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The secret of happiness
Reading for writing
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share where their happiness comes from.
understand the content of the story, including the character’s actions, feelings and reasons behind them.
organise ideas and write a story based on the
learned model.
use the simple past tense correctly
After learning this lesson, students can...
The sectet of happiness
LOVE
Accepting your
own imperfections
The sectet of happiness
LOVE
Do you think helping others will make you

Can you imagine that the hair can help others feel happy
Look at the pictures and answer the following questions.
Prediction
1.What is the hair like in the picture
The barber is cutting the hair short.
2.What is the barber doing
The hair is long.
3.Is the person a girl or a boy
Prediction
3.Is the person a girl or a boy
A boy with long hair.
Look at the pictures and predict what the passage is about.
Use the words and expressions to help you.
Prediction
What is the passage mainly about
A. A boy with long hair visits the barber to try a new hair style.
B. A boy keeps his hair long to help others and he also feels happy about it.
C. A boy cuts his long hair because the other people laugh at him.
What kind of passage is it
A.
B. A diary.
C. A fashion magazine.
A story.
Reading for gist
What is the letter about
A. An invitation.
B. A thank- you note.
C. A Lost and Found.
Read for the structure
Beginning(开端)
Development(发展)
Climax(高潮)
Ending(结局)
A story.
Read for the structure
Beginning(开端)
Development(发展)
Climax(高潮)
Ending(结局)
The wind was strong. Zhou Jian’s hat blew off. His long hair
waved in the air. He heard a voice behind him: “Is that a boy or a
girl ” He shook his head. “Just one more month!” he said to himself.
Beginning(开端)
The wind was strong. Zhou Jian’s hat blew off. His long hair
waved in the air. He heard a voice behind him: “Is that a boy or a
girl ” He shook his head. “Just one more month!” he said to himself.
1.Who is the character of the story
He had long hair.
2.What was his hair like
Zhou Jian.
1
2
Zhou Jian had long hair.
Zhou Jian ....
People often talked about his long hair behind his back. Sometimes they laughed at him. But he never felt any shame.
People often talked about his long hair behind his back. Sometimes they laughed at him. But he never felt any shame.
1. Zhou Jie’s hat blew off.
主语
谓语
blow /bl / v. 吹动；刮动 过去式：blew /blu /
blow off 吹掉，刮掉 blow out 吹灭
blew off
Don’t blow it out
1. 她手中的钱刮跑了。
The money in her hand________.
2. 这只蜡烛(candle)很漂亮，不要吹灭它。
The candle is beautiful.________________.
People often talked about his long hair behind his back. Sometimes they laughed at him. But he never felt any shame.
2. His long hair waved [in the air].
主语
谓语
状语
wave at/to sb. 向某人挥手
wave wave sb. goodbye = wave goodbye to sb.
向某人挥手道别
1.爱玛向我们挥手。
Emma _________ us.
2.比尔向我们挥手道别后开车走了。
Bill_____________________________________
and then drove away.
wave /we v/ v. 挥手，挥动，摆动（某物）；左右摇晃
waved at
waved us goodbye (= waved goodbye to us)
People often talked about his long hair behind his back. Sometimes they laughed at him. But he never felt any shame.
3. “Just one more month!”, he said to himself.
主语
谓语
基数词 + more + 名词：表示“另外……”
say to oneself：对自己说
~~~~~~~~~~~~
宾语
1.我还有一件事要告诉你。
I have______________ to tell you.
2.她对自己说：“你可以做到的。”
She_____________, "You can do it.“
one more thing
said to herself
宾语
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Development(发展)
People often talked about his long hair behind his back. Sometimes they laughed at him. But he never felt any shame.
They his long hair behind his back.
Sometimes they at him.
3.How did people react
3
talked about
laughed
3
People talked about his long
hair behind his back and
sometimes laughed at him.
People ... his long
hair ... and
sometimes ... him.
Zhou Jian kept his hair long for over two years. Day after day, hope grew together with his hair.
People often talked about his long hair behind his back. Sometimes they laughed at him. But he never felt any shame.
