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23级（26届）成都一诊作文讲评
招聘启事
假定你是校英文报主编（chief editor）李华，报刊拟新增栏目 local culture, 现面向全校学生招聘一名专栏编辑，请根据以下要点写一则招聘启事：
1、工作职责。
2、报名方式
what you will do if selected
how+ to whom+ when
What’s the problem
What’s the problem
What’s the problem
语料积累
描述职责的表达:
The ideal candidate will be responsible for doing... ;
As an editor, you are expected/ supposed to do...；
Your main responsibilities/duties/tasks include...
语料积累
具体职责：
collect/gather cultural materials and organize them into categories such as customs, costumes/folk arts and food
write/draft and polish engaging articles featuring local traditions
interview residents/ cultural experts to dig up cultural details/details of profound cultural heritage
语料积累
报名：
Interested students can submit... (what) to...(whom) ...(when)
eg. Interested students can submit a self-introduction along with a sample piece related to local culture to school English newspaper@ within this week.
语料积累
期待加入：
Your involvement/participation will be highly anticipated.
Join us and be the voice of our local culture/ better promote our regional heritage!
Now
Polish your writing.
appreciate the sample
As our school English newspaper plans to launch a new column "Local Culture," we are nowrecruiting a dedicated student editor.
The appointed editor will be responsible for collecting and categorizing cultural materials into themes such as festivals, cuisine, and folk arts. Apart from this, you will also draft and polish engaging articles featuring local traditions.
Interested students are welcome to submit a brief self-introduction along with a writing sample to the English Newspaper Office by December 23. Your involvement/participation will be highly anticipated.
变式练习
（人教版英语必修一单元达标检测Unit 3）你校学生会要招聘一位课外活动志愿者，请你写一则招聘启事。内容包括：
工作职责
报名方式。
Extracurricular activity volunteer wanted
————————————————————————————————————————The Students Union
续写：陌生地方受伤； 热心骑行爱好者暖心帮助
who : ①______ ②_____ ③____
when:
where:
theme:
key elements
文本关键线索梳理
I was cycling in rural Turkey（土耳其）- I couldn't tell you where. My plan that day was to ride until I reached a village with somewhere I could stay. If that didn't work out, I needed to get to the next town before sunset since that was the only spot I could really count on for abed, Out there, finding anywhere to stay wasn't exactly easy.
I was cycling quickly downhill, probably too fast for a gravel(碎石)road, I was riding around a blind corner when a car came screaming around the bend, As soon as l saw it, it was in front of me. The next thing I remember is lying in the middle of the road with the cylinder of my bike handle stuck in my leg, blood everywhere.
A week before that I had met Bryan, a bike tourist who'd ridden through more than 40 countries and settled in 定居 Turkey, I had his number because, like countless bike tourists before me, he'd let me stay the night in his small apartment in Antalya.
I was badly injured.
Bryan was always kind to cyclists.
in a remote place
After I was discharged from hospital - a rural Turkish hospital in a town I didn't even know the name of - I sat outside in a wheelchair, not knowing the exact state of my injury.I thought about calling everyone besides Bryan - Dad, Mum, best friend - but none of them could help. The only local number in my phone was Bryan's.
I don't remember much about the phone call. I know it wasn't a simple request to stay a few more nights, l essentially asked Bryan to be my carer for an indefinite period. I didn'tknow anyone else in Turkey and couldn't walk, What I do remember is that the call was easy. There was no negotiation, just a welcoming: “Sure thing.
I had received treatmemnt and was released from the hospital.
I was badly injured and helpless.
My family was far from Turkey. They could’t help me at that time
Bryan was kind to help me.
I was hesitant to bother Bryan and regarded myself as a burden.
续写线索分析
When Bryan arrived, he greeted me like a friend, not a traveller with a sorry story.
Eventually my family organised a flight home from Antalya.
Q: Where did Bryan arrive
Q: How would he help me
Q: Would I still regard myself as a burden
Q: Would I recover
Q: Did my family arrive at Bryan’s house
Q: How would I do for Bryan’s help
Q: How would Bryan react to my expressing gratitue
Q: What have I learned
十句五定法
When Bryan arrived, he greeted me like a friend, not a traveller with a sorry story. Eventually my family organised a flight home from Antalya.
① ⑥
② ⑦
③ ⑧
④ ⑨
⑤ ⑩
My emotion/ B‘s action: eg. helped me into the car, folded up the wheelchair, and drove to his home.
I gradually recovered and I updated my family on the news.
He drove me to the airport and saw me off.
a stranger’s generosity in a foreign land; kindness of a stranger
At his small home, he took good care of me, such as....
He shared his thringlling stories when travelling in differen countries ...
I no longer felt I was a burden.
I expressed my gratitude(a post card with some words.)
His response: smile; pay kindness forward.
I decided to spread the kind ness I received.
sample
When Bryan arrived, he greeted me like a friend, not a traveler with a sorry story. Gently, he assisted me into the passanger seat, loaded my wheelchair into the trunk and drove toward his modest apartment in Antalya. There, he attended to my every need—tending to my bandages each day, preparing soft meals to ease my discomfort, and even sharing his thringlling stories when travelling in differen countries. His steady patience gradually eased my sense of being a burden, transforming me into a companion sharing his daily space. As the days unfolded, my strength returned bit by bit, allowing me to finally update my family on my recovery.
Eventually my family organised a flight home from Antalya. On the morning of my departure, Bryan personally drove me to the airport and pushed my wheelchair to the waiting area, with me carrying the small backpack. I embraced him tightly and extended my heartfelt gratitude, “Without your generous assistance, I wouldn't have handled it on my own.” Hearing my words, he simply smiled and replied, “We travelers watch out for one another—just pass it on when you can.” In that very moment, I resolved to pay forward the same kindness I had received to others. To this day, whenever I catch a glimpse of a bicycle, the memory of a stranger’s unexpected generosity continues to linger.
Wish you progress.

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