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Unit 1 People around us
主题范畴：人与社会
Writing
Key question
Why are some people in your life
important
How to introduce people around you
性格：
He / She is ... and ...
职业：
He / She is a(n) ...
语录：
He / She often says ...
评价：
He / She is a(n) ... person
Lead in
Writing an article about a person you like
写一篇关于你喜欢的人的文章
The school website is calling for articles on the topic “a person I like”. Which person would you write about, and what are you going to write about him / her
学校网站正在征集主题为“我喜欢的人”的文章。你想写哪一个人？你打算写关于他/她的什么内容。
Pre-writing
topic
active
smartphone
wisely
competiton
n. 话题；标题
adj. 忙碌的；活跃的
n. 智能手机
adv. 聪明的；明智的
n. 比赛；竞赛
New words and phrases
1 Wang Yao organized her ideas by asking herself some questions about the topic. Look at the questions and read her article.
a Who am I going to write about
(e.g, a family member / a teacher / some one in the community)
b What is he / she like
e What does he / she do
d What does he / she often say
e What do think of him / her
characteristics
actions
words
What I like about him / her.
My nice neighbour Yao Yuan
Yao Yuan is my neighbour and schoolmate. He is kind and hard-working.
Yao Yuan is very active in our community. At the weekend, he often helps out at a local retirement home. He teaches retired people to use computers and smartphones. He says, “I’m always happy to help!”
Yao Yuan also uses his time wisely. Every day, he gets up at six and exercises for half an hour before breakfast. Then he listens to English programmes on the way to school. He won the school English speaking competition last year
Yao Yuan is an amazing person, and I wish I could be like him!
My nice neighbour Yao Yuan
Yao Yuan is my neighbour and schoolmate. He is kind and hard-working.
Yao Yuan is very active in our community. At the weekend, he often helps out at a local retirement home. He teaches retired people to use computers and smartphones. He says, “I’m always happy to help!”
Yao Yuan also uses his time wisely. Every day, he gets up at six and exercises for half an hour before breakfast. Then he listens to English programmes on the way to school. He won the school English speaking competition last year
Yao Yuan is an amazing person, and I wish I could be like him!
Who
personality
often do
often say
My opinion
2 Match the questions in Exercise 1 to the paragraphs that
answer them. Some more than one question.
Paragraph 1
Paragraph 2
Paragraph 3
Paragraph 4
a, b
c, d
c
e
Who does Wang Yao write about
What is he like
What does he do
What does he often say
What does Wang Yao think of him
Her neighbour Yao Yuan.
He is kind and hard-working.
He is very active in the community and he uses his time wisely.
“I’m always happy to help!”
She thinks that he is an amazing person / her role model, and she wishes she could be like him!
Read Wang Yao’s article again and answer the questions.
1.Circle the adjectives used to describe Yao Yuan.
2.How does Wang Yao show how kind and hard-working Yao Yuan is
topic sentence
supporting details
Tips for writing：
You can use adjectives to describe the person.
Describe his/her words and actions: this will make the text more interesting. (choose some actions or words that match his/her characteristics.
Use topic sentences and supporting details to organize your paragraphs.
Language points
1. At the weekend, he often helps out at a local retirement home.
句意：周末的时候，他经常在当地一家养老院帮忙。
常见的频度副词：
alway, usually, often, sometimes, seldom, never
2. Then he listens to English programmes on the way to school.
句意：然后他在上学的路上听英语节目。
listen: 表示有意识地听、仔细听。
强调听的动作。
hear: 意为“听见，听到，听说”，不一定是
有意识地听，强调听的结果。
Pre-writing
一、写作词组 (汉译英)
1. 在我们社区里 ___________________
2. 帮忙 ___________________
3. 教某人做某事 ___________________
4. 在去……的路上 ___________________
5. 英语演讲比赛 ___________________
in our community
help out
teach sb. to do sth.
on the way to...
English speaking competition
·描述人性格特征的形容词
6. 善良的 _________ 7. 勤奋的 _________
8. 友好的 _________ 9. 乐于助人的 _________
10. 有耐心的 _________ 11. 严格的 _________
12. 诚实的 _________ 13. 自信的 _________
kind
friendly
patient
honest
hard-working
helpful
strict
confident
二、写作句型
根据汉语意思，补全英语句子，每空一词。
14. 他很高兴在当地的养老院帮助退休人员。
He ___ _______ _____ _____ the retired people
at the local retirement home.
15. 他教退休的人使用电脑和智能手机。
He _______ retired people ____ ____ computers and smartphones.
16. 他是一个了不起的人，我希望我能像他一样。
He is a(n) _________ person, and I wish I _____ _____ _____ him.
is happy to help
teaches to use
amazing could be like
Now describe the person you like.
Writing
主题：人与自我——生活与学习
文体：记叙文
人称： _____________ 人称
时态：以 _____________ 为主
第三
一般现在时
Step 1: 题干细审
Appearance:
02
01
Kelly
03
Characteristics:
She enjoys (3) __________________ (弹钢琴). She also likes to (4) ______________ (打乒乓球).
Hobbies:
She is a tall girl (1) ______________ (长着大眼睛) and (2) ___________________ (长长的黑头发).
with big eyes
long black hair
Step 2: 谋篇布局
playing the piano
play ping-pong
04
Comment:
Characteristics:
03
Kelly
She is (12) __________________ (一个好女孩).
Comment:
She is (5) __________________ (善良且乐于助人).
She usually (6) ______________________________ (帮助老师和同学们).
At the weekend, she often (7) ____________________
(去养老院). There she does the cleaning and (8) ______
__________________ (教退休的人唱歌和跳舞). She (9) ______________ (对他人有耐心) and always smiles.
She (10) _______________ (擅长数学). She always (11) _____________________ (帮我解决数学问题)
kind and helpful
helps the teachers and classmates
goes to the retirement home
a nice girl
04
teaches the retired people to sing and dance
is patient with others
is good at maths
helps me with my maths problems
Step 3: 扩充成文
The person I like
The person I like is my best friend Kelly. She is a tall girl with big eyes and long black hair. She enjoys playing the piano. She enjoys playing table tennis as well.
Kelly is a very kind and helpful girl. She usually gives the teachers and classmates a helping hand. At the weekend, she often visits the retirement home. There she does the cleaning. Also, she teaches the retired people how to sing and dance. What’s more, she is patient with others and always smiles. She is good at maths. She always helps me with my maths problems. She often says that she is happy to help people in need.
What a nice girl Kelly is! I wish I could be like her.
Post-writing
Check and revise 检查和修改
Tick (√) the boxes to check your writing, and then revise it.
根据下面的清单检查和修改作文。
I provided basic information about the person I like and described his / her characteristic, job and words often say.
I used suitable adjectives, such as ________________ to describe the person I like.
I used the words and expressions I learnt in this unit.
I used correct spelling, grammar and punctuation.
Grade and share
Elements要素 Level档次
Content内容(6分) 要点齐全，切合题意
适当发挥
Accuracy准确性(6分) 语法，大小写，拼写等格式错误
语言使用恰当，丰富
Fluency流畅性(3分) 分段，书写，衔接，过渡
互评总分
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