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Unit 1
Section 3 Writing
沪教版2024英语（八年级下）
Helping those in need
学习目标
I can
name different kinds of voluntary work,
talk about my plan for voluntary activities,
explain how we can help ourselves by helping others
understand the importance of voluntary work to society.
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新
课
导
入
03
应
用
实
践
06
回
顾
总
结
07
随
堂
小
练
02
学
习
理
解
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迁
移
创
新
05
考
点
速
递
学习内容
新课导入
1
in need
voluntary work
in order to
take photos
have difficulty (in)...
raise one’s spirits
ask permission
suffer from
为了
报请批准
拍照
使振奋
需要帮助的
在…有困难
因…受苦
义务性工作
Play a game! (短语积累）
语材积累
If you want to help those in need, What kind of volunteer activity are you going to take part in why
Visit the Old People’s Home and offer to help them and make them not feel lonely.
Plan a money-raising activity to help children in need
Help disabled people
help disabled people and raise their spirits
look after homeless dogs or cats
sing songs for them, bring them joy and peace.
visit patients and sing songs for them and bring them joy and peace.
As a volunteer, what can you do to help others
clean the park
make our city more beautiful
Visit Children’s Home
tell stories to help them express their feelings
Visit Children’s Home
help the children tidy up their rooms
Visit Children’s Home
teach the children there to do fun activities like flower arranging and paper-cutting.
学习理解
02
Writing an email to ask for permission for a voluntary activity
You and your classmates are planning a voluntary activity. You need to get permission from the head teacher.
1 Wang Yoo has written an email to her head teacher to ask for permission for a voluntary activity. Read the email and tick (√) the points that are included.
To: Ms Yan
Subject：Organize a voluntary activity
Dear Ms Yan.
I am writing to you about my group's plans to start a voluntary activity.
In order to help children in need, we plan to organize a visit to the children's home next week. Five students from our class have offered to help.
We plan to teach the children there to do fun activities like flower arranging and paper-cutting. Some local shops have donated craft materials for us to use. We are also thinking about helping the children tidy up their rooms. We would like to visit the children's home on Saturday. 23 March. Could you please give us permission to organize the activity Thank you for your support!
We look forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely.
Wang Yao
To: Ms Yan
Subject：Organize a voluntary activity
Dear Ms Yan.
I am writing to you about my group's plans to start a voluntary activity.
In order to help children in need, we plan to organize a visit to the children's home next week. Five students from our class have offered to help.
We plan to teach the children there to do fun activities like flower arranging and paper-cutting. Some local shops have donated craft materials for us to use. We are also thinking about helping the children tidy up their rooms. We would like to visit the children's home on Saturday. 23 March. Could you please give us permission to organize the activity Thank you for your support!
We look forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely.
Wang Yao
To（收件人）
Subject（主题）
称谓 / 开头问候语）
Body（正文）
结尾敬语及Signature（署名）
邮件的格式
I am writing to you about my group's plans to start a voluntary activity.
In order to help children in need, we plan to organize a visit to the children's home next week. Five students from our class have offered to help.
We plan to teach the children there to do fun activities like flower arranging and paper-cutting. Some local shops have donated craft materials for us to use. We are also thinking about helping the children tidy up their rooms. We would like to visit the children's home on Saturday. 23 March. Could you please give us permission to organize the activity Thank you for your support!
We look forward to your reply.
邮件正文分析
Tips
开头：直陈写信目的
主体第一部分：
说明活动原因与人员安排
主体第二部分：
详述活动内容、资源与具体时间，提出核心请求
结尾：
礼貌致谢 + 期待回复
(1) Why Wang Yao has written the email
(2) What voluntary activity Wang Yao and her classmates are going
to organize
(3) Who they are going to help
(4) How many students are going to take part in the activity
(5) When and where they are going to have the activity
(6) How much money they will need
(7) What they are going to do there
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话题分析
如何写请求批准类英文邮件
本单元以 “Voluntary Activities & Formal Requests” 为主题，聚焦 “学生向老师正式请求批准活动的沟通规范与表达” 子主题。借由对志愿活动申请邮件的研读、对正式请求类表达的剖析来掌握描述活动规划、提出请求及礼貌致谢的词汇和句型，完成向长辈/老师正式提交活动申请的邮件写作任务。请求批准类英文邮件写作整体注意事项
一、目的明确：开篇直陈写信核心目的，让收件人快速把握邮件主旨。
二、细节完整：活动相关要素需清晰罗列，为请求批准提供充分依据。完整的细节能体
现活动规划的严谨性，增强请求的说服力。
三、语气得体：契合“学生对老师”的沟通场景，全程使用礼貌表达。
四、格式规范：严格遵循英文正式邮件的固定格式，保障沟通的专业性。
Basic structure of how to write an English email asking for permission
01
03
02
Part 1
The beginning (The purpose of writing this letter)
Part 2
1.Reason
2. Arrangement of activities
3. Polite requests and expressing gratitude
Part 3
(Expressing wishes and expectations）
The body
The ending
应用实践
03
2 Write your email to your head teacher to ask for permission.
Step1 Plan Brainstorm what voluntary activity you plan to organize and
take notes. Use the points in Exercise 1 to help you.
