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Seeing the true north via rail：
Toronto and Montreal
Reading for Writing
Unit 4 Journey across a vast land
What do you know about Toronto and Montreal
Have you seen the beautiful scenery in Canada
Toronto
Montreal
Lead-in
Lead-in
Writing
Travel
Journal
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友 Tom 来信询问你假期的旅行情况，希望你分享一次难忘的旅行经历。请你给他写一封回信。
要点提示:
1.写信目的;
2.在旅行的见闻感受等;
3.旅游的好处并推荐父母也来玩。
注意:
1.词数80左右。可适当补充细节使行文流畅。
2.不得出现真实姓名、校名等个人信息。
短文可以分为三部分：
第一部分：
第二部分：
第三部分：
篇章结构：
1.时态：正文________ ,景色，感想________
2.旅游进程时要有一个清晰明确的顺序。
注意事项：
过去时
现在时
开门见山，旅行概况。
重点介绍旅游过程，描述所见所闻。
可适当表达自己的内心情感写景+抒情
谈此次旅行的感受，总体评价。
who
when
where
what
how
Para.1
Para.2
Para.3
Greeting and purpose
What you experience
Ending and signature
A
letter
about
your
journey
Outline
what you saw
what you did
what you hear
how you felt
Some useful phrases
Pre-writing
be famous/well-known for
natural scenery
a place of interest
a scenic spot
be surrounded by
broaden one’s horizons
enrich one’s experience
enjoy a pleasant journey
can’ t wait to do sth
share...with...
a variety of landscapes
have a/the chance to do
multi-culture
因……而闻名
自然景色
名胜古迹
旅游景点
被……环绕
开阔某人的视野
丰富某人的经验
旅途愉快
迫不及待做某事
与……分享……
各种各样的风景
有做……的机会
多元文化
1.How to greet in a letter
Sentence structures
基础表达
How is everything going
I’m glad to receive the email you sent me yesterday.
高级表达
I am more than delighted to hear from you.
Receiving your email, I feel extremely excited and I wonder how you are getting along these days.
Para.1:
问候
点题
＋
基础表达
How is everything going I’m glad to share my travel experience in Canada with you, because you have always been interested in it.
How is everything going I ... share my ______ (经历 / 体验) in ______ (地点) with you, because you .....
最近怎么样？我……想和你分享我的______（经历 / 体验）在______（地点）的经历，因为 ..... 你。
【练一练】
一切都好吗？我很高兴和你分享我在加拿大的旅行经历，因为你一直对它很感兴趣。
Para.2:
你的体验
基础表达
①First of all, we ______ (交通方式) to ______ (地点), where we visited some ______ (形容词) ______ (地点类名词) ______ (doing 短语，表展示 / 售卖 / 包含的内容).
【练一练】
首先，我们飞往温哥华，在那里参观了一些出售手工艺品及古董的绝佳商店。
First of all, we flew to Vancouver, where we visited some wonderful shops selling crafts and antiques.
Para.2:
你的体验
基础表达
②After that, we went on to ______ (地点). It was its ______ (名词，描述景物特征) that took our breath away with its ______ (形容词，描述美感) beauty.
【练一练】
之后我们去了路易斯湖（Lake Louise）。其蔚蓝色的湖水呈现出令人叹为观止的美丽景色，实在让人惊叹不已。
After that, we went on to Lake Louise.It was its blue water that took our breath away with its exceptional beauty.
Para.2:
你的体验
基础表达
③When we arrived in ______ (地点), we were ______ (情绪形容词) to see ______ (事物 1) and ______ (事物 2) were ______ (描述状态 / 特征).
④All in all, ______ (疲惫类形容词) as we were, we felt it was a ______ (感受形容词) experience.
【练一练】
③当我们抵达蒙特利尔（Montreal）时，看到到处都是法语标识和广告，我们感到十分惊讶。
④尽管我们疲惫不堪，但总体而言，这仍是一次富有意义的经历。
③When we arrived in Montreal, we were amazed to see signs and advertisements were in French.
④All in all, exhausted as we were,we felt it was a meaningful experience.
Para.3:
结尾
基础表达
If you are free, I strongly advise that you come to visit Canada. It is really worth it. Looking forward to your reply.
