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Unit 1 Helping those
in need
沪教牛津版八年级下册
Writing
Key question
Why is it important to help others
主题范畴：人与社会
Who do you want to help if our school is going to hold a money raising activity Why
Who to help
You and your classmates are planning a voluntary activity. You need to get permission from the head teacher.
你和同学们正在计划一场志愿活动。你们需要获得班主任（校长）的许可
An email to the head teacher
In groups, brainstorm some voluntary activity ideas. Follow the example.
Brainstorming
voluntary activity ideas
Charity sale ideas:
Charity concert ideas:
Fashion show ideas:
Food fair Idea: students and teachers sell food they have made themselves
Book fair idea:
Pre-writing
permission /p 'm n/
arrange / 're nd /
donate /d 'ne t/
in order to
in need
flower arranging
tidy up
n. 准许；许可
v. 排列；布置
v. 捐赠；赠送
目的是；为了
在危难中；在穷困中的
插花
收拾；整理
New words and phrases
permission
May I have your permission
我可以得到你的允许吗？
arrange
I will arrange the books.
我会整理好这些书。
donate
They donate money to help others.
他们捐钱帮助别人。
例句
in order to
I get up early in order to catch the bus.
我早起是为了赶上公交车。
in need
We should help people in need.
我们应该帮助有困难的人。
flower arranging
She enjoys flower arranging.
tidy up
Please tidy up your desk.
她喜欢插花。
请整理你的书桌。
Wang Yao has written an email to her head teacher to ask for permission for a voluntary activity.
Dear Ms Yan,
I am writing to you about my group's plans to start a voluntary activity.
In order to help children in need, we plan to organize a visit to the children's home next week. Five students from our class have offered to help.
We plan to teach the children there to do fun activities like flower arranging and paper-cutting. Some local shops have donated craft materials for us to use. We are also thinking about helping the children tidy up their rooms.
We would like to visit the children's home on Saturday, 23 March. Could you please give us permission to organize the activity Thank you for your support!
We look forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Yao
(1) Why Wang Yao has written the email
(2) What voluntary activity Wang Yao and her classmates are going to organize
(3) Who they are going to help
(4) How many students are going to take part in the activity
(5) When and where they are going to have the activity
(6) How much money they will need
(7) What they are going to do there
Read the email and tick (√) the points that are included.
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Wang Yao has written an email to her head teacher to ask for permission for a voluntary activity.
Dear Ms Yan,
I am writing to you about my group's plans to start a voluntary activity.
In order to help children in need, we plan to organize a visit to the children's home next week. Five students from our class have offered to help.
We plan to teach the children there to do fun activities like flower arranging and paper-cutting. Some local shops have donated craft materials for us to use. We are also thinking about helping the children tidy up their rooms.
We would like to visit the children's home on Saturday, 23 March. Could you please give us permission to organize the activity Thank you for your support!
We look forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Yao
Introduction
Body
Conclusion
Body
How
What
Why
Who
How does Wang Yao’s group plan to help children in need
Why is Wang Yao asking for permission for a voluntary activity
What does Wang Yao’s group plan to do at the children’s home
Who has offered to help
Language
Use polite expressions (e.g. Could you please … )
Use complete sentences
Dear Ms Yan,
I am writing to you about my group’s plans to _________________________ (Purpose of the email).
In order to _____________________(Purpose of activities), we plan to organize a visit to the children’s home next week. Five students from our class have offered to help.
We plan to teach the children there to do fun activities like _______________ (Activity 1) and _______________(Activity 2). Some local shops have donated craft materials for us to use. We are also thinking about helping the children ____________________(Activity 3).
We would like to visit the children’s home on ____________________(Time). Could you please _________________________________________ (Request for approval) Thank you for your support!
We look forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Yao
Complete the sample email.
start a voluntary activity
help children in need
flower arranging
paper-cutting
tidy up their rooms
Saturday, 23 March
give us permission to organize the activity
Purpose of the email:
Purpose of activities:
Activity: 1
2
3
People involved:
Time & Place:
Request for approval:
Discuss in groups and list the key points of the email.
