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全国卷
Continuation Writing
（2024年新课标全国卷2）第二节 （满分25分）
[1]I met Gunter on a cold, wet and unforgettable evening in September. I had planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference. Due to a big storm, my flight had been delayed by an hour and a half. I touched down in Vienna just 30 minutes before the departure of the last bus to Prague. The moment I got off the plane, I ran like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought.
[2]That was when I met Gunter. I told him where I was going , but he said he hadn’t heard of the bus station. I thought my pronunciation was the problem, so I explained again more slowly, but he still looked confused. When I was about to give up, Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a friend. After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century, Gunter put his phone down and started the car.
[3]Finally, with just two minutes to spare we rolled into the bus station. Thankfully, there was a long queue still waiting to board the bus. Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus, turned around, and looked at me with a big smile on his face. “We made it, ”he said.
[4]Just then I realised that I had zero cash in my wallet. I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled out my Portuguese bankcard. He tried it several times, but the card machine just did not play along. A feeling of helplessness washed over me as I saw the bus queue thinning out.
[5]At this moment, Gunter pointed towards the waiting hall of the bus station. There at the entrance, was a cash machine. I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the machine, and popped my card in, only to read the message:"Out of order. Sorry."
注意：1.续写词数应为 150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.
Paragraph 2: Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised.
读后续写
读
思
写
读
Words and expressions
Para.1
unforgettable adj.难忘的 conference n.会议
delay v.延迟=put off=postpone touch down=land v.
departure n.离开 the moment 一...就...
get off the plane 下飞机 rank n.队列
Para.2
fish out 取出；掏出 a heated discussion 一场激烈的讨论
Para.3
spare v.留出 board the bus 上公交车
Para.4
I flashed him an apologetic smile.我给他一个道歉的微笑。
A feeling of helplessness washed over me.
一种无助的感觉涌上我的心头。
Words and expressions
Para.4
queue /kju / n.队列 thin out变稀疏
Para.5
at the entrance 在入口
out of order 出故障
1.setting
2.characters(who+quality)
3.plot(conflict/problem)
4.emotion
5.language
when + where
climax: conflict/problem
how to read
beginning
development
solution:续写段一
ending：续写段二
Beginning
Climax
problem/conflict
Ending
touched down in … and jumped into the first taxi…
in such a hurry
anxious
Development
put his phone down and started the car… “We made it,”
enthusiastic
kind-hearted
confident
Solution
When: on a cold, wet and unforgettable evening in September
Where: Vienna-taxi-the bus station-Prague
1
2-3
4-5
had zero cash
… did not play
… was out of order
apologetic helpless
disappointed
thankful
Gunter I
1.使用了_______________语言，如“a cold, wet and unforgettable evening”、“made a mad run for”
2.使用了________________“got off the plane...ran like crazy...jumped into...” “parked the taxi ,... turned around, and looked at ...”等
营造了紧张和紧迫的氛围
3.原文有_________________。如“We made it, ”he said.
因此，我们后文也可以适当使用一些对话描写。
4.使用了____________。如A feeling of helplessness washed over me.
read for language
形容词的描述性
并列的动词
直接引语，即对话
无灵主语
5.Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a friend.
I saw the bus queue thinning out.
fish out与thin out运用了________修辞手法，让语言更富表现力。
6.使用了_______________。如Thankfully,there was a long queue(队列) still waiting to board the bus.将一个平淡的客观陈述句，转变为一个带有丰富背景信息和个人情感的故事片段。
7.使用了____________。如There, at the entrance , was a cash machine.能突出“取款机”这一新发现，创造了如同镜头推移般的生动画面感。
read for language
隐喻
表情感的句首副词
倒装句
思
续写段一：I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.______
Development
climax:conflict/problem
续写段二：Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised______________
Ending
Beginning
“I” had to get on the bus, but couldn’t pay.
Solution


I promised to call and pay back Gunter four days later and I succeeded in getting on the bus.
I met with Gunter and paid back Gunter the money as promised.
Predict the solution and the ending
Paragraph 1: I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.
Paragraph 2: Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised.
What details must be mentioned in Paragraph 1
Action
Response
Emotion
predict and design Paragraph 1
衔接句
过渡句
衔接句
1.
2.
3.
4.
5....
Paragraph 1: I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.
1.Gunter’s response to the bad news.
2. I made a promise.
3.Gunter’ s response.
4.I got Gunter’s telephone number.
5.I was thankful.
6.I got on the last bus finally.
Paragraph 2: Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised.
What details must be mentioned in Paragraph 1
Action
Response
Emotion
predict and design Paragraph 1
衔接句
过渡句
衔接句
Paragraph 2: Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised.
What details must be mentioned in Paragraph 2
Action
Response
Emotion
predict and design Paragraph 2
衔接句
过渡句
主题句
1.
2.
3.
4...
Paragraph 2: Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised.
1. I told Gunter where we met.
2. I paid him back.
3. I was thankful.
4.Gunter’s response.
5. the core values: kindness
What details must be mentioned in Paragraph 2
Action
Response
Emotion
predict and design Paragraph 2
衔接句
过渡句
主题句
Man and Society
What qualities do you think Gunter and “I” have What can we learn from them
think about the theme
Gunter
I
be helpful/kind-hearted/enthusiastic
keep one’s promise
A small act of kindness can make a difference.
如何写
eg.原句：I asked him if I could pay back him in four days.