If you are ______ (表空闲的形容词), I strongly recommend that you come to visit ______ (旅游地点). It is really worth ______ (doing / 名词). Looking forward to your reply.
【练一练】
如果你有空的话，我强烈建议你去加拿大看看。那里真的很值得一去。期待你的回复。
【模板】
How is everything going I ... share my ______ (经历 / 体验) in ______ (地点) with you, because you .....
①First of all, we ______ (交通方式) to ______ (地点), where we visited some ______ (形容词) ______ (地点类名词) ______ (doing 短语，表展示 / 售卖 / 包含的内容).②After that, we went on to ______ (地点). It was its ______ (名词，描述景物特征) that took our breath away with its ______ (形容词，描述美感) beauty.③When we arrived in ______ (地点), we were ______ (情绪形容词) to see ______ (事物 1) and ______ (事物 2) were ______ (描述状态 / 特征). ④All in all, ______ (疲惫类形容词) as we were, we felt it was a ______ (感受形容词) experience.
If you are ______ (表空闲的形容词), I strongly recommend that you come to visit ______ (旅游地点). It is really worth ______ (doing / 名词). Looking forward to your reply.
Dear Xiao ming,
How is everything going Knowing that you are interested in my travel experience in Canada, now I’d like to share it with you.
①First of all, we flew to Vancouver, where we visited some wonderful shops selling crafts and antiques.②After that, we went on to Lake Louise.It was its blue water that took our breath away with its exceptional beauty. ③When we arrived in Montreal, we were amazed to see signs and advertisements were in French. ④All in all, exhausted as we were,we felt it was a meaningful experience.
If you are available, I strongly recommend that you come to visit Canada. It is really worth it. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours ,
Li Hua
基础表达
Para.1:
问候
点题
＋
Knowing that you are curious about my trip to Canada, I’d like to seize this chance to share some unforgettable moments from my travel experience, which has left a profound impression on me.
高级表达
Knowing that you ... my trip to [______], I’d like to ...to share some unforgettable moments from my ..., which ... me.
得知你______我的______之旅，我想______分享此次______中一些难忘的瞬间，这些瞬间______了我。
【练一练】
得知你对我的加拿大之行很好奇，我想借此机会分享一些旅途中难忘的瞬间，这次旅行给我留下了深刻的印象。
Para.2:
你的体验
高级表达
①To begin with, we ______ (前往短语) ______ (地点) ______ (交通方式短语), in which we ______ (探索类动词) a great many ______ (形容词) ______ (地点类名词) ______ (featuring 短语，表以…… 为特色).
【练一练】
我们首先乘飞机前往温哥华，沿途探访了许多售卖手工艺品和古董的精品商店。
①To begin with, we headed for Vancouver by plane, in which we explored a great many wonderful shops featuring crafts and antiques.
Para.2:
你的体验
高级表达
②（之后）, we ______ (前往短语) to ______ (地点). It was its ______ (形容词 + 名词，细化景物特征) that ______ (惊艳类短语) with its ______ (形容词) ______ (名词，描述美感 / 特色).
【练一练】
我们首先乘飞机前往温哥华，沿途探访了许多售卖手工艺品和古董的精品商店。
②Subsequently, we made our way to Lake Louise. It was its crystal-clear lakes that struck us dumb with its incredible natural charm.
Para.2:
你的体验
高级表达
③When we ______ (到达动词) ______ (地点), we were ______ (情绪形容词) to ______ (动词：find/notice) ______ (特色事物 1) and ______ (特色事物 2) were filled with ______ (特色：民俗 / 风情等).
④ （总之）, ______ (疲惫类形容词) as we were, we felt it was a ______ (感受形容词) experience.
【练一练】
③当我们抵达蒙特利尔（Montreal）时，惊讶地发现到处都是具有法国风格的标识与广告。
④总之，尽管我们疲惫不堪，但仍觉得这是一次极其珍贵的经历。
③When we reached Montreal, we were astonished to notice signs and advertisements that were filled with French elements.
④All things considered, exhausted as we were, we felt it was a remarkable experience.
