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专题六　读后续写
【命题概述】
1. 读后续写所选材料以记叙文为主,语篇涵盖了“人与自我”、“人与社会”、“人与自然”,内容具有一定的故事性、趣味性和延展性。
2.文章连贯性较强,语言难度适中,便于学生感知和品读。
3.给出续写段落首句,对续写故事的发展有提示、衔接、引导和一定程度的限制作用,防止想象漫无边际。
4.续写部分多是故事的发展、高潮或结局,情节不唯一,学生可根据自己对文本的理解并结合生活常识合理地作出推测,并适当增加细节,使续写部分具有完整性和可读性。
【考情分析】
2023—2025年高考读后续写考情分析表 年份 卷别 体裁 主题 文章话题
2025 新高考全国Ⅰ卷 记叙文 人与自我 家庭聚会中与兄弟产生嫌隙,最后和解
新高考全国Ⅱ卷 记叙文 人与自我 名字背后的文化
浙江1月卷 记叙文 人与社会 少年Kevin抓“贼”
2024 新高考全国 Ⅰ、Ⅱ卷 记叙文 人与社会 好心司机帮助,作者如期赴约还钱
浙江1月卷 记叙文 人与自我 Eva在高中第一周克服种种挑战
2023 新高考全国 Ⅰ、Ⅱ卷 记叙文 人与自我 老师鼓励作者参加写作比赛
浙江1月卷 记叙文 人与自然 作者与蜂鸟的不解之缘
第一讲　评分标准解读
一、评分原则
1.本题总分为25分,按七个档次进行评分。
2.评分时,应主要从内容、词汇语法和篇章结构三个方面考虑,具体为:
(1)续写内容的质量、完整性以及与原文情境的融洽度;
(2)所使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性;
(3)上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。
3.评分时,应先根据作答的整体情况确定其所属的档次,然后以该档次的要求来综合衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分。
4.评分时还应注意:
(1)词数少于120的,酌情扣分;
(2)书写较差以致影响交际的,酌情扣分;
(3)单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面,评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑,英、美拼写及词汇语法均可接受。
二、评分标准
档次 描述
第七档 (22～25分) (1)创造了新颖、丰富、合理的内容,富有逻辑性,续写完整,与原文情境融洽度高;
(2)使用了多样且恰当的词汇和语法结构,表达流畅,语言错误很少,且完全不影响理解;
(3)自然有效地使用了段落间、语句间衔接手段,全文结构清晰,前后呼应,意义连贯。
第六档 (18～21分) (1)创造了比较丰富、合理的内容,比较有逻辑性,续写比较完整,与原文情境融洽度较高;
(2)使用了比较多样且恰当的词汇和语法结构,表达比较流畅,有个别错误,但不影响理解;
(3)比较有效地使用了语句间衔接手段,全文结构比较清晰,意义比较连贯。
第五档 (15～17分) (1)创造了基本合理的内容,有一定的逻辑性,续写基本完整,与原文情境相关;
(2)使用了比较恰当的词汇和语法结构,表达方式不够多样化,表达有些许错误,但基本不影响理解;
(3)使用了语句间衔接手段,全文结构比较清晰,意义比较连贯。
第四档 (11～14分) (1)创造了基本完整的故事内容,但部分情节不够合理或逻辑性不强,与原文情境基本相关;
(2)使用了简单的词汇和语法结构,有部分语言错误和不恰当之处,个别部分影响理解;
(3)尚有语句衔接的意识,全文结构基本清晰,意义基本连贯。
第三档 (6～10分) (1)内容和逻辑上有一些重大问题,续写不够完整,与原文有一定程度的脱节;
(2)所用的词汇有限,语法结构单调,错误较多且比较低级,影响理解;
(3)未能有效地使用语句间衔接手段,全文结构不够清晰,意义欠连贯。
第二档 (1～5分) (1)内容和逻辑上有较多重大问题,或有部分内容抄自原文,续写不完整,与原文情境基本脱节;
(2)所使用的词汇非常有限,语法结构单调,错误极多,严重影响理解;
(3)几乎没有使用语句间衔接手段,全文结构不清晰,意义不连贯。
第一档 (0分) 未作答;所写内容太少或无法看清以致无法评判;所写内容全部抄自原文或与题目要求完全不相关。
三、失分原因
1.不符合基本要求:词数少于120;两段的词数比例失调;随意分段;词汇语法错误;抄袭原文等。
2.内容不合逻辑:缺乏合理想象;续写部分与给定材料之间的逻辑、续写两段内容之间的逻辑以及续写部分与所给开头语之间的逻辑不相符。
3.语言不够丰富恰当:所使用的语法结构与词汇的丰富性、准确性不够;刻意使用生僻词汇和复杂句式,不考虑与原文语言风格的一致性。
4.脑洞开太大:想象不合理;续写部分立意不高,价值观有争议。
第二讲　宏观指导　
读后续写写作流程
读后续写写作四步法
真题典例
(2025·新高考全国Ⅰ卷,读后续写)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My wife and I wanted to share our new home with family and friends by hosting a small gathering in the early summer.She had prepared lots of snacks,while my job was to have the backyard in order.
