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2025-2026学年八年级下册英语期中复习考点培优译林版（新教材）
专题19 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack来信询问你家乡的变化以及你最喜欢的中国名胜古迹，请根据提示回复一封邮件。
提示：
1. 家乡的变化：道路更宽、高楼更多、交通更便利；
2. 最喜欢的名胜：长城，历史悠久、是世界奇迹，为之自豪；
3. 邀请对方来中国游玩。
要求：
1. 词数80词左右，邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 语句通顺，内容完整，可适当发挥。
Dear Jack,
I’m glad to receive your email. I’d like to tell you about the changes in my hometown and my favourite place of interest in China.
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Welcome to China! I’m sure you will have a great time here.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
2．请你写一篇短文，介绍中国的一处奇迹（古代或现代均可），谈谈它的特点以及它带给你的感受。
提示：
1. 介绍奇迹的名称、位置；
2. 描述它的主要特点；
3. 表达你的感受和对祖国的情感。
要求：
1. 词数80-100词左右；
2. 内容完整，条理清晰；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
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3．假设你是李华，你的笔友Tom想来中国游玩，并想了解你家乡的变化。请你根据以下提示，写一篇80词左右的短文。
要点提示：
1. 过去：房屋老旧、道路狭窄、出行不便；
2. 现在：高楼林立、道路宽阔、交通便捷；
3. 人们生活更好，你经常和家人周边旅行。
要求：
1. 包含所有要点，可适当发挥；
2. 条理清晰，语句通顺，书写规范；
3. 词数80左右。
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4．如今,科技影响着我们生活的方方面面,如快捷出行无忧、随时在线学习、购物足不出户、AI随问随答等。请以“How Technology Changes Our Lives”为题,根据所给提示,完成一篇90词左右的英语短文。开头已给出,不计入总词数。提示：1.What changes has technology brought us (Give 2 examples)
2.What is your favourite change brought by high technology
3.What are your thoughts on using technology
How Technology Changes Our Lives
Technology is developing faster than ever. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5．学校专栏正在开展“My Experience of a Visit”征文活动。请根据下面提示，用英文写一篇短文投稿。
写作提示：
1. Where did you visit
2. What activities did you do there
3. How did you feel after it
写作要求：1. 语言表达准确，逻辑清晰，语意通顺、连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实的校名或人名，80词左右。
My Experience of a Visit
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6．中国有许多令人惊叹的旅游胜地，吸引着世界各地的游客。请以“A Famous Tourist Attraction in China”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍一处你熟悉的中国著名旅游景点。要求：
1. 内容包括：景点名称、位置、特色以及你推荐它的理由；
2. 词数 80-100 左右；
3. 语句通顺，语法正确，条理清晰。
A Famous Tourist Attraction in China
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7．旅行能让我们感受到自然的魅力、历史的积淀和文化的传承。每个人在旅行中都有很多的收获和不同的体会。某英文网站正在开展一场题为“An Unforgettable Place I Have Been to”的征文活动，请用英语写一篇100词左右的短文投稿。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
提示问题：
- What is the unforgettable place you have been to
- What did you do there
- Why is it unforgettable
An Unforgettable Place I Have Been to
I have been to many places these years. An unforgettable place I have been to is _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom计划来中国旅游，他想了解中国的一个著名景点。请你根据以下提示，给Tom写一封电子邮件，向他介绍你最喜欢的一个中国著名景点。
提示：
1. What’s the name of the scenic spot and where is it
2. What is it famous for
3. What activities can you do there
注意：
1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3. 词数：80左右，邮件的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to hear that you’re going to travel to China. I’d like to introduce my favorite scenic spot to you.
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Yours,
Li Hua
9．请你以A trip to Suzhou为题写一篇短文，包括以下要点：
1. 上周你和家人一起乘长途汽车去了苏州；
2. 你们在那儿待了两天；
3. 第一天你们看了些著名的苏州园林，如拙政园 (Zhuozheng Garden)，留园 (Liu Garden)，还参观了一些水乡古街，并去了苏州博物馆和金鸡湖，拍了许多照片；
4. 第二天你们去购物，买了一些纪念品；
5. 你们玩得很开心，不会忘记这次有意义的经历。
字数80-100，条理清晰，语言准确。不得出现真实校名，姓名等。
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10．假如你是李华，你和家人去年暑假去了北京旅行。请根据以下提示，写一篇不少于 80 词的英语短文，分享你的旅行经历。
要点提示：
1. 北京是中国的首都，历史悠久，有许多名胜古迹；
2. 参观了长城和故宫，学到了很多关于中国历史的知识；
3. 品尝了当地美食，比如北京烤鸭；
4. 你的感受：这次旅行很有意义，希望以后还能再去。
要求：
1. 包含所有要点，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
3. 词数：80词左右。
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11．米莉曾在线参观过故宫博物馆，请根据以下内容，以米莉的口吻，为自己的参观经历写一篇文章。
Why I visited it be interested in history..
