译林版英语八年级下册单元话题作文UNIT 5-8学案(原卷版+解析版)

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译林版英语八年级下册单元话题作文
UNIT 5 Good manners
Topic 1: Good Table Manners (中国餐桌礼仪)
【题目要求】
本单元的核心话题是“良好的礼仪 (Good manners)”。Task 板块的写作任务是介绍“餐桌礼仪 (Table manners)”。假设你的英国笔友 Robert 下周要来中国,并要在你家做客,他发邮件向你询问中国的餐桌礼仪。请你以“Good Table Manners”为题,写一篇英语短文,给他提供一些有用的建议。
要点:
1. 引入:餐桌礼仪在中国很重要,我来分享一些有用的建议;
2. 具体规则:
- 等所有人都准备好再开始吃 (start eating until everyone is ready);
- 闭着嘴安静地吃,嘴里有食物时不要说话 (have food in your mouth);
- 夸赞食物美味是礼貌的 (It is polite to show...);
- 在大家都吃完之前离席是不礼貌的 (impolite to leave...);
3. 总结:希望你觉得我的建议有用。
要求:
1. 必须包括以上所有要点,并可适当发挥;
2. 正确使用本单元的重点句型:It is polite/impolite to do sth.;
3. 词数80-100词左右。
【写作提示】
亮点词汇:helpful advice (有用的建议), keep your mouth closed (闭着嘴), polite (有礼貌的), impolite (不礼貌的), show that you are enjoying the meal (表现出你很享受这顿饭)。
语法及句型:
1. 引出建议:Table manners are important in China and I am going to share some helpful advice.
2. 祈使句提建议:First, do not start eating until everyone is ready. Then, eat quietly and keep your mouth closed.
3. 运用核心句型评价行为:It is polite to show that you are enjoying the meal. Moreover, remember it is impolite to leave the table until everyone has finished.
4. 结语:I hope you find my advice useful.
【学生作答区】
【必背范文】
Good Table Manners
Table manners are important in China and I am going to share some helpful advice with you.
First, when you are sitting at the table, you should not start eating until everyone is ready. Then, eat quietly and keep your mouth closed when you are eating. Also, never speak if you have food in your mouth. It is polite to show that you are enjoying the meal by saying how tasty the food is. Moreover, remember it is impolite to leave the table until everyone has finished.
We should follow these rules to make sure that both guests and hosts are comfortable. I hope you find my advice useful.
【题目解析】
[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇提供建议的说明文。
② 时态:全文以“一般现在时”为主。
③ 提示:本题完美复刻了 Unit 5 Task 板块 Amy 写的 "Good table manners" 范文。考查学生运用所学句型条理清晰地陈述中国餐桌礼仪规则。
[写作步骤]
第一步:总述,明确中国餐桌礼仪很重要,并准备分享一些建议;
第二步:用 First, Then, Also, Moreover 等过渡词,分条列举餐桌上的禁忌和礼貌行为(不提前吃、闭嘴咀嚼、不含食说话、适时夸赞、不提前离席);
第三步:总结,遵守规则能让宾主尽欢,希望建议有用。
[亮点词汇]
① keep your mouth closed 闭着嘴
② find my advice useful 发现我的建议有用
③ guests and hosts 宾客与主人
[高分句型]
① ...you should not start eating until everyone is ready. (运用了 not... until... 句型表示“直到……才”,语气委婉且地道)
② It is polite to show that you are enjoying the meal... / it is impolite to leave the table... (多次使用了本单元重点句型 It is + adj. + to do sth.,it为形式主语)
Topic 2: When in Rome, Do as the Romans Do (文化差异与入乡随俗)
【题目要求】
本单元 Reading 板块重点探讨了中西方礼仪的差异。学校英文报正在举行“Culture Differences (文化差异)”的征文活动。请你以“When in Rome, Do as the Romans Do (入乡随俗)”为题,结合课文内容,写一篇短文介绍中英两国在面对赞美 (praise) 时的礼仪差异。
要点:
1. 引入:不同国家有不同的礼仪,了解它们很重要;
2. 英国人的做法:当英国人受到赞美时,他们通常会很高兴,并说“谢谢”来大方地接受赞美 (accept praise openly);
3. 中国人的做法:中国人在面对赞美时表现得不同。他们太谦虚了以至于不会公开接受赞美 (too modest to accept...)。相反 (Instead),他们经常微笑并回答“哪里哪里”;
4. 总结与建议:一开始适应这些差异可能很难,但最好的建议是:入乡随俗 (When in Rome, do as the Romans do)。
要求:
1. 必须包括以上所有要点,并可适当发挥;
2. 准确使用本单元的核心语法:too... to... 结构;
3. 词数80-100词左右。
【写作提示】
亮点词汇:manners (礼仪), praise (赞美), modest (谦虚的), accept (接受), openly (公开地/大方地), get used to (习惯于)。
语法及句型:
1. 引入现象:There are some interesting differences in manners between China and the UK.
2. 描述英国:In the UK, when people receive praise, they are pleased and often say "thank you".
3. 运用核心语法描述中国:However, Chinese people behave differently. They are too modest to accept praise openly.
4. 总结给建议:It can be hard at first to get used to all these differences. But my advice is: when in Rome, do as the Romans do.
【学生作答区】
【必背范文】
When in Rome, Do as the Romans Do
Manners are quite different in different countries. For example, there is a big difference between the UK and China when it comes to praise.
In the UK, if someone praises a British person, he will be pleased and tell you he loves the praise. They usually say "thank you" to accept it. However, Chinese people behave differently. They are too modest to accept praise openly. Instead of saying "thank you", they often smile and reply, "Nali, nali."
It can be hard at first to get used to all these differences. But if you are in another country, my best advice is: when in Rome, do as the Romans do.
【题目解析】
[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇探讨文化差异的说明文。
② 时态:全文以“一般现在时”为主。
③ 提示:本题立足于 Unit 5 Reading 板块 Robert 的博客文章。重点考查学生转述中西方对于“赞美”的不同反应,以及灵活运用本单元主题谚语“入乡随俗”的能力。
[写作步骤]
第一步:用当提到赞美(when it comes to praise)时中英有差异作为开场白;
第二步:展开对比。描述英国人乐于接受赞美并道谢;接着用 however 转折,描述中国人因谦虚而推辞(Nali, nali);
第三步:总结升华。承认适应差异很难,但给出终极建议——入乡随俗。
[亮点词汇]
① when it comes to 当提到……
② instead of 代替 / 而不是
③ get used to 习惯于 / 适应
[高分句型]
① They are too modest to accept praise openly. (准确且巧妙地使用了本单元核心语法 too... to... 结构,表示“太……以至于不能……”,复现了课文金句)
② It can be hard at first to get used to all these differences. (再次使用了 It is + adj. + to do sth. 的形式主语结构)
Topic 3: Good Manners in Public Places (公共场所的良好礼仪)
【题目要求】
除了餐桌礼仪,公共场所的礼仪也是展现一个人素质的重要方面。在 Welcome to the unit 板块,我们学习了如何“做正确的事 (Doing the right things)”。请你以“Good Manners in Public Places”为题写一篇英语短文,倡导大家在公共场所遵守礼仪。
要点:
1. 引入:良好的礼仪在我们的日常生活中非常重要。它可以让别人感到舒服;
2. 具体做法(举例):
- 在图书馆:我们要有足够的礼貌保持安静 (polite enough to keep quiet),不要大声喧哗;
- 乘坐交通工具或排队时:我们要有足够的耐心排队等候 (patient enough to wait in line),给有需要的人让座;
- 保护环境:不要在公园里乱丢垃圾 (drop litter) 或摘花;
3. 呼吁:每个人都应该遵守规则。让我们从自己做起,成为一个有礼貌的好公民 (a good citizen)。
要求:
1. 包含以上所有要点,并可适当发挥;
2. 大量、准确地运用本单元的核心语法:enough to 结构;
3. 词数80-100词左右。
【写作提示】
亮点词汇:public places (公共场所), keep quiet (保持安静), wait in line (排队等候), drop litter (乱丢垃圾), follow the rules (遵守规则), a good citizen (一个好公民)。
语法及句型:
1. 提出观点:Good manners are very important in our daily life. They make others feel comfortable.