Step 2 Write Write an email to ask for permission.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I used polite language in my email.
I explained the purpose at the beginning of the email.
I used certain expressions, such as_____________________
to explain our plans clearly.
I used the words and expressions I learnt in this unit.
I used correct spelling, grammar and punctuation.
Step 3 Check and revise Tick (√) the boxes to check your writing, and then revise it.
To: Mr. Ma
Subject: Request for a Park Clean-up Activity
Dear Mr. Ma,
I’m writing to ask for permission for our group’s voluntary park clean-up.
To keep the school’s nearby park tidy and beautiful, we plan to pick up litter there this Sunday. Four classmates in our group have signed up to join. We have already prepared enough gloves and garbage bags, and we will also bring a few small tools to pick up the waste in the grass.
We’ll meet at the park gate at 9 a.m. and finish all the work by 10:30 a.m. After cleaning, we will sort the collected litter into recyclable and non-recyclable types. Could you let us do this activity Thanks for your help!
We look forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
To: Mr Yan
Subject: Ask to Organize a Book-sharing Voluntary Activity
Dear Mr Yan,
I’m writing to tell you about our group’s voluntary activity plan.
To help community kids love reading, we plan a book-sharing activity at the community center next Saturday. Five of our classmates will join.
We’ve collected 60 kids’ books from our class. On the day, we’ll set up a small book corner, read stories to little kids, and help older ones pick books. We want to do this on Saturday, 30 March (2:00-4:00 p.m.). Could you let us hold this activity Thanks for your support!
We’re waiting for your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
回顾总结
06
一、复习和总结描述描述志愿者活动的词汇和句型。
二、复习邮件的格式。
三、通过范文我们学习关于“申请信”的模式。
四、用所学的知识完成一篇写作任务。
课堂小练
07
一、短语翻译
1.志愿工作
2.使…高兴起来
3.提振…精神
4.做…有困难
5.情绪低落
6.遭受,受苦…
7.使…不感到孤独
8.照顾残疾儿童
volunteer work
cheer… up
raise one’s spirits
have trouble doing
in low spirits
suffer from
make… not feel lonely
look after disabled children
9.参加植树活动
10.表达某人的感情
11.目的在于；为了
12.报请批准
13.在危难中；在穷困中的14.期待
15.思考，考虑
16.整理
take part in tree-planting activity
express one’s feelings
in order to
ask permission
in need
look forward to
think about
tidy up
二、句子翻译
1. 我毫不费力地表达了自己的想法。
I had no difficulty (in)expressing my thought.
2.这个小男孩正患了严重的疾病。
The boy is suffering from a serious disease.
3.作为志愿者我们可以探访患者，为他们唱歌，给他们带来欢乐与安宁。
As volunteers we can visit patients and sing songs for them and bring them joy and peace.
4. 我会尽最大的努力使她振作起来。
I will try my best to raise her spirits.
5. 我们想要在学校操场举行这次活动。
We would like to start/organize/have the activity on the school playground.
6.我想拜访了养老院，给他们提供帮助，让他们不感到孤独
I want to visit the Old People’s Home and offer to help them and make them not feel lonely.
7.作为志愿者，我们可以打扫公园，让我们的城市更美丽。
As volunteers we can clean the park and make our city more beautiful
8.我们计划参观儿童之家，教他们讲故事，帮助他们表达自己的感受。
We plan to visit Children’s Home and teach them to tell stories to help them express their feelings.
9.帮助别人就是帮助自己。它使我们的世界变得更加温暖和幸福。
Helping others is helping ourselves. It makes our world a warmer and happier place
10. 我盼望得到你的回信。
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
给校长的一封信
【短文写作】
假如你是学生会主席苏明，你校师生想在校内举办书展，为开展环保宣传活动筹集资金。请你根据以下内容提示，给王校长写一封信，征得他的同意。词数100左右。
内容包括：
(1)活动原因：全校师生打算在超市附近举办环保宣传晚会，但是资金不足；
(2)活动内容：举办一次书展，筹集资金；
(3)时间和地点：下周三下午4点整，学校操场；
(4)参加人员：全校师生。
_________________________________________________
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【写作指导】
此篇作文以计划筹款帮助儿童征得学校同意为主线，主要内容是筹款的目的及方式。写作内容渗透着本单元的话题和语言目标——怎样帮助有需要的人。
在写作过程中要明确以下几点：
1. 人称：使用第一人称；
2. 时态：使用正确的时态——一般现在时态和一般将来时态；
3. 内容：把题目中所给的提示内容组句成文，不要遗漏要点。
【范文赏析】
Dear Mr Wang,
I am writing to ask for your permission to hold a book fair at our school. We plan to have a party near the supermarket to ask people to protect the environment. However, we are short of money. So we are going to hold a book fair to raise some money. We would like to begin this activity at 4:00 p.m. next Wednesday on the playground. At that time, all the students and teachers at our school will take part in it. Could you please give us the permission
We are looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Su Ming

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