Which place I visited The Palace Museum(the Forbidden City)the home to emperors of Ming and Qing dynasties became a museum in 1925
What I saw Taihe Palace:the Dragon ThroneFengxian Palace:Clocks and Watches
How I felt amazing,convenient
1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3. 词数80左右。
My online tour of the Palace Museum
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12．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom来信说他对中国的传统节日很感兴趣。请你写一封回信，向他介绍一个你最喜欢的中国传统节日。内容包括：
1. 节日的名称和时间;
2. 庆祝方式 (至少两种);
3. 你喜爱这个节日的原因。
要求：
词数80左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数);
语句通顺，内容完整，可适当发挥。
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to know you’re interested in Chinese traditional festivals.
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
13．某公司有一代表团要去新加坡观光旅游，现要你作个旅行指导。请你根据提示写一篇80词左右的文章。
1. 新加坡位于马来西亚半岛的南端，由一个主岛和许多小岛组成。
2. 新加坡目前的人口有大约350万。大多数人说英语，有部分人说汉语和马来语(Malay)。
3. 新加坡有数个动物园，如：夜间野生动物园(the Night Safari); 新加坡动物园(the Singapore Zoological Garden)。在那里你可以看到许多珍奇动物(rare animals)。
4. 气候湿热，但夜晚较凉快。
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14．学校英语角正在举办以“Online Travel”为主题的征文活动，请你以“My Online Trip”为题，写一篇短文分享你的线上旅行经历。
要点提示：
1. 你线上游览了哪个地方？2. 你为什么选择游览这个地方？3. 你在游览中看到了什么？
4. 你的感受是什么？
注意事项：
(1) 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
(2) 文章必须包含所有要点，并适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
(3) 词数80词左右。
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15．在英语课上，同学们就当前抗击新冠疫情的形势，如何选择自己的旅游方式展开了讨论。
请你根据下表内容用英语写一篇短文，汇报讨论结果，并谈谈自己的想法。
线下旅游 1.有导游，不会迷路 2.不必自己找旅馆 3.……
线上旅游 1.自由安排时间 2.选择自己喜欢的任意景点 3.……
你的想法 1.…… 2.……
注意：1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯;必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥;
2. 词数在100左右;不得使用真实姓名和校名等。
3. 开头语已给出，不计入总词数。
Recently, we have discussed the ways to go travelling. Here is the result.
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16．5月5日阳光镇举办首届“书香节”。为响应“书香节”活动，你校校刊英文版正在开展以“I Like Reading”为主题的征文活动。请根据下表提示内容写一篇短文，介绍你对阅读的看法及个人的阅读情况。
The importance of reading open up one’s mind, get more knowledge
My reading habit when to read, where to read, what to read
My favourite book(s) …
My reading plan …
要求：
(1) 必须包含所给提示内容，并适当补充细节;
(2) 文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名;
(3) 不少于80词(短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
I Like Reading
Reading makes a full man. It’s important and necessary for everyone to read.
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17．5月5日阳光镇举办首届“书香节”。为响应“书香节”活动，你校校刊英文版正在开展以“I Like Reading”为主题的征文活动。请根据下表提示内容写一篇短文，介绍你对阅读的看法及个人的阅读情况。
The importance of reading open up one’s mind, get more knowledge
My reading habit when to read, where to read, what to read
My favourite book(s) …
My reading plan …
要求：
(1) 必须包含所给提示内容，并适当补充细节；
(2) 文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；
(3) 不少于80词（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
I Like Reading
Reading makes a full man. It’s important and necessary for everyone to read.
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Reading is a lifelong journey. I hope everyone can read as much as possible in the future.
18．你的朋友想找一本好书阅读，向你咨询阅读推荐。请你以“The Book I Recommend”为题，写一篇短文分享你推荐的书籍及推荐理由。
要求：
1. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称；
3. 重点使用一般现在时描述线上功能特征。
参考信息：
1. 推荐书籍的基本信息（书名、作者、类型、主要内容）；
2. 核心特色（人物塑造、情节设计、主题思想、语言风格）；
3. 阅读体验（个人感受、收获与启发、推荐理由）；
The Book I Recommend
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19．请你以“How to Read Widely”为题，谈谈你的看法。
写作要点
1.Why is reading widely useful to you
2.How do you usually read
3.What’s your advice
写作要求
1.文中不得出现真实校名和师生姓名；
2.文章必须包括所有写作要点；
3.词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
How to Read Widely
It’s useful for us to read widely.
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20．阅读点亮人生。暑期将至，同学们都准备利用假期的时间广泛地阅读，开阔视野，提高阅读能力，养成阅读习惯，做个阅读小达人。假如你是李华，请根据下面提示，给你的好朋友Jake写封邮件，向他推荐你最喜欢的一本书。
推荐书目
Journey to the West、Little Women、Treasure Island、Oliver Twist...