2. 运用 enough to 写具体建议:In the library, we should be polite enough to keep our voices down. In shops or banks, we should be patient enough to wait in line.
3. 其他禁忌:Also, we shouldn't drop litter or pick flowers in the park.
4. 总结呼吁:We are old enough to follow these rules. Let's try to be a good citizen!
【学生作答区】
【必背范文】
Good Manners in Public Places
Good manners are very important in our daily life. They show our respect for others and make people around us feel comfortable. We should always have good manners in public places.
First, in the library, we should be polite enough to keep quiet and never speak loudly. Second, when we are at the bus stop, we must be patient enough to wait in line. It is also good manners to give up our seats to people in need. Third, we should protect the environment. We should not drop litter everywhere or pick flowers in the park.
We are old enough to learn how to behave well. Let's start from ourselves and be a good citizen!
【题目解析】
[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇关于文明行为倡议的议论文。
② 时态:全文以“一般现在时”为主。
③ 提示:本题综合了 Unit 5 Welcome to the unit 中的图片活动(如 drop litter, wait in line patiently)以及 Grammar 版块中要求学生造句的重点。要求学生能够用高级结构清晰地表达公共场所的文明行为。
[写作步骤]
第一步:用简短的语言说明良好礼仪的重要性(表达尊重、让人舒服);
第二步:用 First, Second, Third 列举在图书馆、公交站以及公园里的具体文明和不文明行为;
第三步:总结全文,呼吁大家从小事做起,争当好市民。
[亮点词汇]
① show our respect for 表达我们对……的尊重
② wait in line 排队等候
③ give up our seats to 给……让座
[高分句型]
① ...we should be polite enough to keep quiet... / we must be patient enough to wait in line. (在文章主体段落高频且准确地使用了 adj. + enough to do sth. 结构,完美展示了对本单元核心语法的掌握)
② It is also good manners to give up our seats to people in need. (使用了 It is + 名词短语 + to do sth. 的句型,将 good manners 灵活运用)译林版英语八年级下册单元话题作文
UNIT 5 Good manners
Topic 1: Good Table Manners (中国餐桌礼仪)
【题目要求】
本单元的核心话题是“良好的礼仪 (Good manners)”。Task 板块的写作任务是介绍“餐桌礼仪 (Table manners)”。假设你的英国笔友 Robert 下周要来中国,并要在你家做客,他发邮件向你询问中国的餐桌礼仪。请你以“Good Table Manners”为题,写一篇英语短文,给他提供一些有用的建议。
要点:
1. 引入:餐桌礼仪在中国很重要,我来分享一些有用的建议;
2. 具体规则:
- 等所有人都准备好再开始吃 (start eating until everyone is ready);
- 闭着嘴安静地吃,嘴里有食物时不要说话 (have food in your mouth);
- 夸赞食物美味是礼貌的 (It is polite to show...);
- 在大家都吃完之前离席是不礼貌的 (impolite to leave...);
3. 总结:希望你觉得我的建议有用。
要求:
1. 必须包括以上所有要点,并可适当发挥;
2. 正确使用本单元的重点句型:It is polite/impolite to do sth.;
3. 词数80-100词左右。
【写作提示】
亮点词汇:helpful advice (有用的建议), keep your mouth closed (闭着嘴), polite (有礼貌的), impolite (不礼貌的), show that you are enjoying the meal (表现出你很享受这顿饭)。
语法及句型:
1. 引出建议:Table manners are important in China and I am going to share some helpful advice.
2. 祈使句提建议:First, do not start eating until everyone is ready. Then, eat quietly and keep your mouth closed.
3. 运用核心句型评价行为:It is polite to show that you are enjoying the meal. Moreover, remember it is impolite to leave the table until everyone has finished.
4. 结语:I hope you find my advice useful.
【学生作答区】
Topic 2: When in Rome, Do as the Romans Do (文化差异与入乡随俗)
【题目要求】
本单元 Reading 板块重点探讨了中西方礼仪的差异。学校英文报正在举行“Culture Differences (文化差异)”的征文活动。请你以“When in Rome, Do as the Romans Do (入乡随俗)”为题,结合课文内容,写一篇短文介绍中英两国在面对赞美 (praise) 时的礼仪差异。
要点:
1. 引入:不同国家有不同的礼仪,了解它们很重要;
2. 英国人的做法:当英国人受到赞美时,他们通常会很高兴,并说“谢谢”来大方地接受赞美 (accept praise openly);
3. 中国人的做法:中国人在面对赞美时表现得不同。他们太谦虚了以至于不会公开接受赞美 (too modest to accept...)。相反 (Instead),他们经常微笑并回答“哪里哪里”;
4. 总结与建议:一开始适应这些差异可能很难,但最好的建议是:入乡随俗 (When in Rome, do as the Romans do)。
要求:
1. 必须包括以上所有要点,并可适当发挥;
2. 准确使用本单元的核心语法:too... to... 结构;
3. 词数80-100词左右。
【写作提示】
亮点词汇:manners (礼仪), praise (赞美), modest (谦虚的), accept (接受), openly (公开地/大方地), get used to (习惯于)。
语法及句型:
1. 引入现象:There are some interesting differences in manners between China and the UK.
2. 描述英国:In the UK, when people receive praise, they are pleased and often say "thank you".
3. 运用核心语法描述中国:However, Chinese people behave differently. They are too modest to accept praise openly.
4. 总结给建议:It can be hard at first to get used to all these differences. But my advice is: when in Rome, do as the Romans do.
【学生作答区】
Topic 3: Good Manners in Public Places (公共场所的良好礼仪)
【题目要求】
除了餐桌礼仪,公共场所的礼仪也是展现一个人素质的重要方面。在 Welcome to the unit 板块,我们学习了如何“做正确的事 (Doing the right things)”。请你以“Good Manners in Public Places”为题写一篇英语短文,倡导大家在公共场所遵守礼仪。
要点:
1. 引入:良好的礼仪在我们的日常生活中非常重要。它可以让别人感到舒服;
2. 具体做法(举例):
- 在图书馆:我们要有足够的礼貌保持安静 (polite enough to keep quiet),不要大声喧哗;
- 乘坐交通工具或排队时:我们要有足够的耐心排队等候 (patient enough to wait in line),给有需要的人让座;
- 保护环境:不要在公园里乱丢垃圾 (drop litter) 或摘花;
3. 呼吁:每个人都应该遵守规则。让我们从自己做起,成为一个有礼貌的好公民 (a good citizen)。
要求:
1. 包含以上所有要点,并可适当发挥;
2. 大量、准确地运用本单元的核心语法:enough to 结构;
3. 词数80-100词左右。
【写作提示】
亮点词汇:public places (公共场所), keep quiet (保持安静), wait in line (排队等候), drop litter (乱丢垃圾), follow the rules (遵守规则), a good citizen (一个好公民)。
语法及句型:
1. 提出观点:Good manners are very important in our daily life. They make others feel comfortable.
2. 运用 enough to 写具体建议:In the library, we should be polite enough to keep our voices down. In shops or banks, we should be patient enough to wait in line.
3. 其他禁忌:Also, we shouldn't drop litter or pick flowers in the park.
4. 总结呼吁:We are old enough to follow these rules. Let's try to be a good citizen!
