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沪外教七下Unit3写作精讲
Text Messages (Inviting Friends)
适用水平：七年级下册
字数要求：短信正文60—100词
教材依据：Unit 3 短信邀请写作 + 选择疑问句/不定代词 + 友好语气表达
第一步：审（审题）
审任务：写一条短信邀请朋友参加线下活动，需要包含问候、活动介绍、时间地点、交通方式，并使用友好语气；同时要能看懂并写出接受/拒绝邀请的回复。
审体裁：手机短信，格式简洁：称呼+正文，不用复杂长句。
审人称：以**第二人称（you）和第一人称（I/we）**为主，直接和朋友对话。
审时态：
一般将来时（will / be going to）：描述将要发生的活动（如：There will be a... / We are going to...）。
一般现在时：用于问候和提出建议（如：Hi there! / Can you come ）。
审技能：要学会使用友好语气，清晰说明活动细节。
第二步：列（列提纲）
短信结构（4个核心部分）
邀请短信结构
问候：用轻松的打招呼开头（如：Hi guys! / @ALL Hi there!）。
活动介绍：说明活动是什么、有什么亮点（如：a book fair / a basketball game，用there's going to be...）。
邀请+时间地点：发出邀请，并明确集合时间和地点（如：meet at the school gate at 2 p.m.）。
交通建议：告诉朋友怎么去（如：take the bus / walk there）。
回复短信结构
接受邀请：表达开心 + 感谢（如：I'd love to! Thanks! / Count me in!）。
拒绝邀请：礼貌道歉 + 说明原因 + 约定下次（如：Sorry, I can't. I have to... Maybe next time!）。
完整提纲示例（以“科技展”为例）
部分 详细要点 关键词
问候 @ALL Hi there! Hi there, @ALL
活动 本周六下午市中心有科技展，有最新的电子产品和互动体验 Technology Fair, downtown, latest phones, pads, fun activities
邀请+时间地点 想一起去吗？下午1:30在校门口集合 Would you like to come meet at the school gate at 1:30 p.m.
交通 我们可以坐公交去，大概20分钟就到 catch the bus there, 20 minutes' ride
接受回复 我想去！谢谢！我对新电子产品很感兴趣，迫不及待了！ I'd love to. Thanks! I'm interested in new gadgets. I can't wait!
拒绝回复 抱歉我去不了，我要去姐姐的生日派对，有很多准备工作要做，下次吧 Sorry, I can't. It's my sister's birthday. I have lots to prepare. Maybe next time!
第三步：连（连句成篇）
用口语化的连接词把要点连成通顺的短信，符合七下水平。
常用连接词（短信友好语气）
并列：and
建议：We can... / Let's...
邀请：Would you like to... / Can you come
连句示范
要点：Hi guys. There is a Technology Fair. I want to go.
→ 升级：@ALL Hi there! Guess what There's a super cool Technology Fair downtown this Saturday afternoon!
要点：Meet at 1:30. School gate. Take the bus.
→ 升级：We can meet at the school gate at 1:30 p.m. and catch the bus there. It's only a 20-minute ride.
要点：I want to go. Thank you.
→ 升级：I'd love to. Thanks for asking! I'm really interested in the latest gadgets. I can't wait!
第四步：美（美化语言）
在保证语法正确的基础上，用友好语气让短信更生动，符合教材要求。
1. 词汇升级（友好语气）
普通词 升级词 例句
Do you want to... Would you like to... / Can you come Would you like to come with me
very good super cool / really fun It's super cool!
I will go Count me in! / I'm in! Count me in!
I can't go Sorry, I can't. / I'm afraid I can't. Sorry, I can't.
2. 句型升级（短信友好表达）
基础句：There is a fair.
→ 高分句：Guess what There's a super cool Technology Fair downtown! It has all the latest phones and fun activities.
基础句：Meet me at the gate.
→ 高分句：We can meet at the school gate at 1:30 p.m. and catch the bus there. It's only a 20-minute ride.
基础句：Yes, I will go.
→ 高分句：I'd love to. Thanks for asking! I'm really interested in the gadgets. I can't wait!
基础句：No, I can't. I have a party.
→ 高分句：Sorry, I can't. It's my sister's birthday and we're having a big party. I have lots to prepare! Maybe next time!
3. 格式美化
短信简洁：每句不要太长，用短句更自然。
称呼清晰：可以用@ALL或朋友名字。
第五步：查（检查纠错）
写完后逐项检查，避免扣分：
格式检查：
确认有问候、活动、时间地点、交通四个部分。
确认语气友好，符合短信语境。
语法检查：
确认人称一致（I/you/we）。
确认时态正确（将来时讲活动，现在时提建议）。
确认拼写和标点正确。
内容检查：
确认字数在60—100词之间。
确认信息清晰（朋友能看懂什么时候、在哪、做什么、怎么去）。
确认回复符合要求（接受要感谢，拒绝要说明原因）。
完整范文
邀请短信范文
@ALL Hi there!
Guess what There's a super cool Technology Fair downtown this Saturday afternoon! It has all the latest phones, pads and fun interactive activities. Would you like to come with me I'm sure we'll have a great time! We can meet at the school gate at 1:30 p.m. and catch the bus there. It's only a 20-minute ride.
接受回复范文
I'd love to! Thanks for asking! I'm really interested in the latest gadgets and the activities there. I can't wait to join you! See you at the school gate on time!
拒绝回复范文
Sorry, I can't. It's my sister's birthday this Saturday and we're having a big family party. I have to help with the preparations. Maybe we can go to another fair together next time!
中文对照
邀请短信：
@ALL 大家好！
你猜怎么着？这周六下午市中心有个超酷的科技展！里面有最新款的手机、平板，还有好玩的互动体验。想和我一起去吗？我们肯定会玩得很开心！我们下午1:30在校门口集合，坐公交过去，只需要20分钟。
接受回复：
我想去！谢谢你邀请我！我对最新的电子产品和里面的活动特别感兴趣。迫不及待要和你一起去了！周六准时在校门口见！
拒绝回复：
抱歉我去不了。这周六是我姐姐的生日，我们要办一个大型家庭派对，我得帮忙准备。要不我们下次一起去别的展览吧！
核心素材
好词
活动类：Technology Fair, book fair, basketball game, picnic, movie night, interactive activities
邀请类：Would you like to..., Can you come , Count me in!, I'm in!
回复类：I'd love to., Thanks for asking!, I can't wait!, Sorry, I can't., Maybe next time!
好句
@ALL Hi there! Guess what There's a super cool ... this ...! It has ... and ...
Would you like to come with me I'm sure we'll have a great time!
We can meet at ... at ... and ... there. It's only a ...-minute ride.
I'd love to. Thanks for asking! I'm really interested in ... I can't wait!
Sorry, I can't. It's ... I have to ... Maybe we can ... next time!
学生填空练习版
邀请短信填空
@ALL Hi there!
Guess what There's a super cool ________ this ________! It has ________ and ________. Would you like to come with me I'm sure we'll have a great time! We can meet at ________ at ________ and ________ there. It's only a ...-minute ride.
接受回复填空
I'd love to! Thanks for asking! I'm really interested in ________. I can't wait to join you! See you at ________ on time!
拒绝回复填空
Sorry, I can't. It's ________. I have to ________. Maybe we can ________ together next time!

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