来。
4.Upon hearing the news,the boys jumped with joy,their eyes shining with excitement.
一听到这个消息,男孩们就高兴得跳了起来,眼睛里闪烁着兴奋的光芒。
5.So absorbed was Jane that she fixed her eyes on the screen,lost in deep thought.
简全神贯注,目不转睛地盯着屏幕,陷入沉思。
续写语料运用 [用表“眼部动作”的表达补全下面的微场景并背诵]
微场景:“父女情深”主题下的“眼部动作”   Anne's father ①_______________________ when he heard the handle turning. Eyeing Anne come in,
②_______________________,confused. Then,he
③_________________,wondering what had happened to her.④______________________________________ _____,she kept an eye on her father's expression. Anne ⑤________________________ and told him the truth. Learning the truth,⑥________________________ and bit his lip,with tears running/rolling/streaming/flowing down his cheeks.   当安妮的父亲听到门把手转动的声音时,他将目光转向了门口。看到安妮走进来,他困惑地上下打量着她。接着,他眯起双眼,思索着她究竟怎么了。尽管她蓝色的眼眸充满泪水,但她始终关注着父亲的神情。安妮正视着父亲的眼睛,并告知了他真相。得知真相后他紧闭双眼,咬了咬嘴唇,泪水顺着脸颊滑了下来。
turned his eyes to the door
he eyed her up and down
narrowed his eyes
Though her blue eyes were full of/filled with
tears
looked her father in the eye
he squeezed his eyes shut
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拓展语料积累 [动作细节描写:手部动作]
单 词 ①clap vi.& vt. 鼓掌;拍手   
②shake vt. (与某人)握手   
③applaud vi.& vt. 鼓掌
词 块 ①take/hold one's hand     牵某人的手   
②reach for one's hand    伸手抓住某人
③shake one's hand 同某人握手
④clap one's hands 拍手
⑤hold out a hand 伸出手
⑥spread one's hands 摊开双手
⑦rub one's hands together 使劲搓着双手
⑧with one's head in one's hands 双手抱头
⑨hand in hand 手拉手
⑩put one's hands to one's cheeks 用双手捂住脸
句 型 1.Without thinking,I held my hand up so the truck driver wouldn't move forward,and bent down to look at the butterfly.我不假思索地举起手不让卡车司机往前走,然后弯下腰去看那只蝴蝶。
2.She put her hands to her cheeks in embarrassment.窘迫之中她用双手捂住了脸。
3.Her hands shook/trembled as she lifted the glass to her lips.她的手颤抖着把杯子送到唇边。
4.He shook my hands as if we were long lost friends.他握住我的手好像我们是失散多年的朋友。
5.They walked hand in hand along the path.他们手拉手沿着小路走。
6.A strong hand reached out and caught hold of her arm.一只有力的手伸了出来抓住了她的手臂。
续写语料运用 [用表“手部动作”的表达补全下面的微场景并背诵]
微场景:“路遇‘恶犬’” 主题下的“手部动作”
  Two girls were happily ①____________________ when a big dog charged at them,which greatly got them in panic,②_________________________.Faced with the approaching of the dog,so frightened were they that one girl ③________________________ so as to avoid being attacked while the other girl desperately crouched on the ground ④________________________. Just at that time,a young man ⑤______________________________(定语从句) immediately whistled to the dog to come back.He hurried to the girls,⑥________________________ and sincerely apologized for his dog,⑦____________________________________(分词短语作状语).He promised again and again that his dog hadn't hurt anybody,which slowly eased the girls from extreme panic.At last,the girls ⑧_________________________________________,showing their forgiveness but also suggested that he shouldn't loose his dog while walking in the street.  
