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Tu Youyou’s Discovery
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读后续写教学材料
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
Tu Youyou, a committed and patient scientist, won the 2015 Nobel Prize for discovering artemisinin (青蒿素), a life-saving treatment for malaria. Her team faced many challenges: reviewing 2,000 ancient medical texts, testing 380 treatments, and failing over 190 times. Finally, they found that using low-temperature extraction preserved artemisinin’s medical properties. Tu even insisted on testing the medicine on herself to ensure its safety. After the success, she said the honor belonged to her team and Chinese medicine.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
One evening, after another failed test, Tu Youyou stared at the pile of ancient medical texts, her eyes tired but determined. _______________
When the news of the Nobel Prize reached Tu Youyou, she was sitting in her lab.___________________
一、Lead in
Read the text again and answer the following questions:
1.How artemisinin was discovered
2.What kind of person is Tu Youyou And state your reasons.
Read for details
11. How artemisinin was discovered
the process of discovering artemisinin
Tu’s team examined__________________
_____,and evaluated _________________
________________________
They found a medical text suggesting _____________________________________________.
They tested ______________________
They tried _______________________
________________, but ____________
___________.
They used a ________________________ the sweet wormwood extract.
They insisted on testing the medicine ____________ to make sure it was safe.
They tested the medicine on _______，most of whom __________.
The medicine became ____________________for malaria.
texts
over 2,000 old medical
280,000 plants
using the extract from sweet wormwood
to treat a fever
a collection of dried
wormwood leaves
boiling fresh wormwood
and using the liquid
this didn’t
work either
lower temperature to draw out
on themselves
malaria
patients
a standard treatment
for their medical properties
What do you think of the process
key
recovered
The process was full of trial and error（尝试和失败）.
There is no rayal road to success.
Tu Youyou团队研究青蒿素



Sweet wormwood
Artemisinin
Antimalarial drugs
Malaria
extract：
vt. 提取；提炼
n. 提取物
2. What kind of person is Tu Youyou And state your reasons.
committed
patient
persistent
hard-working
determined
knowledgeable
brave
responsible
scientific spirit
...
What’s Tu Youyou’s comments on winning the Nobel Prize
The team effort/ cooperation.
The wisdom of Chinese people.
The great value of traditional Chinese medicine.
The rigorous scientific research.
Beginning
(character and setting)
Process
Climax
(the main problem or conflict)
Ending
(a time to solve the problem
/ how things end up)

Story
Mountain
二、Use“Story Mountain” to analyse the text.
Beginning
(Youyou团队研究青蒿素)
Process
Climax
(冲突：多次试验失败)
Ending
( 突破：低温提取成功
结局：获诺奖，归功团队)

Story
Mountain
三、仿写实践（20分钟）
1. 学生4人一组，奇数组写第一段，偶数组写第二段，任务单要求：
- 必须用上至少1个核心线索；
- 加入至少1处动作/语言描写体现人物品质；
四、评改与优化（5分钟）
组内互评：每组用“续写互评表”（维度：线索使用、情节连贯、人物贴合、语言准确）互评组内习作，选出最优片段；
续写评价表 1. 续写第一段第一句是否与第一段首句相衔接？ 2.续写第一段的尾句是否与第二段首句衔接？ 3.句子与句子之间是否使用了过渡词语？有多少处？______ 4.是否通过动作、语言和情感描写人物？有多少处？______ 5.拼写是否正确？错误拼写有多少处？________ 6.书写是否工整？书写脏乱差有多少处？______ 7.语法是否准确？语法错误有多少处？______ 8.高阶：文章是否使用了高级词汇或短语？有多少处？_____ 9.高阶：文章是否使用了从句、非谓语或倒装等？有多少处？ ______ 是____ 否____
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2. 全班展示+点评：
2组分别展示两段续写，师生共评：
五、总结与作业
1. 完善个人习作，修正互评中发现的错误，补充1处细节描写；
2. 背诵范文中3个核心句型（Her eyes lit up/Without your commitment/Their efforts finally paid off），并尝试用其扩展造句。

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