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专题五　应用文写作
【命题概述】
1.写作文体:书信、电子邮件是高考应用文写作的主要考查形式。从考查频次来看,常考的有邀请信、告知信、求助信、申请信、建议信、感谢信、道歉信等。
2.命题形式:命题以提纲式最为常见。提纲作文通常设定特定情境, 以文字提示(近年高考以此为主)、文字+表格、文字+图片等形式给出要点,并要求学生根据所列要点组织语言,将要点完整清晰地表达出来,完成写作任务。
3.写作主题:写作主题涉及人与自我、人与社会和人与自然三大语境,其中有关学校(学习)生活、社会生活的主题所占比重最大。题目选材丰富、情境真实,贴近生活,充分体现文化自信和跨文化交际背景。
4.备考建议:应用文写作要练习各种文体体裁,在掌握一定的“模板”的基础上,慢慢练成有自己风格的写作句式。另外,积极储备一定的语言知识,以便在考场上能够得心应手地写作。最后,要控制写作时间,争取在15 分钟内一气呵成。
【考情分析】
2023—2025年高考应用文写作考情分析表
年份 卷别 体裁 主题 命题方式
2025 新高考全国Ⅰ卷 建议信 人与自我:英语报栏目选择 文字提示
新高考全国Ⅱ卷 询问信 人与自我:询问文章进展 文字提示
浙江1月卷 演讲稿 人与自我:对部分同学在校园内拍短视频的看法 文字提示
2024 新高考全国Ⅰ、Ⅱ卷 告知信 人与自我:分享美术课经历 文字提示
浙江1月卷 征文投稿 人与社会:推荐一项课间活动 文字提示
2023 新高考全国Ⅰ、Ⅱ卷 建议信 人与自我:给外教的分组方式提建议 文字提示
浙江1月卷 报道 人与自然:“认识我们身边的植物”活动 文字提示
第一讲　整体解读
一、评分标准解读
档次 描述
第五档 (13~15分) 很好地完成了试题规定的任务。(1)覆盖所有内容要点;(2)应用了较多的语法结构和词汇;(3)语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂的结构或较高级词汇所致,具备较强的语言运用能力;(4)有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。
第四档 (10~12分) 较好地完成了试题规定的任务。(1)虽漏掉1、2个次重点,但覆盖所有主要内容;(2)应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求;(3)语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确,些许错误主要是因为尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致;(4)应用了简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑,达到了预期的写作目的。
第三档 (7~9分) 基本完成了试题规定的任务。(1)虽漏掉一些内容,但覆盖所有主要内容;(2)应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求;(3)有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,但不影响理解;(4)应用了简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文内容连贯。整体而言,基本达到了预期的写作目的。
第二档 (4~6分) 未恰当完成试题规定的任务。(1)漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容,写了一些无关内容;(2)语法结构单调,词汇项目有限;(3)有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内容的理解;(4)较少使用语句间的连接成分,内容缺少连贯性。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
第一档 (1~3分) 未完成试题规定的任务。(1)明显遗漏主要内容,写了一些无关内容,原因可能是未理解试题要求;(2)语法结构单调,词汇项目有限;(3)较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响对写作内容的理解;(4)缺乏语句间的连接成分,内容不连贯。信息未能传达给读者。
0分 未能传达给读者任何信息:内容太少,无法评判;写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。
二、应用文写作四步法
真题典例
(2025·新高考全国Ⅰ卷)
假定你是李华,你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教 Jenny 提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给Jenny写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.你的选择;
2.说明理由。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jenny,
I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper.
Yours,
Li Hua
[写作指导]
第一步　认真审题
文体 建议信;英语报栏目选择
时态 以一般现在时为主
人称 以第一人称为主
第二步　梳理要点
要点 分三段
1.表明自己的选择;
2.阐述选择的理由;
3.表达期待。
第三步　遣词造句
第一段——表明自己的选择
我强烈推荐《校园乐事》,因为它内容有趣且富有教育意义。
I firmly recommend “Fun at my school”,as it can offer engaging and educational contents.
第二段——阐述选择的理由
1.我们不仅能够缓解学业压力,还能通过记录学校里的有趣活动来提高我们的写作能力。
Not only can we ease academic stress but also we can enhance our writing proficiency by documenting fun activities at school.
2.记录那些激动人心的体育赛事,比如篮球比赛和接力赛,无疑会激发我们对体育运动的热情,从而提升我们的身体素质。
Recording those thrilling sports events,like basketball matches and relay races,will undoubtedly spark our passion for sports,thus promoting our physical fitness.
3.与《猜猜我是谁》这一栏目相比,《校园乐事》这一栏目更注重集体协作,比如小组项目,这将有效地培养(学生)更强的归属感和团队凝聚力。
Compared with “Guess who I am”,“Fun at my school” places more emphasis on collective efforts such as group projects,which will effectively foster a stronger sense of belonging and unity.
第三段——表达期待
1.我衷心希望我的建议能够被采纳,并且这个专栏能够为我们的英文报纸注入新的活力。
I sincerely hope that my suggestion will be adopted and that this column will add refreshing vitality to our English newspaper.
2.期待您最终的答复。
Looking forward to your final decision.
第四步　衔接成文
Dear Jenny,
I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper.
Without hesitation,I firmly recommend “Fun at my school”,as it can offer engaging and educational contents.
First,not only can we ease academic stress but also we can enhance our writing proficiency by documenting fun activities at school.What’s more,
recording those thrilling sports events,like basketball matches and relay races,will undoubtedly spark our passion for sports,thus promoting our physical fitness.Additionally,compared with “Guess who I am”,“Fun at my school” places more emphasis on collective efforts such as group projects,
which will effectively foster a stronger sense of belonging and unity.
I sincerely hope that my suggestion will be adopted and that this column will add refreshing vitality to our English newspaper.Looking forward to your final decision.
Yours,
Li Hua
第二讲　写作突破
写作1 邀请信
写作架构
邀请信是邀请收信人参加某项活动的书信,在写作时,语气要热情真挚,不要强人所难。具体写作结构为:
常用表达
吸睛开头
1.Knowing that you are interested in traditional Chinese culture, I’m sincerely writing to invite you to celebrate the Spring Festival with my family.
知道你对中国传统文化感兴趣,所以我诚挚地写信邀请你和我的家人一起庆祝春节。
2.It is my pleasure to invite you to our English show “Talk and Talk”,which is scheduled to be from 6:00 pm to 8:00 pm on June 10.
我很荣幸地邀请您参加我们的英语节目“Talk and Talk”,节目时间是6月
10日晚上6点到8点。
3.Hardly could I hide my excitement when learning you are fascinated by Chinese culture. On behalf of the Student Union, I feel privileged/honored to invite you to engage in our Cultural Week.
得知你对中国文化如此着迷,我难以掩饰内心的激动。我很荣幸能代表学生会邀请你参加我们的文化周活动。
4.I am honored to extend an invitation to you to attend the activity themed “Protect environment, Protect ourselves” to be held in our school next Friday afternoon.
我很荣幸邀请你参加下周五下午在我们学校举办的主题为“保护环境,保护我们自己”的活动。
精彩篇中
1.Here are some details about this activity./Some details about this activity are as follows.
这里有一些关于这个活动的细节。/这次活动的一些细节如下。
2.As scheduled, an opening ceremony will start at 8:30 am next Monday morning, lasting about thirty minutes.
按照计划,开幕式将于下周一上午8:30开始,持续约30分钟。
3.If you are interested, log onto the website of our community at that time.
如果你感兴趣,到时候登录我们社区的网站。
4.The activity is to promote traditional Chinese culture as well as improve our ability to appreciate art.
这项活动旨在弘扬中国传统文化,同时提升我们欣赏艺术的能力。
5.Last but not least, it’s a good chance for us to watch the performance of dragon and lion dancing on the street.