walking hand in hand
letting out desperate screams
put her hands to her cheeks
with her head in her hands
who put his hands into pockets 
helped them to their feet
rubbing his hands together awkwardly 
shrugged their shoulders and spread their hands
微场景:“路遇‘恶犬’” 主题下的“手部动作”
  两个女孩正愉快地手牵着手走着,这时一只大狗向她们冲来,这让她们非常恐慌,发出绝望的尖叫。面对狗的逼近,女孩们如此害怕,一个女孩用双手捂住了脸以免受到攻击,而另一个女孩则双手抱头绝望地蹲在地上。就在这时,一个把手伸进口袋的年轻人立即吹口哨让狗回来。他急忙走向女孩们,扶她们站起来,笨拙地搓着手真诚地为他的狗道歉。他一再保证他的狗没有伤害过任何人,这慢慢缓解了女孩们的极度恐慌。最后,女孩们耸耸肩,摊开双手,表示原谅,但也建议他在街上散步时不要松开他的狗。
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拓展语料积累 [动作细节描写:“眼看”]
单 词 ①spot vt.& vi. 发现   
②observe vt.& vi. 观察    
③witness vt. 见证  
④glare vi. 怒视
⑤stare/peer/gaze vi. 凝视
⑥browse vt.& vi. 浏览;翻阅
⑦glimpse vt. 瞥见
⑧glance vi. 瞥一眼
⑨peek vi. 偷看
⑩spy vt. 突然看见;发现
词 块 ①catch a glimpse of     瞥见   
②stare into one's eyes    凝视
③fix/focus one's eyes on 盯着
④lower/drop one's eyes 垂下眼睛
⑤glare angrily at 怒视
⑥one's eyes fall on... 目光落在……
⑦one's eyes dance with amusement 眼中洋溢着欢乐
⑧look sb in the eye/look into one's eyes 直视某人的眼睛
⑨one's eyes shine/sparkle/twinkle with excitement
眼里闪着兴奋的光芒
句 型 1.I glanced/looked back over my shoulder to make sure that no one was following me.
我回头瞥了一眼以确保没有人跟着我。
2.Again he cast a look toward the window,and saw an excited face against the glass.
他又朝窗户看了一眼,看见一张激动的脸靠在玻璃上。
3.The teacher fixed/focused his eyes on the cellphone in her hand,waiting patiently for her explanation.
老师的眼睛紧紧盯着她手中的手机,耐心等待她解释。
4.Swallowing hard,I stared into her eyes for a moment,wondering how to cope with the annoying situation.我忍气吞声,盯着她的眼睛看了一会儿,想知道如何应对这种烦人的情况。
5.He secretly glanced down the list of names,finding his name nowhere,which made him extremely disappointed.他偷偷地浏览了一下名单,却找不到自己的名字,这让他非常失望。
续写语料运用 [用表“眼看”的表达补全下面的微场景并背诵]
微场景:“父母欣赏艺术创作”主题下的“眼看”   Shelly finished her painting with great satisfaction. She went to the kitchen to show it to her mother who happened to
①_____________________________.Seeing Shelly,she
②____________________ in confusion until Shelly showed her the picture.③___________________________(独立主格结构) which really attracted her,she ④________________________ ___________,saying she was really fond of it.⑤___________ ____________________________(with复合结构),she believed that Shelly had brought the character in her picture to life. Hearing her mother's comment,Shelly couldn't contain her happiness.⑥______________________________________ (独立主格结构),she dashed out of the kitchen to her father
⑦_________________________________________________ __________(定语从句).   雪莉非常满意地完成了她的画作。她去厨房给母亲看,母亲碰巧朝窗户看了一眼。看到雪莉,她困惑地抬起眼睛,直到雪莉把画拿给她看。她的眼睛落在这张非常吸引她的画作上,她表达了她的极度钦佩,说她真的很喜欢这幅作品。她的眼睛盯着这幅画,她认为雪莉使画中的人物变得非常鲜活了。听到母亲的评论,雪莉无法抑制自己的喜悦。她的眼睛里闪烁着兴奋的光芒,她冲出厨房,来到父亲面前,父亲正惬意地浏览着今天早晨的报纸。
cast a look toward the window
raised/lifted her eyes
Her eyes falling on the picture
conveyed her extreme
admiration
With her
eyes fixed on/upon the picture
Eyes shining/sparkling with excitement
who was glancing at today's morning newspaper with great ease
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拓展语料积累 [动作细节描写:“腿动”]
单 词 ①drag vt. 拖,拉,拽     
②kneel vi. 跪   
③crawl vi. 爬     
④slip vi. 滑倒
⑤wander vt.& vi. 漫游;游荡;闲逛;徘徊
⑥pace vt.& vi. 来回踱步
词 块 ①shaky/trembling legs     颤抖的双腿    
②with one's legs wide apart  双腿叉开
③cross one's legs 盘腿
④drag one's legs 拖着腿行走
⑤get down on one knee 单膝下跪
句 型 1.Upon hearing this,I became overwhelmed by happiness and fell to my knees.听了这话,我高兴极了,跪了下来。
2.Jenny walked slowly to the front,with her legs trembling and her heart beating faster.
