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2026届福建省六地市高三毕业班模考
英语读后续写——解析与范文
【1】试题
第二节(满分 25分)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
We walked to the harbor to say goodbye. A lonely bell rang in the distance. It usually warned sailors they were close to shore, but today it sounded like a farewell. I bit my lip, swallowing (咽下) the words that stuck in my throat. “Goodbye, home.”
When my parents told me we were moving, Dad said we were going “home”. He meant the farm where Grandma lived, and where he grew up. I had heard bedtime stories about his childhood. He used to catch toads (蟾蜍) in the stream. But I’d rather find shells on the beach. He promised I’d love the mountains, but all I could imagine was those peaks standing between me and the ocean.
When we arrived at Grandma's farm, she hugged me and said, “Welcome home!” But to me, this place didn’t feel like home at all. I carried my single box — FAVORITE THINGS FROM HOME — straight to my new room. I opened it carefully and lined up my shells on the table. It was strange to see reflections of shells in the new surroundings. That night, I opened my notebook to the page headed Old Things I Miss and wrote down the salt-kissed air, the soft sand and the sound of waves. Then I turned the page to where I’d started another list: New Things I Love. It was blank.
In the following days, a deep loneliness followed me. The air smelled of dry earth and animals, and the chickens’ repeating noises seemed annoying. My grandmother watched my silence, but didn’t break it. She just started leaving small invitations. She left a small bunch of wildflowers on my table. She showed me how to pick tomatoes. She let me taste the sweet berries right from the garden. Little by little, something in me started to soften.
One morning, she brought me a warm brown egg. “It will hatch soon.” She said gently. I held the egg and felt the warmth in my hands. As a tiny crack (裂缝) appeared and a wet yellow chick struggled out, my heart cracked open too. I named her Sunny.
注意：
(1) 续写词数应为150个左右；
(2) 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Sunny's arrival brought joy to my life on the farm.
One evening a month later, I compared the two lists in my notebook.
【2】写作简析
题目分析：
本文是一篇记叙文续写。原文讲述了“我”因搬家从海边来到奶奶的农场，对农场生活感到陌生和孤独，“我”有一个笔记本，记录着“我怀念的旧事物”和“我喜爱的新事物”，后者还是空白。后来奶奶给“我”一个鸡蛋，孵出的小鸡桑尼让“我”内心有所触动。续写部分需要按照给定的两段开头，继续描述桑尼给“我”生活带来的改变以及“我”对农场态度的转变。
写作框架：
第一段：围绕桑尼到来后给“我”在农场生活带来的变化展开。描述桑尼的成长、“我”与桑尼的互动以及这种互动如何让“我”不再那么孤单，体现桑尼带来的欢乐。
第二段：可以着重对比两张清单的变化。“我喜爱的新事物”清单变长，列举新添加的内容，最后通过对比得出农场已成为新家的感悟。
【3】例文欣赏
Sunny's arrival brought joy to my life on the farm. I watched in awe as the little chick, Sunny, grew stronger each day. She followed me around the farm, pecking at the ground and chirping happily. I started carrying her with me when I helped Grandma with the chores. We collected eggs together, and I even taught her to jump onto my shoulder. Sunny became my little companion, and her presence made the farm feel less lonely. I found myself smiling more and looking forward to each new day with her.
One evening a month later, I compared the two lists in my notebook. The list of "Old Things I Miss" was still there, but the list of "New Things I Love" had grown long. I had added Sunny, the wildflowers, the sweet berries, the fresh eggs, and the beautiful sunsets over the mountains. As I looked at the two lists side by side, I realized that the farm had become my new home. The memories of the beach were precious, but the farm had given me new joys and experiences that I would cherish forever.