There was plenty of space for the kids to run and play.There was just one thing I hadn’t counted on: My brother chose to bring his dog Toby,a 50-pound ball of fire.Though friendly,he could easily knock over my niece’s small boys and my six-month-old granddaughter.So,when my brother showed up,I asked him to watch Toby and keep him outside.
My plan was working out just fine.Toby was using up his energy by running back and forth in the backyard and giving the kids plenty of room.Unexpectedly,after supper,the weather changed.It started to rain and everyone went indoors.
It was an awkward moment.I didn’t want Toby to be running around in the house,and my brother wasn’t happy with driving home with a wet dog.Eventually,my brother decided to leave rather than force the issue.
A few days passed,and I hadn’t heard anything from my brother.I texted him and expressed wishes for him to come out again.His reply came as a surprise—a shock,actually: “Not a chance.” Clearly,he was unhappy over the way we had parted.After all,I had left him little choice.Well,he’ll get over it,I reasoned.
Two months passed.My wife suggested I get in touch with my brother,
but I resisted,thinking he should call first.However,my conscience (良心) kept bothering me.I tried to put myself in my brother’s shoes.He was facing health issues and his wife of thirty-five years had passed away a few months earlier.Toby was his constant companion,the one who kept him going.
注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
Paragraph 1:
I realised it was me who was at fault.
Paragraph 2:
　　 With the biscuits my wife had made,I arrived at my brother’s door.
构思过程
情节线 审要素 When In the early summer
Where At my new home
Who I,my wife,my brother and his dog Toby
What My wife and I wanted to share our new home with our family and friends.
Why I didn’t want Toby to be running around in the house and eventually my brother left with his dog unhappily.
定主题 Theme Affection with family
理双线 情节发展 My wife and I wanted to share our new home with family and friends→My brother came with his dog Toby.→I asked him to watch Toby and keep him outside.→It started to rain and everyone went indoors.→I didn’t want Toby to be running around in the house.→My brother left with his dog unhappily.→I texted him and expressed wishes for him to come out again but he refused.→I tried to put myself in my brother’s shoes.
情感走向 excited→worried→unhappy→shocked→
bothered
思情节 Para.1 I realised it was me who was at fault.
Q1:What fault did I realise
Q2:What did my wife say to me
Q3:Did I decide to see my brother
Para.2 With the biscuits my wife had made,I arrived at my brother’s door.
Q1:How did I feel
Q2:What did my brother do when seeing me
Q3:Did my brother and I make up at last
One possible version:
I realised it was me who was at fault.①Had I allowed my brother to bring Toby inside during the party,we could have kept the dog on a lead,and clean-up would have been easy if he had made a mess.“You need to make this right,” my wife said.I swallowed my pride.Knowing my brother’s daily routine,I thought I would find him home around lunchtime.It had been over two months since the gathering,②with still no word from him.Naturally,I was tempted to let it slide,but in the end I knew it was up to me.
With the biscuits my wife had made,I arrived at my brother’s door.As I stood there,I felt a bit nervous.When he opened the door,he stared at me for a moment.Toby came up to me,③tail wagging.That felt like a good sign.It motioned ④that I could step inside.I immediately apologised for my behaviour at the party.A faint smile crossed his lips as he took the biscuits from me.We had lunch together happily.Several months later,at another family gathering,my brother brought Toby again.Thankfully,the dog caused no issues and my brother had a great time.In that instant,I came to understand ⑤that kinship isn’t about right or wrong,but about embracing each other with love and tolerance.