珍妮慢慢地走到前面,两腿发抖,心跳加速。
3.With a sinking heart,he dragged his heavy legs back home,worn out.
他垂头丧气,拖着两条沉重的腿,疲惫不堪地回了家。
句 型 4.His feet slipped,and he fell over,flat on his back with his legs wide apart.
他脚下一滑,两腿叉开,仰面朝天摔倒在地。
5.Jill crossed her legs and rested her chin on one fist,as if lost in deep thought.
吉尔盘着腿,一个拳头支着下巴,仿佛陷入了沉思。
6.Overwhelmed by terror,he stood rooted to the ground and felt his knees as weak as rubber.
他惊恐万分,站在原地,双膝发软如同橡胶一般。
续写语料运用 [用表“腿动”的表达补全下面的微场景并背诵]
微场景:“健康的生活方式”主题下的“腿动”   ①_____________________________________(分词短语作状语),Tom decided on jogging to relieve his stress.This morning,he was jogging in the park as usual.Though feeling a little dizzy,he made up his mind to finish the last two laps. oon,②________________________________,his feet slipped,and he fell over,flat on his back ③_____________ ___________(with复合结构).Embarrassed and ached,he struggled to ④_________________________,but failed. He had to sit on the ground for a while,⑤_______________ (分词短语作状语).Minutes later,he seemed to have got a little refreshed,rose to his feet slowly and ⑥_____________ ______________________,worn out.Meanwhile,he promised to himself that he wouldn't skip any breakfast and he would keep a balance between work and life from then on.   汤姆最近压力很大,他决定慢跑来缓解压力。今天早上,他像往常一样在公园里慢跑。尽管感觉有点头晕,他还是下定决心跑完最后两圈。很快,他感到双膝发软如同橡胶一般,他脚下一滑,两腿叉开,仰面朝天摔倒在地。既尴尬又疼痛,他挣扎着用一个膝盖站起来,但没有成功。他不得不在地上盘腿坐了一会儿。几分钟后,他似乎恢复了点精力,慢慢地站起来,拖着沉重的腿,疲惫不堪地回了家。同时他向自己承诺,他不会不吃早餐了,从那以后,他将在工作和生活之间保持平衡。
Having been extremely stressed out recently
he felt his knees as weak as rubber
with his legs
wide apart
get up on one of his knees
crossing his legs
dragged his
heavy legs back home
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拓展语料积累 [动作细节描写:“脚动”]
单 词 ①tiptoe vi. 踮着脚走;蹑手蹑脚地走   
②barefoot adj.& adv. 赤脚   
③dance vi. 雀跃;跳跃
④spring vi. 跳;跃
⑤creep vi. 悄悄地缓慢行进
⑥chase vt.& vi. 追赶
⑦flee vt.& vi. 逃跑
词 块 ①get/rise to one's feet     起立    
②struggle to one's feet     挣扎着站起来
③spring to one's feet 一跃而起
④jump to one's feet 猛地站起、跳起来
⑤leap to one's feet 跳起来
⑥in bare feet 光脚
⑦raise oneself on tiptoe 踮起脚尖
⑧stamp one's feet 跺脚
⑨plant one's feet to the ground 双脚钉在地上
句 型 1.Disappointed and frustrated,the poor man dragged his feet back home.
这个可怜的人既失望又沮丧,慢腾腾地回家了。
2.He leapt/jumped/sprang to his feet/jumped up and rushed out of the living room.他一跃而起,冲出起居室。
3.She sprang to her feet and rushed to greet him.她一跃而起,冲过去迎接他。
4.He was so worn out that he lifted his feet to leave as if they were 100 kilos.
