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Unit 4 The Wonders of Nature
Section B
课型：写作课
主讲人：XXX
3a-3c
通过听、读、看等方式，获取并正确认读关于自然景观、旅行体验等主题词汇（如 amazing, natural, largest, alive, clear, colourful 等），感知描述性形容词和数词的用法。（学习理解）
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通过阅读分析，获取文本中关于大堡礁、青海湖等自然景观的关键信息，归纳并内化描述地点特征、表达游玩建议的常用表达（如 Located on/in...; It is one of the...; It takes up an area of...; If..., you can...）（应用实践）
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通过讨论和写作练习，理解描述自然景观的词汇在实际语境中的运用，能够主动用所学词汇介绍一处自己喜爱的自然景观，并认同保护自然奇观的重要性。（迁移创新）
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学习目标
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Lead in
What do you know about the Great Barrier Reef
Lead in
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Pre-writing
Read for content
Read the title and the first two sentences. What kind of text is this
a story
a news report
an advertisement
What is the purpose of an advertisement like this
To attract readers' interest, provide key information, and encourage them to visit.
Read for content
Read and complete the mind map.
The Great Barrier Reef
An advertisement
Beginning
Ending
Do you love....
...visiting...dream of a lifetime!
吸引读者
呼吁行动
Key
information
location:
What’s special
size:
What you can do/see
northeastern coast of Australia
the most amazing places
the biggest coral reef
alive
the largest living structure
345,000 square kilometres
swim or dive in the clear water
see coral, plants and colourful fish
even see large fish, turtles and sharks
Read again. Circle the numbers and underline the adjectives used to describe the Great Barrier Reef.
Read for language
3a
Why does the writer use so many adjectives and numbers
Adjectives make descriptions more vivid(更生动).
Numbers make information more specific.(更具体).
They make advertisements more attractive and persuasive(更具吸引力和说服力)
Read again and find the structure.
Read for structure
Hook
用问句吸引读者，引出主题
Details
介绍位置、规模、基本特色
Experience
描述旅游活动与独特景观
Call to action
用感叹句强化吸引力，鼓励前往
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While-writing
3b
Read notes on Qinghai Lake. Rewrite them in full sentences.
Qinghai Lake
What: a salt lake
Where: Qinghai Province, China
Special fact: the largest lake in China (4,340 km2)
Things to do: photograph wildlife (fish and birds), visit islands, ride a bike or horse
1. Qinghai Lake is a _____________in ________________________.
2. Qinghai Lake is_____________________in China.
3. It is ______________________________in size.
4. If you visit Qinghai Lake, you can _______________________________
_________________________.
salt lake
Qinghai Province, China
the largest lake
4,340 square kilometres
photograph wildlife, visit islands,
ride a bike or horse
Write sentences
the Great Barrier Reef
the Qinghai Lake
原句：Located on the northeastern coast of Australia, the Great Barrier Reef is one of the most amazing places to visit.
模仿:
原句：It is the biggest coral reef in the world.
模仿：
原句：If you dive deeper, you might even see large fish, turtles, and sharks.
模仿：
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2
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Located in Qinghai Province, the northwestern of China, the Qinghai Lake is one of the most amazing places to visit.
It is the latgest salt lake in China.
If you walk along the lake, you might even see beautiful birds and colourful flowers.
Write sentences
the Qinghai Lake
用“if”引导的条件句和形容词比较级/最高级，描述青海湖的其他特色。
Qinghai Lake is more beautiful in summer. If you visit in July, you can see many birds and fields of blooming rape flowers(油菜花).
Group work to make some new sentences.
For example:
If you stand by the lake and look to the distance, you will see the clearest blue water stretching to the sky.
Part 1
Hook
用问句吸引读者，引出主题
Details
介绍位置、规模、基本特色
Experience
描述旅游活动与独特景观
Call to action
用感叹句强化吸引力，鼓励前往
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4
Qinghai Lake:
An Amazing Highland Wonder
3c
Write an advertisement for Qinghai Lake . Try to make your advertisement as persuasive as possible.
Do you love quiet lakes and amazing wildlife Then visit Qinghai Lake!
Located in Qinghai Province, it is the largest salt lake in China, covering 4,340 square kilometres. ...
If you ... you can .../ you can see...
Come to Qinghai Lake and make your dream come true!
Title
Writng time
Write an advertisement for Qinghai Lake.
Example:
Qinghai Lake: An Amazing Highland Wonder
Do you love quiet lakes and amazing wildlife Then visit Qinghai Lake!
Located in Qinghai Province, the northwestern of China, the Qinghai Lake is one of the most amazing places to visit. It is the largest salt lake in China, covering 4,340 square kilometres.