写作要求
(1) 写作内容需包含思维导图的提示信息，内容可适当发挥；
(2) 表达清晰，语法正确，逻辑合理，上下文连贯；
(3) 字迹工整，书写规范；
(4) 不得出现真实的姓名、校名；
(5) 词数 100 左右（文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Jake,
Summer vacation is coming soon. It is the best time for us to read books.
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Yours,
Li Hua
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
Dear Jack,
I’m glad to receive your email. I’d like to tell you about the changes in my hometown and my favourite place of interest in China.
My hometown has changed a lot: roads are wider, tall buildings stand everywhere, and traffic is easier—we can take subways to busy malls quickly now.
My favourite spot is the Great Wall. It has a 2,000-year history and it is a world wonder, and standing on its bricks feels like touching ancient stories. It winds across mountains like a huge dragon, attracting millions of visitors every year. I’m so proud of it.
Welcome to China! I’m sure you will have a great time here.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[写作步骤]
第一步：审题立意
确定文体：电子邮件（书信类），以一般现在时为主
明确要点：家乡的变化（道路、高楼、交通）、最喜欢的名胜（长城）、邀请对方游玩
确定人称：第一人称（I/my）
注意事项：不出现真实信息；词数80词左右（开头结尾已给出）
第二步：构思布局
主体段1：介绍家乡的变化
主体段2：介绍最喜欢的名胜（长城）
主体段3：发出游玩邀请
第三步：要点展开
要点一：家乡的变化
细节推荐：roads wider/ more tall buildings/ easier traffic（如：We can take buses or subways everywhere now）
要点二：最喜欢的名胜
细节推荐：the Great Wall（历史悠久：has a long history of thousands of years；世界奇迹：one of the world’s wonders；自豪：I feel proud of it）
要点三：邀请游玩
表达推荐：I really hope you can come and visit China
2． China has many amazing places, but the Great Wall is my favorite wonder. It stretches across the northern part of our country.
The Great Wall is incredibly long and old. When I stood on it, I felt like I was touching history. It looks just like a giant dragon winding its way over the mountains. I was deeply moved by the wisdom and hard work of ancient Chinese people who built this magnificent structure thousands of years ago.
Visiting the Great Wall made me feel incredibly proud to be Chinese. I love our motherland and I am proud of its long and glorious history.
【解析】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：说明文/记叙文，以一般现在时为主，夹杂个人感受.
明确要点：1.介绍：奇迹的名称、位置。2.描述：它的主要特点。3.表达：你的感受和对祖国的情感。
确定人称：第一人称（I/My）为主，第三人称（It/They）为辅。
注意事项：紧扣提示三点，控制词数，语言流畅。
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：开门见山，引出你所选择的“奇迹”及其位置。
主体段：详细描述该奇迹的外观、规模或历史背景等主要特点。
结尾段：总结你的参观或了解后的感受，升华主题，表达对祖国的热爱和自豪感。
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：开篇引入
引入句：China is home to many wonders. Among them, I am most impressed by...
具体信息：...the Great Wall. It runs across northern China.
要点二：描述特点
特点选择：规模宏大、历史悠久、工程浩大。
具体描述：It is very long and old. It looks like a huge dragon lying on the mountains. It was built thousands of years ago to protect the country. The ancient people built it with their hands, which was a great achievement.
要点三：表达感受与情感
感受描述：Standing on the Great Wall, I felt very excited and proud. It is a symbol of the wisdom and hard work of the Chinese people.
情感升华：I love our country and I am proud of our long history and culture.
3．例文：
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to hear you’re coming to China. Great changes have taken place in my hometown.
In the past, the houses were old and the roads were narrow, so it was not convenient for us to go out. But now, there are many tall buildings and wide roads. The traffic is much easier and faster. People live a better life. I often travel around with my family in our free time.
Welcome to my hometown! I’ll show you around then.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：书信体短文，以一般过去时和一般现在时为主
明确要点：家乡过去的状况（房屋老旧、道路狭窄、出行不便）、现在的变化（高楼林立、道路宽阔、交通便捷）、人们生活改善及个人休闲活动
确定人称：第一人称（I/we）
注意事项：包含所有要点，可适当发挥；条理清晰，语句通顺；词数80词左右
[第二步：构思布局]
采用三段式结构
开头段：回应Tom要来中国的消息，引出家乡的变化
主体段：对比家乡过去和现在的面貌，说明生活改善
结尾段：发出欢迎并承诺届时带他游览
[第三步：要点展开]
开头回应：I’m glad to hear you’re coming to China. Great changes have taken place in my hometown.
过去状况：In the past, the houses were old and the roads were narrow, so it was not convenient for us to go out.
现在变化：But now, there are many tall buildings and wide roads. The traffic is much easier and faster. People live a better life.
生活改善：I often travel around with my family in our free time.
结尾邀请：Welcome to my hometown! I’ll show you around then.
4．例文
How Technology Changes Our Lives
Technology is developing faster than ever. It has greatly changed our daily lives. For example, high-speed trains make our trips faster and more comfortable. We can take many useful online courses easily.