最后但同样重要的是,我们还有一个观看街头舞龙舞狮表演的好机会。
6.Not only can it help you have a better understanding of traditional Chinese culture, but also it can enrich your experience. This is such a golden opportunity that it can’t be missed.
它不仅能让你更加了解中国传统文化,而且也能丰富你的经历。这种绝佳的机会不容错过。
靓丽结尾
1.I would appreciate it/would be grateful if you could take my invitation into consideration at your early convenience.Looking forward to your reply.
如果你能尽早在你方便时考虑我的邀请,我将不胜感激。期待你的回信。
2.I’d be delighted if you could come and share the unforgettable moment with us.I am looking forward to your participation.
如果你能来与我们分享这难忘的时刻,我将非常高兴。期待你的参与。
3.I’m more than happy if you could spare time to take part in this activity.
Please don’t hesitate to ask me if you have any question.
如果你能抽出时间参加这项活动,我将非常开心。如果你有任何问题请毫不犹豫地问我。
4.I do hope you can take my invitation into serious consideration. Eagerly looking forward to your participation.
我真心希望你能认真考虑我的邀请。热切期待你的参加。
即学即练
(2025·河北正中实验中学高考模拟)
假定你是李华,最近你校学生会准备举办一场主题为“国学经典”的读书交流会。你得知美国交换生Bob对此很感兴趣。现在请你代表学生会给他写一封英文邮件,介绍本次活动并邀请他参加。内容要点如下:
1.时间和地点;
2.活动内容。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
参考词汇:读书交流会reading seminar
Dear Bob,
How is everything going
Yours,
Li Hua
One possible version:
Dear Bob,
How is everything going I’m writing to invite you to a reading seminar on “Chinese Classics”①organized by our school’s Student Union,②which will be held at 3:00 pm this Friday in the school library.
The event will include discussions on famous Chinese classics like The Analects of Confucius and The Art of War, as well as interactive activities such as group readings and Q&A sessions.③Since you’ve shown great interest in Chinese culture, this is a perfect opportunity to learn more and exchange ideas with others.
Looking forward to seeing you there!
Yours,
Li Hua
注释:①为过去分词短语作后置定语;
②为which引导的非限制性定语从句;
③为since引导的原因状语从句。
写作2
写作架构
申请信有很多种,比如求职申请、加入某组织或活动的申请等。由于此类题目常有较多的文字提示,写作时除应注意格式上的要求外,也应注意审题全面,不能遗漏要点。具体写作结构为:
申请信
常用表达
吸睛开头
1.Learning that you are looking for a volunteer to introduce our Chinese culture to the foreign students at the airport, I would like to apply for the volunteer job.
得知你需要一名在机场为外国学生介绍中国文化的志愿者,我想申请这个志愿工作。
2.I’m Li Hua,an exchange student in our school.More than happy to see your advertisement for volunteers, I do hope that I may have the chance to help you.I feel quite qualified for the position.
我是李华,是我们学校的一名交换生,很高兴看到招募志愿者的广告,我真心希望我能有机会帮助你们。我觉得我非常适合这个职位。
3.Having learnt from the advertisement that you are in need of several tour guides, I’m writing to apply for the position.
从广告上得知你们需要几名导游,我写信申请该职位。
4.Having learnt that you are looking for some volunteers for Chinese Painting Exhibition, I am writing to express my deep interest in the position of a volunteer.
得知你们正在招募中国画展志愿者,我写信是为了表达我对志愿者职位的浓厚兴趣。
精彩篇中
1.I do believe that I am qualified for the job.Firstly, I have an extensive knowledge of our school’s history and culture.
我相信我能胜任这份工作。首先,我对我们学校的历史和文化有广泛的了解。
2.As a graduate majoring in English, I am confident that I’m suitable/
qualified for the role of an English editor.
作为一名英语专业的毕业生,我相信我适合/能胜任英语编辑一职。
3.First of all,I have a good command of spoken English, thus making it easy for me to communicate with foreign students.What’s more, I have taken part in several activities, which equips me with rich experience in receiving foreign students.
首先,我精通英语口语,这使我很容易与外国学生交流。此外,我还参加了一些活动,这为我在接待外国学生方面积累了丰富的经验。
4.Not only am I outgoing and energetic but also I am optimistic and enthusiastic, so I firmly believe that I have a much stronger sense of responsibility about it than others.More importantly, I am patient enough to handle this job.
我不仅开朗活泼,而且乐观热情,所以我坚信我比其他人具备更强的责任感。更重要的是, 我有足够的耐心来处理这项工作。
5.I once worked as a volunteer in a local nursery school, which made me experienced in getting along with children.
我曾经在当地的一所幼儿园做过志愿者,这使我在与儿童相处方面有经验。
靓丽结尾
1.I’m more than grateful if you could take my application into consideration.
Looking forward to your early reply.
如果你能考虑我的申请,我将不胜感激。期盼你尽早回复。
2.I am sure I will do it well if I’m given the chance to be a member of your company.If you think I am the perfect person for the job, please contact me at your earliest convenience.
如果您给我一个机会让我成为公司的一员,我相信自己会做得很好。如果您认为我是这个工作的最佳人选,请尽早联系我。
3.If given the precious opportunity, I will spare no effort to present the charm of traditional Chinese culture.
如果给我这个宝贵的机会,我将不遗余力地展示中国传统文化的魅力。
(2019·新高考全国Ⅰ卷改编)
假定你是李华,暑期在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者,内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.个人优势;
3.能做的事情。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
即学即练
Dear Sir or Madam,
Yours,
Li Hua
One possible version:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Li Hua,a Chinese student ①taking a summer course in London now. ②Knowing a Chinese painting exhibition will be held at your gallery next month, I am writing to apply to become a volunteer.
I have the following advantages. First of all,I speak English fluently,
③which allows me to communicate with visitors without difficulty.
Second,as a Chinese painting lover,I know a lot about this art form.④If accepted,I can introduce Chinese painting skills to visitors,⑤helping them know more about Chinese culture.
I think I am qualified to be a volunteer. I would be grateful if you could give me a chance.
Yours,
Li Hua
注释:①为现在分词作后置定语;
②为现在分词作原因状语;
③为which引导的非限制性定语从句;
④为状语从句的省略;
⑤为现在分词作伴随状语。
写作3
写作架构
建议信是生活中常见的一种文体,是写信人向收信人对某事提出的建议或忠告。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确,具有合理性和说服力。具体写作结构为:
建议信
吸睛开头
1.I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to create a green school.
我很高兴收到你的来信,询问我关于如何创建绿色学校的建议。
2.I am sorry to learn that you are now having trouble communicating with others, and you may often feel lonely.
听到现在你在与他人交流方面有些困难,你可能经常感到孤独,我很难过。
常用表达
3.Learning that the students will be randomly grouped to practise speaking English, I’m writing to express my disagreement and offer my suggestions.
得知学生将被随机分组练习说英语,我写信表达我的反对意见并提出我的
建议。
精彩篇中
1.It would be a wise choice if you read a book or listen to music.By doing this, you will calm yourself down.
看书或听音乐将会是个明智的选择。通过这样做,你会使自己平静下来。
2.As far as I am concerned, there’s no need for you to be shy and all of us are willing to be friends with you.
依我看,你没有必要害羞,我们都愿意成为你的朋友。
3.I’d like to suggest that you should make use of time to master the present subjects.
我建议你利用时间掌握现在的科目。
4.Only in this way will you deepen your understanding of Chinese and adapt to the life here more easily.
只有用这种方式,你才能加深对汉语的理解并更容易地适应这里的生活。
5.What’s more, you may as well join in a summer camp, which not only broadens your horizons but also helps you develop the spirit of teamwork.
