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2026高考英语·二轮复习
书面表达之读后续写（情节构建）
【核心知识·深度解读】
读后续写考查学生阅读理解与创造性写作的综合能力，情节构建是得分关键。近年命题强调“故事合理延续、情感自然升华、价值观积极向上”。本专题聚焦情节架构技巧，包含核心知识精讲、15道情节描写词汇句型填空、10道句子翻译表达及3篇读后续写实战训练，帮助学生掌握“冲突—发展—高潮—解决—升华”的完整故事脉络。
核心知识·读后续写情节构建五步法
情节阶段 作用 常用表达/技巧 2026热考主题示例
冲突引入 制造矛盾，吸引读者 Suddenly, To one’s surprise, Much to one’s dismay 人与自我（内心挣扎）、人与社会（误解冲突）
行动发展 角色应对挑战，推动故事 Without hesitation, Gathered courage, Decided to 团队合作、突破困境
高潮转折 关键时刻，情感爆发点 At that moment, It dawned on him that... 醒悟时刻、关键抉择
问题解决 冲突化解，结果呈现 Eventually, In the end, Fortunately 误会解除、困难克服
主题升华 点明寓意，价值观提升 What mattered most was..., It taught me that... 成长感悟、文化传承
二轮策略： 阅读原文时标记人物性格、情感基调及伏笔；续写时确保情节连贯、逻辑自洽；结尾点明主题但避免说教。建议每篇练习前先列情节大纲，再动笔写作。
题型训练一 · 情节描写词汇与句型填空
Instructions: 根据上下文和提示，在空白处填入恰当的词语或短语，完成情节描写。(每题1分，共15分)
1. ________ (突然), a loud noise broke the silence of the night.
2. ________ (令我们惊讶的是), the old man agreed to help us without hesitation.
3. She ________ (鼓起勇气) and stepped onto the stage.
4. ________ (就在那一刻), I realized how much my family meant to me.
5. He stood there, ________ (一动不动), unable to believe what he had just heard.
6. ________ (泪水模糊了他的双眼) as he read the letter.
7. Without ________ (片刻犹豫), she jumped into the river to save the drowning child.
8. ________ (逐渐地), the truth began to emerge.
9. He ________ (深吸一口气) and pushed open the heavy door.
10. ________ (使……恍然大悟的是) that he had been wrong all along.
11. The two brothers finally ________ (和好如初) after years of misunderstanding.
12. ________ (令我们宽慰的是), the lost dog returned home safely.
13. She ________ (感到一阵内疚) when she realized her words had hurt her friend.
14. ________ (时间一分一秒地过去), his anxiety grew.
15. What ________ (最重要的) was that we had tried our best.
题型训练二 · 情节构建句子翻译
Instructions: 根据中文提示，完成英文句子，使情节连贯生动。(每空1.5分，共15分)
1. 就在他快要放弃的时候，一个意想不到的想法突然出现在他的脑海里。
________ he was about to give up, an unexpected idea ________ his mind.
2. 她屏住呼吸，小心翼翼地打开那个旧盒子。
She ________ her breath and opened the old box ________.
3. 尽管困难重重，他们还是坚持了下来，最终取得了成功。
Despite all the difficulties, they ________ and ________ succeeded in the end.
4. 那一刻，他意识到真正的友谊比胜利更重要。
At that moment, he realized that true friendship ________ more than victory.
5. 听到这个好消息，她高兴得跳了起来。
________ the good news, she ________ with joy.
6. 他环顾四周，发现所有人都用期待的目光看着他。
He ________ and found everyone looking at him with ________ eyes.
7. 正是妈妈的鼓励给了他继续前进的勇气。
It was his mother’s encouragement ________ gave him the courage to ________.
8. 他们相视一笑，所有的误会都在那一刻烟消云散。
They ________ at each other, and all the misunderstandings ________ at that moment.
9. 无论结果如何，重要的是我们努力过。
No matter ________ the result, what mattered was that we ________ tried.
10. 带着希望和决心，他踏上了新的旅程。
With ________ and determination, he ________ on a new journey.
题型训练三 · 读后续写情节构建实战
要求： 阅读下面每篇材料，根据所给情节和续写段落首句，完成150词左右的续写。注意情节连贯、逻辑合理、情感真挚。
【实战1 · 友情与信任】
原文： Tom and Jerry had been best friends since childhood. They shared everything—dreams, secrets, and even the same passion for music. However, a misunderstanding over a lost guitar pick drove them apart. Jerry thought Tom had stolen it, while Tom insisted he had never touched it. For months, they didn’t speak to each other. One day, Tom found the pick under his bed—it must have fallen there accidentally. He knew he had to make things right.
