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Continuation Writing--
逆推&顺推续故事
提供一段350词以内的语言材料，要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语进行续写（150词左右），将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。
读后续写的具体要求
One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom. “I'm going to find a better spot for us to camp" and walked away.
With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place. she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snow capped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.
“Tom! "she cried. "Help!"
No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.
Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落）somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now. Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.
As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.
Para1: But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.
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Para2: It was daybreak when Jane woke up.
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细读文章，理清脉络
Step 1
Homework Checking
（1） What’s the type of the passage
A. Narration (记叙文)
B. Exposition (说明文)
C. Argumentation (议论文)
who
when
where
what
why
how
_______________________(when),____________________________(where),_________________________________________(who)___________________________(what) but an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel because______________________________________________(why). At the end, Jane got lost. （how）
On weekend in July
by a lake in the forest
Jane and her husband, Tom
drove 3 hours to camp
Jane wanted to find a better place to camp
（2） What's the main plot of the passage
Step 2
逆推续情节
逆推：
两段首句定一框：
由续写的第一段首句与第二段首句
确定第一段的框架。
二框二首正能量：
第二段的框架由第二段首句与正能量结尾来确定。
斟酌首句 巧妙逆推
Para1: But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.
Para2: It was daybreak when Jane woke up.
Jane was rescued successfully by _________.
Jane spent _____ in the forest.
a night
但是没有直升机过来了，天快黑了。
Jane在天亮时醒来
the helicopter
正能量
Step 3
顺推续细节
顺推：
记叙文的 “六要素”（who, when, where, what, why, how）
“五所”：所见（see），所闻(hear)，所做(do)，所说(say)，所感(feel)
Paragraph 1
the possible story
who
when
where
what
why
how
Jane
on the night
in the forest
...do
...see
...hear
...say
/
...feel
Jane spent a night in the forest.
Tip: 推断要符合
人物身份
Paragraph 2
the possible story
who
when
where
what
why
how
Jane/...
the next morning
in the forest/...
...do
...see
...hear
...say
succeed
...feel
Jane was rescued successfully by the helicopter.
Step 4
重点练四句
Step 1: 先把最后一句写好，即：主题句
Step 2: 再把衔接句写好，即第一段的最后一句
Step 3: 紧接着每段的提示语句写角色的情感
1. Exhausted and anxious (as he was), he had no choice but to calm himself down.
（adj+adj,句子）
2. Much to Jenny’s amazement, in the box was a beautiful skirt.
（Much to one’s +n）
3. What delighted me most was that she never failed to keep her promise.
（What+vt过去式+sb +was that）
4.Wearing the beautiful hat and knowing the story behind it, Dora was too happy to say a word.
(v+ing, sb+was+adj.)
情感表达万能句型
Practice makes perfect!
delight：v. 使某人高兴;
delight: n. 高兴;
delighted：adj.感到高兴的
让我高兴的是，我有一个好朋友。
Practice 1: Picture talking
adj+adj,句子
Much to one’s +n
What+vt过去式+sb +was that
sadden：v. 使某人悲伤;
sadness: n. 悲伤;
sad： adj.悲伤的
让我悲伤的是，我得去学习。
adj+adj,句子
Much to one’s +n
What+vt过去式+sb +was that
annoy： v. 使某人恼怒;
annoyance：n.恼怒;
annoyed：感到恼怒的，生气的
sadden：v. 使某人悲伤;
sadness: n. 悲伤;
sad： adj.悲伤的
regret v.遗憾，后悔
regret n. 遗憾
regretful adj 遗憾的
Practice 2: Polish your first sentence of each paragraph
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.
2021 高考题 母亲节的惊喜
1.细读文章，理清脉络
2.逆推续情节
3.顺推续细节
4.重点练四句
5.熟记句型与词汇
Consolidation
A possible vision:
Para1: But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Looking through the thick darkness, she felt a strong sense of regret and despair surging through her body. “If only I had not quarreled with Tom.” She thought to herself. However, she didn’t lose heart, keeping shouting in her mind, “Focus! Tom must have called for those helicopters. I have to guide him tomorrow.” She picked up her courage again and managed to find a shelter to stay from the bones-chilling night. Shortly after, she collapsed in fatigue and barely kept her eyes open, sweetly dreaming of seeing Tom.
所感
所想
所做
A possible vision:
Para2: It was daybreak when Jane woke up. She ate some berries and then made her way along the stream, hoping to find a suitable place to guide the helicopter. Exhausted but full of hope, all of a sudden, she spotted a huge flat rock. She made a great effort to climb onto it and waited with patience. The minute the helicopter came into sight again, she waved the yellow blouse violently and yelled at the helicopter with full-strength. Much to her joy, it did capture the attention of the helicopter and the helicopter landed near the big rock slowly. Without hesitation, Jane jumped off the rock and rushed towards Tom like a flying arrow in floods of tears, hugging tightly in his arms, “please never leave me alone!”
所做
所感
所做
2021-11-02
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谢
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