此外,你不妨参加夏令营,这不但会开阔你的视野而且有助于你培养团队
精神。
靓丽结尾
1.I really hope these ideas that I offer you are helpful for you.
我真心希望我的这些想法能帮得上你的忙。
2.I am certain that if you follow my advice, you’ll get along well with your classmates.
我相信,如果你听从我的建议,你会和同学们相处融洽。
3.I am more than happy to see your improvements in this regard.
我非常高兴看到你在这一方面取得进步。
4.I do hope you can take my suggestions into consideration and I am looking forward to your good news.
我希望你能考虑我的建议,我期待你的好消息。
(2023·新高考全国Ⅰ卷改编)
假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.说明问题;
2.提出建议。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
即学即练
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
One possible version:
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. ①Learning that the students will be randomly grouped to practise speaking English,I’m writing to express my disagreement and offer my suggestions.
To begin with,the students have different levels of English proficiency,
②which makes it difficult to practise together. In the second place,③it’s hard to make sure there is suitable time for both partners.
④Based on above reasons,I recommend that the students should be sorted into different groups according to their English levels and time. By this way,the students can practise with peers at a similar level, ⑤allowing for more targeted interactions in sufficient time. Additionally,⑥providing a variety of topics and activities can help meet different students’ interests and needs.
I will be thankful if you can take my advice into account seriously.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
注释:①为现在分词作原因状语和that引导的宾语从句;
②为which引导的非限制性定语从句;
③为it作形式主语;
④为过去分词短语作状语和that引导的宾语从句;
⑤为现在分词短语作结果状语;
⑥为动名词短语作主语。
写作4
写作架构
倡议书是为了开展某项工作、完成某项任务或进行某项活动而倡议大家一起做某事,或提出合理化建议时使用的一种文体。具体写作结构为:
倡议书
吸睛开头
1.I am writing to call on all students to participate in the “Read Classics,
Learn English” activity,whose theme is to appreciate the charm of English classics and promote English learning.
我写信呼吁所有学生参加“读经典,学英语”活动, 其主题是领略英语经典的魅力,促进英语学习。
常用表达
2.I am writing to call on everyone to fight against wasting food and take an active part in saving food.
我写信呼吁大家反对浪费食物,积极参与到节约食物的行动中来。
3.With the growing severity of environmental pollution, we urge all citizens to adopt a green lifestyle.
随着环境污染问题日益严峻,我们强烈要求全体市民践行绿色生活方式。
精彩篇中
1.To meet the challenges of the senior year,it’s high time that we should take action to say no to the unhealthy lifestyle.
为了迎接高三的挑战,现在是我们采取行动拒绝不健康生活方式的时候了。
2.By conserving energy and recycling, we can collectively build a more eco-friendly society.
通过节约能源和循环利用,我们可以共同建立一个更加环保的社会。
3.This habit can help us avoid producing waste,which will make our home—the Earth more beautiful.
这个习惯能帮我们避免产生废物,使我们的家园——地球更美丽。
4.To begin with,we are supposed to take as much as we eat.What’s more,
it is a good idea that we raise awareness of saving food and keep in mind that it is shameful to waste it.Last but not least,we had better pack up the left-over and take it home if we can’t eat all.
首先,我们应该吃多少拿多少。此外,提高节约食物的意识并牢记浪费食物可耻是一个不错的主意。最后但同样重要的是,如果我们吃不完,最好把剩下的食物打包带回家。
靓丽结尾
1.Such measures can definitely contribute to saving food.Let’s all take food waste seriously!
这些措施肯定有助于节约食物。让我们认真对待食物浪费问题!
2.It is everyone’s responsibility to travel in a green way.A small act makes a great difference.Let’s take action from now on!
绿色出行是每个人的责任。一个小小的举动就能带来巨大的改变。让我们从现在开始采取行动!
3.We believe that through our collective efforts, our city will become a better place。
我们相信,通过大家的共同努力,我们的城市将成为一个更好的地方。
(2025·四川遂宁中学高考模拟)
假定你是校学生会主席李华,最近,你注意到校园中存在乱扔垃圾、浪费资源等现象。请你给校报英语专栏写一封倡议书,呼吁大家共建一个环保型校园。内容包括:
1.倡议的目的;
2.采取的措施;
3.你的希望。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
即学即练
Dear fellow students,
The Students’ Union
One possible version:
Dear fellow students,
Recently it’s common to see some uncivilized practices on campus such as littering and wasting resources. I, on behalf of the Students’ Union, would like to call on everyone to contribute to an eco-friendly campus.
Firstly, we should ①make recycling as easy as possible. A simple way to do this is ②bearing garbage classification in mind and throwing different kinds of waste into different dustbins. Secondly, conserve water, electricity and paper. For example, turn off the taps and the lights when they are not in use, and reuse used paper on the back, thus ③reducing waste of resources.
Let’s make the campus a greener place!④Only through joint efforts can we achieve this goal.
The Students’ Union
注释:①为“make+宾语+宾语补足语”结构;
②为两个并列的动名词短语作表语;
③为现在分词作状语;
④为部分倒装句。
写作5
写作架构
感谢信是重要的礼仪文书,是向帮助、关心和支持过自己的集体或个人表示感谢的书信,有感谢和表扬双重意思。具体写作结构为:
感谢信
吸睛开头
1.On behalf of the Students’ Union,I’d like to take this opportunity to express my great appreciation for your timely help and assistance.
我谨代表学生会,借此机会表达对您给予我们及时帮助和支持的感谢。
2.I’d like to convey my heartfelt thanks to you in this letter for your selfless help.
我想在这封信中表达我对你无私帮助的衷心感谢。
常用表达
3.I’m sorry to hear that you are going to return to your country very soon and I’m writing this letter to express my gratitude for your help.
听说你很快就要回国,我很难过,我写这封信是为了感谢你的帮助。
精彩篇中
1.It goes without saying that I have made great progress in English with your help.
不言而喻,在您的帮助下,我在英语方面取得了很大的进步。
2.There is no doubt that it was your support and encouragement that cheered me up when I was confronted with difficulties in English learning.
毫无疑问,当我在英语学习中遇到困难时,是您的支持和鼓励让我振作起来。
3.Looking back on the past year, we’ll never forget the help you offered us.
It was under your professional guidance that we have made such rapid progress in English.
回顾过去的一年,我们永远不会忘记您给我们的帮助。正是在您的专业指导下,我们在英语方面取得了如此迅速的进步。
4.Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, which promotes me to regain confidence.
每当我遇到困难,你总是鼓励我,帮助我走出困境,这让我重拾信心。
5.What you told me about your country broadened my horizons and aroused my interest in foreign culture.
你给我讲的关于你们国家的事情开阔了我的视野,引起了我对外国文化的兴趣。
靓丽结尾
1.I will be more than pleased if I have the opportunity to repay your kindness by treating you to our local food and drinks that you are longing to try.
如果我有机会请你品尝我们当地美食和饮品来回报你的好意,我将会非常高兴。
2.I wish there was a better word than “thanks” to express my appreciation for your generous help.Best wishes for your health and every happiness.
我希望有比“谢谢”更好的词来表达我对您慷慨帮助的感激之情。祝您身体健康,万事如意。
3.No words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am./Words fail to express my thankfulness to you.
任何言语都不足以表达我的感激之情。
(2025·山西忻州高考模拟)
假定你是李华,假期你去留学生Tom的家乡游玩时受到了他的热情款待。请你给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.表示谢意;
2.回忆难忘的瞬间。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
即学即练
Dear Tom,
Thanks again and I’m looking forward to seeing you in China soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
One possible version:
Dear Tom,
I have just arrived home. Thank you very much for the hospitality I have received during my stay at your home! I’ll remember the time we spent together forever.