注释:①运用了if引导的虚拟条件句的省略倒装形式;
②运用了with复合结构;
③运用了独立主格结构;
④运用了that引导的宾语从句;
⑤运用了that引导的宾语从句,其中含有“not...but...”结构。
第三讲　微观打磨　
读后续写增分策略
策略一　高分句型
(一)无灵主语
1.(2025·浙江1月卷)A complex wave of guilt washed over Kevin,wondering if his judgment had been too hasty.
一种复杂的内疚感涌上凯文的心头,他怀疑自己的判断是否过于草率了。
2.(2025·浙江1月卷)This unique experience taught Kevin how to properly deal with moral dilemmas.
这段独特的经历教会了凯文如何正确地应对道德困境。
3.(2025·山东潍坊一模)Its eyes locked onto mine—wide and desperate,and its nose twitched in panic,as if begging for help.
它睁大绝望的双眼紧盯着我,它的鼻子惊恐地抽搐着,仿佛在乞求帮助。
4.(2024·新高考全国Ⅰ卷)A feeling of gratitude washed over me as I heard his words.
当我听到他的话时,一种感激之情涌上我的心头。
(二)虚拟语气
1.(2025·山东青岛一模)Hayden knew this was a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity.
If he let Johnny down,Johnny would be heartbroken.
海登知道这是一个千载难逢的机会。如果他让约翰尼失望,约翰尼会心碎的。
2.The sky is full of fireflies,as if tiny stars were shining brightly.
天空中满是萤火虫,仿佛小星星在明亮地闪耀着。
3.I was rooted to the spot with fright,wishing that I had refused my mother’s advice yesterday.
我吓得呆立在原地,真希望自己昨天拒绝了妈妈的建议。
4.If only I had been the 3rd runner who had got to the finish line.
要是我是第三位到达终点线的选手该多好啊!
(三)独立主格结构
1.(2025·山东省实验中学高考模拟)He had watched her climb the tree every year,her face peaceful,as if she were one with the ancient tree and the land beneath it.
他每年都看着她爬上那棵树,她的神情平静,仿佛她与那棵古树和树下的土地融为一体了。
2.(2025·山东济宁一模)Jacob and Rex exchanged glances,their faces lighting up with joy and relief as the seagull soared freely and gracefully in the chilly wind.
雅各布和雷克斯交换了一下眼神,当海鸥在寒风中自由而优雅地翱翔时,他们的脸上洋溢着喜悦和宽慰的神情。
3.(2025·山东日照一模)The team members gathered around me,their faces filled with worry.
队员们围在我身边,他们的脸上满是担忧。
4.(2025·福建高考模拟)Tom sat quietly,his head down,still saddened by the loss of the game.
汤姆静静地坐着,低着头,仍然为输了比赛而伤心。
(四)with 复合结构
1.(2025·浙江1月卷)With his heart in his mouth,Kevin grabbed Mrs Hill’s home phone and called the police.
凯文的心提到了嗓子眼,他抓起希尔太太家的座机,拨打了报警电话。
2.(2025·浙江1月卷)With the old watch in his hand,Kevin was confused by the man’s anxious voice,helplessly looking at Mr Green.
凯文手里拿着那块旧表,被那人焦虑的声音搞糊涂了,无助地看着格林先生。
3.(2025·河北石家庄高考模拟)Speechless and happy,she held her son tightly in her arms,with tears welling up in her eyes.
她高兴得说不出话来,把儿子紧紧地搂在怀里,眼睛里噙满了泪水。
4.(2025·江苏苏锡常镇一模)With a heart full of anticipation,I followed her to the garden.
怀着满心期待,我跟着她来到了花园。
(五)巧用倒装句式
1.(2025·山东潍坊一模)In that split second,I realized: had I not stopped for the rabbit,my car would have been on those hidden tracks.
在那一瞬间,我意识到:如果我没有为了那只兔子停车,我的车就会开到那些隐藏的轨道
上了。
2.(2025·河北石家庄高考模拟)Exhausted and tired as he felt,he still insisted on carrying out the plan.
尽管他感到疲惫不堪,但他仍然坚持执行那个计划。
3.(2025·广东深圳高考模拟)But never once did he shout at me,nor did he let me fall.
但他从来没有对我大喊大叫,也没有让我摔倒。
(六)巧用强调句式
1.(2025·八省联考)It was through this brave adventure that I got acquainted with these enthusiastic animal rescuers,who were tough outside but tender inside.
正是通过这次勇敢的冒险,我才了解了这些热情的动物救援人员,他们外表严厉但是内心温柔。
2.(2025·河北石家庄高考模拟)It was the brooch in the shop window that reminded him that what he did was worthwhile.