My favourite change is online shopping. In the past, I had to go to stores to buy things. It took much time and energy. Now I can buy almost everything at any time with a smartphone. It saves time and offers more choices.
I think technology makes our lives much more convenient. If we use it correctly, it will lead us to a better future.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：话题作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：需列举科技带来的两个变化、说明自己最喜欢的变化，并表达对使用科技的看法。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，总述科技带来变化；
第二步，明确自己最喜欢的变化并简述原因；
第三步，书写总结。
[亮点词汇]
①developing发展
②energy精力
③convenient方便的
[高分句型]
①I think technology makes our lives much more convenient. (运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句)
②If we use it correctly, it will lead us to a better future. (运用了If 引导的条件状语从句)
5．
例文
My Experience of a Visit
Last Sunday, I visited the city science museum.
First, I watched a robot show. The robots could dance and talk! And I had a talk with the robot. It could act like humans. Next, I tried to experience some simple machines in the hall. A guide kindly explained how they worked. Last, I learnt something about space.
It was exciting and interesting to see science technology. I truly understood that learning happens best by doing. After this visit, I decided to learn science well.
【解析】写作步骤
【第一步：审题立意】
确定文体：记叙文，描述一次参观经历，以一般过去时为主
明确要点：参观时间、活动内容、感受与收获
确定人称：第一人称(I/my)
注意事项：按时间顺序描述活动，表达真情实感
【第二步：构思布局】
三段式结构：
开头段：交代参观时间、地点（Last Sunday, I visited...）
主体段：按参观顺序描述活动，用First, Next, Last等连接词
结尾段：总结感受，升华主题（认识到实践学习的重要性，下决心学好科学）
【第三步：要点展开】
要点一：参观活动
活动内容：watch a robot show/talk with robots/experience simple machines/learn about space
具体描述：robots could dance and talk/act like humans/guide explained how they worked
感受：exciting and interesting
要点二：收获与决心
收获：truly understood that learning happens best by doing
决心：decide to learn science well
6．参考范文：
A Famous Tourist Attraction in China
The Great Wall, located in northern China, is a globally renowned tourist attraction. Stretching over 13,000 miles, it’s truly a marvel of ancient engineering skills.
The Wall meanders through mountains and valleys, presenting breathtaking vistas. Its massive stones and sturdy towers vividly showcase historical grandeur.
I wholeheartedly recommend visiting it. Walking on the Wall, you can deeply feel the weight of history. It’s not just a structure; it’s a timeless symbol of China’s resilience and strength, luring countless visitors worldwide.
【解析】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：介绍性说明文，用一般现在时为主
明确要点：景点名称（The Great Wall）、位置（northern China）、特色（ancient engineering skills、breathtaking vistas、historical grandeur）、推荐理由（feel the weight of history、timeless symbol of China’s resilience and strength）
确定人称：第三人称（it）
注意事项：语句通顺，语法正确，条理清晰
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：总起句，介绍景点名称和位置
主体段：分别介绍景点特色
结尾段：总结推荐理由，升华主题
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：景点名称和位置
景点名称：The Great Wall/the Terracotta Army/the Forbidden City等
位置描述：located in northern China/in the east/south/west of China/in Shaanxi Province等
要点二：景点特色
特色描述：marvel of ancient engineering skills/ancient cultural relics/magnificent architecture等
具体说明：meanders through mountains and valleys, presenting breathtaking vistas/stands tall and proud, showing historical significance/is filled with historical stories等
作用效果：vividly showcase historical grandeur/make people feel amazed/attract people’s attention等
要点三：推荐理由
推荐理由：wholeheartedly recommend visiting it/strongly suggest going there等
具体说明：Walking on the Wall, you can deeply feel the weight of history./Visiting it, you can learn a lot about Chinese history./You can enjoy beautiful scenery there.等
升华主题：It’s not just a structure; it’s a timeless symbol of China’s resilience and strength, luring countless visitors worldwide./It represents Chinese culture and attracts people from all over the world.等
7．范文：
An Unforgettable Place I Have Been to
I have been to many places these years. An unforgettable place I have been to is Guangzhou.
Last summer vacation, I went to Guangzhou with my friends. When we got there, we started to hang out in the street. The first thing was to find something to eat. There were so many delicious snacks. It was hard for us to choose what to eat.
After finishing eating, we started to go shopping. Guangzhou is famous for the foreign trade and its clothes are fashionable and cheap. At last, we bought many clothes.
This trip is so unforgettable to me because Guangzhou is a wonderful place for eating and shopping. I really enjoyed myself during the trip.
