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Writing
Key question
Why do we need trees
Unit 3 Trees and us
主题范畴：人与自然
写一篇植树节的现场报道脚本
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Pre-writing
dig
hole
stick
v. 掘（地）;凿（洞）;挖（土）
n. 洞；孔；坑
n. 棍；条
New words and phrases
1 Look at the pictures from Tree Planting Day and discuss what the
students are doing. Use the expressions below to help you.
dig a deep hole use a stick to support the sapling
plant a sapling into the hole water the sapling
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挖一个深坑
用木棍支撑树苗
把树苗种植到坑里
给树苗浇树
1. use a stick to support the sapling
句意：用木棍支撑树苗
use sth. to do 用某物做某事
2. Call on students to join.
句意：号召学生参与。
call on sb. to do sth. 号召某人做某事
Language points
Part 1:
Part 2:
Part 3:
Structure (谋篇布局)
Brief introduction
What the students at the scene are doing
Closing words
Plan and think
Decide what you are going to write about.
Think of a topic sentence for each part.
Organize the information based on the notes on page 44.
Add details or examples to support the topic sentences.
Write your article
Part 1:
Part 2:
Part 3:
Brief introduction
What the students at the scene are doing
Closing words
1. 文体：
2. 人称：
3. 语言风格：
4. 时态：
5. 写作要点：_______ 个要点，包含：
Brief introduction
Action
Closing words
记叙文
第一人称及第三人称
客观描述
现在进行时
三
Step 1: 题干细审
Step 2: 句型点拨
1. 一些男孩子正在挖树坑。
Some boys _____ _______ _____.
2. 现在是时候把小树苗栽进坑里了。
_____ _____ _____ plant a sapling into the hole.
3. 我们可以用一根棍子来支撑小树苗。
We can _____ _____ _____ _____ support the sapling.
4. 你想加入我们吗？
Would you like _____ _____ us
are digging holes
It’s time to
use a stick to
to join
Step 3: 谋篇布局
Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Some boys _____ ______ _____ (正在挖坑). Other girls are carrying the saplings to each hole. After that, it’s time to plant every sapling into the hole. And then, they use a stick _____ _______ (去支撑) the saplings. In the end, they ________ (给……浇水) the saplings.
are digging holes
to support
water
Step 4: 扩充成文
Hello, tree lovers! Today is 12 March-Tree Planting Day. Some Grade 7 students are here in People's e with me to see what is happening.
Some boys are are digging holes. Other girls are carrying the saplings to each hole. After that, it’s time to plant every sapling into the hole. And then, they are using a stick to support the saplings. In the end, they water the saplings. What great jobs they are doing!
Do you want to help us plant trees If yes, come over to People's Park right now!
Post-writing
Check and revise 检查和修改
Tick (√) the boxes to check your writing, and then revise it.
根据下面的清单检查和修改作文。
I wrote about Tree Planting Day in a lively and engaging way.
I used the present continuous to describe the activities.
I used the words and expressions I learnt in this unit.
I used correct spelling, grammar and punctuation.
Grade and share
Elements要素 Level档次
Content内容(6分) 要点齐全，切合题意
适当发挥
Accuracy准确性(6分) 语法，大小写，拼写等格式错误
语言使用恰当，丰富
Fluency流畅性(3分) 分段，书写，衔接，过渡
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