正是商店橱窗里的那枚胸针提醒了他,他所做的一切都是值得的。
3.(2025·福建泉州高考模拟)Tania had also done well,but finally it was my attention to details and the harmony of flavours that won the day.
塔妮娅也做得不错,但最终还是我对细节的关注以及对风味的协调搭配赢得了胜利。
4.(2024·浙江1月卷)It was not until then that I really understood “don’t judge a book by its cover”.
直到那时,我才真正理解了“不要以貌取人”。
(七)巧用形容词作状语
1.(2025·八省联考)Surprised and frightened,I noticed that the bikers were all in an orderly manner.
我既惊讶又害怕,发现那些骑自行车的人全都秩序井然。
2.(2025·河北石家庄高考模拟)Cold and hungry,Reuben wandered on the street,searching for the nail bags carefully.
鲁宾又冷又饿,在街上徘徊,小心翼翼地寻找那些钉子袋。
3.(2025·山东德州一模)Discouraged,I told him everything that had happened.
我很气馁,把发生的一切告诉了他。
(八)巧用非谓语动词
1.(2025·八省联考)Seeing their hard work and dedication,I was deeply touched but felt a bit ashamed of my earlier fear.
看到他们的辛勤工作和奉献精神,我深受感动,但也为我之前的恐惧感到有点惭愧。
2.(2025·八省联考)Touched by their passion and kindness,I approached them and expressed my admiration and respect.
被他们的热情和善良所感动,我走近他们,表达了我的钦佩和尊重。
3.(2025 ·江苏南通一模)Overcoming one challenge after another,I gradually built up confidence,which shaped my positive attitude to life.
我克服了一个又一个挑战,逐渐树立起了信心,而这塑造了我对生活的积极
态度。
4.(2025·浙江宁波高考模拟)Taking a deep breath,I explained my idea to organize a movable library program,bringing books and stories to those who had no access.
我深吸了一口气,解释了我的想法,即组织一个可移动的图书馆项目,把书和故事带给那些无法接触到它们的人。
(九)巧用动作链“三连动”
1.(2025·八省联考)During the break,one of them even smiled at me,
approached me and handed me a booklet about their rescue work.
中间休息时,其中一人甚至对我微笑,走近我并递给我一本关于他们救援工作的小册子。
2.(2025·山东聊城一模)She jumped to her feet,rushed over and threw herself into her mom’s arms,with tears streaming down her cheeks.
她突然站起身来,飞奔过去,扑进她妈妈的怀里,泪水顺着她的脸颊流淌下来。
3.(2024·新高考全国Ⅰ卷)Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus,turned around,and looked at me with a big smile on his face.“We made it,” he said.
冈特把出租车停在那辆公共汽车后面,转过身来,满脸笑容地看着我。“我们成功了,”他说。
(十)巧用on/upon doing句式
1.(2025·江苏淮安高考模拟)The woman rushed forward upon seeing the dog,and Shadow—whose real name was Lucky—immediately bounded towards her with excited barks.
女人一看到这只狗就冲上前,“影子”——它的真名是“幸运”——立刻兴奋地叫着,向她蹦蹦跳跳地跑了过来。
2.(2025·河北沧州高考模拟)On hearing this,he said,“You are already the champion of this race in terms of sportsmanship,even if you wouldn’t be the first to cross the finish line.”
一听到这话,他说:“就体育精神而言,你已经是这场比赛的冠军了,即使你不是第一个冲过终点线的人。”
(十一)巧用“It occurred to/dawned on/hit/struck sb that...”句式
1.(2025·安徽“江南十校”一模)It occurred to me that the simple act of exercising could transform all my uneasiness into lessons for growth and self-improvement.
我突然想到,锻炼这一简单的行为能将我所有的不安转化成促进自身成长和自我提升的经验教训。
2.(2025· 浙江1月卷)It dawned on Kevin that life was not just about excitement; it also involved courage,responsibility and understanding.
凯文开始明白,生活不仅仅是激动人心的,它还包含勇气、责任和理解。
(十二)巧用“动作+语言”描写
1.(2025·山东济宁一模) “Come on,girl! Go and get your freedom!” Jacob urged,ignoring Rex’s irony,eyes sparkling with hope.