(比喻)
他是如此疲惫以至于抬脚离开时好像双脚有千斤重。
5.She went to the window,raised herself on tiptoe,and cast a glance on the street.Out of a car jumped an elegant man.她走到窗前,踮起脚尖,朝街上看了一眼。一个优雅的男子从一辆车上跳了下来。
6.She slipped out of bed and tiptoed to the window.她溜下床,踮起脚尖走向窗户。
续写语料运用 [用表“脚动”的表达补全下面的微场景并背诵]
微场景: “动物保护”主题下的“脚动”   On an early spring morning when the snow hadn't melted completely,my brother and I were having a walk along the country track when a little cat ①_____________ _______ (分词短语作后置定语) attracted our eyes.Out of curiosity,②__________________.We thought it would ③____________________________ seeing us.But the cat just struggled to its feet,releasing some weak and painful moans. Approaching closer,we found in surprise that the little cat ④________________________________and was badly in need of medical help.Not knowing what to do,
⑤____________________________________________ and then decided that we should take it home,otherwise it would die in the cold weather.   早春的一个早晨,雪还没有完全融化,我和哥哥正在乡间小路上散步,这时一只躺在干稻草上的小猫吸引了我们的目光。出于好奇,我们慢慢地踮着脚尖走向它。我们以为它看到我们会跳起来逃跑,但这只小猫只是挣扎着站起来,发出一些虚弱而痛苦的呻吟。走近时,我们惊讶地发现,这只小猫的一条腿受了重伤,急需医疗救助。不知道该怎么办,我们在原地一动不动站了一会儿,然后决定把它带回家,否则它会在寒冷的天气里死去。
lying on the dry
straw
we tiptoed to it slowly
spring to its feet and flee away
got seriously injured in one of its legs
we planted our feet firmly to the spot for a moment
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拓展语料积累 [动作细节描写:“动胳膊”]
单 词 ①hug vi.& vt.,n. 拥抱   
②wave vi.& vt. 挥臂   
③raise vt. 举起;提起
词 块 ①wave one's arms         挥动双臂      
②fold one's arms      某人双臂交叉
③hold out/open one's arms 某人伸出/张开双臂
④arm in arm 臂挽臂
⑤pull/gather sb into one's arms 把某人拉/抱在怀中
⑥with crossed arms 双臂交叉
⑦put/throw one's arms around sb 搂住某人
⑧take one's arm 挽住某人的胳膊
⑨catch/grab one's arm 抓住某人的胳膊
句 型 1.He stood there with crossed arms,looking angry.他双臂交叉站在那里,看起来很生气。
2.He had to approach her and reached out to catch/grab her left arm.
他只得走近她,伸出一只手抓住她的左胳膊。
3.Having won first prize in the speech contest,they walked home arm in arm.
在演讲比赛中获得第一名后,他们臂挽臂走回家。
4.Stunned,I stood up and gave her an awkward hug/hugged her in an awkward way.
我很惊讶,站起来尴尬地拥抱了她。
5.He parked down the street from Bobby's house,and rushed to his front door,waving wildly inwards.
他把车停在鲍比家的街上,冲到前门,疯狂地向里挥手。
续写语料运用 [用表“动胳膊”的表达补全下面的微场景并背诵]
微场景:“野外探险遭遇”主题下的“动胳膊”
  Tom and Mary were a young couple ①_________________________________________.
One day when going through a thick jungle,the wife,Mary got seriously injured in the ankle. Worse still,it began to rain.At first,②___________________,trying to support her along the way,but soon they found it didn't work.The pain was so intense ③_______________________
_________.When the rain became heavier and the sun was setting,④____________________
_______.⑤___________________(形容词短语作状语),Mary almost broke down.Tom tried to comfort her,⑥_____________________________________.Tightly grabbing Tom’s
arm,Mary gradually calmed down and resolved to face the difficulty bravely.Fortunately,they managed to call the rangers before losing signal.What they should do next was to
⑦____________________________________________________.Afterwards,they had nothing to do but wait patiently.⑧ ______________________________,Tom heard some roars of helicopter.He immediately rose to his feet and ⑨_______________________,shouting loudly “Help!Help!” in extreme excitement.  