加上我的emotion:
Feeling apologetic and uneasy, I asked him if I could pay back him in four days.
加上我的action:
Flashing him another apologetic smile, I begged him for a delayed payment.
用EAA原则来提升语言描写生动性。
E-emotion A-action A-Adjective/adverbial
用EAA原则来提升语言描写生动性。
E-emotion A-action A-adverbial/ adjective
eg.原句：I hugged him the moment I saw him.
加上我的emotion:
Beaming a smile at him, I hugged him the moment I saw him.
加上adj的描述性词:
Beaming a warm smile at him, I gave him a big hug the moment I saw him.
Class 11 Your problems
一.内容上
1.主题不恰当：friendship
2.Para.1:未点出Gunter帮我； Gunter让他朋友送我；Gunter drove me to Prague
3.Para.2: 没写我还钱
Class 11 Your problems
二.语言上
1.时态（未用一般过去时或过去式写错）
nod-nodded; pay-paid; tell-told
2.词性混乱
I and Gunter was silence.
My heart felt so warmth.
3.单词拼写：相信； 感激的； 感激 幸福
4.listen to sb./sth.
5.中式英语：I was very thanks to him.(两个动词)
Pay attention to your handwriting!!!
Class 11 Praise
佳句
1.章春语：So embarrassed was I that my face turned red.
2.邓冰:And this experience let me know kindness is everything, like the clear moon hanging high sky, spreading its mild moonlight selflessly to everyone.
3.赵佳颖: We should give others a hand, and be a rainbow in somebody else’s cloud.
Class 11 Praise 高分
Class 5 Your problems
一.内容上
1.Para.1:写Gunter开车送我； Gunter帮我让取款机正常运作了；The conference was cancelled due to a big storm.
2.Para.2: 没描述见面后的情节
3.Para.2 无主题升华
Class 5 Your problems
二.语言上
1.时态 plan-planned
2.单词拼写：无助 n.； 感激的； 感激
3.松了一口气
sigh with relief
5.没有犹豫
without hesitation
Pay attention to your handwriting!!!
Class 5 Praise
佳句
1.袁茜茜：My face turned pale and I stood there tongue-tied.
2.汪晓凤: When I light a lamp for somebody, this lamp will also brighten my path.
3.江桂湖: It is no exaggeration/ ɡ z d re ( )n/ to utter/say that this unforgettable experience was like a permanent flower, blooming in my river of memories.
Class 5 Praise 高分
Make a conclusion
conflict
beginning
development
solution:续写段一
ending:续写段二
positive
negative
change
Make a conclusion
读 写
setting:when+where charaters
plot(conflict/problem)
emotion
theme
language
故事发生的场景，人物主次，性格的延续
solution去解决conflict
用ARE设计情节
positive---negative
在情节中做铺垫让主题自然生成
保持原文的语言风格
用EAA原则，语言更生动
echoing (回扣)
foreshadowing(伏笔)
Assignment
1.Correct and polish your writing.
2.Appreciate the two continuation writing samples.
2.Comparing the original reading passage and continuation writing , find out the foreshawing-echoing.
appreciation
I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. He looked at me in disbelief, asking me what to do. Flashing him another apologetic smile, I begged him for a delayed payment. “If I miss this last bus to Prague, I’ll be late for the conference which is so important that I can’t afford to miss it!” I explained. “May I have your phone number I will call you and return the money I owe you. I promise I will keep my word or you keep my watch!” I added, handing him my watch as well as my business card. Gunter accepted my business card but rejected my watch. He wrote down his phone number and gave it to me. “Just keep your promise, Sir.” A feeling of gratitude washed over me as I heard his words. Giving him a firm handshake, I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the bus, and jumped onto it just before its departure.
Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. He picked me up at the bus station where he had dropped me off four days before. Beaming a warm smile at him, I gave him a big hug the moment I saw him. We chatted happily on the way to the airport. I told him that thanks to his generosity and timely help, everything had gone smoothly. When he stopped his taxi outside the airport, I paid him for the “double car ride”, back and forth from the airport to the bus station, together with a generous tip that he turned down. I had no choice but to give him an attractive souvenir I had bought at Prague, which he accepted with delight. In this way, we became good friends and kept in touch with each other regularly. I felt blessed to have such a warm-hearted friend like Gunter who has a heart of gold.
I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. Caught in such a dilemma, I could obviously feel a wave of helplessness and anxiety sweeping over me. However, it was at this moment that Gunter, having sensed my uneasiness, offered to help me without the slightest hesitation.“Don’t worry. I can pay the money for you.” He said. No one could ever imagine what great relief his words brought me! “Sorry to bother you,but I promise I wil1 pay back the money.” I responded. Having said that, I accepted his offer, exchanged our numbers and rushed to board the bus.Before I knew it, tears had already streamed down my cheeks.
Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter a as promised. Delighted and excited, we agreed to meet at the same place where we last met.No sooner had I caught sight of him than I rushed to him, hugging him tightly just as if we were long-lost friends who had not seen each other for ages. That day witnessed a never-ending and pleasant chat between us, during which we exchanged what we had been through recently, the flower of friendship blooming in our hearts. As we were ready to bid farewell, I returned him the money he had lent me and once again expressed my sincere gratitude. It was through this unforgettable experience that I learned that acts of kindness, be they big or small, could make such a difference that I made up my mind to pay it forward in return.

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