“加油,姑娘!去争取你的自由吧!”雅各布催促着,不理会雷克斯的讽刺,眼睛里闪烁着希望的光芒。
2.(2025·山东聊城一模)“I’m terribly sorry,Mom.I shouldn’t have said those mean words.”Lucy sobbed.
“妈妈,我非常抱歉。我不应该说那些刻薄的话。”露西抽泣着说道。
3.(2025·山东德州一模)My husband George held my hands and said,“You have done such a remarkable job with this book.It’s a story that deserves to be told.Don’t let the fear of rejection stop you.”
我的丈夫乔治握住我的手说:“你把这本书完成得如此出色。这是一个值得被讲述的故事。别让被拒绝的恐惧阻碍了你。”
策略二　修辞
(一)比喻
1.(2025·安徽一模)This card made us feel very warm,like it was the best proof of our kindness on the journey.
这张卡片让我们感到很温暖,就好像它是我们在旅途中善良之举的最佳证明。
2.(2025·河北沧州高考模拟)Her legs were trembling,and her arms felt like they were on fire.
她的双腿在颤抖,双臂感觉像着了火一样。
3.(2025·福建高考模拟) I nodded,“Exactly! It’s like our basketball game.
The process of striving,the teamwork and the effort you put in are what truly matter,not just the final score.”
我点点头,说道:“没错!它就像我们的篮球比赛。奋斗的过程、团队合作以及你付出的努力才是真正重要的,而不仅仅是最终的分数。”
(二)拟人
1.(2025·山东省实验中学高考模拟)In a small village at the edge of an ancient forest,where the trees whispered secrets older than time itself,stood the heartwood tree,whose vast branches stretched toward the sky.
在古老森林边缘的一个小村庄里,树木低声诉说着比时间本身更古老的秘密,在那里矗立着一棵心材树,它那巨大的树枝伸向了天空。
2.The raindrops tiptoed to dance a waltz on the glass window.When they slid down,they didn’t forget to draw a wobbly smiling face on the glass with their transparent fingertips,as if playing hide-and-seek with the people inside the room.
雨滴踮着脚尖在玻璃窗上跳起了圆舞曲。当它们滑落时,还不忘用透明的指尖在玻璃上画出一张歪歪扭扭的笑脸,就像是在跟屋里的人玩捉迷藏。
3.The breeze gently kissed her cheeks.
微风轻柔地亲吻着她的脸颊。
(三)夸张
1.(2025·山东济宁一模)The world seemed to fall silent,and so did Rex.
整个世界似乎陷入了寂静,雷克斯也一样。
2.(2025·山东聊城一模)Lucy was so terrified that her heart seemed to freeze,and every nerve in her body shuddered with panic as the figure closed in.
露西如此害怕,以至于她的心都仿佛冻结了,随着那个身影逼近,她身体里的每一根神经都因惊恐而颤抖起来。
3.(2024·新高考全国Ⅰ卷)After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century,Gunter put his phone down and started the car.
在持续了似乎一个世纪的激烈讨论后,冈特放下手机,启动了汽车。
策略三　主题升华
(一)助人与善举主题
1.(2025·安徽一模)This unforgettable experience taught me a valuable lesson that a small act of kindness can make a big difference.
这段难忘的经历教给了我宝贵的一课:一个小小的善举也有重大的影响。
2.Only then did I realize that it was love and kindness that made our world so warm and beautiful.
直到那时我才意识到,正是爱和善良让我们的世界如此温暖和美丽。
3.Never underestimate the power of action.Share your love from your heart and fill your life with acts of kindness.
永远不要低估行动的力量。分享你发自内心的爱,让你的生活充满善意
之举。
(二)逆境、改变、希望主题
1.(2025·山东泰安一模)It was a reminder that love and kindness can even overcome the greatest obstacles,and that in the face of adversity,unity and support are essential.
这提醒人们,爱和善良甚至能够克服最大的障碍。逆境面前,团结和支持是至关重要的。
2.There’s always a way out as long as we never give up our hope.
只要我们永不放弃希望,就总会有出路。
3.After all that happened,it eventually dawned on me that I had more toughness and courage than I ever imagined.The self-awareness and long-lasting memories will give me enormous power as I carry on my life journey.
在这一切发生后,我终于明白,我比自己想象的更有韧性和勇气。当我继续我的人生旅程时,这种自我意识和持久的记忆将给予我巨大的力量。
(三)积极态度主题
1.(2025·江苏苏锡常镇一模)From then on,I faced my study challenges with more confidence,knowing that with perseverance,my efforts would surely lead to beautiful “blooms” in my future.
