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(共30张PPT)
Unit 5
Reading for Writing
By the end of the class, you will be able to
Analyze English - learning forum posts and learn advice - letter structure for blog writing;
Enhance cross - cultural language awareness and write to solve English - learning problems.
Use some expressions related to problems and advice to write a blog about English learning problems;
What ways do you usually use to share something on the Internet
If there was a blog in ancient times,
what would happen
post starter/
original poster
楼主
original post
原帖
replies to a post
回帖
1. thumb up/ like 点赞
2. favourites 收藏
3. comment 评论
search bar（搜索栏）, homepage
page
1. Who starts this blog
2. Who responds to it
3. What is the blog mainly about
Wang Le
Liu Wen, Jia Xin and Li Rui
Problems and advice on learning English.
Read and Answer
Name
Problem
Advice
Jia Xin’s advice
Li Rui’ s advice
Your advice
Read these posts from an online forum for Chinese students who are learning English and fill in the table.
Problem 1
problem
Detailed description
of Liu Wen’s problem
Supporting details are usually examples or facts that are used to describe or explain the topic sentence. They can make your description more vivid and convincing.
How to express problem
problem
topic sentence+supporting details(examples)
Who responds to it
Problem 1
Jia Xin’s advice
about Liu Wen's problem
problem
Detailed description of Jia Xin’s problem
Who responds to it
Linking words
Problem 2
Li Rui’s advice
about Jia Xin's problem
problem
Detailed description of Li Hui’s problem
Can you help Li Rui
clearly explain the advice
How to give advice
advice
advice+supporting details(examples/reasons)
Name Problem Advice
Liu Wen
Jia Xin
Li Rui
trouble with listening to native English speakers
listen to English radio programmes,
repeat what you hear, record your voice and compare with the radio host’s.
how to be polite in English
short requests for close friends,
longer requests for people not so close,
polite phrases for people senior to you.
remembering new vocabulary
create your word bank;
carry a small notebook with you;
memorize them in context;
...
Jia Xin’s advice
Li Rui’ s advice
Your advice
Problems
Advice
I'm having a lot of trouble with my listening.
My biggest headache is
how to be polite in English.
For me, vocabulary is my biggest problem.
Listening to English radio programmes helps me get...
I think it all depends on who you’re talking to.
Support with benefits(reasons)
Support with examples
Useful expressions
1. … would be a good choice.
2. I highly recommend/suggest…
3. Why don’t you.../You’d better....
4. It’s of great significance to ...
5. If I were you, I would…
6. The idea of.... works best for you
if you apply it to your daily life.
Problems
1. … seems a big challenge for me.
2. I have no idea how/what …
3. I have met with many difficulties in…
4. … ,which has annoyed me for a long time.
5. I find it extremely struggling to …
6. What keeps confusing me is…
7. ....(the biggest problem/headache) stands
in the way to my learning English.
8. The trouble of.... has bothered me a lot
these days.
Problems
I’m having a lot of trouble with …
My biggest headache is how to ....
For me, ...is my biggest problem.
Advice
More useful sentence structures
remember vocabulary
understand a text
pronounce correctly
dare not speak English
grasp grammar
extended writing
Problems with learning English
Memorizing words is a really big challenge for me.
Grasping the grammar is a big headache for me .
How to write
an impressive essay is difficult for me.
Write a blog
Choose one of the problems from your group discussion and write a blog about it.
Describe the problem clearly.
Write with topic sentence + supporting details.
Write with useful lexical chunks.
博客
一、审题定调
博客与建议信都是就某事提出一些相关的忠告或者建议,不同之处在于:建议信是一封信, 写作对象是收信人、组织或者机构; 而博客发表在网络上,写作对象是在网络上提出问题的人; 另外, 建议信结尾需要写信人提出某种希望; 而博客的作者则需要在结尾提出自己所遇到的进一步的问题, 希望得到别人的帮助。
二、谋篇布局
本文可以分为三个段落来写。
第一段: 直面博主提出的问题;
第二段: 多角度阐述建议;
第三段: 提出自己的问题,表达希望。
注意:提出的建议要合情合理;注意语气和措辞,不要使用带有命令式的措辞。
博客
三、组织语言
1. 直面博主提出的问题。
(1) Hi! Hearing that you have trouble in learning English, here are some suggestions.
(2) Yeah, that's really hard. It is difficult to deal with the relationship with our parents. I'd like to give you some advice.
(3) You asked about how to prepare for a marathon and here are some of my suggestions.
