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中考英语书面表达进阶目录第一部分写作提分技巧技巧一丰富词汇、灵活表达...............................................1词汇晋级............................................................................1仿写练习............................................................................2技巧二扩写句子.................................................................3技巧点拨............................................................................3仿写练习............................................................................4技巧三巧用衔接词.............................................................5一、逻辑关系类.................................................................5仿写练习......................................................................5二、框架搭建类.................................................................7仿写练习......................................................................8技巧四巧用高分句式..........................................................9一、使用固定句式.............................................................9二、使用含有较高级语法结构的句式(20个)...............10仿写练习.....................................................................12技巧五巧用俗语谚语........................................................13分话题言语(39条)......................................................132026 中考英语书面表达进阶第二部分写作类别全解析类别一说理议论类...........................................................16命题分析..........................................................................16思路点拨——“三段式”写作思路..................................16模板记背..........................................................................161. 观点看法型..................................................................162. 解决问题型..................................................................17类别二写人叙事类...........................................................17命题分析..........................................................................17思路点拨——“三段式”写作思路..................................17模板记背..........................................................................18类别三说明介绍类...........................................................19命题分析..........................................................................19思路点拨——“三段式”写作思路..................................19模板记背..........................................................................191.地点介绍型..................................................................192.具体事物介绍型............................................................203.计划安排型..................................................................20类别四看图写作类...........................................................20命题分析..........................................................................21思路点拨——“5步”标准化写作流程导图....................212026 中考英语书面表达进阶第三部分中考常考话题话题一人物介绍...............................................................23话题探究...............................................................................23典例剖析——“四步写法”示范......................................23提分佳句...............................................................................25开头亮句(开篇点明要介绍的人物,引出后文)............25中间好句(从不同的角度对人物进行具体介绍)............25出彩尾句(表达对人物的感情/对未来的期待)...............26佳句仿写练习..................................................................26写作自测..........................................................................27话题二地点介绍...............................................................29话题探究..........................................................................29典例剖析——“四步写法”示范......................................29提分佳句..........................................................................31【开头亮句】(开门见山,点明要介绍的事物内容).....31【中间好句】(具体说明事物的客观信息和显著特征).31【出彩尾句】(总结全文,概括主题)...........................31佳句仿写练习..................................................................32写作自测——(2025·广西·中考真题)......................33话题三志愿服务...............................................................34话题探究..........................................................................342026 中考英语书面表达进阶典例剖析——“四步写法”示范......................................34提分佳句..........................................................................36【开头亮句】(开篇表意,阐明写作意图或背景).........36【中间好句】(展开介绍原因/计划/事件发展经过).......37【出彩尾句】(表达期待/总结感受和收获)..................37佳句仿写练习..................................................................38写作自测——(2025·天津·中考真题)......................39话题四规则......................................................................40话题探究..........................................................................40典例剖析——“四步写法”示范......................................40提分佳句..........................................................................42【开头亮句】(介绍背景,引出话题)...........................42【中间好句】(阐述看法观点以及原因).......................42【出彩尾句】(总结全文,重申对规则的看法)............43佳句仿写练习..................................................................43写作自测——(2025·四川德阳·中考真题)...............44话题五健康与安全...........................................................45话题探究..........................................................................45典例剖析——“四步写法”示范......................................46提分佳句..........................................................................47【开头亮句】(点明文章主题,引出后文)...................47【中间好句】(阐述保持健康和安全的具体措施、建议).........482026 中考英语书面表达进阶【出彩尾句】(总结全文,再次强调主题)...................49佳句仿写练习..................................................................49写作自测——(2025·江西·中考真题)......................50话题六学生学习与生活....................................................51话题探究..........................................................................52典例剖析——“四步写法”示范......................................52提分佳句..........................................................................54【开头亮句】(开篇表意,引入话题)...........................54【中间好句】(给出具体建议和理由)...........................55【出彩尾句】(总结感受和收获)..................................56佳句仿写练习..................................................................56写作自测——(2025·江苏扬州·中考真题)...............59话题七环境保护...............................................................59话题探究..........................................................................59典例剖析——“四步写法”示范......................................60提分佳句..........................................................................62【开头亮句】(开篇表意,引入话题)...........................62【中间好句】(给出具体措施).....................................64【出彩尾句】(呼吁号召行动).....................................64佳句仿写练习..................................................................64写作自测..........................................................................65话题八人际沟通...............................................................662026 