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Continuation Writing:
Express ( ) vividly
Continuation Writing:
Express anger vividly
He was angry.
VS
With narrowed eyebrows and crossed arms, he glared at that boy.
He shouted at him loudly.
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So annoyed was he that he spat out each word in fury.
Let’s show, do not tell
What do you think makes the sentences impressive
Advanced words
annoyance n.恼怒；生气 wrath n.盛怒；震怒
rage n.暴怒；狂怒 fury n.狂怒；暴怒
annoyed adj.恼怒的 wrathful adj.愤怒的
enraged adj.暴怒的 furious adj.狂怒的
Useful phrases
Useful phrases
Useful phrases
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Sentence patterns: Draw a mind map
Concise
简洁
Comprehensive
全面
Clear
清晰
Critical
思辨
1. He grabbed the cup on the table, smashed it onto the ground, then rushed forward.
2. So annoyed was he that he smashed the teacup onto the ground.
3. With his face clouded with fury, he smashed the teacup onto the ground.
4. A wave of wrath washed over him, so he smashed the teacup onto the ground.
1. sb.+ verb 1 + verb 2 + verb 3
2. So + 情绪形容词 + be + sb. + that
3. With 的复合结构
4. A wave/flood/sense/feeling of + 情绪名词 + washes/sweeps over/overwhelms sb.
Let’s practice
Let’s watch a video that records what happened between the manager and
Li Hua in the office
（此处建议师生配合，拍一段两个人起冲突的视频）
Let’s practice
Facial expression
一阵愤怒的情绪涌上经理的心头，
他用充满怒火的眼睛怒视着李华，
脸颊不停地颤抖着
A of the manager , and he Li Hua with burning eyes, with his cheeks .
wave
sense
feeling
flood
fury
wrath
annoyance
rage
swept over
washed over
overwhelmed
quivering
glared at
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Action
经理怒不可遏，他重重地捶打桌子，粗暴地推搡李华，狠狠地踹了门一脚，然后气冲冲地走了出去
So was the manager that he on the
desk , Li Hua , the door ,
and then .
pounded
heavily
pushed
kicked
roughly
violently
stormed out
furious
enraged
annoyed
irritated
Let’s practice
Language
经理非常愤怒，以至于他对着李华咆哮起来，声音因愤怒而颤抖
So was the manager that he Li Hua, with his voice with anger.
enraged
barked at
trembling
Let’s practice
Surrounding
With a of tense the room,
Li Hua dared not speak a word.
一股强烈的愤怒笼罩在房间里，李华吓得一句话也不敢说
wave
wrath
overwhelming
Anger
To express anger appropriately will keep our mental health and help us build a well-rounded personality.
Remember: after a quarrel, try to get along well with each other again.
Li Hua was visiting Medical Sage Temple, also known as the Zhang Zhongjing museum. A tourist from South Korea said, “Many of these medical methods originated from our country.”
Upon hearing what the tourist said, I......
Vivid writing
评价方面（25分） Great 5 Good 4 Satisfactory 3 Room for improvement
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内容完整性 （5分） 故事情节完整合理，无断层
词汇多样性 （5分） 灵活运用本节课所学单词及短语
句式丰富性 （5分） 熟练使用本节课所学句型
语言准确性 （5分） 无语法、拼写、标点错误；时态一致；语言流畅
卷面与书写 （5分） 字迹清晰工整，卷面整洁无涂改
Evaluation
Vivid writing
Vivid writing
Upon hearing this, I exploded with rage, with my face clouded with anger and my eyebrows knitting together tightly. So enraged was I that I couldn't help but pound my hand heavily on the table, point at him annoyedly and bark at him with fury, yelling "How could you say that Chinese medicine has a long history in China. Countless medical books and practical experiences prove its origin in China." A wave of overwhelming wrath washed over the temple and the world seemed to tremble with my fury. The tourist glanced away, daring not speak a word. After a heated discussion, he finally realized his mistake and apologized. We ended up in harmony.
1. The Presentation Star
2. The Evaluation Star
3. The best group
Summary
Homework
1. Compulsory: Polish your writing
2. Optional: Accumulate expressions about happiness for our next class

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