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山东省九师联盟2025-2026学年高三上学期1月月考
英语应用文写作 范文解读学习与素材积累
原题回顾
假定你是李华。请你向校英文网站建议增加一个“云游文物”栏目。内容包括：
说明设立该栏理由；
提出具体的设想。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear editor,
_______________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
范文欣赏
Dear Editor,
I am writing to propose a new section titled "Cloud Cultural Relics Tour" for our school website.
The key reason lies in making culture accessible. Many students lack opportunities to visit world-renowned museums or historical sites in person. Through high-resolution images, 3D models, and virtual reality tours, this platform can bring artifacts like the Terracotta Army or the Mona Lisa directly to our screens, enriching our historical awareness and cross-cultural understanding.
Specifically, the section could feature weekly highlights of a selected artifact, accompanied by concise expert narration in English. Interactive elements like discussion forums could also be included to engage students actively. By integrating technology with culture, we can transform passive browsing into an inspiring learning journey.
Thank you for considering this proposal. I believe it will greatly benefit our school community. （132 words）
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
中文翻译：
尊敬的编辑：
我谨此提议为学校网站增设一个名为"云端文物巡展"的新栏目。
核心原因在于让文化触手可及。许多同学缺乏亲临世界知名博物馆或历史遗迹的机会。通过高清图像、3D模型和虚拟现实导览，这个平台能让兵马俑、《蒙娜丽莎》等文物珍品直达我们的屏幕，丰富我们的历史认知与跨文化理解。
具体而言，该栏目可每周精选一件文物进行专题展示，配以简明扼要的英文专家解说。同时设置讨论论坛等互动模块，激发学生主动参与。通过科技与文化的融合，我们将把被动浏览转化为启迪心灵的探索之旅。
感谢您考虑此提议。我相信这必将使全校师生受益良多。
此致
敬礼
李华
范文解读学习：
本文在句型和短语使用上均表现出较好的书面语特征，具体分析如下：
一、句型层面
1.主从复合句的多样化运用：通过状语从句、定语从句等构建逻辑层次。例如：
原因状语从句："The key reason lies in... Many students lack opportunities..."（首段）
方式状语从句："Through high-resolution images... this platform can bring..."（使用介词短语引导）
被动语态句型："could be included..."（第二段）体现客观性。
2.并列结构强化说服力：使用连词串联多重益处。例如：
"enriching our historical awareness and cross-cultural understanding"（现在分词短语并列宾语）
"feature weekly highlights..., accompanied by concise expert narration..."（主谓结构+过去分词短语的平行扩展）
3.目的与结果句型：明确提案目标。例如：
"By integrating..., we can transform..."（"By+doing"表方式，"can"表预期效果）
"I believe it will greatly benefit..."（将来时态预示积极结果）
二、短语层面
1.学术性动词短语：体现正式提案风格。例如：
"lack opportunities to..."（阐述现状缺口）
"bring artifacts directly to..."（凸显平台功能）
"transform passive browsing into..."（强调变革性）
2.专业术语与搭配：
技术术语："high-resolution images", "3D models", "virtual reality tours"（准确描述技术手段）
文化教育领域搭配："cross-cultural understanding", "inspiring learning journey"（提升提案高度）
3.介词短语的精准使用：
方式状语："through high-resolution images"
修饰限定："accompanied by expert narration"
目的导向："for our school website"
4.提案常用框架短语：
引言："I am writing to propose..."
总结："Thank you for considering... I believe it will greatly benefit..."
总之，本文通过复合句构建严谨逻辑链，搭配学术短语增强专业性，同时运用技术术语与文化教育词汇的精准组合，使提案既体现技术可行性又彰显人文价值。被动语态与第一人称主动句的交替使用，兼顾了客观陈述与主观倡导的平衡。
建议类应用文素材积累
一、高分句型
1. It is highly advisable/recommended that you (should)...
（强烈建议你……）【虚拟语气，显高级】
例句：It is highly advisable that you set clear goals first.
2.I would like to propose/suggest that...
（我想提议……）【正式、礼貌】
例句：I would like to propose that we organize a study group.
3.A practical approach would be to...
（一个实用的方法是……）【体现思考深度】
例句：A practical approach would be to break the task into smaller steps.
4.（如果我是你，我会……）【委婉、贴心】
例句：If I were in your shoes, I would communicate with my teacher first.
5. Doing sth. is likely to yield positive results.
（做某事很可能产生积极效果。）【客观、有说服力】
例句：Reviewing notes regularly is likely to yield positive results.
6.It might be beneficial to consider...
（考虑……或许会很有益。）【语气柔和】
例句：It might be beneficial to consider diverse perspectives.
7.One cannot overemphasize the importance of...
（……的重要性再怎么强调也不为过。）【强调关键点】
例句：One cannot overemphasize the importance of perseverance.
8.By doing..., you stand a better chance of...
（通过做……，你更有机会……）【突出积极结果】
例句：By practicing daily, you stand a better chance of improving fluency.
9.I strongly urge you to...
（我强烈敦促你……）【用于非常关键的建议】
例句：I strongly urge you to take this opportunity.
10.The key lies in...
（关键在于……）【精炼、直击核心】
例句：The key lies in finding a balance between study and rest.
二、高分短语
1. get into the habit of (doing)（养成……的习惯）
例句：You need to get into the habit of planning your time.
2.take ... into account/consideration（将……考虑在内）
例句：When making a decision, take all factors into account.
3.make a concerted effort to（齐心协力/共同努力去……）
例句：Let’s make a concerted effort to create a better environment.
4.go a long way toward(s)（对……大有帮助/有很大作用）
例句：This small change will go a long way toward improving efficiency.
5.be conducive to（有助于……）【比“helpful”高级】
例句：A quiet place is more conducive to concentration.
6.stay/keep on top of（妥善处理/掌控……）
例句：You should keep on top of your assignments.
7.strike a balance between A and B（在A和B之间取得平衡）
例句：It’s crucial to strike a balance between study and leisure.
8.be well worth the effort/time（值得付出努力/时间）
例句：The preparation is well worth the effort.
9.in the light of（鉴于，考虑到）【用于分析原因后给建议】
例句：In the light of your interest, I suggest joining the debate club.
10.follow ... through（将……坚持到底）
例句：Once you have a plan, be sure to follow it through.
官方参考范文
Dear editor，
I am writing to propose a new “Virtual Travel” section for our school website.
Since we lack the time and budget for real travels, while countless cultural resources are now digitized, I think this column could offer us unlimited free access to museums and cultural sites in our country. The contents could be organized as Exploring the Great Wall or Wandering Through the Forbidden City. We could also invite students to contribute their own travelogues.
I’m sure this section would significantly make our traditional culture more engaging and accessible to our generation. It perfectly demonstrates how technology can breathe new life into our heritage.
Thank you for considering my suggestion.（110 words）
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
中文翻译：
尊敬的编辑：
我特此建议为学校网站增设一个"虚拟旅行"新栏目。
鉴于我们缺乏实地旅行的时间和预算，而当下无数文化资源已实现数字化，我认为这个专栏能让我们免费畅览国内各大博物馆与文化遗址。栏目内容可策划为"探索长城"或"漫步故宫"等主题，同时诚邀同学们分享自己的旅行见闻。
相信这个栏目定能让传统文化以更生动的方式走近我们这代人，充分展现科技如何为文化遗产注入新的生命力。
感谢您考虑我的建议。
此致
敬礼
李华

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