4. But he [never] felt any shame.
主语
系动词
状语
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
表语
shame / e m/ n. 羞愧，羞耻，惭愧 [不可数名词]
to one’s shame 令某人感到羞愧/惭愧的是
1.--令我们感到惭愧的是，我们输了比赛。
--真遗憾!
--To our shame, we lost the game. --What a shame!
[可数名词] 令人惋惜的事；让人遗憾的事
真遗憾。That’s a shame./It’s a shame./What a shame.
常用于口语中，表示对某事感到可惜、遗憾。
Development(发展)
Zhou Jian kept his hair long for over two years. Day after day, hope grew together with his hair.
He kept his hair long for over two years.
4.How long did Zhou Jian keep his hair
5.What is his hope
4
Zhou Jian kept his hair long
for over two years.
Zhou Jian ... his hair ...
for ....
Finally, the time came. Zhou Jian walked into a barber’s shop. He took off his hat and his hair fell around his shoulders. The other customers were very surprised. “Please cut it short and give me the hair,” he said. The barber’s scissors did their work. Zhou Jian carefully put the hair into a bag and walked to the post office.
People often talked about his long hair behind his back. Sometimes they laughed at him. But he never felt any shame.
Phrases (Para 1-3):
shake one’s head 摇头
talk about 谈论
behind his back 在他后面
laugh at 嘲笑
keep his hair long 留长发
day after day 日复一日，一天天地
Climax(高潮)
Finally, the time came. Zhou Jian walked into a barber’s shop. He took off his hat and his hair fell around his shoulders. The other customers were very surprised. “Please cut it short and give me the hair,” he said. The barber’s scissors did their work. Zhou Jian carefully put the hair into a bag and walked to the post office.
He went to a barber’s shop to . He ______________ into a bag and took it to the
____________.
6.What did he do with his hair
cut it short
6
put the hair
6
post office
6
He went to a barber’s shop
to cut it short.
He put the hair into a bag and
took it to the post office.
He went to ...to ....
He ... into a bag and
... it to the ....
A week later, he received a letter:
People often talked about his long hair behind his back. Sometimes they laughed at him. But he never felt any shame.
5. The other customers were very surprised.
主语
系动词
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表语
surprised
surprising
形容词
形容词
惊奇的；感觉意外的
通常用来表示人的主观感受
-be surprised at 对……感到吃惊
-be surprised to do sth. 惊讶地做某事
令人惊讶的通常修饰物，
说明事物本身的性质、特征等
People often talked about his long hair behind his back. Sometimes they laughed at him. But he never felt any shame.
surprise
动词
名词
使惊讶；使感到意外
惊讶，意外；令人惊奇的事
-to one’s surprise
令某人惊讶的是
-in surprise 惊讶地
1.我惊讶地发现我的桌子上有一块新手表。
I ____________________a new watch on my desk.
2.DIY如此受欢迎并不让人吃惊。
It is not__________ that DIY is so popular.
surprising
was surprised to find
Resolution(解开冲突)
A week later, he received a letter:
7.Where was the letter from
A. The government.
B. The cinema
C. The hospital.
8.Why did he do so
He wanted to help _______________________ .
kids with cancer
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8
A week later, he received a thank-you
letter from The City Children’s Hospital.
He wanted to help kids with cancer.
A week later, he received a ...
letter from ....
He wanted to help ....
A week later, he received a letter:
Resolution(解开冲突)
A week later, he received a letter:
9.What would his hair be used for
It would be used for making wigs to help the kids with cancer.
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Zhou Jian kept his hair long for over two years. Day after day, hope grew together with his hair.
When his hair grew, his hope to help the kids with cancer also grew.
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Zhou Jian looked at the smart young man in the mirror. He remembered the words of Plato: “Happiness springs from doing good and helping others.” He smiled and said to himself, “It’s time to grow happiness again.”
People often talked about his long hair behind his back. Sometimes they laughed at him. But he never felt any shame.
6. [A week later], he received a letter.