【解析】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：介绍性记叙文，以一般过去时为主，讲述一次难忘的旅行经历
明确要点：介绍难忘的地点，描述在那里的活动，说明难忘的原因
确定人称：第一人称（I）
注意事项：词数100词左右，语言流畅，书写规范，开头已给出不计入总词数，不得透露真实姓名和学校名称
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：已给出，点明自己去过很多地方，引出难忘的地点是广州
主体段：详细描述去年暑假和朋友去广州的经历，包括品尝美食和购物的过程
结尾段：总结这次旅行难忘的原因，表达自己的感受
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：旅行经历
难忘地点：Guangzhou/Beijing/Guilin
活动内容：hang out in the street/find delicious snacks/go shopping/buy many clothes
时间与同伴：last summer vacation/with my friends/with my family
要点二：感受与启发
难忘原因：wonderful place for eating and shopping/enjoyed myself/experienced local culture
8．例文:
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to hear that you’re going to travel to China. I’d like to introduce my favorite scenic spot to you. It’s the Great Wall, located in northern China and stretching across several provinces with awe-inspiring grandeur and mystery.
The Great Wall is famous for its grand scale and profound historical significance. It was built over centuries to protect China from invaders, truly showcasing ancient Chinese wisdom.
There, you can walk along the ancient wall, enjoying breathtaking views and fresh air. You can also take memorable photos. I’m sure you’ll have an unforgettable experience.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：介绍性邮件，用一般现在时为主
明确要点：景点名称及位置、景点闻名原因、在景点可进行的活动
确定人称：第一人称（I/my）、第三人称（it）
注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：引出要介绍的景点
主体段：分别介绍景点位置、闻名原因和可进行的活动
结尾段：总结，表达相信对方会有难忘体验
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：景点名称及位置
景点名称：the Great Wall/the Forbidden City/the Summer Palace等
位置描述：located in northern China and stretching across several provinces/situated in the east of China/lying in the south of...等
要点二：景点闻名原因
闻名原因：famous for its grand scale and profound historical significance等
具体说明：It was built over centuries to protect China from invaders, truly showcasing ancient Chinese wisdom and remarkable strength.等
要点三：在景点可进行的活动
活动内容：walk along the ancient wall, enjoying breathtaking views and fresh air/visit the museums inside, learning about the history of the place等
其他活动：take memorable photos and learn rich history from guides/buy some souvenirs and taste local specialties等
9．例文
A trip to Suzhou Last week, my family and I went to Suzhou by coach. We stayed there for two days.
On the first day, we visited some famous gardens like Zhuozheng Garden and Liu Garden. They were very beautiful. Then we walked along the old streets and went to Suzhou Museum and Jinji Lake. We took many photos there. The next day, we did some shopping and bought nice souvenirs.
We enjoyed ourselves very much. This trip was so meaningful that I will never forget it.
【解析】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确认文体：这是一篇游记类记叙文，时态以一般过去时为主
明确要点：需包含出行时间、交通工具、停留时间、第一天活动、第二天活动、整体感受
确定人称：第一人称 (I, my, we, us)
注意事项：不得出现真实校名和姓名
[第二步：构思布局]
四段式结构：
开头段：介绍出行时间、交通工具和停留时间
主体段：描述第一天的游览活动 (园林、水乡、博物馆、金鸡湖、拍照) 和第二天的活动 (购物、买纪念品)
结尾段：表达整体感受，点明意义
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：出行概况
出行时间：Last week / a few days ago / last weekend等
出行人员：my family and I / my parents and I / with my family等
交通工具：by coach / by bus / by car / by train等
目的地：went to Suzhou / traveled to Suzhou等
停留时间：stayed there for two days / spent two days there等
具体说明：Last week, my family and I went to Suzhou by coach. We stayed there for two days.
要点二：活动
景点和地点：Zhuozheng Garden / Liu Garden / old water towns / Suzhou Museum / Jinji Lake / shops / stores / shopping streets等
活动描述：visited famous gardens / saw Zhuozheng Garden and Liu Garden / walked along the old water towns / visited ancient streets / went to Suzhou Museum / went to Jinji Lake / took many photos / did some shopping / bought nice souvenirs等
感受评价：were very beautiful / amazing / wonderful等
具体说明：On the first day, we visited some famous gardens like Zhuozheng Garden and Liu Garden. They were very beautiful. Then we walked along the old water towns and went to Suzhou Museum and Jinji Lake. We took many photos there.
要点三：整体感受
快乐表达：enjoyed ourselves very much / had a great time / had lots of fun等
意义表达：so meaningful / unforgettable / a trip to remember等
具体说明：We enjoyed ourselves very much. This trip was so meaningful that I will never forget it.
10．
例文
I went to Beijing with my family last summer vacation. Beijing is the capital of China. It has a long history and there are many places of interest.We visited the Great Wall and the Palace Museum. I learned a lot about Chinese history from this trip. We also tasted delicious local food, especially Beijing Roast Duck. It was wonderful.
I think this trip was very meaningful. I had a great time in Beijing. I hope I can visit it again in the future.