【学生作答区】译林版英语八年级下册单元话题作文
UNIT 6 Sunshine for all
Topic 1: A Volunteering Experience (一次志愿服务经历)
【题目要求】
本单元的核心话题是“同沐阳光 (Sunshine for all)”。Reading 板块介绍了残奥会志愿者的故事。假设上周末你们班组织去敬老院 (an old people's home) 开展了志愿服务活动,请你以此为主题,为校英文报写一篇题为“A Volunteering Experience”的短文,记录这次有意义的活动。
要点:
1. 活动背景:上周末,我和同学们去敬老院做志愿者。许多老人感到孤独,需要我们的帮助;
2. 活动内容:我们帮他们打扫房间,和他们聊天 (chat with...),还为他们表演了节目;
3. 老人反应:老人们非常高兴,对我们的工作表示感谢;
4. 你的感受:帮助有需要的人很重要。虽然很累,但看到他们的笑容我觉得做志愿者很有意义 (meaningful)。
要求:
1. 必须包括以上所有要点,并可适当发挥;
2. 准确使用本单元核心句型:It is + adj. + (for/of sb.) + to do sth.;
3. 词数80词左右。
【写作提示】
亮点词汇:volunteer (志愿者), lonely (孤独的), do some cleaning (打扫卫生), put on a show (表演节目), meaningful (有意义的), effort (努力/付出)。
语法及句型:
1. 交代背景:Last weekend, my classmates and I went to an old people's home as volunteers.
2. 描述行为:It is necessary for us to help them because many of them feel lonely.
3. 具体活动:We helped them do some cleaning and chatted with them. We also put on a show.
4. 运用核心语法写感受:It takes a lot of effort to do the work, but it is meaningful to work as a volunteer.
【学生作答区】
【必背范文】
A Volunteering Experience
Last weekend, my classmates and I went to an old people's home as volunteers. It is necessary for us to care for the elderly because many of them feel lonely and need our help.
When we got there, we first helped them do some cleaning and wash their clothes. Then, we chatted with them and listened to their stories patiently. In the end, we put on a wonderful show for them. The old people were very happy and thanked us for our work.
It is important to help people in need. Although it took a lot of effort, I think it is meaningful to work as a volunteer. I hope to volunteer again soon!
【题目解析】
[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇记录志愿服务经历的记叙文(夹叙夹议)。
② 时态:叙述上周末发生的活动用“一般过去时”,发表客观评论和感悟用“一般现在时”。
③ 提示:本题立足于 Unit 6 的核心话题“志愿服务”,考查学生叙述具体助人行为,并能用课文的核心语法句型表达个人感悟的能力。
[写作步骤]
第一步:点明时间、地点和人物(上周末和同学去敬老院),引出照顾老人的必要性;
第二步:按照时间顺序(When we got there, Then, In the end)详细描述打扫卫生、聊天、表演节目等志愿服务内容,并写出老人们开心的反馈;
第三步:总结全文,使用核心句型发表感慨:做志愿者很有意义。
[亮点词汇]
① care for 照顾,关爱
② put on a wonderful show 表演了一场精彩的节目
③ take a lot of effort 花费许多精力/努力
[高分句型]
① It is necessary for us to care for the elderly... / it is meaningful to work as a volunteer. (文章多次、恰当地运用了本单元的重点句型:It is + adj. + (for/of sb.) + to do sth.,充分展示了对语法点“不定式作真实主语”的掌握)
② Although it took a lot of effort, I think... (使用了 Although 引导的让步状语从句,句式层次分明,逻辑性强)
Topic 2: A Letter to Call for Help (一封呼吁捐款的倡议书)
【题目要求】
在 Integration 板块,我们学习了如何为生病的同学筹集善款。假设你是学生会主席李华,你们学校九年级的学生王雷患了严重的血液病 (a serious blood disease)。请你根据以下提示写一封倡议书,呼吁全校师生伸出援手。
要点:
1. 提出问题:我们九年级的学生王雷需要我们的帮助!他患了严重的血液病,目前正在住院;
2. 困难情况:做手术需要花费超过30万元。他的父母都是普通工人,无法负担这么昂贵的手术费 (cannot afford such an expensive operation);
3. 行动计划:我们计划下周五下午在学校操场举办一场义卖活动 (a charity sale) 来筹集资金;
4. 呼吁:如果大家都能伸出援手 (give a helping hand),我们就能拯救他的生命。
要求:
1. 必须包括以上所有要点,并可适当发挥;
2. 恰当运用 It is + adj. + of/for sb. + to do sth. 句型;
3. 词数80-100词左右,信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
【写作提示】
亮点词汇:suffer from (患有……疾病), afford (买得起/负担得起), expensive operation (昂贵的手术), organize a charity sale (组织义卖), give a helping hand (伸出援手)。
语法及句型:
1. 介绍病情:Wang Lei is suffering from a serious blood disease.
2. 阐述困难:It costs over 300,000 yuan. It is impossible for his parents to afford such an expensive operation.
3. 提出计划:We are going to organize a charity sale to raise money next Friday afternoon.
4. 结语与呼吁:It is kind of you to donate your pocket money. If all of us give a helping hand, we can save his life!
【学生作答区】
Dear all,
The Students' Union
【必背范文】
Dear all,
Wang Lei, one of our Grade 9 students, needs our help! He is suffering from a serious blood disease and is in hospital now.
A necessary operation for him costs over 300,000 yuan. His parents are both ordinary workers. It is impossible for them to afford such an expensive operation. Without the operation, his life would be at risk. To help him, we are going to organize a charity sale to raise money next Friday afternoon in the school playground. We hope you can join us.
It is kind of you to donate your pocket money or buy things at the charity sale. If all of us give a helping hand, we can save his life. Let's come together to support Wang Lei!
The Students' Union
【题目解析】
[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇号召人们捐款相助的倡议书(应用文)。
② 时态:主要采用“一般现在时”陈述当前困难,“一般将来时”宣布筹款计划。
③ 提示:本题完美复现了 Unit 6 Integration 板块 Part D2 中学生会发出求助信的语篇任务。考查学生在真实语境中运用 "suffer from", "afford", "charity sale" 等单元核心词汇的能力。
[写作步骤]
第一步:明确呼吁对象,直奔主题,介绍王雷生病住院的危急情况;
第二步:详细说明困难(手术费高达30万,普通家庭无力承担)。接着提出解决办法(下周五在操场举办义卖筹款);
第三步:使用具有感染力的语言呼吁大家捐款,强调只要人人献出爱心,就能挽救生命。
[亮点词汇]
① afford such an expensive operation 负担如此昂贵的手术
② organize a charity sale 组织一场义卖
③ give a helping hand 伸出援手 (单元核心短语)
[高分句型]
① It is impossible for them to afford such an expensive operation. / It is kind of you to donate your pocket money. (准确区分并使用了 It is + adj + for sb to do... 表示客观描述,以及 It is + adj + of sb to do... 评价人物品质的两种语法结构,展现了扎实的语法功底)
② Without the operation, his life would be at risk. (使用 without 介词短语引出虚拟的条件,句式紧凑高级,情感饱满)
Topic 3: Sunshine for All (让世界充满阳光 / 关爱弱势群体)
【题目要求】
本单元的主题是“Sunshine for all”。在我们的周围,有许多残疾人 (disabled people) 或者处于困境中的人,他们需要社会的关爱。学校英语广播站正在进行“传递温暖,关爱他人”的主题演讲征稿。请你以“Sunshine for All”为题,写一篇英语演讲稿。
要点:
1. 提出现象:在我们的日常生活中,有很多人面临困难,如盲人 (the blind) 和聋哑人 (the deaf) 等;
2. 我们的行动:
- 在街上,我们可以帮助盲人过马路 (cross the road);
- 在公交车上,我们应该给残疾人让座 (give up our seats to...);
- 此外,我们可以去社区中心做志愿工作,或向慈善机构捐款 (donate money);
3. 呼吁总结:帮助别人就是帮助自己。只要我们携手合作 (work hand in hand),就能创造一个更美好的世界,让所有人共享阳光。
要求:
1. 包含以上所有要点,并可适当发挥;
2. 结构清晰,恰当运用本单元 It is + adj. + to-infinitive 句型;
3. 词数80-100词左右。
【写作提示】
亮点词汇:disabled (残疾的), face difficulties (面临困难), the blind (盲人), give up one's seat to (给……让座), donate (捐献), make a difference (产生影响/发挥作用)。
语法及句型:
1. 开场白与现象:Hello, everyone! Today my topic is "Sunshine for All". In our daily lives, there are many disabled people who face difficulties.
2. 给出具体建议:What can we do for them First, it is necessary to help the blind cross the road safely. Second, it is good manners to give up our seats to the disabled on the bus.