从那时起,我有了更多的信心来面对学习上的挑战,我知道只要坚持不懈,我的努力一定会在我的未来开出美丽的“花朵”。
2.It struck me that I should have a positive attitude when facing difficulties.
From that day on,I became braver and more optimistic.
我猛地意识到,当面对困难时,我应该有一个积极的态度。从那天起,我变得更加勇敢和乐观。
3.I realized that sometimes,the most unexpected events can lead to the most beautiful outcomes,and that life is full of surprises and opportunities for growth.
我意识到,有时候,最意想不到的事情可以带来最美好的结果,生活充满了惊喜和成长的机会。
(四)梦想主题
1.(2025·山东青岛一模)The road to dream is paved with perseverance and determination, only those who never give up can touch the stars.
通往梦想的道路是用毅力和决心铺就的,只有那些永不放弃的人才能触摸到星辰。
2.The world always makes way for the dreamer.
这个世界总是会给梦想家让路。
3.Pursuing one’s dreams requires courage,for it is in the face of adversity that one’s true character is revealed.
追求梦想需要勇气,因为正是在面对逆境时,一个人的真正品格才会显露
出来。
(五)兴趣爱好主题
1.A variety of interests and hobbies will broaden our horizons,enrich our life and make us relaxed.
各种各样的兴趣和爱好会开阔我们的眼界,充实我们的生活,并使我们感到放松。
2.A proper hobby does not occupy students too much time.As the old saying goes,“All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.”
一个合适的爱好并不会占用学生太多的时间。正如那句古老的谚语所说:
“只学习,不玩耍,聪明的孩子也变傻。”
(六)个人成长主题
1.(2025·江苏南通一模)Growth is a continuous journey of self-discovery,
where we learn to embrace our strengths and overcome our weaknesses.
成长是一段不断自我发现的旅程,在这段旅程中,我们学会拥抱自己的优点并克服自身的缺点。
2.Sometimes the best rewards aren’t the ones you can hold in your hands,
but the ones that warm your heart and strengthen your spirit.
有时候,最好的回报不是那些你能握在手里的东西,而是那些温暖你的心灵、振奋你的精神的东西。
3.The most valuable lessons in life are often learned through failure,for it teaches us the power of perseverance.
生活中最宝贵的经验经常是通过失败获得的,因为它教会我们坚持的力量。
(七)亲情友情主题
1.(2025·安徽师大附中高考模拟)This accident was a reminder that even in the midst of chaos and pain,family and love can also bring light and strength.
这次事故提醒我们,即使在混乱和痛苦中,家人和爱也能带来光明和力量。
2.(2025·河北邢台高考模拟)The story of the light was more than a memory.
It symbolized our family’s everlasting bond,which was growing stronger like the tree that had weathered countless seasons.
光的故事不仅仅是一种记忆。它象征着我们家庭永恒的纽带,就像那棵经历了无数个季节的树一样,越来越坚固。
3.(2025·河北石家庄高考模拟)Trust is the foundational principle that holds friendship.We need to be open and trust our friends.
信任是维系友谊的基本原则。我们需要坦诚并信任我们的朋友。
(八)遇险脱难主题
1.(2025·山西一模)This heroic act not only saved two precious lives but also demonstrated the power of courage and selflessness in the face of danger.
这一英勇的行为不仅挽救了两条宝贵的生命,而且在危险面前展示了勇气和无私的力量。
2.What a narrow escape! It turned out that there is always a way out of any difficult situations as long as we stay calm.
真是九死一生啊!事实证明,只要我们保持冷静,任何困境总会有出路的。
3.This adventure taught them the importance of cherishing the present moment and not taking life for granted,as it can change in an instant.
