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高 考 写作单元训练四
UNIT 4　INFORMATION TECHNOLOGY
一 文本叙述
Step 1．要点提示(利用本单元知识补全所给英文句子)
1.有些人认为互联网会损害友谊。
Some people believe that the Internet ___________ friendships．
2.通过屏幕进行交流，让孩子们更难集中精力或对他人表示友好。
____________________________ makes it more difficult for children to concentrate or show kindness to others．
3.在网络上花费太多时间还会使人们变得以自我为中心。
Spending too much time on the Internet can also ______________________．
is harmful to
Communicating through a screen
make people self-centred
一 文本叙述
Step 1．要点提示(利用本单元知识补全所给英文句子)
4.你要当心网上各种各样的关系，因为它们可能不是看起来的那样。
You need to be careful with ________________________ because they may not be ______________________．
5.朋友们应该更多地关注面对面的交流，更少地关注在线交流。
Friends should______________ face-to-face communication，and less on online communication．
various online relationships
what they appear to be
focus more on
一 文本叙述
Step 1．要点提示(利用本单元知识补全所给英文句子)．
6.这是保持健康关系的最好方法。
This is the best way ____________________________．
to maintain healthy relationships
一 文本叙述
Step 2．衔接成文(利用恰当的过渡衔接词语连句成篇)
Some people believe that the Internet is harmful to friendships．Firstly，communicating through a screen makes it more difficult for children to concentrate or show kindness to others．Secondly，spending too much time on the Internet can also make people self-centred．Thirdly，you need to be careful with various online relationships because they may not be what they appear to be．In my opinion，friends should focus more on face-to-face communication，and less on online communication．This is the best way to maintain healthy relationships．
二 场景中提升写作技能(黑体部分用本单元词汇表达) 续写微情景
Step 1．第一步　单句写作
1.这三十年以来,为了承担起家庭的重担,管道工Jack把他所有的注意力都放在如何挣钱养活家庭上。(focus all his attention on)
For 30 years,in order to shoulder the burden of his family,Jack the plumber has 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　__________________________________________________________________.
2.虽然他没有想过要放弃工作去实现他的音乐梦想,但无论身在何处,他总是打开随身携带的小录音机,跟着音乐一起唱歌。(while;no matter where)
While he never thought about giving up his job to fulfill his music dream,　　　　　　　　　　　　　　__________________________,he always opened the small tape recorder he carried and sang along with the music.
focused all his attention on how to earn money to support his family
no matter where he was　
二 场景中提升写作技能(黑体部分用本单元词汇表达) 续写微情景
Step 1．单句写作
3.偶然一次,他在修理管道时的歌声吸引了一个路人。碰巧的是,这个路人原来是一家唱片公司的老板。(once;turn out to be)
Once,a passer-by was attracted by his singing while he was repairing pipes,and coincidentally,　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 .
the passer-by turned out to be the owner of a record label
二 场景中提升写作技能(黑体部分用本单元词汇表达) 续写微情景
Step 1．单句写作
4.老板建议他去接受专业的培训,并承诺会帮助他获得听众的支持。(recommend;get the favour of)
The boss 　　　　　　　that 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　and
assured him of his assistance in 　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　.
recommended
he (should) undergo professional training
getting the favour of the audience
二 场景中提升写作技能(黑体部分用本单元词汇表达) 续写微情景
Step 2．句式升级
5.用倒装句将句2升级
6.用非限制性定语从句改写句3
Never did he think about giving up his job to fulfill his music dream,but no matter where he was,he always opened the small tape recorder he carried and sang along with the music.
Once,a passer-by was attracted by his singing while he was repairing pipes,who coincidentally turned out to be the owner of a record label.
二 场景中提升写作技能(黑体部分用本单元词汇表达) 续写微情景
Step 3．连句成篇(将以上句子连成一篇语言流畅、用词准确、逻辑严密的短文)
For 30 years,in order to shoulder the burden of his family,Jack the plumber has focused all his attention on how to earn money to support his family.Never did he think about giving up his job to fulfill his music dream,but no matter where he was,he always opened the small tape recorder he carried and sang along with the music.Once,a passer-by was attracted by his singing while he was repairing pipes,who coincidentally turned out to be the boss of a record label.The boss recommended that he (should) undergo professional training and assured him of his assistance in getting the favour of the audience.
三 续写能力--片段描述
Step 1．储备词汇(记牢本单元可用于描写的词汇)
情感描写 alarm；concerned
动作描写 hug；press；deliver；focus；concentrate；admit
三 续写能力--片段描述
Step 2续写练笔(完成下面的续写片段并背诵)
最后，轮到我发表演讲了。有那么多的眼睛聚焦在我身上，我感到惊慌。我设法集中精力演讲，把颤抖的手按在桌子上。慢慢地，我没有那么紧张了。我走下演讲台的那一刻，我的老师就拥抱了我，说我做得很好。他承认他在一开始很担心我，但他仍然对我有信心。
Step 2．续写练笔(完成下面的续写片段并背诵)
最后，轮到我发表演讲了。有那么多的眼睛聚焦在我身上，我感到惊慌。我设法集中精力演讲，把颤抖的手按在桌子上。慢慢地，我没有那么紧张了。我走下演讲台的那一刻，我的老师就拥抱了我，说我做得很好。他承认他在一开始很担心我，但他仍然对我有信心。
Finally it was my turn to _____________．With so many eyes _____________,______________．I managed to ___________________________________________________________．Slowly，I was not that nervous．The instant I stepped off the platform，____________________，saying I had done a good job．__________________________________ at the beginning，but he still had confidence in me．
deliver a speech
focused on me
I felt alarmed
concentrate on my speech，pressing my trembling
hands onto the table
my teacher hugged me
He admitted he
was concerned about me
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