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小升初真题汇编专题-书面表达（含解析）适用于外研版（三起）地区
一、命题作文
1．以My Favourite Festival为题，写一篇小作文 。
要求：描述清楚，语句通顺，表达准确，字迹工整。不少于5句话。
My Favourite Festival
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2．书面表达。
请以“Family rules”为题, 写一写你在家里需要注意的事项, 不少于5句话。
Family rules
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3．中国传统节日—春节即将来临，在节日期间人们贴春联、吃大餐、看春晚、走亲朋...，请你以The Spring Festival为题写一篇短文。
提示：put up张贴、couplet对联、watch the Spring Festival Gala看春晚、relative亲戚，
要求：书写规范，语句通顺，不少于50词。
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4．请以“My Favourite Festival”为题，写一篇小短文。不少于5句话
参考节日：the Spring Festival the Mid-Autumn Festival
the Dragon Boat Festival the Lantern Festiva
My Favourite Festival
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二、提纲作文
5．说一说你今天一日三餐吃的食物，分别花了多少钱，要求句子通顺，不少于五句话。
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6．根据提示，用你学过的句型描述一下你的笔友Mike。
Name: Mike Age: 12 City: London, the UK : I can speak some French. I like and . I love my . And I love too!
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7．书面表达
假如你是Linda，今天过生日，请你用现在进行时描述一下生日派对的热闹情景吧！至少六句话。
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8．第24届冬奥会将于2022年在北京举行。假如你将作为一名入选北京冬奥会的小学生志愿者，请用英语向外国友人们介绍一下我们美丽的首都北京吧！
要求：不拘泥于提示内容，展开丰富的想象，写一篇不少于50词的小作文。
Location (位置): in the north of China
How big: about twenty million
How old: more than three thousand years old
Famous: people all over the world go there every year
Weather: cold, windy, snowy
You can visit: the Great Wall, Tian 'anmen Square (天安门广场), the Forbidden City (故宫), the Summer Palace (颐和园), Bird's Nest Stadium (鸟巢体育馆)
You can see: panda, chopsticks, dragon kite, tea, lantern
You can eat: Roast Duck (烤鸭), dumplings …
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三、图画作文
9．小练笔。
这是一张中国地图。请根据地图及所给信息介绍这几个城市的位置。
Beijing—north
Shanghai—east
Lhasa—west
Guangzhou—south
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10．假如你是Daming，请结合下周的天气情况为自己的课后活动制订计划吧。
Monday Tuesday Wednesday Thursday Friday
Weather
Activities play football
要求：书写规范，语句通顺，不少于40词。
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11．用There be句型，看图写一篇小短文
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12．书面表达
炎炎夏日，去海边旅游是件令人惬意的事。请你根据图片用50词左右描绘一下海滩上的情景。
四、其他作文
13．写作。
2018年6月，上海合作组织峰会在青岛成功举办，现在用你所学的知识给参会人员介绍一下青岛吧。
要求：语法正确，语句通顺，不少于五句话。
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14．模仿范例进行仿写，不少于5句话。
15．小作文。请你以“My Favourite Subject”为题写一篇作文，介绍你最喜欢的地
一门学科。
内容包括：说明你喜欢的理由，该学科每周有几节课，在课堂上你最喜欢干什么。
并对该学科的老师做一个简单介绍^
要求：⑴书写认真，字迹清楚。⑵不要出现自己的真实姓名。⑶用5-6句话完成短文。
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16．写作。请模仿例子，设计一张自己的名片。
Name: Jim
Age: 12
Address: London, England
I can speak French.
I like music, riding my bicycle and collecting stamps.
参考答案：
1．范文：
My Favourite Festival
Among the four seasons, I like summer best. There are three main reasons for it. First, although summer is hot, I can do many things that I like. In summer, I can eat watermelons and ice cream. And I can go swimming with my friends in our school’s swimming pool. It’s really fun. Second, in summer, I can wear my beautiful dresses and skirts every day. Third, we will have our summer holidays for almost two months. We can go travelling with our parents. These are the reasons why I like summer.
【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称写出自己喜欢的季节。然后再阐述喜欢该季节的原因以及在该季节可以做的事情。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：favourite最喜欢，season季节，summer夏天，although尽管，watermelons西瓜，beautiful漂亮的，go travelling去旅行
参考句型：My favourite season is …； I like … ；I can …； I often …；We will...；We can...
