外研社版英语八年级下册单元话题作文 UNIT 4 Helping out学案(原卷版+解析版)

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外研社版英语八年级下册单元话题作文
UNIT 4 Helping out
Topic 1: A Voluntary Activity (一次去敬老院的志愿活动)
【题目要求】
本单元的核心话题是“帮助他人 (Helping out)”。假如你是李明,在本周的班会上,你将代表老师用英语通知学生们参加一次去敬老院的公益志愿活动。
要点如下:
1. 星期天早上8:20在校门口集合,乘公共汽车前往;
2. 给老人们赠送鲜花和新鲜水果等礼物;
3. 帮忙打扫卫生,整理房间;
4. 唱歌、跳舞、讲故事、聊天,给老人们带去快乐;
5. 活动很有意义,不仅能带来温暖,还能让我们学会关爱他人,希望大家积极参加。
要求:
1. 必须包括以上所有要点,并可适当发挥;
2. 词数80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
【写作提示】
亮点词汇:on behalf of (代表), voluntary activity (志愿活动), tidy up (整理), chat with (与……聊天), cheer up (使……高兴), meaningful (有意义的)。
语法及句型:
1. 发出通知:On behalf of our teacher, I'd like to inform you of a voluntary activity at the old people's home this Sunday.
2. 安排行程:We'll have to meet at the school gate at 8:20 and take a bus there.
3. 介绍活动内容:We'll do some cleaning and tidy up their rooms. Also, we can sing, dance, tell stories and chat with them to cheer them up.
4. 阐述意义并呼吁:This activity is very meaningful. It can not only bring warmth to the elderly but also let us learn to care for others.
【学生作答区】
Dear classmates,
Yours,
Li Ming
【必背范文】
Dear classmates,
I'm Li Ming. On behalf of our teacher, I'd like to inform you of a voluntary activity at the old people's home this Sunday.
We'll have to meet at the school gate at 8:20 on Sunday morning and take a bus there. We will do many things for the old people. We will bring them some flowers and fresh fruit. Then we'll do some cleaning and tidy up their rooms. Also, we can sing, dance, tell stories and chat with them to cheer them up.
I think this activity is very meaningful. It can not only bring warmth to the elderly but also let us learn to care for others. Hope everyone can take an active part. Thank you!
Yours,
Li Ming
【题目解析】
[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇应用文(口头通知/倡议书),以第一人称向全班同学介绍志愿活动安排。
② 时态:主要以“一般将来时”为主,用于安排将要进行的活动行程;辅以“一般现在时”表达个人对活动的看法。
③ 提示:要求学生能够掌握志愿服务相关的词汇(voluntary activity, do some cleaning, cheer up等),条理清晰地发布活动通知。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开门见山,代表老师通知大家本周日去敬老院的志愿活动;
第二步:详细说明活动的集合时间、地点及具体安排(送水果、打扫卫生、表演节目聊天等);
第三步:升华主题,说明活动不仅送去温暖还能培养关爱他人的品质,呼吁大家踊跃参与。
[高分句型]
① It can not only bring warmth to the elderly but also let us learn to care for others. (使用了 not only... but also... 并列连词结构,句式高级且富有感染力)
② Also, we can sing, dance, tell stories and chat with them to cheer them up. (使用了动词不定式作目的状语,并用并列动词丰富了活动内容)
Topic 2: My Community Service (我发起的一项社区服务)
【题目要求】
帮助他人有多种方式,在社区里做力所能及的贡献同样重要。假设你是Tim,你想帮助社区里的孩子们获得更多读书的机会,于是你发起了一项名为“拯救书籍 (Saving Books Program)”的社区服务。请你写一篇英语短文介绍你的活动经历。
要点:
1. 活动目的:为了帮助社区的孩子们有更多机会读书,我发起了“拯救书籍”项目,目标是为当地图书馆收集书籍;
2. 活动过程:我挨家挨户地向周围的人收集书,我和姐姐还张贴海报进行宣传 (spread the word);
3. 活动结果:我最终收集了260本书,并将它们全部送到了图书馆;
4. 个人感受:我喜欢看到人们享受阅读,我很自豪能做这样有意义的社区服务。
要求:
1. 必须包括以上所有要点,并可适当发挥;
2. 正确使用一般过去时描述活动经历;
3. 词数80词左右。
【写作提示】
亮点词汇:community service (社区服务), local library (当地图书馆), from door to door (挨家挨户), put up posters (张贴海报), end up doing sth. (最终做某事), be proud of (为……感到自豪)。
语法及句型:
1. 阐述初衷:I wanted to help children in our community to have more chances to read books.
2. 介绍项目与目标:So I started the Saving Books Program. Its goal was to collect books for the local library.
3. 描述执行过程(一般过去时):I went from door to door to get books from the people around. With my sister's help, we put up posters to spread the word.
4. 结果与感受:I ended up collecting 260 books. I really like doing community service, and I'm proud of what I have done.
【学生作答区】
【必背范文】
My Community Service
I am Tim. I wanted to help children in our community to have more chances to read books. So I started a community service called the Saving Books Program. Its goal was to collect books for the local library.