who were enthusiastic about wild exploration
Tom took Mary's arm 
that they had to abandon
their plan
their hearts also began  
to sink
Bitter and frightened
throwing his arms around his wife gently
make fire to avoid being frozen to death on such a bitter night
Gathering his wife into his arms
waved his arms violently
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微场景:“野外探险遭遇”主题下的“动胳膊”
  汤姆和玛丽是一对热衷于野外探险的年轻夫妇。一天,在穿过茂密的丛林时,妻子玛丽的脚踝受了重伤。更糟糕的是,天开始下雨了。起初,汤姆挽着玛丽的胳膊,试图一路扶着她走,但很快他们发现这不管用。玛丽的脚太疼了,他们不得不放弃他们的计划。当雨下得更大,太阳落山时,他们的心也开始下沉。玛丽又痛苦又害怕,几乎崩溃了。汤姆温柔地搂着妻子试图安慰她。玛丽紧紧抓住汤姆的胳膊,渐渐平静下来,决心勇敢地面对困难。幸运的是,他们设法在失去信号之前给护林员打了电话。他们接下来应该做的是生火,以免在这样一个寒冷的夜晚被冻死。之后,他们只能耐心等待。汤姆把妻子抱在怀里,听到了直升机的轰鸣声。他立即站起来,猛烈地挥舞着手臂,极度激动地大声喊道:“救命!救命!”
拓展语料积累 [动作链描写]
在描写动作时,要学会细化动作,把动作过程分解成一连串细微的动作(2-3个动作)形成动作链,写出动作的连贯性,使描写具有画面感,使人物更立体。 句 型 “and”连接多个并列谓语动词:
1.I rushed home,searched through my collection of hats,and grabbed the cotton one.
我冲回家,翻遍我收集的帽子,然后抓起那顶棉质的。
2.The boys rushed excitedly to the lake,took off their clothes and jumped into the water.
男孩们兴奋地冲向湖边,脱下衣服跳入水中。
3.I gave him a firm handshake,made a mad dash for the bus and jumped onto it just before it left.
我和他紧紧地握了握手,疯狂地向公共汽车冲去,在汽车开动前跳上了车。
4.Although the girl was terrified, she threw her hands and legs into the water and tried to get close to Richard and grab his hand.虽然这个女孩很害怕,但她还是把手和腿伸进水里,试图靠近理查德,抓住他的手。
句 型 借助非谓语动词表达多个动作:
1.Holding the necklace in her hand,Jenny lifted her lip,tears beginning to blur her vision.
珍妮手里拿着项链,扬起嘴唇,泪水开始模糊了她的视线。
2.He dove into the water,kicking his legs and stretching his arms as far as he could.
他跳进水里,蹬了蹬腿,尽可能地伸展双臂。
3.Standing beside the empty road,they looked up into the sky,feeling the precious peace from within.
他们站在空旷的道路旁,抬头望向天空,感受着来自内心的珍贵宁静。
4.Jane got to her feet shakily,approached her husband and threw herself into his arms,sobbing uncontrollably on his shoulders.
简摇摇晃晃地站了起来,走向她的丈夫,扑到他的怀里,在他的肩膀上情不自禁地抽泣着。
续写语料运用 [用表“动作链描写”的表达补全下面的微场景并背诵]
微场景:“职业幸福感”主题下的“动作链描写”
  ①_________________________________________________________(分词短语作状语),I took it for granted that I had no difficulty choosing a career path. However,the day when I ②__________________________________________________________(动作链描写),I realized it might not be so easy to get the job I wanted.Fortunately,I was admitted,③__________________________________________________.I promised I would be fully occupied with it,dedicating myself to it all day long.There was one time when I came across and helped a boy who hit the road face down.The next day,
④_________________ they were grateful for what I had done,which filled me with pride.⑤______________________________________________ I would be a qualified doctor and bring people not only health but also warmth.  
Graduating from a key university and acquiring a medical certificate
dressed up,stepped into the office and sat in front of the interviewer
receiving their offer before I completely deserted my hope
I got a call saying
Driving home that evening,I made up my mind that
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微场景:“职业幸福感”主题下的“动作链描写”
  从一所重点大学毕业并获得了医学证书,我理所当然地认为自己在选择职业道路时没有任何困难。然而,那天当我盛装打扮,走进办公室,坐在面试官面前时,我意识到要得到我想要的工作可能并不那么容易。幸运的是,我被录取了,在我完全放弃希望之前收到了他们的录取通知书。我承诺我会全身心投入,一心扑在上面。有一次,我遇到并帮助了一个男孩,他脸朝下撞在了路上。第二天,我接到一个电话,电话中说他们很感激我所做的事,这让我感到骄傲。那天晚上我开车回家,下定决心要做一名合格的医生,不仅要给人们带来健康,还要给人们带来温暖。

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