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(共27张PPT)
continuation writing
读后续写之动作描写
Lead-in
Boniu hugged Zongjie tightly.
Boniu dashed forward and hugged Zongjie tightly.
题材
题材
例1:
①Fortunately, he threw me a branch and pulled me out.
②He lay on his stomach, pushed the branch before him and wound his way towards me. I grabbled the branch with care and was ultimately dragged out of the ice water.
动作1
动作2
并列的主要动作-全用谓语动词表示（动词时态要一致）
动作3
动作4
动作5
Action chains
Action chains (动作链)
Action scenes（动作面）
How to polish your writing by using actions
Action chains (动作链)
Pre-
action
Transition action
Post-action
Action
先前动作
过渡动作
后续动作
How to build ---timeline
Timeline
How to build ---timeline
上车？
Action chains (动作链)
get into the car
stopped
got into
told the driver
Action chains (动作链)
How to build ---timeline
投球？
throw the basketball
aim at
threw
scored
Action chains (动作链)
sentence structure 1
He stop the car,got into the car and told the driver his destination.
句型1：主＋谓,谓 and 谓
Action chains (动作链)
How to build ---timeline
投球？
threw the basketball
aim at
threw
scored
He aimed at the basket, threw the basketball and scored three points.
仿写练习- 主+谓1..., 谓2..., and 谓3....
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1.女孩停止了啜泣(sob)，从女人身边退了(step)回来，开始唱歌。
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2.她登上(board)飞机，坐在座位上，寻找她的书。
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3.那个女人从他手里抓起最后一块饼干，怒视(glare at)着他.
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The girl stopped sobbing, stepped back from the woman and began to sing.
She boarded the plane, sat on her seat and then looked for her book.
The woman grabbed the last biscuit from his hand and then glared at him.
Action chains (动作链)
Sentence structure 2
做好充分的准备后，她站在门口等待她女儿的到来。
Having made full preparations,she stood by the door to expect the arrival of her daughter.
句型2：Having done,谓语动词
Action chains (动作链)
Sentence structure 2
战争结束后，战士回到家中，发现他的妻子和别人走了。
Having fought in the war for years,the soldier returned to home,only to find his wife had gone with someone else.
Action chains (动作链)
Sentence structure 2
Pratice: 排了三个小时的队，他被告知票被卖完了。
Having waited in line for three hours,he was told that the tickets had been sold out.
summary
The sentences structure for action chains
1.主+谓1..., 谓2..., and 谓3....
2.Having done,主＋谓
Action scenes (动作面)
李云龙面带杀气，振臂一挥，大喊，“开炮！”
面部
肢体
语言
how to build
Action scenes (动作面)
how to build
贝贝坐在泳池边，双臂低垂，眺望远方，思考
自己是白的还是黑的。
肢体
肢体
面部
心理
conclusion:肢体—面部 —语言/心理
整体到局部
Action scenes (动作面)
sentence structure1
句型1 doing ，主＋谓，doing
Pratice:她站在空旷的路边，仰望着天空，感受这份珍贵的平静。
Standing besides the empty road,they looked up at the sky,feeling the precious peace.
Action scenes (动作面)
sentence structure2
句型2 主＋谓,doing and doing
Pratice:他欣喜若狂，在雨中又唱又跳。
心理
面部
肢体
He was overwhlmed with joy,singing and dancing in the rain.
Action scenes (动作面)
sentence structure3
句型3 done,谓语动词,doing
Pratice:被老师的话所鼓舞，Lucy举起了手，小声说：“我来。”
Encouraged by the teacher’s words,Lucy raised her hands,whispering,“I volunteer.”
心理
肢体
语言
Action scenes (动作面)
sentence structure4
贝贝坐在泳池边，双臂低垂，眺望远方，思考
自己是白的还是黑的。
肢体
肢体
面部
心理
(with )his arms drooping,Beibei sat besides the pool,looking at the sky and wondering whether he was white or black.
独立主格：(with)＋逻辑主语＋非谓
句型4 独立主格，主＋谓，doing
summary
The sentences structure for action scenes.
句型1 doing ，主＋谓，doing
句型2 主＋谓,doing and doing
句型3 done,主＋谓,doing
句型4 独立主格，主＋谓，doing
Disscuss how to build the action chains or action scenes for the following sentences and rewrite them.
1.He threw the meat to the wolf.
2. He stepped onto the stage.
3.The audience shouted loudly.
Summary
句型1：主＋谓，谓and 谓
句型2：Having done,主＋谓
句型3 doing ，主＋谓，doing
句型4 主＋谓,doing and doing
句型5 done,主＋谓,doing
句型6 独立主格，主＋谓，doing
He threw the meat to the wolf.
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He took out the meat,aimed at the wolf and threw it to the fierce animal.
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The audience shouted loudly.
The audience rose from chairs,applauding for the great perfomance and cheering loudly“oh,my god!”
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练习：1. 听了这话，凯瑟琳跑得飞快。
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2.当我和妈妈一起装饰(decorate)房子时，我不小心摔坏了一个昂贵的花瓶(vase)。
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3.意识到我负担(afford)不起继续深造的事实，我不得不停止追逐(chase)我的梦想。
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Hearing this, Cathrine ran as fast as her leg could carry her.
When decorating the house with my mother, I accidentally broke an expensive vase.
Realizing that I can't afford to continue my further study, I had to stop chasing my dream.

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