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(共13张PPT)
Unit 3
Diverse Cultures
Section Ⅳ　Writing
英 语
2026
内容索引
针对训练
写作指导
写作模板
针对训练
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写词数应为150左右。
My mum only had one eye.I hated her.She was such an embarrassment.
She ran a small shop at a flea market and collected old clothes and some other things to sell for the money we needed.Once during elementary school,it was a field day,and my mum came.I was so embarrassed and wondered how could she do this to me I threw her a hateful look and ran out.The next day at school,my schoolmates asked me,“Your mum only has one eye ” and laughed at me.
读后续写
I was so angry with my mum.So I said to my mum,“Why don’t you have the other eye You only make me a joke!” My mum trembled(颤抖) with shock,and said in an apologetic tone,“I’m so sorry that I only have one eye,and I was an embarrassment for you.But I was so proud of my son to see a whole new world for me with that eye.I will leave right now.Sorry!” My mum turned around and left.
For the words I had said to her earlier,there was something biting me in the corner of my heart.Even so,I hated my one-eyed mum and our poor life.Maybe because my mum hadn’t punished me,I didn’t think I had hurt her feelings very badly.
I told myself that I would become successful in the near future,so I studied very hard.Later I got accepted by a famous university.I left my mother and came to a big city to study.I never went back to visit my mum.
Then I got married there.I bought a house of my own.Then I had kids,too.At the moment I was living happily as a successful man.I enjoyed the life in the city because it was a place that didn’t remind me of my mum and my past.This kind of happiness was getting bigger and bigger,until one day someone knocked at my door.
It was my mum!And still with her one eye!
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Holding the letter,I cried for the person who only lived for me.
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写作指导
1.理解全文,把握主线。本文为记叙文。文中的人物关系较为简单——我和母亲。故事情节也比较简单,续写的方向较为明确。
2.展开想象,合理续接。根据原文可知,作者的自尊心无法容忍自己有缺陷的母亲,所以奋发图强,离开自己讨厌的家。根据续写部分第一段的首句可以推断,这应该不是愉快的见面。而从续写部分第二段的首句可以看出,作者前后的态度变化很大。在续写第一段的时候要把这个因素考虑在内。
根据续写部分第二段的首句可知,作者意识到母亲为自己所做的牺牲,因此在续写部分第二段应着重描写作者如何向母亲忏悔以及母亲的反应。
写作模板
It was my mum!And still with her one eye!Reminded instantly of my dark past and embarrassment,I felt as if the whole sky were falling down on me.Controlled by anger,I shouted at her,“Who are you How dare you come to my house!” My mum narrowed her eye and opened her mouth but nothing came out.Dead silence!Tears ran down her face,she___________________
__________________ (把一封信放到我的手中),turned around and left.Heart 　　　　　　　　　 (被她瘦弱的背影触动),I glanced at the letter.Then I understood everything.When I was little,I had a terrible accident and lost my eye.My mum gave that eye to me!My world
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put a letter into
my hand
touched by her thin back
fell apart
Holding the letter,I cried for the person who only lived for me. How she wanted her own son to see the world clearly!But how deeply I had hurt her!
　　　　　　　　　　(感到深深的懊悔),I called out loudly,“Mum!” I ran after my mum,grabbed her and knelt down.“Mum,would you 　　　　　(原谅我) and accept me again ” Tears dried and her expression was one of forgiveness,and a smile appeared on her cheeks.It’s never too old-fashioned to say mum’s love is the greatest in the world.
With deep regret
forgive me

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