I’m particularly impressed by the local dishes you prepared for me.
①Their flavors are still lingering in my mouth! I’m also grateful for your showing me around the town, ②which has given me a deeper insight into the local culture and history. ③It is your warmth and thoughtfulness that have made my trip such an unforgettable experience!
Thanks again and I’m looking forward to seeing you in China soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
注释:①为含有无灵主语的句子;
②为which引导的非限制性定语从句;
③为强调句型。
写作6
写作架构
道歉信是要向对方表达自己不当行为给对方造成不利影响的歉意,或者陈述无法答应对方不违常理的所托的原因。具体写作结构为:
道歉信　
吸睛开头
1.I am writing to convey my deepest apology for my not being able to visit you at the hospital.Here are the reasons.
我写这封信是想表达我最深切的歉意,因为我没能去医院看你。原因如下。
2.I am terribly sorry to tell you that I am unable to attend your birthday party next Thursday.
非常抱歉地告诉你,我下周四不能参加你的生日派对了。
常用表达
3.I’m very sorry to say that I will not be able to attend your lecture on the cultural differences between China and America tomorrow evening.
很抱歉,我明天晚上不能参加您关于中美文化差异的讲座了。
精彩篇中
1.I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon.I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.
我刚发现那天下午我要参加一个重要的班会。我希望这个变动不会给您带来太多麻烦。
2.The reason why I can’t get away is that I have to help make preparations for the English Speaking Contest to be held this weekend.
我不能离开的原因是我要帮助准备本周末即将举行的英语演讲比赛。
3.Eager as I am to attend your lecture, it is much to my regret that I cannot make it, because I caught a high fever yesterday.
虽然我很想去参加您的讲座,但很遗憾我没能去,因为我昨天发高烧了。
4.Anyhow,I sincerely hope that we can fix another time for further discussion.Will you be available this Sunday morning
无论如何,我真诚地希望我们可以为进一步的讨论再定一个时间。请问你这个星期日上午有空吗
靓丽结尾
1.I must apologize for any inconvenience it may have caused you.Wish you a good time.
为此事可能给你带来不便,深表歉意。祝你玩得愉快!
2.I sincerely hope you can understand my situation and accept my apologies.
我真诚地希望你理解我的情况并接受我的道歉。
3.Sorry again for any inconvenience caused by my absence and all the best wishes to you.
再次为我的缺席给您带来的不便表示歉意,并致以最美好的祝愿。
(2025·江苏南京、南通高考模拟)
假定你是李华,你的外国朋友Tom希望向你了解国画的相关知识,因你临时有事,需要推迟见面时间。请给Tom写一封邮件,说明情况,内容包括:
1.表示歉意并说明原因;
2.重约见面的时间;
3.推荐其先参观国画展览。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
即学即练
Dear Tom,
Yours,
Li Hua
One possible version:
Dear Tom,
I’m really sorry ①that I can’t meet you as we planned. My grandmother got sick suddenly, and I need to look after her in the hospital, so I have to change our meeting time.
Is it okay if we meet at 3:00 pm next Saturday in our school library We can talk about traditional Chinese paintings there. Before we meet, you can visit the “Brushstrokes of China” exhibition at City Art Museum.②There are many great Chinese paintings from different times. ③It is this exhibition that I think will help you learn more about Chinese paintings.
I’m sorry for the trouble. I hope to see you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
注释:①为that引导的宾语从句和as引导的方式状语从句;
②为there be 句型;
③为强调句型。
写作7
写作架构
从推荐者的情况来分,可以分为自荐信和推荐信两种。具体写作结构为:
推荐信
吸睛开头
1.Delighted to know that you will come to my hometown,I would like to offer my recommendation.
很高兴得知你要来我的家乡,我很愿意向你提出建议。
2.I’m more than glad/pleased/delighted/cheerful to learn that you are going to Beijing,and I’d like to offer my recommendations.
得知你将要去北京我很高兴,我想给出一些推荐。
常用表达
精彩篇中
1.The reasons why I recommend him to you are as follows.
我向你推荐他的理由如下所述。
2.The Great Wall should be highly recommended and it is a must-see place for most of the foreign visitors.
长城应当被极力推荐,它是大部分外国游客的必游之地。
3.The reason why I recommend this book is that it stresses the importance of good habits.
我推荐这本书的原因是它强调好习惯的重要性。
4.Travelling is a good way to broaden your horizons, through which you can learn different cultures of the world.
旅游是开阔视野的好方式,通过旅游,你可以了解世界上不同的文化。
5.There are several following reasons why I think the Great Wall is a better choice.
我认为长城是个更好的选择有以下几个理由。
靓丽结尾
1.If there still exist further questions, please contact me without hesitation.
如果还有其他问题,请立即联系我。
2.I do hope you can take my recommendation into account/consideration and make a final decision.
我真心希望你能考虑我的建议并做出最后的决定。
3.It is a good chance for you to pay a visit to this exhibition, for it’s really worth seeing.
参观这个展览对你来说是一个很好的机会,因为真的值得一看。
(2025·广东四校联考)
假定你是李华,你的外国笔友Jim所在学校的图书馆想要收藏关于中国文化的书籍,他发来邮件请你帮忙推荐相关书籍。请你给他回一封邮件。内容包括:
1.书籍类型;
2.推荐理由。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
即学即练
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
One possible version:
Dear Jim,
You asked me to recommend some books about Chinese culture in your letter. It’s my pleasure to share my ideas with you.
To begin with,the first type I want to recommend is Chinese classic novels,①which contain rich Chinese cultural ingredients. Some examples of them are Journey to the West and Romance of the Three Kingdoms.In addition,the second type of my recommendations is the books about traditional festivals. ②Only by learning about traditions can you know the essence of a foreign history and social values. A specific book I would introduce is titled Traditional Chinese Festivals and Customs.
I hope my recommendations would be of help to you. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
注释:①为which引导的非限制性定语从句;
②为部分倒装结构。
写作8
写作架构
求助信是针对自己目前遇到的困难写信请求对方给予帮助的信件类型,因此整篇文章应用一般现在时。具体写作结构为:
求助信
吸睛开头
1.Recently, I have difficulty in getting along with my classmates, which bothers me a lot. Therefore, I have no choice but to turn to you for help.
最近,我在与同学相处方面有困难,这很困扰我。因此,我别无选择,只能向你求助。
2.Hearing that you have much experience in adapting plays, I’m writing to ask you for some help/to do me a favour/to lend me a hand.
听说您在改编戏剧方面很有经验,我写信向您求助。
常用表达
3.Would you be so kind as to give some suggestions on our upcoming art exhibition
您能就我们即将举行的艺术展给我一些建议吗
精彩篇中
1.Knowing that you have organised relevant activities,I am wondering if you could offer us some help.
得知您组织过相关活动,我想知道您是否可以给我们提供一些帮助。
2.However, there may be some challenges in achieving the goal and organising activities.
然而,在实现目标和组织活动方面可能存在一些挑战。
3.I am unable to use the proper words to express my thoughts, which makes me helpless.
我不能用合适的词汇表达我的想法,这使我很无助。
4.Besides, what I need are the skills of recitation, including pronunciation and intonation, which will perfect my performance.
此外,我需要的是背诵的技巧,包括发音和语调,这将完善我的表现。
5.If it is convenient for you, I would like to call on you at 3:00 pm this Saturday in your office.
如果您方便的话,我想在本周六下午3点到您的办公室拜访您。
靓丽结尾
1.I would appreciate it/be greatly grateful if you could give me a helping hand and spare some time to polish my application letter and resume.
如果您能帮我一个忙,抽出时间来润色我的求职信和简历,我将不胜感激。
2.I’d be more than grateful if you could lend me a helping hand.I’m looking forward to your early reply.
