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“十句五定法”在读后续写中的应用
模拟试题
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Last week, my brother and I drove to a famous place for a trip. We were so absorbed in our conversation that my brother took a wrong turn. Unfortunately, we had to drive onto a bridge and could not turn back. My brother unwillingly paid the bridge fee and felt very angry about the mistake and the waste of $4.
Finally, we took the exit slipway (出口匝道). My brother noticed a car stopped by the road. A young man was standing there, trying to make a phone call. I was busy thinking about which way to go, but my brother stopped his car and offered help. The young man had a flat tire (车胎瘪了) and needed a wrench (扳手) to fix it.
My brother gave him the wrench and helped him change the tire. The young man told us he lived nearby and had a terrible week. He had a car accident earlier and now got a flat tire on his way home from work. He called us “a breath of fresh air” and thanked us again and again, because he would have been stuck without our help.
After we finished the work, he took out $20 to pay us, but we refused. I told him that we were not supposed to get on that bridge, but our mistake finally led us to help him. We were glad that our mistake turned into a chance to help others. Then we told him where we were going. He was surprised and said the place was not far from his home.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为100左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
He invited us to his home so we could visit early the next day._______________________________
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The next day we rose early for our tour, and the young man offered to be our guide.__________
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十句五定法 解读
二首定一框 ①衔接para 1所给句, ⑤衔接para2所给句，⑥衔接para2所给句，⑨故事结局，⑩主题升华，其余用“六所”原则(所见，所思，所做，所说，所闻，所感）
第一段He invited us to his home so we could visit early the next day. 第二段The next day we rose early for our tour, and the young man offered to be our guide.
①衔接上一句——情绪（愉快/感激） ⑥衔接上一句——惊喜、感动(情绪、心理活动)
②他妻子微笑迎接，为我们准备了晚餐； ⑦他带我们游览当地的美景
③晚餐期间，听他讲述一周的经历 ⑧他沿途给我们介绍当地的风土人情。
④晚餐后，为我们准备了客房 ⑨正向结局：互相留下联系方式，约定以后有机会再见面。
⑤衔接下一句——带着感激和期待入睡（动作+情绪） ⑩主题升华：生活中的错误和意外，有时会引领我们遇见美好；善意终会以意想不到的方式回馈。
首句1 He invited us to his home so we could visit early the next day.
定句1. We happily accepted his invitation, feeling a warm sense of gratitude for his kindness after we had only done a small favor.
句2. Following his car, we arrived at his modest but cozy home, where his wife greeted us with a bright smile and offered us tea and a wonderful dinner.
句3. During the dinner, we listened as he shared more about his terrible week — the car accident, the flat tire, and now being saved by strangers.
句4. After the meal, he showed us to a clean guest room and pointed out the best route to our destination on a map.
定句5. Grateful for his warmth, we went to sleep with peaceful hearts, feeling that our mistake had somehow led us to something special.
首句2 The next day we rose early for our tour, and the young man offered to be our guide.
定句6. Surprised and moved by his offer, I realized that our small act of kindness the day before had touched him deeply and created a bond between us.
句7. He took us to several scenic spots that were not in any guidebook, showing us the true beauty of his hometown.
句8. Along the way, he told us interesting stories about the local history, and we laughed together like old friends.
定句9. At the end of the day, we exchanged phone numbers, promising to keep in touch, and parted with warm hugs.
定句10. Looking back, I understood that a wrong turn and a lost $4 had led us to something far more valuable — a precious friendship born from kindness.
参考范文
(黄色字体为5个定句)
He invited us to his home so we could visit early the next day. We happily accepted his invitation, feeling a warm sense of gratitude for his kindness after we had only done a small favor. Following his car, we arrived at his modest but cozy home, where his wife greeted us with a bright smile and offered us tea and a wonderful dinner. During the dinner, we listened as he shared more about his terrible week — the car accident, the flat tire, and now being saved by strangers. After the meal, he showed us to a clean guest room and pointed out the best route to our destination on a map. Grateful for his warmth, we went to sleep with peaceful hearts, feeling that our mistake had somehow led us to something special.
The next day we rose early for our tour, and the young man offered to be our guide. Surprised and moved by his offer, I realized that our small act of kindness the day before had touched him deeply and created a bond between us. He took us to several scenic spots that were not in any guidebook, showing us the true beauty of his hometown. Along the way, he told us interesting stories about the local history, and we laughed together like old friends. At the end of the day, we exchanged phone numbers,
promising to keep in touch, and parted with warm hugs. Looking back, I understood that a wrong turn and a lost $4 had led us to something far more valuable — a precious friendship born from kindness.
高阶范文
(黄色字体为5个定句)
He invited us to his home so we could visit early the next day. We were delighted and grateful for his kindness, readily accepting his warm invitation. His wife greeted us with a bright smile and had prepared a delicious dinner for us. During the dinner, he shared more details about his terrible week, talking about the car accident and the flat tire with a sigh. After dinner, he thoughtfully prepared a comfortable guest room for us. We went to bed with gratitude and expectation, looking forward to the next day’s tour.
The next day we rose early for our tour, and the young man offered to be our guide. We were surprised and deeply moved by his thoughtfulness, thanking him sincerely. He took us to enjoy the local beautiful scenery, from green hills to clear streams. Along the way, he introduced us to the local customs and interesting stories, making our trip more colorful. In the end, we exchanged contact information and promised to meet again someday. It turned out that the wrong turn and the wasted $4 were not misfortunes—those unexpected mistakes led us to beautiful encounters, and kindness always rewards us in unexpected ways.

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