2．范文
Family rules
Don't talk loudly at home. Don't watch too much TV from Monday to Friday. Don't eat on the bed. Don't get up too late on Saturdays and Sundays. Don't make noise at night.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求用祈使句写出家庭规则。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。
2.参考词汇与句型：
参考词汇：loudly大声地； get up； make noise
参考句型：Don't…
3．范文：
The Spring Festival
The Spring Festival comes in winter. It is the most important traditional festival in China. People usually go home to spend the festival with their family. They put up couplets and have a big family get-together. The Chinese people watch the Spring Festival Gala. They also visit their friends and relatives. Children like the Spring Festival very much, because they needn’t go to school and they have a lot of time to play.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称介绍春节。具体阐述春节的活动，包括贴春联、吃大餐、看春晚、走亲朋等。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合单词数量要求。
2.参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：traditional festival传统节日，go home回家，put up张贴，couplet对联，watch the Spring Festival Gala，relative亲戚，a lot of许多
参考句型：It is…；People usually…；They also…；
4．范文：
The Mid-Autumn Festival is my favorite festival. On that day, my mother cooks a big dinner for us. My father sings songs about the moon, we can eat moon cakes. They are very delicious. At night, we can watch the moon. I like the Mid-Autumn Festival very much. Do you like it
【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以“My Favourite Festival”为题，写一篇小短文。可以描写中国的传统节日，可以描述这一天家人所做的事情。注意文章为一般现在时态。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：the Spring Festival春节，the Mid-Autumn Festival中秋节，the Dragon Boat Festival端午节，the Lantern Festival腊八节；moon月亮，moon cakes月饼，watch the moon赏月，delicious美味的
参考句型：…is my favorite festival；On that day, my mother/father… ；We can...；They are...；I like...
5．范文：
I am a pupil. I have milk and bread for breakfast this morning. It is 10 yuan. I have a sandwich and an apple for lunch. It's 20 yuan. I have dinner with my family. My mother cooks beef and vegetables and some fruit salad. I don't know the price of the dinner.
【详解】1.题干分析：该题目要求说一说一日三餐吃的食物，以及分别花了多少钱。可根据实际情况来写，如早餐喝了牛奶，吃了面包，一共十元钱等。文章可以用一般现在时态，注意句子数量要符合要求。
2.参考词汇和句型：
参考词汇：milk牛奶；bread面包；breakfast早餐。sandwich三明治；apple苹果；lunch午餐；have dinner with my family和家人一起吃晚餐；beef牛肉；vegetables蔬菜；fruit salad水果沙拉。price价钱；
参考句型：I have...for breakfast / lunch / dinner. ；It is...yuan.；I have...with...；My mother cooks...
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6．范文：
This is my pen friend Mike. He's twelve. He is from London, the UK. He can speak some French. He likes drawing and riding his bicycle. He's got a pet cat. He loves it very much. He loves chocolate too.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求描述一下笔友Mike。根据提示句可知可以写他的个人情况，年龄，出生地点，会做的事。爱好。注意逻辑性，人称为第三人称单数。注意文章为一般现在时态。
2.参考词汇和句型：
参考单词：speak some French说一些法语 ，draw画画，ride bicycle骑自行车，pet宠物
参考句型：He is…；He likes…；He loves…
7．范文:
Hello! I'm Linda. It's my birthday today. My friends Li Ming, Jim, Wang Ping and Lucy are at my home. They give me many presents. Now Li Ming is singing and Lucy is dancing. Wang Ping is drinking some juice. Jim and I are playing games together. My mum is cooking noodles for us. I'm having a great birthday party.
【详解】略
8．范文：
Welcome to Beijing! Beijing is the capital city of China. It is in the north of China. There are about twenty million people in Beijing. It is more than three thousand years old. It is famous. People all over the world go there every year. The weather is cold, windy and snowy in winter in Beijing. You can visit the Great Wall, Tian'anmen Square, the Forbidden City, the Summer Palace and Bird's Nest Stadium. You can eat Beijing Roast Duck.
【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求介绍用第三人称介绍自己的首都北京。然后再阐述北京的位置，人口，景点，天气等。注意文章为一般现在时并要符合单词的数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：capital首都，million百万，thousand千，famous著名的，windy多风的，snowy多雪的
参考句型：It is in…；The weather is…；You can visit…
9．范文：
This is a map of China. Beijing is the capital. It’s in the north of China. Shanghai is a big city. It’s in the east of China. Lhasa is a beautiful city. It’s in the west of China. Guangzhou is a big city. It’s in the south of China.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求用第三人称根据根据地图及所给信息介绍这几个城市的位置。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。
2.参考词汇与句型：
参考词汇：capital首都；beautiful美丽的；big大的；north北部；west 西部；south南部； east东部
参考句型：This is …；It’s in…
10．范文：
I have lots of things to do next week. It’s going to be sunny on Monday. l am going to play football. It’s going to be cloudy on Tuesday. I am going to sing. It’s going to be rainy on Wednesday. I am going to watch TV. It’s going to be windy on Thursday. I am going to fly a kite. It’s going to be hot on Friday. I am going to swim.
