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Unit 1 The secrets of happiness
第5课时
(Developing ideas—Writing)
外研·七年级下册
Look and review
Do you remember...
1.Who is the main character of the story
2.What did he do
3.How did he feel
Zhou Jian.
He had his long hair cut and sent the hair to the City Children’s Hospital to help the kids with cancer.
He felt happy.
Think and share
What can you learn from Zhou Jian’s story
How do you feel when you help others
Do you have any similar story about feeling happy through helping others
Writing task
Write a short story about feeling happy through helping others.
Step 1
Organise your ideas by answering the following questions.
When and where did the story happen
Who is the main character of the story
What problem did he/she face
What did he/she do to solve the problem
What did he/she feel
When and where did the story happen
Who is the main character of the story
What problem did he/she face
What did he/she do to solve the problem
What did he/she feel
...often volunteers at a children’s hospital.
It happened at.../Last...
...found the children there really needed...
...felt pity for the children because...
...tried his/her best to make them happy/less lonely.
...taught them…
...felt...to help the children.
Helping others is one of the secrets of happiness.
Step 2
Use your ideas to write your story.
Remember to:
include characters, a setting and events.
use the words and expressions from the reading passage.
give your opinion about the secrets of happiness.
Sample
Last Saturday, Ma Yang went to the park with his mum. He played with his new toy car. He felt happy. However, there was a boy crying.
“What’s wrong with him ” Ma Yang asked his mum.
“That boy’s family is poor, and he doesn’t have any toys to play with.”
Ma Yang felt sad for the boy. Then he had an idea. “Would you like to play with my car ” he asked the boy.
“Really Thank you!” The boy smiled, and they started playing together.
When it was time to go home, Ma Yang asked his mum, “Can I give my toy car to the boy ”
“Yes, Yangyang, you can. That’s very kind of you.”
Ma Yang handed the car to the boy. “You can keep it, and we can be friends,” he said. The boy was very happy.
Ma Yang learnt an important lesson that day. Helping others is one of the secrets of happiness.
Sample
Step 3
Check your story.
Did you:
include characters, a setting and events
use the words and expressions from the reading passage
give your opinion about the secrets of happiness
Step 4
Share your story with the class.
Further polish your writing according to the evaluation criteria.
Homework

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