如果您能帮我这个忙,我将不胜感激。期待您的早日回复。
3.I would appreciate it if you could be so kind as to give me some useful/practical suggestions.
如果你能好心给我一些有用的/实用的建议,我将不胜感激。
(2025·江苏盐城高考模拟)
假定你是李华,正在为高考紧张地复习,但最近你遇到了一些问题或困难,导致学习效率比较低下。于是你给你校的外籍心理老师John写一封信寻求帮助。内容包括:
1.你的问题或困难;
2.希望获得帮助。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
即学即练
Dear John,
Yours,
Li Hua
One possible version:
Dear John,
I am Li Hua, a senior 3 student. Recently, I’ve been busy preparing for my National College Entrance Examination, but unfortunately I find it quite hard to study efficiently. So I’m writing to ask you for help.I’m encountering some problems ①which trouble me a lot.
First,②I have to spend so much time on my homework that I hardly have time to do sports. Moreover, the high expectations from the teachers and parents make me stressed out ③because I don’t want to let them down.④Faced with the above problems, I’m anxious to get your help. Could you please offer me some advice on how to solve these problems
I’m looking forward to your early reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
注释:①为which引导的定语从句;
②为so...that引导的结果状语从句;
③为because引导的原因状语从句;
④为过去分词作状语。
写作9
写作架构
告知信分为两类:一是告知某人有某事将要发生;二是回复某人关于某事的询问。具体写作结构为:
告知信
吸睛开头
1.Delighted to know that you are eager to learn Chinese, I am writing to inform you of the specific study schedule.
很高兴知道你渴望学习中文,我写信告知你具体的学习计划。
2.Learning/Knowing that you are enthusiastic about the speech contest,I am delighted to share with/tell you some information about it.
得知你对这场演讲比赛很感兴趣,我很高兴与你分享/告诉你一些有关它的
信息。
常用表达
3.I’m very glad/delighted/more than pleased to receive your email,in which you have expressed great interest in Tang poems.I’m quite willing to share with you some information about them.
我很高兴收到你的电子邮件,在电子邮件中你表示对唐诗很感兴趣。我很乐意和你分享一些有关它们的信息。
精彩篇中
1.The activity is scheduled to take place/to be held next Saturday.Three different voluntary tasks are available for you to choose from: planting trees in a park, setting up signs for roadside plants and distributing environmental brochures in nearby communities.
活动定于下周六举办。你有三种不同的志愿任务可以选择:在公园种树,为路边植物设置标志,在附近社区分发环境宣传册。
2.Here are some details about it.First of all, our headmaster will deliver a speech concerning the art of Chinese drama to us at 8:30 am on July 4th in our school gym.
细节如下:首先,我们校长将于7月4日上午8:30在我校体育馆给我们做一个关于中国戏剧艺术的演讲。
3.The course is arranged to start from this Friday, which will last one month with one lecture from eight to ten every morning.
课程安排从这周五开始,为期一个月,每天早上从八点到十点都有一节课。
4.Anyone who wishes to take part is welcome to sign up at the office before next Wednesday.
欢迎任何想参加的人在下周三之前到办公室报名。
5.After that, there will be a face-to-face talk among students,which is a good chance for us to learn more about each other.
在那之后,学生之间可以面对面交谈,这是一个能让我们更多了解彼此的好机会。
靓丽结尾
1.If you want to know anything else, please don’t hesitate to contact me.
如果你还想知道什么,请不要犹豫与我联系。
2.If there is anything I can do for you,I would be more than delighted to offer my help/come to your assistance.
如果有什么我能为你做的,我将非常乐意提供帮助/来帮助你。
(2025·长沙雅礼中学高三入学考试)
假定你是李华,你打算下周日参加学校对面的社区组织的义务劳动。请你用英语给你校交换生John写一封邮件,告知他此事,内容包括:
1.时间和地点;
2.具体安排;
3.发出邀请。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
即学即练
Dear John,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
One possible version:
Dear John,
How is everything going I am more than delighted to inform you of the upcoming community volunteer event ①that I will be participating in. Now, I am writing to tell you some relevant details about it.
The details are as follows. First of all, we are scheduled to gather at the school entrance at 7:00 am next Sunday, after which we will head to the community for our voluntary work.Secondly,participants will be divided into several groups, ②each responsible for cleaning and greening specific areas.Additionally, there will also be opportunities for rest and chat,
③allowing us to deepen our understanding of one another while working together.If you have any questions, I would be more than glad to help.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
注释:①为that引导的定语从句;
②为独立主格结构;
③为现在分词短语作状语。
写作10
写作架构
投稿是投稿人根据征稿要求进行写作,所投稿件应紧贴主题,内容应新颖、有趣、实用等。具体写作结构为:
征文投稿
吸睛开头
1.Reading is not just a pastime;it is a fundamental activity that shapes our intellectual growth.
阅读不仅仅是一种消遣;它是促进我们智力成长的一项基础活动。
2.Nowadays,with the development of science and technology,artificial intelligence has become a hot-button issue.
如今,随着科技的发展,人工智能已成为一个热门话题。
常用表达
3.It is well-known that environmental protection is of great importance.In fact,the pollution we are facing has become a serious problem.
众所周知,环境保护非常重要。事实上,我们面临的污染已成为一个严重的问题。
4.I firmly believe that education is the key to success.This is because it can equip people with knowledge and skills.
我坚信教育是成功的关键。这是因为它能为人们提供知识和技能。
精彩篇中
1.First of all,reading can broaden our horizons.Secondly,it can improve our language skills.Finally,it can also cultivate our minds.
首先,阅读可以拓宽我们的视野。其次,它可以提高我们的语言技能。最后,它还可以陶冶我们的情操。
2.For one thing,travelling can help us understand different cultures.For another,it can relieve our stress.What’s more,it can also enhance our communication skills.
一方面,旅行可以帮助我们了解不同的文化。另一方面,它可以缓解我们的压力。更重要的是,它还可以提高我们的沟通技巧。
3.On the one hand,studying abroad can provide students with a broader international perspective.On the other hand,it also brings some challenges such as cultural shock.
一方面,出国留学可以为学生提供更广阔的国际视野。另一方面,它也带来了一些挑战,如文化冲击。
4.Many famous scientists,such as Einstein and Newton,made great achievements through hard work.This shows that perseverance is the key to success.
许多著名的科学家,例如爱因斯坦和牛顿,通过努力工作取得了巨大的成就。这表明毅力是成功的关键。
5.Take the development of the Internet as an example—it has brought great convenience to our lives.We can shop,study and communicate with others online.It is obvious that science and technology has changed our lives.
以互联网的发展为例,它给我们的生活带来了极大的便利。我们可以在网上购物、学习和与他人交流。很明显,科学技术已经改变了我们的生活。
靓丽结尾
1.It was such a rewarding experience that it not only enriched my school life but also taught me the value of community engagement.I am grateful for this opportunity and look forward to more such activities in the future.
这是一次非常有益的经历,它不仅丰富了我的学校生活,也教会了我社区参与的价值。我很感激这次机会,并期待今后有更多这样的活动。
2.In conclusion,we should make good use of science and technology to improve our lives while also paying attention to its potential negative impacts.
总之,我们应该充分利用科技来改善我们的生活,同时也要注意其潜在的负面影响。
3.Based on the above analysis,I suggest that the government should take more effective measures to protect the environment.
基于以上分析,我建议政府采取更有效的措施来保护环境。
4.Looking forward to the future,I believe that with our joint efforts,the world will become a better place.