3. 补充建议:Also, we can donate money to charities to support them.
4. 总结呼吁:It is very kind of us to do so. Let's work hand in hand to make a difference and bring sunshine for all.
【学生作答区】
【必背范文】
Sunshine for All
Hello, everyone! Today my topic is "Sunshine for All". In our daily lives, there are many disabled people, such as the blind and the deaf. They face many difficulties and need our help.
What can we do for them First, it is necessary to help the blind cross the road safely in the street. Second, it is good manners to give up our seats to the disabled on the bus. Also, we can work as volunteers at the community centre or donate pocket money to charities to support them.
It is easy for us to lend a hand. Helping others is helping ourselves. Let's work hand in hand to make a difference. Together, we can create a better world and bring sunshine for all.
【题目解析】
[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇关于关爱弱势群体的演讲稿(议论文)。
② 时态:全文以“一般现在时”为主。
③ 提示:本题围绕单元主题句 "Let's work hand in hand for a beautiful life" 展开。素材结合了 Welcome to the unit 中提及的盲人、聋哑人、残疾人等弱势群体,考查学生针对如何在日常生活中提供帮助(过马路、让座、捐款)进行逻辑陈述的能力。
[写作步骤]
第一步:使用标准的演讲开场白,引出有许多残疾人面临困难,需要帮助这一社会现象;
第二步:运用 First, Second, Also 有条理地列出我们可以提供的帮助:扶盲人过马路,公交车上让座,以及通过慈善机构捐款或做志愿者;
第三步:总结点题。伸出援手对我们而言很容易,呼吁大家携手共创美好世界,让阳光普照每个人。
[亮点词汇]
① the blind and the deaf 盲人和聋哑人 (the + 形容词 表示一类人)
② donate pocket money to charities 向慈善机构捐献零花钱
③ work hand in hand 携手合作 (单元标题页经典标语)
[高分句型]
① It is good manners to give up our seats to the disabled on the bus. (使用了形式主语句型,并融合了上个单元的词组 good manners 以及本单元的核心词汇 the disabled,属于跨单元语言知识的绝佳运用)
② Helping others is helping ourselves. (使用动名词短语作主语和表语,读起来朗朗上口,富有哲理)译林版英语八年级下册单元话题作文
UNIT 6 Sunshine for all
Topic 1: A Volunteering Experience (一次志愿服务经历)
【题目要求】
本单元的核心话题是“同沐阳光 (Sunshine for all)”。Reading 板块介绍了残奥会志愿者的故事。假设上周末你们班组织去敬老院 (an old people's home) 开展了志愿服务活动,请你以此为主题,为校英文报写一篇题为“A Volunteering Experience”的短文,记录这次有意义的活动。
要点:
1. 活动背景:上周末,我和同学们去敬老院做志愿者。许多老人感到孤独,需要我们的帮助;
2. 活动内容:我们帮他们打扫房间,和他们聊天 (chat with...),还为他们表演了节目;
3. 老人反应:老人们非常高兴,对我们的工作表示感谢;
4. 你的感受:帮助有需要的人很重要。虽然很累,但看到他们的笑容我觉得做志愿者很有意义 (meaningful)。
要求:
1. 必须包括以上所有要点,并可适当发挥;
2. 准确使用本单元核心句型:It is + adj. + (for/of sb.) + to do sth.;
3. 词数80词左右。
【写作提示】
亮点词汇:volunteer (志愿者), lonely (孤独的), do some cleaning (打扫卫生), put on a show (表演节目), meaningful (有意义的), effort (努力/付出)。
语法及句型:
1. 交代背景:Last weekend, my classmates and I went to an old people's home as volunteers.
2. 描述行为:It is necessary for us to help them because many of them feel lonely.
3. 具体活动:We helped them do some cleaning and chatted with them. We also put on a show.
4. 运用核心语法写感受:It takes a lot of effort to do the work, but it is meaningful to work as a volunteer.
【学生作答区】
Topic 2: A Letter to Call for Help (一封呼吁捐款的倡议书)
【题目要求】
在 Integration 板块,我们学习了如何为生病的同学筹集善款。假设你是学生会主席李华,你们学校九年级的学生王雷患了严重的血液病 (a serious blood disease)。请你根据以下提示写一封倡议书,呼吁全校师生伸出援手。
要点:
1. 提出问题:我们九年级的学生王雷需要我们的帮助!他患了严重的血液病,目前正在住院;
2. 困难情况:做手术需要花费超过30万元。他的父母都是普通工人,无法负担这么昂贵的手术费 (cannot afford such an expensive operation);
3. 行动计划:我们计划下周五下午在学校操场举办一场义卖活动 (a charity sale) 来筹集资金;
4. 呼吁:如果大家都能伸出援手 (give a helping hand),我们就能拯救他的生命。
要求:
1. 必须包括以上所有要点,并可适当发挥;
2. 恰当运用 It is + adj. + of/for sb. + to do sth. 句型;
3. 词数80-100词左右,信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
【写作提示】
亮点词汇:suffer from (患有……疾病), afford (买得起/负担得起), expensive operation (昂贵的手术), organize a charity sale (组织义卖), give a helping hand (伸出援手)。
语法及句型:
1. 介绍病情:Wang Lei is suffering from a serious blood disease.
2. 阐述困难:It costs over 300,000 yuan. It is impossible for his parents to afford such an expensive operation.
3. 提出计划:We are going to organize a charity sale to raise money next Friday afternoon.
4. 结语与呼吁:It is kind of you to donate your pocket money. If all of us give a helping hand, we can save his life!
【学生作答区】
Dear all,
The Students' Union
Topic 3: Sunshine for All (让世界充满阳光 / 关爱弱势群体)
【题目要求】
本单元的主题是“Sunshine for all”。在我们的周围,有许多残疾人 (disabled people) 或者处于困境中的人,他们需要社会的关爱。学校英语广播站正在进行“传递温暖,关爱他人”的主题演讲征稿。请你以“Sunshine for All”为题,写一篇英语演讲稿。
要点:
1. 提出现象:在我们的日常生活中,有很多人面临困难,如盲人 (the blind) 和聋哑人 (the deaf) 等;
2. 我们的行动:
- 在街上,我们可以帮助盲人过马路 (cross the road);
- 在公交车上,我们应该给残疾人让座 (give up our seats to...);
- 此外,我们可以去社区中心做志愿工作,或向慈善机构捐款 (donate money);
3. 呼吁总结:帮助别人就是帮助自己。只要我们携手合作 (work hand in hand),就能创造一个更美好的世界,让所有人共享阳光。
要求:
1. 包含以上所有要点,并可适当发挥;
2. 结构清晰,恰当运用本单元 It is + adj. + to-infinitive 句型;
3. 词数80-100词左右。
【写作提示】
亮点词汇:disabled (残疾的), face difficulties (面临困难), the blind (盲人), give up one's seat to (给……让座), donate (捐献), make a difference (产生影响/发挥作用)。
语法及句型:
1. 开场白与现象:Hello, everyone! Today my topic is "Sunshine for All". In our daily lives, there are many disabled people who face difficulties.
2. 给出具体建议:What can we do for them First, it is necessary to help the blind cross the road safely. Second, it is good manners to give up our seats to the disabled on the bus.
3. 补充建议:Also, we can donate money to charities to support them.
4. 总结呼吁:It is very kind of us to do so. Let's work hand in hand to make a difference and bring sunshine for all.