中文翻译：
桑尼的到来给我在农场的生活带来了欢乐。每天，我都惊叹地看着小鸡桑尼一天天变得更强壮。她跟着我在农场里转来转去，在地上啄食，欢快地叽叽叫着。我帮奶奶干杂活时也开始带着她。我们一起收集鸡蛋，我甚至教她跳到我的肩膀上。桑尼成了我的小伙伴，她的出现让农场不再那么孤单。我发现自己笑得更多了，也期待着和她一起度过的每一天。
一个月后的一个晚上，我比较了笔记本上的两张清单。“我怀念的旧事物”清单还在那里，但“我喜爱的新事物”清单变长了。我加上了桑尼、野花、甜美的浆果、新鲜的鸡蛋以及山上美丽的日落。当我把两张清单并排对比时，我意识到农场已经成了我的新家。海滩上的回忆很珍贵，但农场给了我新的快乐和经历，我将永远珍惜。
例文关键句分析：
Sunny's arrival brought joy to my life on the farm.
分析：此句直接点明主题，即桑尼的到来给农场生活带来欢乐，为后文具体描述欢乐场景做铺垫。
I watched in awe as the little chick, Sunny, grew stronger each day.
分析：“in awe”体现出“我”对桑尼成长的惊叹，“grew stronger each day”具体描述了桑尼的成长变化，使读者能感受到生命的奇妙。
She followed me around the farm, pecking at the ground and chirping happily.
分析：通过“followed”“pecking”“chirping”等动词，生动地描绘出桑尼活泼可爱的形象，以及“我”与桑尼相处时的和谐场景。
One evening a month later, I compared the two lists in my notebook.
分析：明确第二段续写的动作，即对比两张清单，引出下文对清单内容变化的描述。
The list of "Old Things I Miss" was still there, but the list of "New Things I Love" had grown long.
分析：通过对比两张清单的状态，突出“我喜爱的新事物”清单的变化，暗示“我”在农场有了新的体验和感受。
As I looked at the two lists side by side, I realized that the farm had become my new home.
分析：此句为第二段的核心句，表达了“我”通过对比清单得出的感悟，点明了文章主旨，即农场已成为“我”的新家。
【4】读后续写材料翻译
我们步行去港口道别。远处传来孤零零的钟声。平日里，这钟声是提醒水手们已靠近海岸，但今天听来，却像是一声告别。我咬着嘴唇，把哽在喉咙里的话咽了回去。“再见，家。”
当父母告诉我我们要搬家时，爸爸说我们要回“家”了。他指的是奶奶住的农场，他长大的地方。我听过他讲儿时的睡前故事，讲他如何在小溪里捉蟾蜍。可我宁愿在沙滩上捡贝壳。他保证我会爱上大山，但我满脑子想的，都是那些耸立在我和大海之间的山峰。
到达奶奶的农场时，她拥抱了我，说：“欢迎回家！”可对我来说，这地方一点也不像家。我抱着唯一的盒子——“从家带来的最珍贵的东西”——径直走进我的新房间。我小心地打开它，把贝壳在桌上排列开来。在陌生的环境里看到贝壳的倒影，感觉很奇异。那天晚上，我翻开笔记本，翻到标着“怀念的旧日事物”那一页，写下了浸着咸味的风、柔软的沙滩和涛声。然后我翻到下一页，那里我开始列另一份清单：“热爱的新鲜事物”。那一页还是一片空白。
接下来的日子里，一种深深的孤独感如影随形。空气里弥漫着干涩的泥土和牲畜的气味，鸡群的聒噪声似乎格外烦人。奶奶看着我沉默，却并不打破它。她只是开始留下小小的邀请：在我桌上放一小束野花，教我怎么摘西红柿，让我尝尝刚从园子里摘的甜甜的浆果。一点一点地，我内心的某个部分开始变得柔软。
一天早上，她给我带来一个温热的棕色鸡蛋。“它很快就要孵化了。”她轻声说。我捧着鸡蛋，感受着手心里的温暖。当蛋壳上出现一道细小的裂缝，一只湿漉漉的小鸡挣扎着钻出来时，我的心也跟着裂开了一道缝。我给她取名叫桑尼。
段落一：桑尼的到来给我的农场生活带来了欢乐。
段落二：一个月后的一天晚上，我对比了笔记本上的两份清单。

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