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主题语境：探险活动
探险类记叙文要求学生能够根据命题的要求，记叙发生在自己或他人身上的一次探险经历。探险类记叙文写作步骤如下：
(1)开头段通常用两三句话交代探险的时间、地点和背景，起到开门见山的作用；
(2)主体段应详细说明探险的经过或过程；
(3)结尾段应对此次探险作出评价并表达感受，这部分应与首段呼应。
首段：交代探险的时间、地点和背景
1.Last year I had an adventure with my classmates，which left/made a deep impression on me.
2.During the summer vacation，my family together with me went on an expedition/adventure to a mountain.
主体段：详细说明探险的经历或过程
1.In spite of/Despite all the difficulties，we finally managed to reach the destination.
2.We were thrilled to enjoy such a wonderful view/scene.
3.Failing to rise to my feet/Unable to stand，I decided to sit down and have a rest.
4.Using the compass we carried，we ended up losing our way/getting lost in the forest.
尾段：对此次探险作出评价或表达感受
1.I will never forget the day which/that we spent on the farm.
2.This is the most interesting/wonderful experience that I have never had before.
3.The exploration impressed me a lot.Although many years have passed，I still remember the experience as if it happened yesterday.
4.I will never forget this experience，for it taught me a vivid lesson.
假设你是李华，去年暑假和父母去了英国法恩群岛(Farne Islands)，旅行时经历了人生第一次潜水。请写一篇短文记录这一次经历，并写出所思、所想、所获。
1.潜水地点是英国法恩群岛；
2.与海豹嬉戏；
3.潜水有益于身体健康，磨炼意志。
注意：写作词数应为80个左右。
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[审题谋篇]
[遣词造句]
Ⅰ.对接单元词汇
1.____ n. 惊险，刺激
2.____ n. 雄性动物
3._________ adj. 被迷住的，被吸引住的
4._______ v. 使吃惊，使惊讶
5._______ adv. 逐渐地，逐步地
6._______ v. 环绕，围绕
thrill
male
fascinated
astonish
gradually
surround
Ⅱ.巧用单元句式、语法完成句子
1.说到冒险经历，我第一时间想到了去年在法恩群岛刺激的潜水经历。
When it comes to adventure，_________________________________________ came into my mind first.
2.这是一次难忘的精彩经历，我将永远不会忘记它。
It was ____________________________________，I would never forget.
3.我正在海中潜水，这时，一只雄性海豹出现了。
I was diving in the sea______________________.
4.起初我大吃一惊，但是慢慢地被它迷住了。
At first I ____________，but__________________________.
the thrilling diving experience on the Farne Islands
an unforgettable and wonderful experience
when a male seal appeared
was astonished
gradually I was fascinated by it
5.我原以为它会伤害我，结果发现它既可爱又友好。
I thought it would hurt me，but ______________it was lovely and friendly.
6.我被一群海豹围绕着，我们一起开心地游来游去。
I________________ a group of seals，and we swam around happily together.
7.游泳之后我如此疲惫，以至于上岸后很快睡着了。
I was _________________________I fell asleep soon after I was back on the beach.
8.尽管疲惫，我仍觉得这次潜水经历的确值得再尝试一次。
Though I was tired，I still thought it___________________.
it turned out that
was surrounded by
so tired after swimming that
was worth trying again
[亮点提升]
1.用 “such...that...” 改写句2。
_________________________________________________________________
2.用倒装句改写句8。
_________________________________________________
It was such an unforgettable and wonderful experience that I would never forget.
Tired though I was，I still thought it was worth trying again.
[妙笔成篇]
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One possible version：
When it comes to the adventure，the thrilling diving experience on the Farne Islands came into my mind first.It was such an unforgettable and wonderful experience that I would never forget.
I was diving in the sea when a male seal appeared.At first I was astonished，but gradually I was fascinated by it.I thought it would hurt me，but it turned out that it was lovely and friendly.I was surrounded by a group of seals，and we swam around happily together.I was so tired after swimming that I fell asleep soon after I was back on the beach.
Tired though I was，I still thought it was worth trying again.
假设你是某国际学校的学生李华，你昨天参加了某旅行社组织的海底探险旅行。请用英语写一篇短文，记述这次探险旅行，内容包括：
1.时间、地点；
2.探险项目(深海潜水、观察海洋生物、海底古文明遗址探险等)；
3.你的感受。
注意：写作词数应为80个左右。
参考词语：探险expedition，海洋的 marine，文明 civilisation。
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One possible version：
Yesterday，I，together with some tourists，took part in an underwater expedition organised by a travel agency in the sea，which left a deep impression on me.
We engaged in many exciting activities，one of which was deep sea diving.During the diving，we enjoyed the undersea beauty and watched the marine life which we had never seen so close.What impressed me most was the expedition to the ruins of ancient civilisations under the sea.Seeing those ruins，I couldn't help wondering what ancient people's life was like and what they experienced later.
As far as I am concerned，this experience broadened our horizons and helped us learn more about the undersea world.

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