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Unit 2
No Rules, No Order!
Section B writing
Unit 2 No rules, No order.
--如何写与规章制度相关的文章
写作话题分析
本单元的主题是“规章制度”,我们常接触到的有家规(family rules)、校规(school rules)、班规( class rules)和交规( traffic rules)等。与此相关的写作通常有:①写有关规章制度的求助信;②介绍家规/校规/班规等;③对别人提出的有关规章制度的问题给出建议。
写有关规章制度的求助信时,要注意以下几点:①注意书信格式和称呼得体;②具体写作时，先点明写信目的,然后详细描述让你感到烦恼的规章制度,最后表明希望得到回复;③注意情态动词can、have to 与 must 的用法。
Dear Dr. Know,
Dear Dr. Know,
Can you help me I __________ follow too many rules at home and at school. I ___________ clean my room every day, and I __________ let my desk get untidy. At school, I ___________ wear my own clothes. I __________ wear my favourite cap either. After school, I _____ watch TV, but only after I finish my homework, walk the dog, and do lots of other things! I __________ even relax at weekends because I ________ practice the violin every day! I never have fun. What can I do
Yours,
Eric
Help! There are too many rules in my life! Every morning, I have to make my bed before breakfast. I have to hurry to school because can't be late for school. When I'm in school, I mustn’t use my phone in class either. And I have to wear the uniform.
After school there are even more rules! I have to finish my homework first. I can only play basketball after I practise the piano, I can't hang out with my friends on weekdays, I know some rules are important, but this is awful. What can I do
Yours,
Alice
Step 2. Analyze the structure(结构）
How many parts can we divide the passage into
（ 可以把文章分成几段？）
Body
Feelings and ask for help(表明感受+寻求帮助)
Beginning
Facts about the rules（介绍家规）
Ending
Topic sentence 中心句(开篇点题)
Good
beginning
There are too many rules in my life!
I have many rules in my family.
I think these rules are very strict(严格的). Can you help me
I know these rules are good for us, but I feel tired. Can you give me some advice
I'm not happy because there are too many rules at home.
Let me tell you something about the rules in my home and school.
Good
ending
other versions (其他版本)
other versions (其他版本)
Rules,rules, rules! It’s terrible! What can I do
I never have fun.What can I do
Step 3. Analyze the content（内容）
Body
What
Who
Where
How
In what order does the writer describe the rules
(作者按什么顺序描述规则？)
Who make the rules
Where do they have the rules
How to express the rules
Why
Why do they make the rules
“5W”
Use “can/can’t/must/have to”.
In time order.
At school and at home.
Schools, teachers or parents.
They make rules to help them.
outline
Beginning
Body
Ending
审人称：
一般现在时
审文体：
求助信
第一人称 I
审时态：
What/Who/Where/How/Why
Topic sentence 中心句（开篇点题）
Feelings and ask for help
(表明感受+寻求帮助)
Let’s make an outline（提纲）
Dear Dr Know,
Can you help me I am Li Ping,an unhappy middle school student.There are so many rules in my family and I have to follow them every day.
At home, I must get up at 6 for exercise every morning because my parents think it's good for my health. I have to finish my homework first after school before I can watch TV. What's more, I can't eat junk food.My parents always ask me to eat lots of vegetables and fruit.These rules make me very tired and unhappy.
What can I do Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Ping
Dear Dr Know,
Can you help me I ___________ follow too many rules at home and at school. I ____________ clean my room every day, and I ______________ let my desk get untidy. At school, I ________ wear my own clothes. I ______________ wear my favourite cap either. After school, I _____________ watch TV, but only after I finish my homework, walk the dog, and do lots of other things!
I can't even relax at weekends, because I _____________ practise the violin every day! I never have fun. What ________ I do
Yours,
Eric
2a
Complete the letter to Dr Know using can, have to / must, or can't / mustn't.
P15 2a
have to
must/have to
mustn't
can't/mustn't
can't/mustn't
can
must
can
Dear Eric,
I know it can be difficult to follow many rules. But rules can be good for us.
You have to clean your room every day because it’s our duty to share housework. You can’t wear your own clothes. It is good to build school spirit to wear the uniform. You can’t relax at weekends. Do you remember your musical dream You want to be a musician.Don’t give up!
You can also think about things you can do! You can do housework with your parents. It is a happy moment. You can also wear your own clothes at weekends. If you are tired at weekends, you can talk with your parents and tell them your feelings. Hanging out with friends is a good way to relax.
I know it’s hard, but rules can help to make the world better. Don’t push yourself too hard and try to relax!
Best,
Dr Know
An example
rules
reasons
advice
I have to clean my room every day.
It’s our duty to share housework.
That can help you develop good living habits.
You can put things away and try to keep the room clean and it will be easy to tidy.
I can’t wear my own clothes.
Wearing the uniform can build school spirit.
You can wear your clothes on weekends.
Pre-writing
Choose three important rules from 2a. Discuss the questions with a partner.
rules
reasons
advice
I can’t relax at weekends.
You want to become a musician.
You can talk with your parents and sometimes hang out with friends on weekends.
Pre-writing
Choose three important rules from 2a. Discuss the questions with a partner.
Pre-writing
Read for the atructure.
Dear Alice,
Yes, there are many rules in life. But they can help you to become a better person.
You mustn’t be late for class. That shows respect for your class and teacher. You can't use your phone in class because you need to focus on learning. You have to wear a uniform because it builds school spirit.
You can also think about the things you can do! You can use your phone at home. You can relax after you finish your homework. And you can hang out with friends at weekends!
I know it's hard, but rules can help to make the world better. Remember: No rules, no order!
Best,
Dr Know
Do you know how to write a reply letter giving some advice
Introduce topic and tell the importance
Tell reasons of each rule
Give agvice about each rule
Tell the importance of rules
Finish the outline about your favorite animal.
引出话题
Reasons
总结
Advice
I know it can be difficult to follow many rules. But rules can be good for us.
You can’t/mustn’t/have to...because...
You can...
I think these rules are good for you. Remember: No rules, no order.
My reply
Beginning
Body
Ending
Pre-writing
Finish the outline about your reply.
Write a reply to Eric as Dr Know. Give him some advice.
Dear Eric,
I know it can be difficult to follow many rules. But rules can be good for us.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best,
Dr Know
While-writing
2c
Homework
Choose to do：
Must do：
Read two letters full of emotion (情感).
Retell Alice’s problem and Dr. Know’s advice to your partner.
Polish the reply letter of 2c.
Write down the report about your family rules and what you think about these rules.
Search the Internet to find more kinds of rules.

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