If you visit Qinghai Lake, you can photograph wildlife, visit islands, ride a bike or horse. Qinghai Lake is more beautiful in summer. If you visit in July, you can see many beautiful birds and fields of blooming rape flowers. Walk along the lake and enjoy the clear blue water stretching to the sky—every view is a wonderful surprise.
Come to Qinghai Lake and make your dream come true!
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Post-writing
Pair work to evaluate your writing.
Evaluation content 1. 包含青海湖核心信息（咸水湖、位置、面积、中国最大湖） 2. 列出至少2项可体验活动 3. 突出独特卖点，有说服力
language 1. 正确使用形容词、数据和描述性词汇 2. 句式多样，无明显语法错误 3. 拼写准确，用词恰当
structure 1. 开头吸引人，结尾有号召力 2. 段落清晰，过渡自然
Evaluate your writing
也可以在豆包搜索智能体“英语作文批改助手”
拍照上传你的作文进行修改。
Correct your writing
点击下面的网页查看作文批改：
点击下面的网页输入你的作文在线批改：
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Summary
Writing travel advertisement
Beginning
Body
(key information)
Ending
用问句吸引读者，引出主题
Do you love... Do you want to visit...
位置：Located in/on/at... northeastern
规模：It takes up an area of 345,000 square kilometres.
特色：biggest, largest, longest...
体验：If you visit... you can do/see colourful...
用感叹句强化吸引力，号召前往
For people who love ..., visiting ... is the dream of a lifetime!
Summary
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Language Points
词
讲
练
include / n klu d/ v. 包含；包括
1.The price of the tour includes ________ (visit) the museum.
2.Everyone _________ (include) in the meeting should arrive on time.
Language points
用法：不用于进行时。其后可接名词、代词或动词-ing 作宾语，不可接动词不定式。例句：Students should master one or two life skills every year. These skills can include cooking, washing their own clothes and tidying their rooms.
visiting
included
单词 词性 含义 用法
including 介词 包括……在内 后跟名词或代词作宾语。
included 形容词 包括在内的 只能位于名词或代词后，作后置定语。
语境串记：The whole family will tour some big cities, including Beijing and Shanghai. So everyone is very happy, me included. 全家人将去包括北京和上海在内的一些大城市旅游。因此大家非常开心，包括我在内。
词
讲
练
alive / la v/ adj. 活着；在世；有活力
Language points
单词 词性 词义 用法说明
alive 形容词 活着的 表语形容词，不直接修饰名词，be alive 活着
lively 形容词 活泼的 可作定语/表语，a lively child 活泼的孩子
常用搭配：come alive 热闹起来；有精神起来
bring sth. alive 使……有趣；变得有生气
例句：Love your parents well while they are alive. Don’t wait until it is too late.
She comes alive when she sits down at the piano.
1.The fish is still _________ in the water.（alive/lively）
2.We had a _________ time at the party.（alive/lively）
alive
lively
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Exercise
Exercise
假设你是张明，你的澳大利亚朋友 Alex 计划来中国体验自然景观。请你写一封邮件，向他推荐你喜爱的自然景观——桂林山水(Guilin's landscape)。
内容提示：1. 景观位置与基本概况
2. 独特之处（至少两点）
3. 游玩建议（如乘船、徒步等）
要求：1.包括全部内容提示，语言流畅，语法正确
2.100词左右，已给出部分不计入总词数
参考词汇：广西壮族自治区 the Guangxi Zhuang Autonomous Region；漓江 the Lijiang River；乘坐竹筏 take a bamboo-raft ride
Dear Alex,
I strongly recommend Guilin's landscape to you. ____________________________
Yours,
Zhang Ming
Exercise
Dear Alex,
I strongly recommend Guilin's landscape to you. Yours, Guilin is in the Guangxi Zhuang Autonomous Region, famous for its beautiful mountains and clean water. The most special things are the strange-shaped mountains and the clear Lijiang River. The water is so clear that you can see the fish swimming. Also, the mountains look like different animals from different angles, which is really amazing.
For fun, you can take a bamboo-raft ride down the Lijiang River to enjoy the views. You can also hike up the mountains for a bird's-eye view. I'm sure you'll have a great time here.
Yours,
Zhang Ming
Example:
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Homework
Homework
基础作业
拓展作业
实践作业
重新誊写修改好的青海湖旅游广告英文写作。
仿写广告：模仿大堡礁的广告，选你喜欢的一处自然奇观，写一篇80词左右的英文广告，尽量用到本节课学的词汇和句型。
用英语向家人或朋友介绍你最想去的一处自然景观，并通过调查了解该自然景观目前面临的环境问题，并提出1条保护建议，最后录成一段宣讲视频，时长1-2分钟。

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