(4) I'm glad to read your blog asking how to learn English well. The following are some suggestions.
2.多角度阐述建议。
(1) From where I stand, it is a good idea to...Besides, I strongly advise you to... Last but not least, you can...
(2)When it comes to such a situation, I would like to suggest that...For one thing, ... For another, ... What's more, ...
3. 提出自己的问题, 表达希望。
(1) I hope my suggestions will be helpful to you. For me, ...is my biggest problem.
(2) I'll be happy if you can take my advice/ideas into consideration. My problem is... HELP!
(3) I will be more than glad to see your improvement in this regard.
(4) I hope that my suggestions prove to be useful in solving your problems.
四、短文模板
Yeah, that's really hard. We all have difficulty in 　　　　　　 _________________(问题). Here are my suggestions to solve the problem.
For one thing, I think it would be more beneficial if you________(建议1). For another, as is known to all, 　　　 __________(建议2). What's more,________(建议3).　　　　　　 　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　
I hope that my suggestions are practical for you. For me, the biggest problem is　　　　　　　(问题). HELP!
talk about
the problems
raise your
own problems
give some
suggestions
求助信参考模板
Dear (称谓),
I am (自我介绍) . I am writing to seek for your help in (写信目的).
Now, I struggle a lot in __________ (遇到的困难). I’ve found that _________ (描述自己的困难) Faced with so much difficulty, I have to ask you for some help. Would you like to ____________ (委婉提出请求)？In the meanwhile, I beg you to __________ (请求内容) so that _________ (请求目的). Also, I would like you to ____________ (请求内容).
Therefore, could you please put forward some practical suggestions I am convinced that I will benefit a lot from your valuable and timely advice. I would appreciate it if you could respond at your earliest convenience .
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
Evaluation
写一篇有关游览长城的博客。
假定你是李华,网友David就有关游览长城的注意事项在博客上提出问题,请你接着他的博客写一篇文章。
注意: 1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
David Hey, everybody, how do we prepare for a visit to the Great Wall
Li Hua
Writing
参考范文
Hi! Paying a visit to the Great Wall is enjoyable and interesting. I'll give you some suggestions here. First, you are supposed to set out early so that you can avoid not only the morning rush hour, but also the crowds visiting the Great Wall. Second, you'd better wear sports shoes because the Great Wall is very steep and the journey may last for several hours. What's more, don't forget to prepare some food and water in case you are hungry or thirsty, and bring your camera to record the beautiful scenery. Wish you a wonderful journey. For me, the biggest problem is that I can't predict the number of people there. HELP!
假设你是李华,你在网上看到一些网友发帖询问如何学习英语。请你写一篇英语博文, 就如何学习英语给出一些实用建议。要点包括:
1.回应他们的询问;
2.给出建议:使用APP,
多读英语文章,
找个以英语为母语的学习伙伴;
3.给予鼓励。
Writing
Ⅱ.巧用单元句式、语法
1.从网上的帖子中, 我了解到你们在学习英语方面有困难。我写这篇博文是为了给大家一些建议。
From posts on the Internet, I’ve learnt that 　
. I am writing the blog to offer you some tips.
you have difficulty learning
English
2.在我看来,你们可以借助一些在线APP来提高英语口语。
From my point of view,you can improve your spoken English 　 　
　　　　　　 　　.
3.此外,通过阅读英语文章,你们可以扩大词汇量,更好地理解词语。
Besides, by reading English articles, you can 　　　
and better understand it.
4.最后,同样重要的是,找一个以英语为母语的学习伙伴来练习是明智之举,
那样你就可以提升你的口语交际能力。
Last but not least, it is wise to find a native English study partner to practise,
so you can 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　.
with the help
of some online APPs
enlarge your vocabulary
improve your communication skills
5.正如一句老话所说, 熟能生巧。只要你们一直努力, 永不放弃, 你们总有一天会成功的。
Just as an old saying goes,practice makes perfect.　
, you will be successful one day.
As long as you keep trying
and never give up
范文展示
Learning that you have difficulty learning English from posts on the Internet, I am writing the blog to offer you some tips.
From my point of view, you can improve your spoken English with the help of some online APPs. Besides, by reading English articles, you can not only enlarge your vocabulary, but also better understand it. Last but not least,it is wise to find a native English study partner to practise, which can help you improve your communication skills.
Just as an old saying goes, practice makes perfect. As long as you keep trying and never give up, you will be successful one day.

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