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(共19张PPT)
精准“立意”下的
续写情节构建
The theme is
the soul.
When
Who
Where
Why
How
What
Students
At my office.
On one afternoon of
a holiday.
Theme
Because they didn’t finish their
lesson recitation as required.
They were reading
and reciting .
They had to finish their task with my company.
hard to recite
In the continuation part,
they should be__/___/__
others enjoying holiday
reciting
HAPPY
WORRIED
PAINFUL
A ________________ ending
delighted/optimistic
diligent
persevering
confident
/ambitious
A story about______________
detention(留堂)
Learn the saying——
“Do it today!”
“________depends on__________!”
diligence.
Success
How can we get the theme from the given materials when writing continuation writing
Narrative
What can we learn from the story
Emotions!
Positive & Optimistic
Theme:
What is the story about
singularly (strangely/unusually)
nosedive (a sudden sharp drop)
outright (complete and total)
being brushed off (being ignored)
lest (for fear that)
outmatched (defeated)
chickening out (holding back)
Authentic
Language
A story about
cooperation
Para.1 We started to meet regularly to draw up our plans.
Brief idea:
Para.2 One day I got word that he was admitted to
hospital for a serious disease.
Brief idea:
___________ between us
____________of us
cooperation
achievement
I
strangely/unusually
a sudden sharp drop
complete and total
He
being ignored
for fear that
defeated
holding back
characters
…deliberately … I …avoid.
I secretly hoped…
hopeful
forced
intense…competitive…serious
wore dark clothes…had a personality…
He seemed
not easy-going
(difficult to
get along with)
A story about cooperation
Para.1
active

Para.1
He was supposed to be
easy to get along with.
I didn't…being brushed off
…lest…
ambitious
unconfident
ambitious
uncooperative
proud
He looked… I weren't there
hold him back
not trustful
ignored
Para.1
A story about cooperation
Para.1
patient
devoted
Para.2
Para.2 present at… (not) fully recovered
confident
devoted
trustful
do…alone
When my teammate …
Here was this challenging …
I didn’t …chickening out
uneasy
outmatched
didn’t…chickening out
uneasy, outmatched
but ambitious again.
A story about cooperation
Para.1
diligent/
hardworking
modest
reputation…good grades…the
opposite of me
academic/
knowledgeable
not academic
I wasn’t sure…
v
confused
Para.1
respectable
Para.2
supportive
Para.2
determined/
strong-willed
persevering
Para.1
Para.2
cooperation between us
good/ harmonious
②lifelong friendship
①success in study
Things learnt:
Theme：
A man knows his companion
in a long journey and a little inn.
achievement
of us
Don’t judge a book by its cover.
___________________ depends on ____________________
Lifelong friendship
trust/support/hardship…
A story about
cooperation
(How to achieve … )
(How to obtain… )
Write one paragraph within 10’.
The degree of cohesion[k hi n] with the opening words of the given passage and paragraph;
(上下文衔接性）
b. The richness of the content ;（内容丰富性）
c. The accuracy [ kj r si] of applied grammatical structure and vocabulary.（语法、词汇的准确性）
d. Contextual coherence. [k h r ns]（语境连贯性）
e. Your best handwriting and the tidiness of the paper.
（书写和卷面整洁）
Self-assessment
What I have learnt in this class:

What I need to improve next time:
cohesion/ richness
/accuracy/coherence
/handwriting/tidiness…
theme/emotion…
Words and sentences make
the blood and flesh.
Emotions are the bones.
The theme is the soul.
Practice makes perfect!
The saying is the skin.
Homework
Finish the continuation writing. Work in pairs to polish your writing.
Thanks !
The saying ,“don’t judge a book by its cover”, reflected my sallowness. My teammate turned out to be much more cooperative than I had previously expected, answering all my questions patiently. We were both ambitious for success, thus devoting ourselves to the project seriously. With time going by, I had to admit he was really respectable, not only because of his being academic but his various good qualities. Everything seemed to go smoothly. As fate would have it, however, something quite unexpected happened. (83words)
In the hospital ,he was too weak to say a word but I could read his faith in me from the smile on his face. I assured him I would carry on with our project alone ,trying my best . I kept reporting my work to him and received support constantly. On the big day, he was present, though still not fully recovered. Diligence did pay off . I gave the presentation confidently and it proved to be one of the most successful. We harvested lifelong friendship, which depended on the trust and support from each other.(97 words)

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