【解析】写作步骤
【第一步：审题立意】
确定文体：记叙文，以一般过去时为主
明确要点：北京的城市定位、游览经历、美食体验、个人感受
确定人称：第一人称（I/my/we）。
注意事项：词数不少于 80 词，需包含所有要点，可适当发挥。
【第二步：构思布局】
三段式结构：
开头段：总起句，点明旅行时间、人物与目的地。
主体段：分层次介绍 —— 先介绍北京的城市特点，再讲述参观景点、品尝美食的经历。
结尾段：总结旅行感受，表达对北京的喜爱与再次前往的愿望，升华主题。
【第三步：要点展开】
要点一：北京城市介绍
核心描述：the capital of China、has a long history、many places of interest。
要点二：游览经历
景点选择：the Great Wall、the Palace Museum。
活动与收获：visited...、learned a lot about Chinese history。
要点三：美食体验
美食选择：Beijing Roast Duck。
感受描述：tasted delicious local food、it was very delicious。
要点四：个人感受
核心表达：meaningful、unforgettable、hope to visit again。
11．
例文
My online tour of the Palace Museum
I visited the Palace Museum online because I’m very interested in Chinese history.
The Palace Museum is also called the Forbidden City. It was the home to emperors of Ming and Qing dynasties and became a museum in 1925. During the tour, I saw the Dragon Throne in Taihe Palace. I also saw many old clocks and watches in Fengxian Palace.
The experience was amazing. I also found it convenient to visit museums online. I hope to visit it in person one day.
【解析】[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：介绍性记叙文，以一般过去时为主，讲述一次线上参观故宫的经历
明确要点：参观原因、参观地点、参观内容、感受与收获
确定人称：第一人称(I/my)
注意事项：需包含以上要点，词数不少于80
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：交代参观原因( I’m very interested in Chinese history.)
主体段：描述参观地点(The Palace Museum)，所见内容(Taihe Palace:the Dragon Throne/Fengxian Palace:Clocks and Watches)
结尾段：总结感受，升华主题。
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：点明原因
I visited the Palace Museum online because I’m very interested in Chinese history.
要点二：描述参观地点及所见内容
地点：The Palace Museum is also called the Forbidden City. It was the home to emperors of Ming and Qing dynasties and became a museum in 1925.
内容：During the tour, I saw the Dragon Throne in Taihe Palace. I also saw many old clocks and watches in Fengxian Palace.
要点三：抒发感受与展望
The experience was amazing. I also found it convenient to visit museums online. I hope to visit it in person one day.
12．
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to know you’re interested in Chinese traditional festivals. I’d like to introduce the Spring Festival to you.
It usually falls in January or February. Before the festival, we clean our houses carefully to sweep away bad luck. On New Year’s Eve, all family members get together and enjoy a big, delicious dinner. We also watch the Spring Festival Gala and chat happily. Children can receive red envelopes with lucky money.
I love this festival because it’s full of warmth and joy, and it’s the best time for family reunion.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【解析】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：应用文（书信），时态以一般现在时为主
明确要点：节日名称与具体时间，至少两种庆祝方式，喜爱该节日的原因
确定人称：第一人称（I/my）
注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：承接来信，点明要介绍的中国传统节日
主体段：分别介绍节日时间与具体庆祝方式
结尾段：总结喜爱节日的原因，升华情感
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：节日名称与时间
节日选择：the Spring Festival/the Mid-Autumn Festival等
时间描述：It usually falls in January or February/on the 15th day of the 8th lunar month, usually in September or October等
补充说明：It is the most important traditional festival in China/a festival for family reunion等
要点二：庆祝方式
方式选择：clean our houses/have a big family dinner/watch the Spring Festival Gala/chat happily/get red envelopes/admire the full moon/eat mooncakes等
场景描述：before the festival/on New Year’s Eve/on the festival night等
作用效果：It carries our best wishes for the new year/makes our family bonds stronger/brings us warmth and happiness等
要点三：喜爱的原因
原因选择：family reunion/warmth and joy/new hope/peaceful and beautiful atmosphere等
具体说明：It’s the best time for all family members to get together./I can feel the deep love from my family./It makes me cherish the time with loved ones.等
13．例文
Singapore is on the southern tip of the Malay Peninsula. It is mainly made up of a large island and many other small ones. The population of Singapore is about 3.5 million now. Many people speak English. However, some of them speak Chinese and Malay. Singapore has several zoos, such as the Night Safari and the Singapore Zoological Garden, where you can see many kinds of rare animals. The weather in Singapore is hot and humid, but it gets cooler in the evenings.
【解析】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：说明文，用一般现在时
明确要点：位置、人口、语言、景点及气候
确定人称：第三人称（It）
注意事项：需表述完整，语义连贯
[第二步：构思布局]
四部分式结构：
开头部分：介绍位置及地理概况
第二部分：介绍人口及语言
第三部分：介绍动物园
第四部分：介绍气候特征
[第三步：要点展开]
位置选择：on the southern tip of the Malay Peninsula/a large island等
人口描述：about 3.5 million
语言描述：English/Chinese/Malay
动物园描述：the Night Safari/the Singapore Zoological Garden/many kinds of rare animals
气候描述：hot/humid/gets cooler
14．例文
My Online Trip
Last month, I took an online trip to the Palace Museum. I chose it because I have always been interested in Chinese history and old buildings.