To achieve the goal, I went from door to door to get books from the people around. With the help of my sister, we also put up posters to spread the word. At last, I ended up collecting 260 books, and all the books went to the library.
I love to see where the books go, and how people are enjoying them. I really like doing community service, and I am proud of what I have done.
【题目解析】
[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文,记录了自己发起社区公益项目的全过程。
② 时态:在叙述发起的项目和行动过程时,使用“一般过去时”;在表达如今的个人感悟时,使用“一般现在时”。
③ 提示:学生需围绕 "Helping out" 主题,将帮助对象从家人延伸到社区,体现对社会的责任感与关爱。
[写作步骤]
第一步:说明为了帮助社区儿童有书读,发起了名为“Saving Books”的图书收集项目;
第二步:详细描写收集的过程,如挨家挨户敲门(from door to door)、贴海报宣传(put up posters),并交代最终的募书成果;
第三步:总结陈词,表达对志愿服务工作的热爱以及助人带来的自豪感。
[高分句型]
① I wanted to help children in our community to have more chances to read books. (使用了动词不定式作宾语补足语,结构清晰)
② I really like doing community service, and I am proud of what I have done. (使用了 what 引导的宾语从句作介词 of 的宾语,展现了扎实的语法功底)
Topic 3: A Memorable Story of Helping Out (一次难忘的助人经历)
【题目要求】
“帮助他人 (Helping out)”不仅体现在有组织的志愿活动中,更体现在我们日常生活中的点滴善意。校英文报正在征集“乐于助人”的真实故事。请你结合上周五在学校运动会上的经历,写一篇短文投稿。
要点:
1. 背景:生活中充满了难忘的时刻。上周五发生在学校操场上的一个故事给我留下了深刻的印象;
2. 突发事件:在100米赛跑中,一位同学突然摔倒 (suddenly fell);
3. 你的帮助行动:因为你负责急救协调,你迅速跑去寻求帮助并拿来水,其他同学则在旁边安慰他;
4. 你的感悟:在这个过程中,你错过了自己的比赛项目。起初有些失望,但很快转化为自豪;
5. 总结:你意识到放弃个人的小荣誉去帮助需要帮助的人是真正有意义的。
要求:
1. 包含以上所有要点,并可适当发挥情节;
2. 叙事条理清晰,感情真挚;
3. 词数80-100词左右。
【写作提示】
亮点词汇:unforgettable (难忘的), leave a deep impression on sb. (给某人留下深刻印象), rush to get help (冲去寻求帮助), disappointed (失望的), meaningful (有意义的)。
语法及句型:
1. 引出故事:Life is full of unforgettable moments. One story that happened last Friday left a deep impression on me.
2. 描述突发状况:During the 100-meter race, a classmate suddenly fell.
3. 描述助人行为 (as引导原因状语):As I was responsible for first aid coordination, I quickly rushed to get help and brought water.
4. 描述心理变化:However, I missed my own event in the process. At first, I felt a little disappointed, but that emotion soon turned into pride.
5. 总结升华 (that引导宾语从句):I realized that giving up a small personal honor to help someone in need was truly meaningful.
【学生作答区】
【必背范文】
A Memorable Story of Helping Out
Life is full of unforgettable moments, whether they’re about success or kindness. One story that happened last Friday left a deep impression on me.
It was a bright morning on the school sports ground. During the 100-meter race, a classmate suddenly fell. As I was responsible for first aid coordination, I quickly rushed to get help and brought water. Other classmates comforted him while we waited for the staff to arrive.
However, I missed my own event in the process. At first, I felt a little disappointed, but that emotion soon turned into pride. I realized that giving up a small personal honor to help someone in need was truly meaningful. Helping out is a great virtue, and it warms everyone's heart.
【题目解析】
[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文,描写了在校园运动会上发生的一段助人经历。
② 时态:记叙上周五发生的故事,通篇以“一般过去时”为主;首尾句发表议论,采用“一般现在时”。
③ 提示:本题围绕“Helping out”的主题展开,要求学生将个人经历融入叙事之中,通过描写事件经过和内心的转折,突出“助人为乐”的中心思想。
[写作步骤]
第一步:点题引入,指出上周五在学校操场上发生的故事给自己留下了深刻印象;
第二步:按事情发展的顺序记叙。同学摔倒,自己因为负责急救而迅速拿水并找人帮忙,其他同学一并安慰;
第三步:描写内心的升华。虽然错过了比赛有些失望,但意识到牺牲个人小荣誉去帮助别人才是最有意义的事(truly meaningful)。
[高分句型]
① As I was responsible for first aid coordination, I quickly rushed to get help and brought water. (As 引导原因状语从句,顺理成章地交代了助人的动机)
② I realized that giving up a small personal honor to help someone in need was truly meaningful. (that 引导宾语从句,且从句中使用了动名词短语 giving up... 作主语,句式结构复杂严谨)外研社版英语八年级下册单元话题作文
UNIT 4 Helping out
Topic 1: A Voluntary Activity (一次去敬老院的志愿活动)
【题目要求】
本单元的核心话题是“帮助他人 (Helping out)”。假如你是李明,在本周的班会上,你将代表老师用英语通知学生们参加一次去敬老院的公益志愿活动。
要点如下:
1. 星期天早上8:20在校门口集合,乘公共汽车前往;
2. 给老人们赠送鲜花和新鲜水果等礼物;
3. 帮忙打扫卫生,整理房间;
4. 唱歌、跳舞、讲故事、聊天,给老人们带去快乐;
5. 活动很有意义,不仅能带来温暖,还能让我们学会关爱他人,希望大家积极参加。
要求:
1. 必须包括以上所有要点,并可适当发挥;
2. 词数80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
【写作提示】
亮点词汇:on behalf of (代表), voluntary activity (志愿活动), tidy up (整理), chat with (与……聊天), cheer up (使……高兴), meaningful (有意义的)。
语法及句型:
1. 发出通知:On behalf of our teacher, I'd like to inform you of a voluntary activity at the old people's home this Sunday.