这次冒险教会了他们珍惜当下的重要性,不要把生活视为理所当然,因为生活可能会在瞬间发生改变。
(九)谚语主题
1.No pains,no gains.不劳无获。
2.A friend in need is a friend indeed.患难见真情。3.Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.有志者,事竟成。
4.A good beginning is half done.良好的开端是成功的一半。
5.Sunshine always comes after the storm.阳光总在风雨后。
6.Rome was not built in a day.罗马不是一天建成的。
7.Failure is the mother of success.失败是成功之母。
8.Opportunity favors the prepared mind.机会总是青睐有准备的人。
9.Roses given,fragrance in hand.赠人玫瑰,手有余香。
10.Many hands make light work.众人拾柴火焰高。
策略四　专属语料库
(一)心理描写
1.开心激动
①one’s eyes glittering/sparkling/shining with excitement某人的眼里闪烁着激动的光芒
②brighten one’s heart 使某人心情愉快
③jump/spring to one’s feet with great delight开心地跳了起来
④contain one’s excitement抑制某人的激动
⑤be wild with joy欣喜若狂
2.伤心忧郁
①float in an ocean of sadness 漂浮在悲伤的海洋里
②with a heavy/sorrowful heart 怀着沉重/悲伤的心情
③be drowned in sorrow被悲伤淹没
④with tears blurring one’s eyes泪水模糊了某人的双眼
⑤weep/sob with one’s face hidden in one’s hands掩面啜泣
3.生气愤怒
①fly into a rage 暴跳如雷
②lose one’s temper发脾气
③be seized by anger充满愤怒
④one’s voice trembles with anger 某人的声音因愤怒而颤抖
⑤storm out of the room 怒气冲冲地走出房间
4.害怕惊讶
①knees feel weak 双腿发软
②with one’s heart pounding/beating wildly 某人的心怦怦直跳
③be frozen with fear 吓得动弹不得
④be shocked beyond words 惊讶得说不出话来
⑤be numb with shock 惊呆了
5.内疚遗憾
①be consumed with guilt 深感内疚
②be buried in guilt沉浸于内疚之中
③have guilt written on one’s face满脸内疚
④to one’s great regret令某人深感遗憾的是
⑤with great regret 非常遗憾地
6.焦虑紧张
①have/with butterflies in one’s stomach 心里发慌
②hide one’s nervousness/anxiety 掩饰紧张/焦虑
③with one’s heart in one’s mouth 提心吊胆地
④fidget with anxiety 因焦虑而坐立不安
⑤be on pins and needles如坐针毡
7.失望沮丧
①be frustrated with...对……感到沮丧
②be disappointed at/by... 对……感到失望
③fall into despair/abandon oneself to despair 陷入绝望
④have a downcast look on one’s face 某人脸上露出一副垂头丧气的表情
⑤throw sb into low spirits 使某人情绪低落
8.尴尬羞愧
①glow with embarrassment 尴尬得满脸通红
②lower one’s head with shame 羞愧地低下头
③be struck dead with shame 羞愧得要死
④hide one’s inner embarrassment 隐藏内心的尴尬
⑤one’s cheeks burn with embarrassment 某人的脸颊因尴尬而发烫
(二)动作描写
1.上肢动作
抱住 某人 put/throw one’s arms around sb 紧握 双拳 clench one’s fists
拉某人 进怀 pull sb into one’s arms 伸出手 hold out/stretch out/reach out one’s hand
轻拍某人 的肩膀 tap/pat sb on the shoulder 手拉手/ 臂挽臂 hand in hand/arm in arm
拥抱 某人 hug/hold/embrace sb in one’s arms 卷起袖子 roll up one’s sleeves
耸耸肩 shrug one’s shoulders 抓住某人 的胳膊　 catch/grab/seize one’s arm
2.嘴部动作
咬嘴唇 bite one’s lip 笑得合 不拢嘴 grin from ear to ear
咬/抿一 (小)口 take a (small) bite/sip 某人张 大嘴巴 open one’s
mouth wide
打哈欠 hide one’s yawn 某人咧 嘴大笑 one’s mouth splits into a big smile
保守 秘密 keep one’s mouth shut 舔嘴唇 lick one’s lips
捂住嘴 cover one’s mouth 嘴唇颤动 one’s lips quiver
某人脸 上绽出 了微笑 one’s face cracks into a smile 轻声嘀咕 mutter under
one’s breath
3.眼部动作
揉眼睛 rub one’s eyes 匆匆看 一眼 take/have a glance at
上下打 量某人 look sb up and down 睁大/眯 起眼睛 widen/narrow one’s eyes
直视某 人的 眼睛 look sb straight in the eyes 瞥一眼 catch a glimpse of
眨眼 以控制 泪水(或挤 掉脏东西) blink sth back/away 映入眼帘 come into view
紧盯着 glue one’s eyes to 偷看 steal a glance at
注视; 凝视　 gaze at
4.头部动作
觉得天 旋地转 feel one’s head spinning 低头 bend/bow/hang/drop/lower one’s head
把头靠 在……上 rest one’s head on... 耷拉 着头 droop one’s head
点头 nod one’s head 摇头 shake one’s head
转头/ 扭头/ 挠头 turn/twist/scratch one’s head 探出头 poke one’s head out
抬头 lift/raise one’s head 双手 抱头 put/hold/bury
one’s head in
one’s hands
5.腿部动作
屈膝 bend one’s knees 蹦蹦跳 跳地走 skip along
站起来 rise to one’s feet 站在原地 一动不动 stand rooted to the ground
跳起来 spring/jump to one’s feet 来回踱步 pace up and down
盘腿坐在 地板上　 sit cross-legged on the floor 跺脚 tap/stamp one’s feet
拖着沉重 的腿前进 drag one’s heavy legs forward 加快脚步 speed up one’s steps/pace
像风一样 奔跑　　 rush/dash/run like the wind 踮着脚 on tiptoe
蹑手蹑脚 地上楼　 creep/sneak up the stairs 瘫坐 sink/collapse into one’s seat
(三)场景描写
1.美好景色
①the setting/rising sun 落日/冉冉升起的太阳
②the delicate flowers 娇嫩的花
③the fragrant roses 芳香的玫瑰
④(2025·山东济宁一模)In the distance,the seagull soared freely between the sea and sky,as if dancing.