【详解】1.题干解读：要求结合图根据下周的天气情况用第一人称写一下自己的课后活动制订计划，时态是一般将来时，注意字数要求。
2.参考词汇和句型：
参考词汇和短语：sunny晴朗的；play football踢足球；sing唱歌；watch TV看电视；fly a kite放风筝。
参考句型：I have...；I am going to...；It’s going to...；
11．范文：
A Nice Picture
This is a nice picture. There are some mountains in the picture. There are lots of trees near the mountains. There is a long river in the picture. There is a bridge over the river. There are many ducks swimming on the river. There are many houses in the picture. I like this picture.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求用用There be句型，看图写一篇小短文.注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。
2.参考词汇与句型：
参考词汇：mountains大山， bridge桥，duck鸭子
参考句型：This is…； There are…；There is…；I like…
12．例文：
On the Beach
It's a sunny day! There are many people on the beach. Some people are walking. Two children are riding bikes. A few people are swimming in the sea. A boy is taking pictures. A woman is drinking water. Everyone is having a good time.
【详解】略
13．范文：
Welcome to Qingdao. Qingdao is a beautiful city. It's in the east of China. It has got more than nine million people. There are many famous places, such as the May 4th Square, the Zhongshan Park, and the Laoshan Mountain. And there is lots of delicious food. Do you like Qingdao
【详解】题干解析：该题要求用第三人称介绍青岛，描述青岛的位置，景点和美食。注意文章为一般现在时，并要符合句子数量要求。
参考词汇与句型：
参考词汇：welcome欢迎，east东部，million百万，famous places风景名胜，delicious美味的
参考句型：It's in the...；There are...；
【点睛】
14．Hello. My name is Lucy. I'm twelve. Dancing is my hobby. I live in London. I want to be a famous dancer. Do you want to be my pen friend
【详解】略
15．参考范文：
My Favourite Subject
We have many kinds of subjects in school , such as maths, Chinese , English , PE , science and so on . I like Chinese best. We have Chinese twice a week . We often rend in Chinese class .Our Chinese teacher is tall and thin, but she’s very kind and smart. We all like her.
【详解】1.写法：这篇作文的题目是“My Favourite Subject”。一定要做到开篇点题，突出写作重点，但在描写的过程中根据所给提示信息和学生的写作实际，能拓展的东西很少，所以在开头可以先写平时所学习科目，进行引导，更能突出主题。然后根据提示写就可以，难度不是很大，且写作要求5,6句话即可。
2.句型：因为本篇写作就是描述作者平时的生活实际，所以采用一般现在时态就可以，比如使用句型“My favourite subject is ...”“I like…best”等，但在写作时，一定要注意人称和数的变化，因为一开始描写的重点在“I”上，后面描述的是“he/she”上，所以在使用动词上一定要注意形式的变化。
3.注意:为了避免一味的根据提示信息而导致平铺直叙，可以适当的使用often等频度副词，或and,but 等连词，这样有承接，有转折，文章读起来更有韵味。在点题时可以采用such as…but…,在描述老师的过程中可以写老师的外在（高矮胖瘦）和内在（或友好，或严格，或聪明，或善良等）两个方面。使文章整体读来不乏味，结尾以We all like her既突出了作者对老师的喜欢，也侧面进行了点题，爱屋及乌嘛。爱老师，爱他/她的课堂!
4.写作指导：这是一篇给题目作文，题目就是写作的重点，所给出的提示信息包含了写作的要点，由“喜欢的科目”-----“喜欢的原因”到“一周上几节”----“课堂上你喜欢做什么？”再到“简单介绍本科老师”，三步走的原则，其中第一步是开篇点题写原因，第二步是详写，第三步是简单介绍。有了这个轮廓，再动笔写作。
写作时一定要注意所给要点要写全，详略要得当，时态用一般现在时。
16．Name: Lingling
Age: 13
Address: Beijing, China
I can speak English.
I like Chinese, Maths and music .I like playing football and playing basketball .
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