主语
谓词
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宾语
receive /r si v/ v. 得到，收到
receive...from... 从……收到……
receive/get a letter from... = hear from...
收到……的来信
状语
1. 所有孩子都会收到一份小礼物。
All children will__________________.
2. 他每个月都会收到朋友的来信。
He ___________________________________his friend
every month.
receive a small gift
receives/gets a letter from (=hears from)
Ending(结局)
Zhou Jian looked at the smart young man in the mirror. He remembered the words of Plato: “Happiness springs from doing good and helping others.” He smiled and said to himself, “It’s time to grow happiness again.”
10.What did he do next
He and said to himself, “It’s time to
__________________ again.”
10
smiled
grow happiness
10
He smiled and said to himself,
“It’s time to grow happiness again.”
He ... and said to ...,
“It’s time to ... again.”
People often talked about his long hair behind his back. Sometimes they laughed at him. But he never felt any shame.
Phrases (Para 4-6):
walk into 走进
a barber’s shop 一个理发店
take off 脱下
cut short 剪短
put…into 把……放入
a week later 一周后
in the mirror 镜子里
spring from 起源于
Happiness springs from doing good and helping others.
Why does the writer use the words of Plato in the last paragraph
---Plato
To tell us the key to the happiness is doing
something good and helping others.
Think and share
Think and share
How do you feel when you read the letter in the passage
I was moved by this letter.
It's a surprise to me.
I know why Zhou Jian keeps his hair long finally.
What can you learn from the passage
People often talked about his long hair behind his back. Sometimes they laughed at him. But he never felt any shame.
Zhou Jian kept his hair long for over two years.
Happiness springs from doing good and helping others.
Don’t care about other’s wrong opinions.
Keeping doing things what you think is right.
Helping others can make us get happiness.
Think and share
Zhou Jian had ________hair. People ________________ his long hair behind his back and sometimes _____________at him. He _____________________ for over two years. He ___________ to a barber’s shop to _____________. He ________________ into a bag and took it to the________________.
He wanted to help________________- .He____________and said to himself, “It’s time to ____________________ again.”
Retell
Zhou Jian had __________ hair.People ________________ his long hair behind his back. Sometimes they _______________at him. He _____________________ for over two years. He went to a barber’s shop to _____________. He put the hair into a bag and took it to the__________________.
He wanted to help______________________.
He__________and got happiness.
long
talked about
laughed
kept his hair long
cut it short
smiled
kids with cancer
put the hair
post office
long
talked about
laughed
kept his hair long
went
cut it short
post office
kids with cancer
smiled
grow happiness
Part A
Part B
在先前语料积累之下，对文本分A、B层进行复述。
课文缩写
Zhou Jian had long hair for over two years. Some people laughed at him, but he didn’t care.One day, he cut all his hair off. He sent the hair to a hospital. A week later, he got a letter. It said, “Thank you for helping kids with cancer.” Zhou Jian smiled. He knew helping others makes people happy.
Zhou Jian had long hair for over two years. Some people laughed at him, but he didn’t care.One day, he cut all his hair off. He sent the hair to a hospital. A week later, he got a letter. It said, “Thank you for helping kids with cancer.” Zhou Jian smiled. He knew helping others makes people happy.
Writing
Write a short story about feeling happy through helping others.
Organise your ideas by answering the following questions.
Use your ideas to write your story.