在远处,海鸥在大海和蓝天之间自由地翱翔,仿佛在跳舞。
⑤Birds sang joyfully on the branches,as if guiding us with their songs.
鸟儿在枝头欢快地歌唱,仿佛在用歌声为我们指引方向。
⑥The clouds in the sky were painted by the setting sun into a splendid sunset glow,breathtakingly beautiful.
天空中的云朵被夕阳染成了绚丽的晚霞,美得令人惊叹。
2.恶劣天气
①thunder and lightning 电闪雷鸣
②be overcast with dark clouds 乌云密布
③Immediately,an absolute darkness ruled the forest.
顷刻间,黑暗统治了森林。
④The icy wind needled his face.
凛冽的风如针般扎着他的脸。
⑤The wind was picking up,which made the branches dancing wildly.
风越刮越大,使得树枝在疯狂地舞动着。
⑥The sky was suddenly engulfed by dark clouds,and raindrops like marbles pelted down mercilessly.
天空突然被乌云笼罩,弹珠般的雨点无情地砸了下来。
(四)人物描写
1.外貌体型
①a graceful/skinny/slim figure 一个优美/消瘦/苗条的身材
②an average/a well-built figure 一个中等/魁梧的身材
③She had long,silky hair that flowed down her back like a waterfall.
她有一头长长的、柔滑的头发,像瀑布一样顺着她的背流淌下来。
④His eyes were as blue as the sky,clear and bright,making people feel warm.
他的眼睛像天空一样蓝,清澈明亮,让人感到温暖。
⑤The girl had a small nose,which added to her delicate and pretty appearance.
这个女孩有一个小巧的鼻子,这使她的外表更加精致漂亮。
⑥The old man had a wrinkled face,with deep lines around his eyes and mouth,showing the traces of time.
这位老人满脸皱纹,他的眼睛和嘴巴周围有深深的纹路,展现出岁月的痕迹。
2.性格特征
①optimistic and positive /pessimistic and negative乐观积极/悲观消极
②be armed/equipped with a keen insight into...
对……具有敏锐的洞察力
③a self-possessed/good-natured/down-to-earth/an outspoken person一个沉着冷静的/和蔼可亲的/脚踏实地的/直言不讳的人
④kind-hearted and compassionate善良且富有同情心的
⑤She is always optimistic and spreads happiness wherever she goes.
她总是很乐观,无论走到哪里都能传递快乐。
⑥She is a brave girl who dares to face challenges.
她是个勇敢的女孩,敢于面对挑战。
3.神态表情
①beam with pleasure 喜不自胜
②one’s face pales with fright 某人吓得脸色苍白
③wear a puzzled look 流露出迷惑不解的神情
④one’s face grows serious某人的表情变得严肃
⑤She sat there silently,her shoulders slumped,as if the weight of the whole world was on her.
她静静地坐在那里,肩膀耷拉着,仿佛全世界的重量都压在了她身上。
⑥He kept pacing back and forth,his hands constantly clenching and unclenching,showing his extreme nervousness.
他不停地来回踱步,双手不断地握紧又松开,表现出极度的紧张。
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