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高中英语写作句子扩充技巧
学生写作面临的问题：
1，句子简单，语法结构混乱。
2，无话可说。
3，语言苍白无力。
4，不愿意写长句子害怕出错。
Contents:
1,添加形容词、副词
2,添加形容词词快、副词词快
3,添加介词短语
4,with的复合结构
5,添加定语/状语从句
6,具象化、精准化动作描写
5,添加非谓语结构
Warming-up
What did he do
1，添加形容词、副词
1，Tom opened his present box.汤姆打开了礼盒。
加形容词：
小汤姆打开了他那漂亮的礼盒
加副词：
小汤姆兴奋地打开了他那漂亮的礼盒
————Tom opened his ___________present box.
Little Tom opened his beautiful present box ________.
Little
beautiful
excitedly
2，添加形容词短语、副词短语
1，Tom opened his present box.汤姆打开了礼盒。
加形容词短语：
*既好奇又兴奋, 小汤姆打开了他那漂亮且精致的礼盒。（精致dedicate)
*满心欢喜，小汤姆兴奋地打开了他那漂亮且精致的礼盒。
——————, little Tom opened his _________________present box.
Curious and excited
beautiful and delicate
full of+情绪类名词
_________________little Tom opened his beautiful and delicate present box excitedly.
Full of joy
加副词短语
轻松愉悦地, 小汤姆打开了他那漂亮且精致的礼盒。（ light-heartedly）
极度开心地, 小汤姆打开了他那漂亮且精致的礼盒。（on cloud nine)
Little Tom opened his beautiful and delicate present box_______.
light-heartedly
Little Tom opened his beautiful and delicate present box_________.
on cloud nine
3，添加介词短语，在句子中充当状语
小汤姆兴奋地打开了他那漂亮的礼盒.（in excitement)
出于好奇小汤姆兴奋地打开了他那漂亮的礼盒.(out of curiosity)
Little Tom opened his beautiful and delicate present box_____________.
in excitement
介词+名词=副词功能
——————little Tom opened his beautiful and delicate present box in excitement.
Out of curiosity
3，添加with的复合结构：with+宾语+宾补
小汤姆打开了他那附带贺卡的礼盒。（贺卡：greeting card;附带：attach)
汤姆张着嘴巴，打开了他的礼盒。（open adj.张着的）
Little Tom opened his present box__________________.
with a greeting card attached
——————————Little Tom opened his present box.
With his mouth open
4，添加非谓语结构（v-ing/V-ed/-to do+…,+句子
兴奋地尖叫着，小汤姆打开了他那礼盒。（scream v.尖叫）
为了满足他的好奇心，小汤姆打开了他那礼盒。（satisfy v.满足）
——————————Little Tom opened his present box.
Screaming in excitement
——————————Little Tom opened his present box.
To satisfy his curiosuty
小汤姆打开了他一直期待的礼盒。(looking forward to)
小汤姆打开了他妈妈昨天送给他的礼盒。
4，添加定语从句
Little Tom opened his present box____________________________.
which he had been looking forward to
Little Tom opened his present box____________________________.
which his mom gave him yesterday
5，添加精准动作描写
小汤姆站起身来，走向前去打开了他一直期待的礼盒。
小汤姆打开门，发现桌子上有个礼盒。他兴奋的跑过去打开它
Little Tom—————————— open his present box , which he had been looking forward to.
stood up and stepped tarwards to
Little Tom—————————————————————— .
opened the door, found a present box and ran to unrapped it excitedly.
6，Fill in the blanks
Ruth was determined to win the English speech contest, so she tirelessly practiced her speech for over a month.
(1) _______________________________________,Ruth tirelessly practiced her speech for over a month.（运用非谓语动词开头）
(2) _____________, Ruth practiced her speech for over a month, determined to win the English speech contest.（运用副词开头）
(3) __________ to win the English speech contest drove Ruth to practice her speech tirelessly for over a month.（运用抽象名词开头）
(4) __________, Ruth tirelessly practiced her speech for over a month, determined to win the English speech contest.（运用介词短语开头）
Dtermined to win the English speech contest
Tirelessly
Determination
With a determination
2, Chinese calligraphy has been gradually known to the world.
(1) Chinese calligraphy(被作为一种传统的中国艺术）, _______________________, has been gradually known to the world.（添加非谓语动词短语）
(2) __________, Chinese calligraphy has been gradually known to the world.（添加状语从句）
(3) Chinese calligraphy has been gradually known to the world, _________________________________________________.（添加定语从句）
regarded as a traditional Chinese art
Fortunately
which more foreigners can appreciate it and learn it.

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