【学生作答区】译林版英语八年级下册单元话题作文
UNIT 7 Charities
Topic 1: A Great Charity (介绍一个慈善机构)
【题目要求】
本单元的核心话题是“慈善机构 (Charities)”。Integration 板块的写作任务是写一份关于慈善机构工作的报告。请你结合课本所学内容,以“A Great Charity — UNICEF”为题,写一篇英语短文,向大家介绍联合国儿童基金会 (UNICEF)。
要点:
1. 机构概况:UNICEF 是一个著名的国际慈善机构,成立于1946年 (be set up);
2. 工作目标:它的目标是帮助全世界处于困境中 (in difficult situations) 的儿童和年轻人;
3. 实施行动:它为贫困儿童提供干净的水、食物、教育和医疗保健 (healthcare)。许多项目被组织起来以支持儿童 (programmes are organized...);
4. 影响与呼吁:在它的帮助下,许多孩子的生活被改变了。我们应该尽力支持它。
要求:
1. 必须包括以上所有要点,并可适当发挥;
2. 准确使用本单元核心语法:一般现在时和一般过去时的被动语态 (Passive voice);
3. 词数80-100词左右。
【写作提示】
亮点词汇:international charity (国际慈善机构), set up (建立), in difficult situations (在困境中), provide sb. with sth. (为某人提供某物), healthcare (医疗保健), make a difference (发挥作用/产生影响)。
语法及句型:
1. 引入机构与成立时间(被动语态):UNICEF is a famous international charity. It was set up in 1946.
2. 阐述目标:Its goal is to help children and young people in difficult situations around the world.
3. 描述具体行动:It provides poor children with clean water, food, education and healthcare. Many programmes are organized to support them.
4. 总结影响与呼吁:Millions of children's lives are changed. We should try our best to support it and build a better world.
【学生作答区】
【必背范文】
A Great Charity — UNICEF
There are many charities in the world. UNICEF is a famous international charity. It was set up in 1946 by the UN.
The goal of UNICEF is to help children and young people in difficult situations around the world. It provides poor children with clean water, food, basic education and healthcare. Moreover, many special programmes are organized to support children in emergency situations like wars and natural disasters. Because of UNICEF's hard work, millions of children's lives are changed and improved.
UNICEF is making great progress to create a better world. I hope more people can volunteer for this charity and support its work.
【题目解析】
[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇介绍慈善机构的说明文。
② 时态:介绍背景历史用“一般过去时”,介绍日常工作和影响用“一般现在时”。
③ 提示:本题立足于 Unit 7 Integration 板块关于 UNICEF 的阅读语篇,考查学生提取关键信息并运用被动语态介绍慈善机构的能力。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开门见山,说明 UNICEF 是国际著名慈善机构,并用一般过去时的被动语态点明其成立时间(was set up in 1946);
第二步:阐述工作内容,它的目标是帮助困境中的儿童,为他们提供水、食物、教育和医疗;再用一般现在时的被动语态说明许多项目被组织起来(are organized);
第三步:总结它的伟大贡献,孩子们的生活被改变了,呼吁大家支持它的工作。
[亮点词汇]
① in difficult situations 在困境中
② provide sb. with sth. 为某人提供某物
③ emergency situations 紧急情况
[高分句型]
① It was set up in 1946 by the UN. / ...many special programmes are organized... (精准使用了本单元的核心语法:一般过去时和一般现在时的被动语态)
② Because of UNICEF's hard work, millions of children's lives are changed and improved. (使用 because of 引导原因状语,并在主句中连续使用两个被动语态动词,句式高级且结构紧凑)
Topic 2: A Charity Sale (记一次学校的慈善义卖活动)
【题目要求】
筹集善款(raise money)是慈善活动的重要组成部分。假设上周五你校学生会(Students' Union)在学校操场举办了一次慈善义卖活动 (a charity sale)。请你根据以下提示写一篇日记,记录这次有意义的活动。
要点:
1. 活动目的:活动旨在为贫困地区的孩子们筹集资金 (raise money for...);
2. 活动准备:义卖开始前,很多漂亮的海报被张贴在校园里 (be put up);
3. 活动过程:
- 许多学生和老师参加了活动;
- 旧书、玩具和手工作品被低价售出 (be sold at low prices);
4. 结果与感受:筹集了一大笔钱,这些钱将被送去买学习用品。帮助别人让我感到很快乐。
要求:
1. 必须包括以上所有要点,并可适当发挥;
2. 大量、准确地运用本单元的 被动语态 描述事件;
3. 词数80词左右。
【写作提示】
亮点词汇:charity sale (慈善义卖), raise money (筹集资金), put up posters (张贴海报), take an active part in (积极参加), hand-made works (手工作品), at low prices (以低价)。
语法及句型:
1. 背景与目的:Last Friday, a charity sale was held in our school. The aim was to raise money for children in poor areas.
2. 描写准备(被动语态):Before the sale, many beautiful posters were put up around the school to attract students.
3. 描述过程(被动语态):Lots of old books, toys and hand-made works were sold at low prices.
4. 总结感受:A lot of money was raised. I think the activity is meaningful because helping others makes us happy.
【学生作答区】
【必背范文】
A Charity Sale
Last Friday, a meaningful charity sale was held on our school playground. The aim was to raise money for children in poor areas.
Before the sale began, many beautiful posters were put up around the school to attract students' attention. During the sale, many students and teachers took an active part in it. Lots of old books, toys and hand-made works were sold at low prices. Everyone tried their best to help.
In the end, a lot of money was raised. All the money will be sent to the charities to buy school things for children in need. I think this activity is a great success. Helping others brings us real happiness.
【题目解析】
[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇记录学校活动的日记/记叙文。
② 时态:全文以叙述已经发生的活动为主,严格使用“一般过去时”和“一般过去时的被动语态”。
③ 提示:本题结合了 Unit 7 Grammar 板块的词汇练习(被动语态)。要求学生能够在真实的事件叙述中,熟练应用被动语态描述活动的准备和结果。
[写作步骤]
第一步:点明时间、地点和事件(上周五学校举办了义卖),交待筹款目的;
第二步:详细描写过程。准备阶段:海报被张贴(were put up);义卖阶段:物品被低价售出(were sold);
第三步:总结活动结果,大笔善款被筹集(was raised)。表达参与慈善带来的个人成就感和快乐。
[亮点词汇]
① raise money 筹钱
② take an active part in 积极参与
③ children in need 需要帮助的孩子们
[高分句型]
① ...many beautiful posters were put up... / ...old books, toys and hand-made works were sold... / ...a lot of money was raised. (通篇大量、自然地运用了一般过去时的被动语态,将活动描写得客观且重点突出,完美契合单元语法要求)
② Helping others brings us real happiness. (使用动名词短语 Helping others 作主语,谓语动词带s,句意升华主题)
Topic 3: A Thank-you Letter (一封感谢信)
【题目要求】
本单元 Reading 板块介绍了“奥比斯 (Orbis)”组织的飞行眼科医院。在课后练习中,一位眼疾患者写了一封感谢信。假设你是曾经受过奥比斯医生帮助的贫困地区患者 Alina,请你给奥比斯的马医生(Dr Ma)写一封感谢信。
要点:
1. 表达感谢:写信表达你对马医生和奥比斯所有人的深深感谢 (express my deep thanks to...);
2. 过去的情况:以前你的眼部疾病很严重。由于家里穷,你看不起病 (could not afford to go to hospital),只能生活在黑暗中;
3. 接受的帮助:多亏了奥比斯,你免费接受了手术 (were operated on);
4. 现在的改变与梦想:现在你能看清周围的世界并重返学校。你的梦想是成为一名医生,这样你就可以去帮助更多的人。
要求:
1. 包含以上所有要点,并可适当发挥;
2. 书信格式正确,语言真挚,恰当运用 被动语态;
3. 词数80-100词左右,信的开头和结尾已给出。
【写作提示】
亮点词汇:express my deep thanks (表达深深的感谢), suffer from (患有……病), afford (买得起/负担得起), medical treatment (医疗救治), operate on sb. (给某人做手术), grateful (感激的)。
语法及句型:
1. 点明目的:I am writing to express my deep thanks to you and everyone at Orbis.
2. 回顾过去:Before, I lived in darkness because I suffered from a serious eye disease. My family was too poor to afford the medical treatment.
3. 描述帮助(被动语态):Thanks to Orbis, I was operated on for free on the plane.
4. 改变与梦想:Now I can see the world clearly. I am forever grateful. I dream of becoming a doctor to help people in need.
【学生作答区】
Dear Dr Ma,
Best wishes,
Alina
【必背范文】
Dear Dr Ma,
I am writing to express my deep thanks to you and everyone at Orbis. You have brought light and colour back to my life.