展望未来,我相信通过我们的共同努力,世界将变得更加美好。
(2025·河南郑州二模)
你校英语报正在举办以“AI in Our Study and Daily Life”为主题的征文活动,请你写一篇短文投稿,介绍AI对学习和生活的帮助,内容如下:
1.学习方面;
2.生活方面;
3.对AI的期待。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
即学即练
AI in Our Study and Daily Life
One possible version:
AI in Our Study and Daily Life
With the development of science and technology,AI has been significantly influencing our study and daily life.
In terms of study,AI is an intelligent tutor,①which can swiftly provide answers to complex academic questions,② making learning more efficient.
For language learning,it can correct our pronunciation and grammar mistakes,③ enhancing our language skills.In our daily life,AI is equally beneficial.It can provide useful tips like cooking methods,proper time management and so on.
I hope ④AI will become more user-friendly and bring more innovations to make our routines easier and better.
注释:①为which引导的非限制性定语从句;
②为现在分词短语作状语;
③为现在分词短语作状语;
④为省略了that的宾语从句。
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写作架构
发言稿/演讲稿/欢迎致辞是参加会议者为了发表自己的意见、看法等事先准备好的文稿。发言稿/演讲稿/欢迎致辞要观点鲜明、条理清楚、语言简洁明快。具体写作结构为:
发言稿/演讲稿/欢迎致辞
吸睛开头
1.It’s my great honor/I feel greatly honored to be here to share my experience of learning English on the Internet.
我很荣幸能在这里分享我在互联网上学习英语的经验。
2.On behalf of our school,I am delighted to express/extend our warm welcome to you.
我很高兴代表我们学校向你们表示热烈的欢迎。
常用表达
3.It’s my great honor to be here to deliver a speech titled “Good Habits Help Me Succeed”.I hope my speech can benefit you a lot.
我很荣幸能在这里发表题为“好习惯助我成功”的演讲。我希望我的演讲能给你们带来诸多裨益。
4.Good morning,ladies and gentlemen.It’s my privilege to have this precious opportunity to deliver a speech concerning environmental protection.
女士们,先生们,大家上午好。我很荣幸能有这个宝贵的机会就环境保护问题发表演讲。
精彩篇中
1.Aimed at promoting our friendship,various activities will be arranged for you,ranging from a party to some ball games.
为了增进我们的友谊,我们将为您安排各种活动,从聚会到一些球赛。
2.It is suggested/recommended that we should learn to look at the bright side and stay positive when facing challenges.
有人建议我们在面对挑战时要学会看到光明的一面,保持积极的态度。
3.There is no denying that exercising regularly and keeping a balanced diet are of great benefit to our health.
不可否认,定期锻炼和保持均衡饮食对我们的健康有很大的好处。
4.As we all know,punctuality is of great importance.If we are punctual,for one thing,we can win others’ trust;for another,we will leave a good impression on others.
众所周知,守时是非常重要的。如果我们守时,一方面,我们可以赢得别人的信任;另一方面,我们会给别人留下好印象。
5.Through this interaction,not only can we broaden our horizons,but we can also grasp a deeper understanding of different cultures and educational systems.
通过这种互动,我们不仅可以开阔视野,还可以加深对不同的文化和教育体系的理解。
靓丽结尾
1.Small acts can make a big difference.So,let’s do something to create a beautiful,low carbon campus.
小小的举动可以产生巨大的影响。因此,让我们做一些事情来创造一个美丽的、低碳的校园。
2.Thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving me this chance to speak here.
我从心底感谢大家给我这次机会在这里演讲。
3.Therefore,let’s take the responsibility and do what we can do to protect them/take actively part in the activity to broaden our horizons and enhance our insights into the world.Thank you for your listening.
因此,让我们承担起责任,尽我们所能保护它们/积极参与活动,以开阔视野,增强对世界的洞察力。谢谢大家的聆听。
4.I sincerely wish you a pleasant time with us.Thank you!
我真诚地希望你和我们一起度过一段愉快的时光。谢谢你!
(2025·河南周口高三月考)
假设你是校学生会主席李华,下周学校要接待来自澳大利亚的交换生,你将作为学生代表致辞欢迎,内容包括:
1.表示欢迎;
2.介绍活动安排;
3.表达祝愿。
注意: 写作词数应为80个左右。
即学即练
Dear Australian friends,
Yours,
Li Hua
One possible version:
Dear Australian friends,
On behalf of all our students,I feel greatly privileged to convey warm welcome to you.We are delighted to have you with us.
①To make your stay here memorable,various activities will be arranged to enhance our mutual understanding and experience different cultures.② As planned,we will hold a talent show ③ where some students can show their outstanding performances.Classes on traditional Chinese culture are also scheduled,such as paper-cutting,Chinese opera,calligraphy,etc.,④ followed by a gift-exchanging activity.Additionally,you’re invited to pay a visit to surrounding tourist attractions.
I sincerely hope that you can enjoy yourselves and wish you a pleasant journey.Thank you!
注释:①为动词不定式作目的状语;
②为状语从句的省略;
③为where引导的定语从句;
④为过去分词短语作状语。
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写作架构
新闻报道是记叙文的一种,其特点是以事实为依据, 对人物的经历或某项活动进行实事求是的报道。写作过程中要保持事件的真实性、准确性,语言要准确、简练、通俗易懂,不必追求过分花哨的词汇和过于复杂的句型。具体写作结构为:
新闻报道　
吸睛开头
1.Aiming to relieve students’ study pressure and enhance students’ physical and mental health,our school has launched the “Sunshine Sports” campaign over the past term.
为了缓解学生们的学习压力和促进学生们的身心健康,我们学校在上一学期开展了“阳光体育”活动。
常用表达
2.To enrich our lives and deepen our understanding of traditional Chinese culture,our school held a Chinese painting exhibition in the school library last week.
为了丰富我们的生活,加深我们对中国传统文化的理解,上周我们学校在校图书馆举办了国画展。
3.At present,our city is carrying out a campaign,the content of which is that anyone who is riding an electric bike must wear a helmet.
目前,我市正在开展一项活动,活动内容是任何骑电动自行车的人都必须戴头盔。
4.An on-site craft competition was held in our school library last Saturday,
which was aimed at developing students’ innovative spirit and labour skills.
上周六,我校图书馆举办了一场现场手工大赛,旨在培养学生们的创新精神和劳动技能。
5.On 10 May,the annual English Speech Contest was successfully held at the school auditorium,attracting over 200 students and teachers.
5 月 10 日,年度英语演讲比赛在学校礼堂成功举行,吸引了200 多名师生参与。
精彩篇中
1.Teachers and students who are interested in traditional Chinese culture joined in/participated in/took part in the activity.
对中国传统文化感兴趣的老师和学生都参加了这次活动。
2.First,we attended an English lecture offered by a British professor,who told us about the development of modern English.
首先,我们参加了一位英国教授的英语讲座,他向我们讲述了现代英语的
发展。
3.On/Upon arrival,we saw a lot of Chinese paintings and handwriting from ancient and modern times.
一到那,我们就看到许多来自古代和现代的中国书法和绘画。
4.The event commenced with an opening speech by the principal,followed by a series of exciting English talent shows.
活动以校长的开幕致辞拉开序幕,随后是一系列精彩的英语才艺表演。
5.The highlight of the activity was the group debate competition,during which participants expressed their views on hot-topic issues in fluent English.
活动的亮点是小组辩论赛,在此期间,参与者用流利的英语就热点问题发表了自己的观点。
靓丽结尾
1.The competition was a great success.Not only did it provide the students with a platform to demonstrate their talents,but it also aroused their interest in exploring their creativity.
比赛非常成功。它不仅为学生们提供了一个展示才华的平台,也激发了他们探索创造力的兴趣。
2.It was through this activity that we fully realized that the awareness of respecting the old should be raised.
正是通过这次活动,我们充分认识到应该增强尊老的意识。
3.By the end of the event,all participants had gained valuable experience and knowledge,indicating the complete success of the English Summer Camp.
