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(共10张PPT)
书信写作中的马氏太极---“接、化、发”
Learning Aims:
Learn to analyze the instructions
Learn to organize the text structure
Learn to write easily and standardly
“接”
“化”
“发”
应用文
书信类
非书信类
书信类
“接”
Find the characters
Figure out the matters
Know about the emotions
“Characters”
“Matters”
“Emotions”
I (Li Hua), Sir/Madam from the organization
application (self-introduction, competences)
be grateful if admitted; be expected
假定你是李华，从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore) 举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。
“化”
Head
Body
Ending
常用开头：
1. I’m writing to you on the purpose of...
2. (建议)It is my pleasure to give you some suggestions on...
3. (回复)I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble difficulties in.... Such
problems are quite formal.Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful.
4. (邀请)Thanks very much for your kind invitation. I feel quite honored that someone noticed me. I'd be delighted to accept the invitation.
常用结尾：
询问信: Your prompt attention to this letter would be highly appreciated.
请求信: I would like to thank you for your generous help in this matter.
道歉信: I sincerely hope that you will be able to accept my apologies.
感谢信: I must thank you again for your generous help.
建议信: I feel that it would be beneficial if ... / If I were you, I would ...
What
Why
How
is/was the matter like
does/did it happen
will you treat it
申请
What is the summer camp like
interested abilities
How to contribute
假定你是李华，从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore) 举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。
假定你是李华，从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore) 举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。
内容主要包括：
1. 自我介绍（包括英语能力）；
2. 参加意图（介绍中国、了解其他国家）；
3. 希望获准。
Body 1:
Body 2:
“发”---言简意赅 形意统一
Clarity
（清晰）
details
pronouns
Coherence
（连贯）
part of speech
Completeness（完整）
structure
content
Conciseness
(简洁)
words
phrases
Dear Sir or Madam，
The other day I happened to read your advertisement on the Internet, saying that you are holding a summer camp aimed at students from around the world, and I'm interested to participate in it.
I'm Li Hua, a middle school student in China. As a teenager, I'm interested in making friends with kids of my age from around the world. I can improve my English,communicating with people from other countries. What's more, your camp will provide a good chance for me to know a lot about other countries and tell them something about China.
I do hope that I can be lucky enough to be admitted to your camp.Looking forward to your reply.
Regards,
Li Hua
“发”“发”“发”
假定你是李华，某英文阅读app正在招聘数名兼职英文编辑，你对该职位很感兴趣。请用英语给负责招聘的Leslie先生写一封申请信。
注意：词数80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）。
谋篇布局：
第一部分：
表明写信目的；
第二部分：
表明动机/兴趣；
陈述个人优势；
表明决心。
第三部分：
期待对方回复。
Dear Mr. Leslie,
①I’m extremely excited/delighted/pleased/happy to hear that you are looking for several part-time English editors. So, I am writing to …
②Learning that some part-time English editors are needed, I am writing to……
……
① I hope that……
② I would appreciate it if ……
③ I look forward to ……
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
Dear Mr. Leslie,
I'm extremely excited to hear that you are looking for several part-time English editors, so I am writing to apply for the position.
As one of the top students in our school, I am skilled in writing and speak fluent English. Besides, I won first prize in the English writing competition held by our school last winter. What's more, I read English newspapers or magazines every day, which has greatly broadened my horizons. Last but not least, I am easygoing and always friendly to others.
I hope that my application will be considered and I am looking forward to your earliest reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Assignments
1.Polish your work
2. Write a letter to apologize to your classmate for breaking her favorite cup which was gifted by her father.

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