Before you came, I lived in darkness. I suffered from a serious eye disease. My family was very poor, so we could not afford to go to hospital. I was losing hope for my future. However, thanks to Orbis, I was operated on for free on your flying hospital. The operation was very successful.
Now, so many things in my life have improved. I can see the world clearly and go to school like other children. I am forever grateful. My dream is to become a doctor like you to help more people in need.
Thank you once again for changing my life!
Best wishes,
Alina
【题目解析】
[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇书信类的应用文(感谢信)。
② 时态:表达现在的感谢和当前状况用“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”;叙述过去的经历和接受的手术用“一般过去时”。
③ 提示:本题巧妙融合了 Unit 7 Reading 的课后巩固材料(患者写给 Orbis 医生的信)。考查学生运用书信格式,结合课本高频词汇(medical treatment, afford, operation)进行真情实感表达的能力。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开篇点题,说明写信是为了向马医生和奥比斯组织表达深深的感谢,感谢他们带来了光明;
第二步:对比过去和被救治的过程。过去生病且负担不起去医院(could not afford);后来多亏了奥比斯,在飞机上接受了手术(was operated on);
第三步:描写现在的改变并树立未来的梦想,重获光明和学业,立志成为医生回馈社会。再次致谢。
[亮点词汇]
① express my deep thanks 表达我深深的感谢
② suffer from 遭受/患……病
③ afford to do sth. 负担得起做某事
④ be forever grateful 永远感激
[高分句型]
① However, thanks to Orbis, I was operated on for free on your flying hospital. (使用了 thanks to 短语表达“多亏了”,并精准使用了带介词 on 的动词短语的被动语态 was operated on,是极高水平的语法体现)
② My dream is to become a doctor like you to help more people in need. (动词不定式作表语,同时后面的不定式 to help... 作目的状语,句式清晰)】译林版英语八年级下册单元话题作文
UNIT 7 Charities
Topic 1: A Great Charity (介绍一个慈善机构)
【题目要求】
本单元的核心话题是“慈善机构 (Charities)”。Integration 板块的写作任务是写一份关于慈善机构工作的报告。请你结合课本所学内容,以“A Great Charity — UNICEF”为题,写一篇英语短文,向大家介绍联合国儿童基金会 (UNICEF)。
要点:
1. 机构概况:UNICEF 是一个著名的国际慈善机构,成立于1946年 (be set up);
2. 工作目标:它的目标是帮助全世界处于困境中 (in difficult situations) 的儿童和年轻人;
3. 实施行动:它为贫困儿童提供干净的水、食物、教育和医疗保健 (healthcare)。许多项目被组织起来以支持儿童 (programmes are organized...);
4. 影响与呼吁:在它的帮助下,许多孩子的生活被改变了。我们应该尽力支持它。
要求:
1. 必须包括以上所有要点,并可适当发挥;
2. 准确使用本单元核心语法:一般现在时和一般过去时的被动语态 (Passive voice);
3. 词数80-100词左右。
【写作提示】
亮点词汇:international charity (国际慈善机构), set up (建立), in difficult situations (在困境中), provide sb. with sth. (为某人提供某物), healthcare (医疗保健), make a difference (发挥作用/产生影响)。
语法及句型:
1. 引入机构与成立时间(被动语态):UNICEF is a famous international charity. It was set up in 1946.
2. 阐述目标:Its goal is to help children and young people in difficult situations around the world.
3. 描述具体行动:It provides poor children with clean water, food, education and healthcare. Many programmes are organized to support them.
4. 总结影响与呼吁:Millions of children's lives are changed. We should try our best to support it and build a better world.
【学生作答区】
Topic 2: A Charity Sale (记一次学校的慈善义卖活动)
【题目要求】
筹集善款(raise money)是慈善活动的重要组成部分。假设上周五你校学生会(Students' Union)在学校操场举办了一次慈善义卖活动 (a charity sale)。请你根据以下提示写一篇日记,记录这次有意义的活动。
要点:
1. 活动目的:活动旨在为贫困地区的孩子们筹集资金 (raise money for...);
2. 活动准备:义卖开始前,很多漂亮的海报被张贴在校园里 (be put up);
3. 活动过程:
- 许多学生和老师参加了活动;
- 旧书、玩具和手工作品被低价售出 (be sold at low prices);
4. 结果与感受:筹集了一大笔钱,这些钱将被送去买学习用品。帮助别人让我感到很快乐。
要求:
1. 必须包括以上所有要点,并可适当发挥;
2. 大量、准确地运用本单元的 被动语态 描述事件;
3. 词数80词左右。
【写作提示】
亮点词汇:charity sale (慈善义卖), raise money (筹集资金), put up posters (张贴海报), take an active part in (积极参加), hand-made works (手工作品), at low prices (以低价)。
语法及句型:
1. 背景与目的:Last Friday, a charity sale was held in our school. The aim was to raise money for children in poor areas.
2. 描写准备(被动语态):Before the sale, many beautiful posters were put up around the school to attract students.
3. 描述过程(被动语态):Lots of old books, toys and hand-made works were sold at low prices.
4. 总结感受:A lot of money was raised. I think the activity is meaningful because helping others makes us happy.
【学生作答区】
Topic 3: A Thank-you Letter (一封感谢信)
【题目要求】
本单元 Reading 板块介绍了“奥比斯 (Orbis)”组织的飞行眼科医院。在课后练习中,一位眼疾患者写了一封感谢信。假设你是曾经受过奥比斯医生帮助的贫困地区患者 Alina,请你给奥比斯的马医生(Dr Ma)写一封感谢信。
要点:
1. 表达感谢:写信表达你对马医生和奥比斯所有人的深深感谢 (express my deep thanks to...);
2. 过去的情况:以前你的眼部疾病很严重。由于家里穷,你看不起病 (could not afford to go to hospital),只能生活在黑暗中;
3. 接受的帮助:多亏了奥比斯,你免费接受了手术 (were operated on);
4. 现在的改变与梦想:现在你能看清周围的世界并重返学校。你的梦想是成为一名医生,这样你就可以去帮助更多的人。
要求:
1. 包含以上所有要点,并可适当发挥;
2. 书信格式正确,语言真挚,恰当运用 被动语态;
3. 词数80-100词左右,信的开头和结尾已给出。
【写作提示】
亮点词汇:express my deep thanks (表达深深的感谢), suffer from (患有……病), afford (买得起/负担得起), medical treatment (医疗救治), operate on sb. (给某人做手术), grateful (感激的)。
语法及句型:
1. 点明目的:I am writing to express my deep thanks to you and everyone at Orbis.
2. 回顾过去:Before, I lived in darkness because I suffered from a serious eye disease. My family was too poor to afford the medical treatment.
3. 描述帮助(被动语态):Thanks to Orbis, I was operated on for free on the plane.
4. 改变与梦想:Now I can see the world clearly. I am forever grateful. I dream of becoming a doctor to help people in need.
【学生作答区】
Dear Dr Ma,
Best wishes,
Alina译林版英语八年级下册单元话题作文
UNIT 8 A green world
Topic 1: Let's Go Green! (环保演讲稿:我们一起行动)
【题目要求】
本单元的核心话题是“绿色世界 (A green world)”。在 Integration 板块,同学们学习了如何通过“3R原则”来保护环境。学校正在举办以“保护环境,从我做起”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你以“Let's Go Green!”为题,写一篇演讲稿,号召大家养成绿色的生活习惯。
要点:
1. 引入话题:每个人都能为保护环境做些事情。我们只需要记住三个词:减少 (reduce)、重复使用 (reuse) 和回收利用 (recycle);
2. 具体做法:
- 减少浪费:离开房间时关灯,对一次性塑料袋说“不” (say no to single-use plastic bags);
- 重复使用:将旧衣服或旧书捐给慈善机构 (donate... to charities);
- 回收利用:像纸张、塑料和玻璃这样的废弃物可以被回收利用 (can be recycled);
3. 呼吁总结:如果我们都遵循这些简单的步骤,我们就能产生巨大的影响 (make a big difference),享受一个更绿色的世界。
要求:
1. 必须包括以上所有要点,并可适当发挥;
2. 恰当运用含有情态动词的 被动语态;
3. 词数80-100词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
【写作提示】
亮点词汇:reduce (减少), reuse (重复使用), recycle (回收利用), single-use (一次性的), donate (捐赠), make a difference (产生影响/发挥作用)。
语法及句型:
1. 引出主题:Are you ready to go green Everybody can do something to help protect the environment.