活动结束时,所有参与者都收获了宝贵的经验和知识,标志着英语夏令营的圆满成功。
4.It is expected that more English-related activities will be organized in the future to meet students’ growing needs for language learning.
预计未来将组织更多与英语相关的活动,以满足学生日益增长的语言学习
需求。
假设你是李华,上周你校组织了一场有关交通安全的讲座。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:
1.参加人员;
2.讲座过程;
3.活动意义。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
即学即练
One possible version:
A Lecture on Traffic Safety
Last week,all the teachers and students in our school attended a lecture on traffic safety,① which was delivered by a local policeman.
During the lecture,the policeman first attached importance to traffic safety by giving vivid examples ②where people ignoring traffic safety suffered a lot.To make ③ what he said more practical,he then analyzed some key traffic safety rules and showed ④how to apply them to people’s daily lives.⑤Afterwards came the most lively part of the lecture—interaction.
Both the audience and the lecturer gained a lot through various questions and answers.The lecture ended in the policeman’s appealing to the audience to pay more attention to the traffic rules.
The lecture undoubtedly impressed the audience with the importance of traffic safety and motivated them to obey the corresponding rules.
注释:①为which引导的非限制性定语从句;
②为where引导的定语从句,其中ignoring traffic safety为现在分词短语作后置定语;
③为what引导的宾语从句;
④为“特殊疑问词+动词不定式”结构;
⑤为完全倒装结构。
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写作架构
通知是上级对下级、组织对成员布置工作、传达情况或告诉公众某件事情等情况时使用的一种应用文体,通常分为口头通知和书面通知两种。具体写作结构为:
通知
吸睛开头
1.An English writing competition will be held by our school next month,
aiming at inspiring students’ enthusiasm for English learning.
我校将于下个月举行一场英语写作比赛,旨在激发学生们对英语学习的热情。
2.The Summer Camp,scheduled from 15 July to 30 July,is intended to attract those who have a special interest in traditional Chinese culture.
该夏令营将于7月15日至7月30日举行,旨在吸引那些对中国传统文化有特别兴趣的人。
常用表达
3.With the intention/aim of fostering/cultivating/promoting/raising students’ awareness of the importance of labor,an activity called/named/
entitled “One Day on the Farm” is scheduled to be held next Monday.
为了培养/增强学生们对劳动的重要性的认识,一个名为“农场上的一天”的活动计划于下周一举办。
4.Attention,please! The English Speech Contest scheduled for tomorrow has been postponed to next week.
请注意!原定于明天的英语演讲比赛已推迟到下周。
精彩篇中
1.At the festival,a variety of activities will be presented,ranging from watching Chinese operas to experiencing paper-cuts.
节日期间将举办各类活动,从观看中国戏剧到体验剪纸。
2.After the movie,you are supposed to write a movie review in English,and contribute it to our club newspaper.
看完电影后,你要用英文写一篇影评,并把它投给我们俱乐部的报纸。
3.You’re required to bring notebooks and pens with you so that you can set down some important tips in time.
你们要携带笔记本和钢笔,这样你们才能及时记下一些重要的提示。
4.Don’t forget to sign up before the deadline,or you will miss the opportunity to participate.
不要忘记在截止日期之前报名,否则你将错过参与机会。
5.Those who are interested in the photography competition are welcome to submit their works before 15 June.
欢迎对该摄影比赛感兴趣者在 6 月 15 日之前提交作品。
靓丽结尾
1.Your participation will surely make a difference.
你的参与将意义非凡。
2.In order to cultivate students’ sportsmanship and improve their physical health,we strongly propose that all the students take an active part in it.
为了培养学生们的体育精神并改善他们的身体健康状况,我们强烈建议所有学生都积极参与其中。
3.We sincerely hope that all students will actively participate in the activity,
and look forward to a successful event.
我们衷心希望所有学生都积极参与本次活动,并期待活动圆满成功。
4.Let’s work together and make the charity sale a great success.
让我们共同努力,使这次义卖活动取得圆满成功。
(2025·河北保定高考模拟)
你校英语俱乐部计划下周一举办以“How to Enhance Social Competitiveness”为主题的讲座,请你写一则通知。内容包括:
1.讲座的时间、地点;
2.注意事项。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
即学即练
Notice
The English Club
One possible version:
Notice
Our school is going to organize a significant lecture ①whose topic is “How to Enhance Social Competitiveness” next Monday.The lecture will begin at 3 p.m.,②lasting about two hours in the school hall.Our guest speaker,③ a renowned expert in career development,will share insights on strategies ④ to improve our skills and help us adapt to the fast-paced world.
All students are encouraged to attend the lecture.Please arrive on time and come with prepared questions ⑤ you would like to ask.This is a great opportunity for us students to learn and grow.Don’t miss the chance!
The English Club
注释:①为whose引导的定语从句;
②为现在分词短语作状语;
③为名词短语作同位语;
④为动词不定式作目的状语;
⑤为省略了关系代词that/which的定语从句。
第三讲　高分集锦
一、高级词汇
高级词汇“三原则”:
1.求新求变
同样意义的词语,要根据语境使用最新学过的而不是小学、初中学过的词汇。如果同样的意义重复出现,要使用不同的表达方式。
(2023·全国甲卷)Confucius was a great philosopher,educator and politician who left a deep impact on Chinese culture and society.
→Confucius was a great philosopher,educator and politician who left a profound impact on Chinese culture and society.
孔子是一位伟大的哲学家、教育家和政治家,他对中国文化和社会产生了深远的影响。
2.求准求精
写作时不一定每一句都要用复杂句式,有时准确使用一个单词或短语就会让整个句子增色不少。
(2024·新高考全国Ⅰ卷)We were asked to draw or paint something that impressed us most.
→We were tasked to draw or paint something that impressed us most.
我们的任务是画一些给我们印象最深的东西。
3.短语优先
多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词,以增加文采。
(2024·新高考全国Ⅰ卷)I felt peaceful as I painted.
→I felt a deep sense of peace as I painted.
当我画画时,我感到一种深深的平静。
普通词汇→高级词汇
汉语释义 普通词汇 高级词汇
问题 problem issue/matter
重要的 important essential/vital/significant
增强 increase enhance/boost/strengthen
明显的 clear apparent/evident/obvious
困难的 difficult/hard challenging/tough
表明 show reveal/showcase/indicate
许多的 many numerous
大的 big enormous
有名的 famous/known noted/celebrated/renowned
有空的 free available
伤心的 sad blue/heartbroken/sorrowful
有吸引力的 attractive appealing/charming/fascinating/engaging
普通词汇→高级短语
汉语释义 普通词汇 高级短语
首先 first/firstly to begin/start with或above
all或in the first place
最后 finally/lastly/ eventually in conclusion/in closing/
at last/in the end
表扬 praise speak highly of
知道,了解 know be acquainted with/
be aware of
毁坏 destroy wipe out
发生 happen come about
喜欢 like be fond of/be into/
be keen on
导致 cause lead to/result in/bring
about/give rise to
不赞成,反对 disagree be opposed to/object to
因此 therefore/ thus/hence as a result/as a
consequence/
in consequence
关于 on/about in/with regard to或in
relation to或with respect to
利用 use make use of/take
advantage of
掌握 master have a good command of
记住 remember keep/bear...in mind
大多数 most a/the majority of
支持 support in favour/support of
思考 think reflect on
普通短语→高级短语
汉语释义 普通短语 高级短语
由……组成 be made up of be comprised /composed of
参加 take part in participate in
许多 a great many a great variety of/
great varieties of
赞同 agree with approve of
努力做 try to do make an effort/
efforts to do
集中注意力于 focus/concentrate on centre on
遇到 meet with come across/run into
渴望 long for be eager for/
be dying for/
be desperate for
考虑 think over take...into
consideration/account
弥补 make up for compensate for
在某人看来 in one’s opinion as far as sb be concerned/
from one’s point of view
不得不做 have to do can’t help but do/ have
no alternative but to do
二、高级句式
1.倒装句
(2023·新高考全国Ⅰ卷)This way,everyone can feel more comfortable practising and improving their spoken English together.