To ask for permission to organize a voluntary activity. (Activity name:________)
To help ____________
Could you please give us permission to organize the activity
__________________________
__________________________
__________________________
Our class volunteers, __________
_____________________________
Writing
假如你是八年级（3）班的班长李华，你们班同学 Sam 上
个月突发疾病，急需救助，你们班同学计划举办一场义卖活动筹集善款。请你根据以下内容提示给张校长写一封邮件，阐明一下这次活动的相关内容并希望得到他的许可。
Key points Sentences
Purpose of the email
Time & place
Aim
Activities
Ending
I’m writing to ask for your permission to hold a charity sale for Sam.
We plan to organize a charity sale after school from next Tuesday to Friday in front of the school library.
Our main goal is to raise money for him.
We will offer fun activities like flower arranging and paper cutting.
We will encourage more people to join in.
We will clean the area after the event.
Could you please allow us to hold the activity
主题：人与社会———社会服务与人际沟通
文体：应用文
人称：以 _________ 和第三人称为主
时态：以 ________________ 和一般将来时为主
第一人称
一般现在时
Step 1: 题干细审
I’m writing to _____________________ (请
求您允许) to hold a charity sale for my classmate
Sam. He had a ______________(严重的疾病) last month.
Introduction
02
01
03
Conclusion
Step 2: 谋篇布局
1
An email for a voluntary activity
Body
ask for your permission
serious disease
We ______________ (计划组织)a charity sale after school from next Tuesday to Friday ________ (在……前面) the school library.
__________(为了) make the event more attractive and encourage more people ________(参加), we will also offer fun activities.
We will keep the area clean after the event.
Introduction
02
01
03
Conclusion
Step 2: 谋篇布局
1
An email for a voluntary activity
Body
plan to organize
in front of
In order to
to join in
We truly hope Sam will ________(变好) soon. Could you please ______________ (允许我们举办) the activity
Introduction
02
01
03
Conclusion
Step 2: 谋篇布局
1
An email for a voluntary activity
Body
get well
allow us to hold
★ 常用连接词：
1. 因此 _____________________
2. 为了；以便 _____________________
3.此外 _____________________
4.只要 _____________________
Step 3: 句子提升
as a result
in addition
so that
as long as
★ 高分表达：
5. 为某人举办某事 _________________
6. 遭 受 ，忍 受 _________________
7. 渴 望 做 某 事 _________________
8. 收拾，整理 _________________
9. 确保 _________________
10. 顺利挺过 go through
11. 盼望 _________________
Step 3: 句子提升
hold sth. for sb.
suffer from
be eager to do sth.
tidy up
make sure
look forward to
基础版范文
Step 4: 扩充成文
Dear Mr. Zhang,
I am Li Hua, the class monitor of Class 3, Grade 8. I’m writing to ask for your permission to hold a charity sale for Sam. He is my classmate and had a serious disease last month. Everyone in my class wants to help him.
To raise money for him, we plan to organize a charity sale after school from next Tuesday to Friday in front of the school library. We will also offer fun activities like flower arranging and paper cutting to make the event more attractive and encourage more people to join in. We will clean the area after the event.
We truly hope Sam will get well soon with our help. Could you please allow us to hold the activity Thank you for your support.
We are waiting for your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
进阶版范文
Dear Mr. Zhang,
I am Li Hua, the class monitor of Class 3, Grade 8. I’m writing to ask for your permission to hold a charity sale for my classmate Sam, who is suffering from a serious disease and is in great need of help. As a result, everyone in my class is eager to offer a hand to him.
In order to raise money for Sam, we plan to organize a charity sale after school from next Tuesday to Friday in front of the school library.
We will also offer fun activities such as flower arranging and paper cutting so that the event will be more attractive and more people will join in. In addition, we promise to tidy up the area completely, making sure the space is as clean as it was before.
We believe that as long as we work together, Sam can surely get through this difficult time. Could you please give us permission to hold the activity Thank you for your support.
We are looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Post-writing
Check and revise 检查和修改
Tick (√) the boxes to check your writing, and then revise it.
根据下面的清单检查和修改作文。
I used polite language in my email.
I explained the purpose at the beginning of the email.
I used certain expressions, such as ______to explain our plans clearly
I used the words and expressions I learnt in this unit.
I used correct spelling, grammar and punctuation.
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