2. 运用祈使句和情态动词提建议:First, let's focus on reducing waste. We can save electricity by turning off lights when leaving a room.
3. 解释 Reuse 的方法:Reusing old things is another way to live a greener life. For example, old clothes can be donated to charities.
4. 运用被动语态解释 Recycle:Finally, remember that things like paper, plastic and glass can be recycled.
5. 总结:If we all follow these simple steps, we can make a big difference.
【学生作答区】
Hello, everyone!
【必背范文】
Let's Go Green!
Hello, everyone!
Are you ready to go green Everybody can do something to help protect the environment. It's easy, and you only have to remember three words: reduce, reuse and recycle.
First, let's focus on reducing waste and pollution. We can turn off lights when leaving a room to save electricity. In addition, we should say no to single-use plastic bags. Reusing old things is another way to live a greener life. For example, old clothes and books can be donated to charities. Finally, recycle. Remember that things like paper, plastic and glass can be recycled. We should also collect batteries for recycling.
If we all follow these simple steps, we can make a big difference and enjoy a greener world!
【题目解析】
[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇号召环保的演讲稿(说明/议论文)。
② 时态:全文以“一般现在时”为主。
③ 提示:本题完美复刻了译林版八下 Unit 8 Integration 板块 Part D2 中 Millie 的演讲稿。考查学生运用“3R原则”条理清晰地陈述环保措施的能力。
[写作步骤]
第一步:使用设问开场,吸引听众,点明环保人人有责,引出核心的“3R”原则;
第二步:用 First, Reusing... is another way..., Finally 分层次详细阐述 Reduce(关灯、拒用一次性塑料袋)、Reuse(捐赠旧物)和 Recycle(回收废品)的具体做法;
第三步:总结全文,呼吁大家共同行动,产生积极影响。
[亮点词汇]
① focus on 集中注意力于
② single-use plastic bags 一次性塑料袋
③ make a big difference 产生巨大的影响 / 起大作用
[高分句型]
① For example, old clothes and books can be donated to charities. / ...things like paper, plastic and glass can be recycled. (灵活运用了情态动词的被动语态 can be done 结构,准确表达了物品被处理的方式,符合本单元语法拓展要求)
② We can turn off lights when leaving a room to save electricity. (when 后直接跟现在分词 leaving,作时间状语,句式精炼地道)
Topic 2: Welcome to Our Green Town (介绍环保小镇/环保措施)
【题目要求】
在 Reading 板块中我们了解了环保之国瑞士。假设你的家乡星光镇 (Starlight Town) 也在推行环保政策,并获得了“绿色小镇”的荣誉。请你根据以下提示写一篇英语短文,介绍你们镇的环保举措。
要点:
1. 概况:星光镇是一个非常美丽和环保的地方 (an eco-friendly place)。政府制定了严格的法律来控制污染 (strict laws to control pollution);
2. 垃圾处理:人们必须将垃圾分类 (separate... into different groups)。许多生活垃圾将来会被回收利用 (will be recycled)。如果在公共场所乱扔垃圾,将会被罚款 (will be fined);
3. 出行与能源:为了减少空气污染,越来越多的自行车道将会被修建 (will be built) ;小镇还利用来自太阳和风的清洁能源 (clean energy);
4. 总结:我们都努力保护环境。欢迎来到我们绿色的家乡。
要求:
1. 必须包括以上所有要点,并可适当发挥;
2. 准确使用本单元的核心语法:一般将来时的被动语态 (Passive voice in the simple future tense);
3. 词数80-100词左右。
【写作提示】
亮点词汇:eco-friendly (环保的), strict (严格的), separate (分开), drop litter (乱丢垃圾), fine (罚款), clean energy (清洁能源)。
语法及句型:
1. 引入介绍:Starlight Town is a beautiful and eco-friendly place to live. There are strict laws about waste management.
2. 描述垃圾分类与惩罚(运用被动语态):People have to separate their rubbish into different groups. A lot of waste will be recycled in the future. If people drop litter in a public place, they will be fined.
3. 描述能源与交通(运用将来时被动语态):To reduce air pollution, more bicycle paths will be built. The town also uses plenty of clean energy from the sun and wind.
4. 结语:Welcome to our green hometown!
【学生作答区】
【必背范文】
Welcome to Our Green Town
Starlight Town is a beautiful and eco-friendly place to live. Thanks to the efforts of everyone, our town has become a great green city.
There are strict laws to control pollution in our town. First, people have to separate their rubbish into different groups so that it can be dealt with differently. A lot of waste will be recycled in the future. If people drop litter in a public place, they will be punished and fined. Second, to encourage travelling by bike, more bicycle paths will be built next year. Also, our town uses plenty of clean energy from the sun and wind to protect the environment.
The citizens here work together to build a green town. Welcome to visit our hometown!
【题目解析】
[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇介绍城市环保措施的说明文。
② 时态:全文结合使用“一般现在时”(陈述客观事实)和“一般将来时”(强调未来的环保规划和惩罚措施)。
③ 提示:本题素材巧妙融合了 Unit 8 Reading 板块的“瑞士”和课后练习中的 "Greenville"。重点考查学生对环保词汇的综合运用,以及对核心语法“一般将来时的被动语态”的实战输出。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开篇点题,介绍家乡星光镇是一个美丽环保的地方,这归功于大家的努力;
第二步:详细陈述小镇的环保法律。在垃圾处理上,要求垃圾分类(separate... into),指出垃圾将被回收(will be recycled),乱扔垃圾将被罚款(will be fined);在出行能源上,将修建更多自行车道(will be built),并使用风能和太阳能;
第三步:总结全文,市民团结一致共建绿色家乡,并发出热情的邀请。
[亮点词汇]
① eco-friendly 环保的
② separate... into different groups 把……分成不同类别
③ plenty of 大量的,丰富的
[高分句型]
① A lot of waste will be recycled in the future. / ...they will be punished and fined. / ...more bicycle paths will be built next year. (文章在主体段落密集且准确地使用了 will be done 的结构,完美切中了本单元“一般将来时的被动语态”这一核心语法要点)
② First, people have to separate their rubbish into different groups so that it can be dealt with differently. (使用了 so that 引导的目的状语从句,并在从句中运用了情态动词的被动语态,逻辑性极强)
Topic 3: An Earth Day Celebration (世界地球日活动通知)
【题目要求】
举办环保活动是增强大家环保意识的好方法。在 Grammar 板块,我们学习了如何用将来时的被动语态描述未来的活动。假设你们学校的环保俱乐部 (Green Club) 将于下周举办“世界地球日 (Earth Day)”的庆祝活动。请你根据以下信息,用英语写一则活动通知 (Notice)。
要点:
1. 举办时间与地点:活动将于下周五下午2点至4点在学校操场举行 (will be held);
2. 活动内容:
- 首先,将举办一场关于环境保护的讲座 (a lecture will be given);
- 讲座结束后,将组织一次植树活动 (a tree-planting party will be organized);
3. 其他事宜:
- 俱乐部将为参与者提供免费的树苗和水 (will be provided);
- 垃圾必须被扔进垃圾桶 (must be thrown into...);
4. 呼吁:欢迎所有学生来参加,让我们为地球尽一份力!
要求:
1. 包含以上所有要点,并可适当发挥;
2. 格式正确,语言简练,大量使用 将来时的被动语态;
3. 词数80词左右。
【写作提示】
亮点词汇:celebration (庆祝活动), environmental protection (环境保护), lecture (讲座), tree-planting party (植树活动), provide (提供), dustbin (垃圾桶)。
语法及句型:
1. 交代活动信息(被动语态):An Earth Day Celebration will be held on the school playground from 2:00 p.m. to 4:00 p.m. next Friday.