2. 安排行程:We'll have to meet at the school gate at 8:20 and take a bus there.
3. 介绍活动内容:We'll do some cleaning and tidy up their rooms. Also, we can sing, dance, tell stories and chat with them to cheer them up.
4. 阐述意义并呼吁:This activity is very meaningful. It can not only bring warmth to the elderly but also let us learn to care for others.
【学生作答区】
Dear classmates,
Yours,
Li Ming
Topic 2: My Community Service (我发起的一项社区服务)
【题目要求】
帮助他人有多种方式,在社区里做力所能及的贡献同样重要。假设你是Tim,你想帮助社区里的孩子们获得更多读书的机会,于是你发起了一项名为“拯救书籍 (Saving Books Program)”的社区服务。请你写一篇英语短文介绍你的活动经历。
要点:
1. 活动目的:为了帮助社区的孩子们有更多机会读书,我发起了“拯救书籍”项目,目标是为当地图书馆收集书籍;
2. 活动过程:我挨家挨户地向周围的人收集书,我和姐姐还张贴海报进行宣传 (spread the word);
3. 活动结果:我最终收集了260本书,并将它们全部送到了图书馆;
4. 个人感受:我喜欢看到人们享受阅读,我很自豪能做这样有意义的社区服务。
要求:
1. 必须包括以上所有要点,并可适当发挥;
2. 正确使用一般过去时描述活动经历;
3. 词数80词左右。
【写作提示】
亮点词汇:community service (社区服务), local library (当地图书馆), from door to door (挨家挨户), put up posters (张贴海报), end up doing sth. (最终做某事), be proud of (为……感到自豪)。
语法及句型:
1. 阐述初衷:I wanted to help children in our community to have more chances to read books.
2. 介绍项目与目标:So I started the Saving Books Program. Its goal was to collect books for the local library.
3. 描述执行过程(一般过去时):I went from door to door to get books from the people around. With my sister's help, we put up posters to spread the word.
4. 结果与感受:I ended up collecting 260 books. I really like doing community service, and I'm proud of what I have done.
【学生作答区】
Topic 3: A Memorable Story of Helping Out (一次难忘的助人经历)
【题目要求】
“帮助他人 (Helping out)”不仅体现在有组织的志愿活动中,更体现在我们日常生活中的点滴善意。校英文报正在征集“乐于助人”的真实故事。请你结合上周五在学校运动会上的经历,写一篇短文投稿。
要点:
1. 背景:生活中充满了难忘的时刻。上周五发生在学校操场上的一个故事给我留下了深刻的印象;
2. 突发事件:在100米赛跑中,一位同学突然摔倒 (suddenly fell);
3. 你的帮助行动:因为你负责急救协调,你迅速跑去寻求帮助并拿来水,其他同学则在旁边安慰他;
4. 你的感悟:在这个过程中,你错过了自己的比赛项目。起初有些失望,但很快转化为自豪;
5. 总结:你意识到放弃个人的小荣誉去帮助需要帮助的人是真正有意义的。
要求:
1. 包含以上所有要点,并可适当发挥情节;
2. 叙事条理清晰,感情真挚;
3. 词数80-100词左右。
【写作提示】
亮点词汇:unforgettable (难忘的), leave a deep impression on sb. (给某人留下深刻印象), rush to get help (冲去寻求帮助), disappointed (失望的), meaningful (有意义的)。
语法及句型:
1. 引出故事:Life is full of unforgettable moments. One story that happened last Friday left a deep impression on me.
2. 描述突发状况:During the 100-meter race, a classmate suddenly fell.
3. 描述助人行为 (as引导原因状语):As I was responsible for first aid coordination, I quickly rushed to get help and brought water.
4. 描述心理变化:However, I missed my own event in the process. At first, I felt a little disappointed, but that emotion soon turned into pride.
5. 总结升华 (that引导宾语从句):I realized that giving up a small personal honor to help someone in need was truly meaningful.
【学生作答区】

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