续写段落首句： Tom decided to visit Jerry with the pick in his hand.
【情节构建提示】 见面时的尴尬→解释误会→情感转变→重归于好→主题升华（友谊的珍贵）
【参考范文】
Tom decided to visit Jerry with the pick in his hand. His heart pounded as he knocked on the door. When Jerry opened it, an awkward silence fell between them. “I found it,” Tom said softly, holding out the pick. Jerry stared at it, his eyes widening with surprise and then guilt. “I’m so sorry,” Jerry whispered. “I should have trusted you.” The two friends looked at each other, and then burst into laughter. They embraced, realizing that a true friendship is stronger than any misunderstanding. From that day on, they valued their bond even more, knowing that trust is the foundation of any lasting relationship.
【实战2 · 勇气与突破】
原文： Lily was a shy girl who never raised her hand in class. She loved painting but was too afraid to share her work with others. Her art teacher, Mr. Chen, noticed her talent and encouraged her to enter a school art competition. Lily hesitated, but deep down, she wanted to try. After weeks of secret practice, she finally completed a painting that expressed her inner world. The day of the competition arrived.
续写段落首句： Lily stood in front of the exhibition hall, her hands trembling.
【情节构建提示】 紧张心理→看到老师的鼓励→鼓起勇气进入→作品获得认可→自信成长
【参考范文】
Lily stood in front of the exhibition hall, her hands trembling. She almost turned around, but then she saw Mr. Chen’s encouraging smile through the window. Taking a deep breath, she stepped inside. To her surprise, visitors were admiring her painting—a colorful landscape filled with hope. One judge commented, “This piece shows a unique voice.” Lily felt a warmth spread through her chest. At that moment, she realized that courage was not the absence of fear, but the decision to act despite it. From then on, she began to share her art freely, discovering a new confidence that would shape her future.
【实战3 · 亲情与成长】
原文： Emma had always been close to her grandfather. He taught her how to fish, told her stories of his youth, and always had a smile for her. But as Emma grew older, she became busy with school and friends, and their visits became fewer. One winter, her grandfather fell ill. Emma visited him in the hospital, feeling a deep regret for not spending more time with him. She wanted to do something to make up for lost time.
续写段落首句： Emma decided to create a photo album of their memories.
【情节构建提示】 收集照片→回忆往事→制作相册→去医院看望→爷爷感动→感悟亲情
【参考范文】
Emma decided to create a photo album of their memories. She spent the entire week gathering old photos, each one bringing back a flood of memories—fishing trips, birthday parties, and laughter-filled afternoons. She wrote down her favorite stories next to each picture. When she brought the album to the hospital, her grandfather’s eyes lit up. He turned the pages slowly, smiling and sometimes wiping away tears. “This is the best gift I’ve ever received,” he said, holding her hand. Emma learned that time spent with loved ones is never wasted, and that love can bridge any distance. From that day, she made sure to cherish every moment with her family.
参考答案与核心解析
题型训练一 · 情节描写词汇填空答案
1. Suddenly 2. To our surprise 3. gathered courage 4. At that moment 5. frozen 6. Tears blurred his eyes 7. hesitation 8. Gradually 9. took a deep breath 10. It dawned on him 11. made up 12. To our relief 13. felt a pang of guilt 14. As time ticked by 15. mattered most
题型训练二 · 句子翻译答案
1. Just when / crossed 2. held / cautiously 3. persisted / eventually 4. mattered 5. Hearing / jumped 6. looked around / expectant 7. that / carry on 8. smiled / disappeared 9. what / had 10. hope / set out
题型训练三 · 读后续写实战参考范文（见上文）
情节构建核心要点：
1. 冲突设计：矛盾需自然，与原文伏笔呼应（如误解、恐惧、遗憾）。
2. 情感曲线：情绪应有起伏（紧张→释然，恐惧→勇气，内疚→弥补）。
3. 细节描写：运用动作、神态、心理描写增强画面感（如“hands trembling”“tears blurred his eyes”）。
4. 主题升华：结尾点明寓意，但避免生硬说教（如“友谊需要信任”“勇气源于行动”）。
5. 语言风格：与原文保持一致，使用恰当的连接词（suddenly, eventually, at that moment）使情节流畅。

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