During the trip, I saw many wonderful halls and precious treasures online. The guide told me interesting stories about each exhibit. I also “walked” through the beautiful gardens with old trees.
This online tour was really amazing. I felt so excited and proud. Online travel is a great way to learn about the world without leaving home.
【解析】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：介绍性记叙文，以一般过去时为主，讲述一次线上旅行经历
明确要点：说明线上游览的地点、选择原因、所见内容及个人感受
确定人称：第一人称（I）
注意事项：词数80词左右，语言流畅，书写规范，不得透露真实姓名和学校名称
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：点明线上旅行的时间和地点，说明选择此处的原因
主体段：详细描述线上游览时看到的景物和体验
结尾段：总结这次线上旅行的感受和收获
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：旅行描述
地点：the Palace Museum/the West Lake
选择原因：have always been interested in Chinese history and old buildings/love beautiful natural scenery
所见内容：wonderful halls and precious treasures/old trees and quiet paths in the garden
行动与体验：The guide told me interesting stories about each exhibit./“walked” around the place online
要点二：感受与启发
感受：felt excited and proud/felt relaxed and peaceful
启发：Online travel is a great way to learn about the world/we can enjoy nice views without leaving home
15．
例文：
Recently, we have discussed the ways to go travelling. Here is the result.
Some students like offline travel. They think it is convenient because there is a guide to show the way, so they won’t get lost. Also, they don’t need to find hotels by themselves. They can just relax and enjoy the trip.
Other students prefer online travel. They say they can arrange their time freely and visit any scenic spot they like. It saves money and is safer during the pandemic.
In my opinion, both ways are good. When the situation is safe, I choose offline travel to feel the real beauty. But if the virus is serious, online travel is a wise choice.
【解析】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：议论文，以一般现在时为主
明确要点：线下旅游的优点、线上旅游的优点、自己的观点
确定人称：第三人称（some students/they）和第一人称（I/my）
注意事项：需涵盖表格所有信息，并适当发挥个人想法
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：已给出，概括讨论主题
主体段：分别介绍线下旅游和线上旅游的优点
结尾段：表达自己的观点和选择理由
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：线下旅游
有导游：guide shows the way/won’t get lost/know the history等
住宿方便：don’t need to find hotels/booked in advance/save trouble等
其他优点：see real views/take photos/taste local food等
要点二：线上旅游
时间自由：arrange time freely/travel anytime/no time limit等
景点选择：visit any scenic spot/choose favorite places/no crowd等
其他优点：save money/safe during pandemic/no travel stress等
要点三：个人想法
选择依据：when situation is safe/if virus is serious等
线下理由：feel the real beauty/enjoy the atmosphere/experience local culture等
线上理由：wise choice/safe and convenient/protect health等
16．例文：
I Like Reading
Reading makes a full man. It’s important and necessary for everyone to read.
In my opinion, reading can open up our minds and help us get more knowledge. I usually read for an hour after finishing my homework every day. My favourite place to read is the school library because it is very quiet. I like reading different kinds of books. But my favourite book is The Little Prince. It is a touching story and it always brings me some new thoughts. In the future, I plan to read more famous books and spend more time sharing my reading experiences with my classmates.
Reading is a lifelong journey. Let’s read!
【解析】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：说明文，以一般现在时为主
明确要点：阅读的重要性、个人阅读习惯、最喜欢的书、未来阅读计划
确定人称：第一人称（I）
注意事项：必须包含所有提示内容并补充细节；文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；不少于80词，开头和结尾已给出不计入总词数
[第二步：构思布局]
采用三段式结构
开头段：使用题目给出的开头句，点明阅读的重要性
主体段：依次介绍阅读的意义、个人阅读习惯、最喜欢的书及未来阅读计划
结尾段：使用题目给出的结尾句，升华阅读的意义
[第三步：要点展开]
阅读的重要性：In my opinion, reading can open up our minds and help us get more knowledge.
个人阅读习惯：I usually read for an hour after finishing my homework every day. My favourite place to read is the school library because it is very quiet. I like reading different kinds of books.
最喜欢的书：But my favourite book is The Little Prince. It is a touching story and it always brings me some new thoughts.
未来阅读计划：In the future, I plan to read more famous books and spend more time sharing my reading experiences with my classmates.
结尾升华：Reading is a lifelong journey. Let’s read!
17．例文
I Like Reading
Reading makes a full man. It’s important and necessary for everyone to read.
In my opinion, reading can open up our minds and help us get more knowledge. I have developed a good habit of reading. I usually read for an hour after finishing my homework every day. My favourite place to read is the school library because it is very quiet. I like reading different kinds of books, such as history books and science books. My favourite book is The Little Prince. It is a touching story and it always brings me some new thoughts. In the future, I plan to read more famous books and spend more time sharing my reading experiences with my classmates.
Reading is a lifelong journey. I hope everyone can read as much as possible in the future.