Who is the main character of the story
When and where did the story happen
What problem did he / she face
What did he / she do to solve the problem
How did he / she feel
Useful writing ideas
1.Who is the main character of the story
思路：从身边同学入手，赋予角色简单特点，比如：善良、热心，以便自然开展故事。
2.When and where did the story happen
思路：选择常见、熟悉且容易表达的时间、地点进行描述，时间如昨天、周末或假期期间，地点如学校、家里或者公园、社区。
3.What problem did he / she face
思路：思考日常力所能及范围内，帮助人的行为，比如：帮人打扫卫生、帮人补习功课、照顾老人或病人，并对此设置合理障碍，增加故事波折。
4.What did he / she do to solve the problem
思路：依据角色性格，若角色是个坚韧不拔的人，面对困难坚持不懈；若是一个聪明机灵的人，也许会巧妙解决问题，突出角色起到的积极作用。
5. How did he / she feel
思路：描述帮助他人后，内心的愉悦感、幸福感、自豪感等易于表述的情感。
Useful expressions
1.Happiness is the by-product of your actions. 幸福是步履不停的馈赠。
1.Happiness is the by-product of your actions. 幸福是步履不停的馈赠。
1.Happiness is the by-product of your actions. 幸福是步履不停的馈赠。
1.Happiness is the by-product of your actions. 幸福是步履不停的馈赠。
1.Happiness is the by-product of your actions. 幸福是步履不停的馈赠。
1.Happiness is the by-product of your actions. 幸福是步履不停的馈赠。
1.Happiness is the by-product of your actions. 幸福是步履不停的馈赠。
Useful expressions
1.Happiness is the by-product of your actions. 幸福是步履不停的馈赠。
2.The secret of happiness is not in doing what one likes, but in liking what one does.
幸福的秘诀不在于做自己喜欢的事，而在于喜欢自己所做的事。
4.To be happy, we must not be too concerned with others.
要想幸福，我们不能太在意他人。
5.The happiest people are those who think the most interesting thoughts.
最幸福的人是那些思考最有趣想法的人。
3.The secret of happiness is freedom, and the secret of freedom is courage.
幸福的秘诀是自由，自由的秘诀是勇气。
Writing
围绕“以帮助其他人为乐”展开，讲述Zhao Li帮助同学Tom的具体经历，情感积极向上。提示：
1.Tom因数学考试不及格被嘲笑；
2.Zhao Li帮助Tom摆脱困境。
其他要求：
A层：80-100词，可结合简单句与复合句，用连词衔接使行文流畅；
B层60词左右，以简单句为主，保证句意连贯。
积累单词和短语：
1. bravely /bre v/ adv. 勇敢地 4.pass /pa:s / v. 通过（考试）
2. encourage / n k r d / v.鼓励；激励 5.a strong sense of happiness 强烈的幸福感
3. exam / ɡ z m/ n. 考试;测验
Useful expressions
Who is the main character of the story My friend Zhao Li is a ______________girl. Zhao Li is a __________ girl.
When and where did the story happen Last Friday morning, Tom didn’t_________ the math exam. Last Friday, Tom didn’t _________ the math exam.
What problem did he / she face Some classmates _____________ him behind his back and even ___________ him. Some classmates _____________ him and _________ him.
What did he / she do to solve the problem Zhao Li decided to_________ him. She kept helping Tom with math for over ___________, and encourage him to _________ difficulties bravely. _________, Tom got good grades. Zhao Li knew it and wanted to _________ Tom. She kept helping him for over___________. She helped him work _________ . Tom got good grades _________.
How did he / she feel Both of them _________. Zhao Li said to herself, “It’s time to grow happiness again.” She felt a strong sense of _________. They _________. Zhao Li felt very _________.
Part A
Part B
nice and kind
good
pass
pass
talked about
laughed at
talked about
laughed at
help
help
two months
two months
face
hard
Finally
at last
smiled
smiled
happiness
happy
本页提供语料，适配不同层次的学生，保证不同层次学生的写作输出有话可说。
基础篇
Zhao Li is a nice and kind girl. Last Friday morning, Tom failed the math exam, so some classmates talked about him behind his back and even laughed at him. Zhao Li decided to help him. She kept helping Tom with math for over two months and encouraged him to face difficulties bravely . Finally, Tom got good grades. Both of them smiled happily. Zhao Li said to herself, “It’s time to grow happiness again.” She felt a strong sense of happiness.
Zhao Li is a good girl. Last Friday, Tom failed the math exam. Some classmates talked about him behind his back and laughed at him. Zhao Li knew it and wanted to help Tom. She kept helping him for over two months. She helped him work hard. Tom got good grades at last. They smiled. Zhao Li felt very happy.
提升篇
Wrting
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