2. 描述活动 1:First, a lecture about environmental protection will be given to the students.
3. 描述活动 2:After the lecture, a tree-planting party will be organized. Trees will be planted around the playground.
4. 强调服务与纪律:Free young trees and water will be provided. Please note that all rubbish must be thrown into the dustbins.
5. 结语:All students are welcome!
【学生作答区】
Notice
The Green Club
【必背范文】
Notice
To help protect the environment, an Earth Day Celebration will be held by our school's Green Club. It will be held on the school playground from 2:00 p.m. to 4:00 p.m. next Friday.
There are many meaningful activities. First, a lecture about environmental protection will be given to us. After the lecture, a tree-planting party will be organized. More trees will be planted around our school. Free young trees and water will be provided by the club. Please remember that all rubbish must be thrown into the dustbins.
All students are welcome! Let's do something to make a difference to our earth!
The Green Club
【题目解析】
[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇应用文(活动通知/海报文字版)。
② 时态:因为是预告未来的活动,全文高度集中使用“一般将来时”及其“被动语态”。
③ 提示:本题直接来源于 Unit 8 Grammar 板块 Part A2 中关于 Earth Day Celebration 的海报内容。考查学生在应用文语境中,熟练、密集地输出一般将来时被动语态的能力。
[写作步骤]
第一步:注意通知(Notice)的格式。开门见山,说明活动目的,并明确宣告活动的时间和地点(将会在……举办);
第二步:详细预告活动流程。讲座将被举办(will be given),植树活动将被组织(will be organized),物资将被提供(will be provided)。随后提出纪律要求(垃圾必须被扔进垃圾桶);
第三步:发出热情号召,期待大家的参与。并在右下角署名。
[亮点词汇]
① environmental protection 环境保护
② tree-planting party 植树活动
③ dustbin 垃圾桶
[高分句型]
① ...an Earth Day Celebration will be held... / ...a lecture... will be given... / ...a tree-planting party will be organized... / Free young trees and water will be provided... (本篇范文是“一般将来时被动语态”的绝佳范本,多次使用 will be + 过去分词 的结构,用词精准,符合官方通知的客观严肃语境)
② Please remember that all rubbish must be thrown into the dustbins. (使用了含有情态动词的被动语态 must be done 提出要求,规范明确)译林版英语八年级下册单元话题作文
UNIT 8 A green world
Topic 1: Let's Go Green! (环保演讲稿:我们一起行动)
【题目要求】
本单元的核心话题是“绿色世界 (A green world)”。在 Integration 板块,同学们学习了如何通过“3R原则”来保护环境。学校正在举办以“保护环境,从我做起”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你以“Let's Go Green!”为题,写一篇演讲稿,号召大家养成绿色的生活习惯。
要点:
1. 引入话题:每个人都能为保护环境做些事情。我们只需要记住三个词:减少 (reduce)、重复使用 (reuse) 和回收利用 (recycle);
2. 具体做法:
- 减少浪费:离开房间时关灯,对一次性塑料袋说“不” (say no to single-use plastic bags);
- 重复使用:将旧衣服或旧书捐给慈善机构 (donate... to charities);
- 回收利用:像纸张、塑料和玻璃这样的废弃物可以被回收利用 (can be recycled);
3. 呼吁总结:如果我们都遵循这些简单的步骤,我们就能产生巨大的影响 (make a big difference),享受一个更绿色的世界。
要求:
1. 必须包括以上所有要点,并可适当发挥;
2. 恰当运用含有情态动词的 被动语态;
3. 词数80-100词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
【写作提示】
亮点词汇:reduce (减少), reuse (重复使用), recycle (回收利用), single-use (一次性的), donate (捐赠), make a difference (产生影响/发挥作用)。
语法及句型:
1. 引出主题:Are you ready to go green Everybody can do something to help protect the environment.
2. 运用祈使句和情态动词提建议:First, let's focus on reducing waste. We can save electricity by turning off lights when leaving a room.
3. 解释 Reuse 的方法:Reusing old things is another way to live a greener life. For example, old clothes can be donated to charities.
4. 运用被动语态解释 Recycle:Finally, remember that things like paper, plastic and glass can be recycled.
5. 总结:If we all follow these simple steps, we can make a big difference.
【学生作答区】
Hello, everyone!
Topic 2: Welcome to Our Green Town (介绍环保小镇/环保措施)
【题目要求】
在 Reading 板块中我们了解了环保之国瑞士。假设你的家乡星光镇 (Starlight Town) 也在推行环保政策,并获得了“绿色小镇”的荣誉。请你根据以下提示写一篇英语短文,介绍你们镇的环保举措。
要点:
1. 概况:星光镇是一个非常美丽和环保的地方 (an eco-friendly place)。政府制定了严格的法律来控制污染 (strict laws to control pollution);
2. 垃圾处理:人们必须将垃圾分类 (separate... into different groups)。许多生活垃圾将来会被回收利用 (will be recycled)。如果在公共场所乱扔垃圾,将会被罚款 (will be fined);
3. 出行与能源:为了减少空气污染,越来越多的自行车道将会被修建 (will be built) ;小镇还利用来自太阳和风的清洁能源 (clean energy);
4. 总结:我们都努力保护环境。欢迎来到我们绿色的家乡。
要求:
1. 必须包括以上所有要点,并可适当发挥;
2. 准确使用本单元的核心语法:一般将来时的被动语态 (Passive voice in the simple future tense);
3. 词数80-100词左右。
【写作提示】
亮点词汇:eco-friendly (环保的), strict (严格的), separate (分开), drop litter (乱丢垃圾), fine (罚款), clean energy (清洁能源)。
语法及句型:
1. 引入介绍:Starlight Town is a beautiful and eco-friendly place to live. There are strict laws about waste management.
2. 描述垃圾分类与惩罚(运用被动语态):People have to separate their rubbish into different groups. A lot of waste will be recycled in the future. If people drop litter in a public place, they will be fined.
3. 描述能源与交通(运用将来时被动语态):To reduce air pollution, more bicycle paths will be built. The town also uses plenty of clean energy from the sun and wind.
4. 结语:Welcome to our green hometown!
【学生作答区】
Topic 3: An Earth Day Celebration (世界地球日活动通知)
【题目要求】
举办环保活动是增强大家环保意识的好方法。在 Grammar 板块,我们学习了如何用将来时的被动语态描述未来的活动。假设你们学校的环保俱乐部 (Green Club) 将于下周举办“世界地球日 (Earth Day)”的庆祝活动。请你根据以下信息,用英语写一则活动通知 (Notice)。
要点:
1. 举办时间与地点:活动将于下周五下午2点至4点在学校操场举行 (will be held);
2. 活动内容:
- 首先,将举办一场关于环境保护的讲座 (a lecture will be given);
- 讲座结束后,将组织一次植树活动 (a tree-planting party will be organized);
3. 其他事宜:
- 俱乐部将为参与者提供免费的树苗和水 (will be provided);
- 垃圾必须被扔进垃圾桶 (must be thrown into...);
4. 呼吁:欢迎所有学生来参加,让我们为地球尽一份力!
要求:
1. 包含以上所有要点,并可适当发挥;
2. 格式正确,语言简练,大量使用 将来时的被动语态;
3. 词数80词左右。
【写作提示】
亮点词汇:celebration (庆祝活动), environmental protection (环境保护), lecture (讲座), tree-planting party (植树活动), provide (提供), dustbin (垃圾桶)。
语法及句型:
1. 交代活动信息(被动语态):An Earth Day Celebration will be held on the school playground from 2:00 p.m. to 4:00 p.m. next Friday.
2. 描述活动 1:First, a lecture about environmental protection will be given to the students.
3. 描述活动 2:After the lecture, a tree-planting party will be organized. Trees will be planted around the playground.
4. 强调服务与纪律:Free young trees and water will be provided. Please note that all rubbish must be thrown into the dustbins.
5. 结语:All students are welcome!
【学生作答区】
Notice
The Green Club

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