Para.3:
结尾
高级表达
If you are available, I strongly recommend that you pay a visit to Canada. It is really worthwhile to go there. Looking forward to hearing from you.
If you are ______ (表空闲的词), I ______ (推荐副词 + 动词) that you ______ (前往短语) ______ (旅游地点). It is ______ (程度副词) ______ (表值得的词) to ______ (表达：前往 / 游览). Looking forward to ______ (回复表达).
【练一练】
如果你有空的话，我强烈建议你去加拿大看看。那里真的很值得一去。期待你的回复。
【模板】
Knowing that you ... my trip to [______], I’d like to ...to share some unforgettable moments from my ..., which ... me.
①To begin with, we ______ (前往短语) ______ (地点) ______ (交通方式短语), in which we ______ (探索类动词) a great many ______ (形容词) ______ (地点类名词) ______ (featuring 短语，表以…… 为特色).②Subsequently, we ______ (前往短语) to ______ (地点). It was its ______ (形容词 + 名词，细化景物特征) that ______ (惊艳类短语) with its ______ (形容词) ______ (名词，描述美感 / 特色).③When we ______ (到达动词) ______ (地点), we were ______ (情绪形容词) to ______ (动词：find/notice) ______ (特色事物 1) and ______ (特色事物 2) were filled with ______ (特色：民俗 / 风情等). ④ （总之）, ______ (疲惫类形容词) as we were, we felt it was a ______ (感受形容词) experience.
If you are ______ (表空闲的词), I ______ (推荐副词 + 动词) that you ______ (前往短语) ______ (旅游地点). It is ______ (程度副词) ______ (表值得的词) to ______ (表达：前往 / 游览). Looking forward to ______ (回复表达).
高级表达
Dear Xiao ming,
Knowing that you are curious about my trip to Canada, I’d like to seize this chance to share some unforgettable moments from my travel experience, which has left a profound impression on me.
①To begin with, we headed for Vancouver by plane, in which we explored a great many wonderful shops featuring crafts and antiques.②Subsequently, we made our way to Lake Louise. It was its crystal-clear lakes that struck us dumb with its incredible natural charm.③When we reached Montreal, we were astonished to notice （that）signs and advertisements were filled with French elements. ④All things considered, exhausted as we were, we felt it was a remarkable experience.
If you are available, I strongly recommend that you pay a visit to Canada. It is really worthwhile to go there. Looking forward to hearing from you.
假设你是李华，你在国庆期间去了北京长城游玩，请根据提示，给你的英国朋友写一封邮件，告诉他你的游览经过。
提示词：
when ,where, what, how
scenery, souvenir, awesome, spectacular, attractive
【范文】
Dear Tom,
How is everything going I am eager to share my experience in the Great Wall of Beijing with you, because you have always told me that you are interested in Chinese ancient architecture and have long wanted to know about the Great Wall.
①First of all, we took the high-speed train to Beijing, where we visited some attractive shops selling all kinds of special souvenirs. ②After that, we went on to the Badaling Great Wall. It was its scenery that took our breath away with its spectacular beauty. ③When we arrived in the top of the Great Wall, we were excited to see the continuous city walls and the distant mountains were awesome. ④All in all, tired as we were, we felt it was a wonderful experience.
If you are free, I strongly advise that you come to visit the Great Wall of Beijing. It is really worth visiting.Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
基础表达
【范文】
Dear Tom,
Knowing that you are curious about my trip to the Great Wall in Beijing, I’d like to write to share some unforgettable moments from my National Day holiday, which impressed me deeply.
①To begin with, we set off for the Badaling Great Wall by high-speed train, in which we explored a great many attractive scenic spots featuring unique ancient Chinese architectural styles. ②Subsequently, we made our way to the main part of the Great Wall. It was its spectacular natural scenery that took our breath away with its awesome charm. ③When we arrived at the top of the Great Wall, we were excited to find （that）the winding city walls and the distant green mountains were filled with strong traditional Chinese charm. ④In a word, tired as we were, we felt it was an amazing experience.
If you are free, I strongly recommend that you come to visit the Great Wall in Beijing. It is really worthwhile to take a trip here.Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
高级表达
Thank you!

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