【解析】[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：介绍性说明文，以一般现在时为主，介绍阅读计划时可用一般将来时。
明确要点：阅读的重要性（开阔心胸、获取知识）、阅读习惯（时间、地点、内容）、最喜爱的书、阅读计划。
确定人称：第一人称（I/my）。
注意事项：必须包含所有提示内容；不得透露真实姓名和校名；首尾句已给出。
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：总起句（已给出），点出阅读的重要性和必要性。
主体段：具体介绍阅读习惯、喜爱的书籍以及未来的阅读计划。
结尾段：总结感受（已给出），表达对未来阅读生活的期待。
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：阅读的重要性
核心表达：open up one’s mind开阔眼界；get more knowledge获取更多知识；see a bigger world看到更大的世界。
要点二：阅读习惯
时间选择：after school放学后；on weekends在周末；before going to bed睡觉前。
地点描述：in the library在图书馆；in my study在书房；under a tree在树下。
内容涵盖：storybooks故事书；history books历史书；science books科学书。
要点三：最喜爱的书
书名推荐：The Little Prince《小王子》；Journey to the West《西游记》等。
推荐理由：touching感人的；exciting令人兴奋的；full of imagination充满想象力的。
要点四：阅读计划
具体打算：read at least two books a month一个月至少读两本书；visit the library once a week每周去一次图书馆；share thoughts with friends与朋友分享感悟。
18．例文
The Book I Recommend
I would like to recommend The Alchemist by Paulo Coelho, an inspiring novel that tells the story of a shepherd boy’s journey to find his personal legend. We can read this book online. It is clear and convenient. This book combines adventure with deep wisdom. The main character Santiago learns important life lessons. The simple yet powerful language makes it easy to read, while the meaningful messages stay with you long after finishing.
It has taught me to pursue my goals bravely. I’m sure it will inspire you too!
【解析】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：说明文，用一般现在时为主
明确要点：介绍书籍和线上阅读，核心特色与阅读体验
确定人称：第一人称(I)
注意事项：不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构
开头段：开门见山推荐书籍，写明书名、作者、类型及线上功能
主体段：简述内容及语言亮点
结尾段：分享个人感受与推荐理由，结尾表达对朋友的祝愿
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：介绍书籍和线上阅读
推荐的书：The Alchemist
书的作者：Paulo Coelho
书的类型：an inspiring novel
书的内容：a shepherd boy’s journey to find his personal legend
线上功能：clear and convenient
要点二：核心特色
内容评价：adventure, wisdom, learns important life lessons
语言评价：simple yet powerful, easy to read, meaningful
要点三：阅读体验
推荐理由：pursue my goals bravely, inspire
19．例文
How to Read Widely
It’s useful for us to read widely. Reading widely can open our eyes, enrich our knowledge and help us understand the world better. It also improves our writing skills and makes our life more colorful.
I usually read different kinds of books, such as history, science and novels. I often read in my free time, especially on weekends. I take small notes when I read something useful.
Here is my advice. First, we should choose books we are interested in. Second, we should keep reading every day. Third, we can share good books with friends. If we keep doing this, we will surely get a lot from reading widely.
【解析】[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：说明文，以一般现在时为主
明确要点：广泛阅读的好处、自己通常的阅读方式、阅读建议
确定人称：第一人称
注意事项：词数控制在100词左右；内容要包括所有要点；文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：引出话题，说明广泛阅读对我们有用
主体段：介绍自己通常的阅读方式
结尾段：给出阅读建议
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：广泛阅读的好处
开阔眼界：open our eyes
丰富知识：enrich our knowledge
提升写作技能：improve our writing skills
要点二：自己通常的阅读方式
读不同种类的书：read different kinds of books
在空闲时间读：read in my free time
做小笔记：take small notes when I read something useful
要点三：阅读建议
选择感兴趣的书：choose books we are interested in
坚持每天阅读：keep reading every day
和朋友分享好书：share good books with friends
20．例文
Dear Jake,
Summer vacation is coming soon. It is the best time for us to read books.
My favourite book is Journey to the West. My uncle gave it to me as a special birthday gift two years ago. It tells the exciting story of the Monkey King and his three companions on a long, dangerous journey to get sacred scriptures. I like it best because the Monkey King is brave, clever and always tries his best to solve difficult problems. It also teaches me to keep trying and never give up when facing difficulties in our study and life. I really hope you will love this great book and learn a lot from it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：主要为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，围绕推荐书籍展开，包含书籍来源、内容、喜欢原因及感悟，要点完整，语言流畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步：引出话题，说明暑假是读书的好时间；
第二步，介绍最喜欢的书《西游记》，包括书籍来源、主要内容；
第三步，说明喜欢的原因，阐述从中得到的启示并表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①favourite book 最喜欢的书
②as a special birthday gift 作为一份特别的生日礼物
③face difficulties 面对困难
[高分句型]
①It tells the exciting story of the Monkey King and his three companions. (of构成名词所有格，表所属)
②It also teaches me to keep trying and never give up when facing difficulties. (when引导时间状语从句的省略结构)
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