→Only in this way can everyone feel more comfortable practising and improving their spoken English together.
只有这样,每个人才能在一起练习和提高英语口语时感到更加自在。
2.省略句
(2023·新高考全国Ⅰ卷)Besides,students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if they are paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.
→Besides,students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.
此外,如果与一个他们相处不好或沟通有困难的人配对,学生可能会感到不舒服或缺乏动力。
3.强调句
(2024·全国甲卷)Secondly,the introduction of high-speed trains has dramatically shortened travel times.
→Secondly,it is the introduction of high-speed trains that has dramatically shortened travel times.
其次,高速列车的引入大大缩短了旅行时间。
4.非谓语动词
(2024·新高考全国Ⅰ卷)I was inspired by the fantastic scenery and decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park’s pond which was surrounded by blooming flowers.
→Inspired by the fantastic scenery,I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park’s pond,surrounded by blooming flowers.
受到美景的启发,我决定创作一幅水彩画,画的是公园池塘上的小桥,周围是盛开的鲜花。
5.with复合结构
Music is the best medication for my soul,so I will continue learning and playing the piano as my hobby.
→With music the best medication for my soul,I will continue learning and playing the piano as my hobby.
音乐是我心灵的良药,所以我会继续学习,并把弹钢琴作为我的爱好。
6.定语从句
(2024·全国甲卷)These developments illustrate China’s journey towards a modern and efficient transportation network and it balances convenience with environmental responsibility.
→These developments illustrate China’s journey towards a modern and efficient transportation network that/which balances convenience with environmental responsibility.
这些发展成就彰显了中国在构建现代化高效交通网络进程中,对便利性与环境责任的兼顾。
7.名词性从句
(2023·新高考全国Ⅰ卷)My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students select their own partners.
→My suggestion is that we are supposed to group students based on their language abilities or to let students select their own partners.
我的建议是,我们应该根据学生的语言能力来分组,或者让学生自己选择合作伙伴。
8.状语从句
(2025·浙江1月卷)I appreciate the enthusiasm for sharing creative content but we must also consider the potential drawbacks.
→While I appreciate the enthusiasm for sharing creative content,we must also consider the potential drawbacks.
虽然我欣赏分享创意内容的热情,但我们也必须考虑到潜在的缺点。
9.被动语态
(2024·浙江1月卷)I recommend this exercise for several reasons.
→This exercise is recommended for several reasons.
我推荐这项运动有几个原因。
10.固定句式
(2023·全国乙卷)I watched a live musical performance for the first time.
→That /It was the first time that I watched a live musical performance.
那是我第一次观看现场音乐表演。
三、过渡衔接
衔接与过渡性词语的使用是语言连贯性得以实现的最常见手段。在句与句之间、段与段之间恰当地使用一些承上启下的过渡性词语是非常必要的。
1.起始关系
常见的表示起始关系的过渡性词语有above all,first of all,first and foremost,to begin/start with,according to,as you know/as is known等。
①Above all,you need to study hard to achieve your goal.
首先,你需要努力学习来实现你的目标。
②As is known to all,both teachers and students are suffering from physical and mental health problems by sitting long before the desks.
众所周知,老师和学生都因长时间坐在课桌前而遭受身心健康问题的困扰。
2.时间顺序
常见的表示时间关系的过渡性词语有first/firstly,then/next,later,finally/
ultimately,at last,in the end,after that,afterwards,since then,meanwhile 等。
①(2024·全国甲卷)Firstly,shared bicycles have emerged as a symbol of urban mobility,offering an affordable and green alternative for short trips.
首先,共享单车已经成为城市出行方式的象征,为短途出行提供了一种经济实惠、绿色环保的选择。
②Meanwhile,I’m also interested to learn some folk dances from you in your lecture,which will help me improve my dancing.
同时,我也想在您的课上学习一些民间舞蹈,这将有助于我提高我的舞蹈水平。
3.递进关系
常见的表示递进关系的过渡性词语有and,also,besides,in addition,what’s more,moreover,worse still,even worse,let alone,not only...but also...等。
①(2022·全国甲卷)In addition,the oceans produce about half of the world’s oxygen.
此外,地球上大约一半的氧气是由海洋产生的。
②(2024·新高考全国Ⅰ卷)Being surrounded by nature not only sparked my creativity but also offered a much-needed break from the usual hustle and bustle of school life.
置身于大自然不仅激发了我的创造力,也让我从惯常的、繁忙的学校生活中得到了急需的休息。
4.转折关系
常见的表示转折关系的过渡性词语有but,yet,however,while,otherwise,on the contrary,contrary to等。
①The movie was long,but it was worth watching.
这部电影很长,但值得一看。
②Contrary to what I had originally thought,the trip turned out to be fun.
与我最初的想法相反,这次旅行结果很有趣。
5.让步关系
常见的表示让步关系的过渡性词语有though,although,even though,
whether...or not,while,as 等。
①She will never give up her dream even though she has faced many difficulties.
即使她面临了许多困难,她也永远不会放弃她的梦想。
②Tired as we were,we all thought it was not only interesting but also instructive.
虽然我们很累,但我们都认为它不仅有趣而且有益。
6.因果关系
常见的表示因果关系的过渡性词语有because,as,since,for,because of,
thanks to,due to,so,therefore,as a result/consequence (of) 等。
①The match was put off because of the bad weather.
由于天气不好,比赛被推迟了。
②As a consequence,I am afraid that I can’t go to your birthday party.
因此,我恐怕不能参加你的生日聚会了。
7.条件关系
常见的表示条件关系的过渡性词语有if,unless,in case (of),as/so long as,on condition that等。
①(2022·全国甲卷)As long as we try our best,we will make a difference to the marine environment.
只要我们尽全力,我们就会对海洋环境产生一定的影响。
②If interested,you are supposed to submit your application form to the Students’ Union Office before this Sunday.
如果有兴趣,请你在本周日之前将你的申请表交至学生会办公室。
8.列举事实
常见的表示列举事实的过渡性词语有such as,for example,for instance,that is to say,as follows,in other words,in fact 等。
①The reasons I recommend Beijing as a must to visit to you are as follows.
我推荐北京作为你的必去之地的理由如下。
②He is not good at math.In other words,he has difficulty in learning math.
他不擅长数学。换句话说,他在学习数学方面有困难。
9.表达观点
常见的表达观点的过渡性词语有in my opinion/view,as far as I am concerned,
as for me,personally,frankly speaking,I believe,I guess,I suppose 等。
①(2023·新高考全国Ⅰ卷)In my opinion,it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for oral English practice.
在我看来,将英语口语培训班的学生随机配对不是一个好主意。
②As far as I’m concerned,it is your selfless help that helped me improve my English.
在我看来,是你无私的帮助帮助我提高了英语水平。
10.概括总结
常见的表示概括总结的过渡性词语有in a word,in short,in brief,in conclusion,to conclude,to sum up,all in all,on the whole,in general,
generally speaking等。
①(2024·新高考全国Ⅰ卷)In a word,it was not just an art class;it was a moment of connection with nature that I truly cherished.
总之,这不仅仅是一堂美术课;这是我与大自然亲密接触的时刻,我真的很珍惜。
②(2024·全国甲卷)In short,China’s transport system is embracing innovation and eco-friendliness.
简而言之,中国的交通系统正在拥抱创新和环保。
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