中考英语书面表达进阶话题探究..........................................................................68典例剖析——“四步写法”示范......................................68提分佳句..........................................................................68【开头亮句】(开篇表意,引入话题)...........................68【中间好句】(提出问题及给出建议)...........................70【出彩尾句】(表达愿景,努力去做)...........................71佳句仿写练习..................................................................71写作自测——(2025·吉林·中考真题)......................71话题九假期活动...............................................................72话题探究..........................................................................73典例剖析——“四步写法”示范......................................73提分佳句..........................................................................75【开头亮句】(开篇表意,引入话题)...........................75【中间好句】(具体描述假期活动)..............................76【出彩尾句】(对假期的概括总结)..............................77佳句仿写练习..................................................................77写作自测——(2025·四川达州·中考真题)...............78话题十文体活动...............................................................80话题探究..........................................................................80典例剖析——“四步写法”示范......................................80提分佳句..........................................................................82【开头亮句】(开篇表意,引出话题)...........................822026 中考英语书面表达进阶【中间好句】(具体描述文体活动)..............................83【出彩尾句】(总结文体活动的意义)...........................83佳句仿写练习..................................................................84写作自测——(2025·山东烟台·中考真题)...............85话题十一 传统文化...........................................................86话题探究..........................................................................87典例剖析——“四步写法”示范......................................87提分佳句..........................................................................89介绍中国传统节日...........................................................89介绍中华民族传统美德....................................................89介绍中国传统艺术...........................................................90介绍中国礼仪..................................................................90佳句仿写练习..................................................................90写作自测——(2025·黑龙江·中考真题)...................91第四部分进阶训练一、2025 全国一模书面表达 20 篇...................................93二、2025 全国三模书面表达 19 篇.................................110第五部分答案范文单独册.....................................................................共 75 页2026 中考英语书面表达进阶第一部分 写作提分技巧技巧一 丰富词汇、灵活表达写作时,应尽量避免反复使用相同的词汇,否则易造成文章枯燥、呆板。在英语中,相同的意思往往有不同的表达。用稍难单词或短语代替一些简单、常见的表达,可以使文章更生动,更有表现力。【词汇晋级】1.许多,大量 many/much→a great many of/a large number of→a great deal of2.喜欢 like/love→be fond of/have an appetite for3.非常 very→terribly/greatly4.好的 good→fantastic/brilliant/meaningful5.美丽的 beautiful→attractive/eye-catching6.处理,解决 solve→do with/deal with/cope with7.长大 grow up→advance in years8.想要 want to do→intend to do/desire to do9.使用 use →make full use of(充分利用)/make good use of(好好利用)10.应该 should→be supposed to do11.造成,导致 cause→lead to/result in12.知道 know→come to realize13.越来越多 more and more→a growing number of/an increasing number of14.坚持 keep→stick to doing15.对……感兴趣 be interested in…→take a great interest in…16.对……有好处 be good for…→be beneficial to…/sb. benefit from sth./have agreat effect on…17.对……有害 be bad for…→have terrible influence on…/be harmful to…/do harmto…18.赞成 agree→be in favor of19.在我看来Ⅰ think→in my opinion/as far as I'm concerned20.首先 first→to begin with/to start with1 / 1342026 中考英语书面表达进阶21.此外 besides→in addition/what's more22.最后 finally→last but not least/last but most importantly23.努力做 try to do→spare no effort to do/make every effort to do24.无论何时 whenever→no matter when【仿写练习】改写下面句子中的画线部分。1.Smoking is bad for people's health.Smoking ________________ people's health.2.I think online shopping is an important part of modern life.________________________________________________, online shopping is animportant part of modern life.3.More and more people begin to realize the importance of learning English well.________________________________________________________ people begin torealize the importance of learning English well.4.Whenever I try to read this book, I feel sleepy.__________________ I try to read this book, I feel sleepy.5.Neo tries to finish his project on time.Neo ______________________________________________________ finish hisproject on time.2 / 1342026 中考英语书面表达进阶技巧二 扩写句子写作的时候,我们常遇到写完主谓宾就不知道如何往下写的情况。这时可以运用一定的方法对句子进行扩展以表达更完整、更具体的意思。【技巧点拨】▲添加定语对名词进行限制或说明,如形容词、介词短语、分词短语、定语从句等。例:Vanessa is a teacher.定语 1.Vanessa is a kind, patient and knowledgeable English teacher.定语 2.Vanessa is a kind, patient and knowledgeable English teacher in a senior highschool.定语 3.Vanessa is a kind, patient and knowledgeable English teacher in a senior highschool who is popular among the students.▲添加状语表示时间、地点、方式、程度、目的、原因、结果等。如副词、不定式、分词、状语从句等。例:We should learn English well. (扩写原因)We should learn English well because it is spoken most widely around the world.例:She often listens to music. (扩写目的)She often listens to music to help her relax and forget her worries.例:You will get good grades. (扩写条件)You will get good grades as long as you listen to the teacher carefully and finishyour homework on time.▲添加同位语,如名词、名词短语等。例:I'm Li Hua. (添加同位语)I'm Li Hua, a middle school student from Hangzhou.▲添加例子作补充说明,如用 like、such as列举事物或用 for example举例说明等。例:I often help my parents do housework. (举例)I often help my parents do housework, such as washing dishes, folding the clothes,taking out the trash and so on.3 / 1342026 中考英语书面表达进阶例:We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save theearth. (事例说明)We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth.For example, we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags, stop usingnapkins, plant more trees and save water and energy.【仿写练习】根据汉语提示扩写下面的句子。1.He is a cute boy. (用 with添加定语)________________________________________________________________2.She works very hard. (添加目的状语)____________________________________________________________________________________________________3.He likes different cultures. (举例说明)__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4.Hangzhou is a modern and international city. (添加定语从句)____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5.I prefer living skill training. (添加原因)____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4 / 1342026 中考英语书面表达进阶技巧三 巧用衔接词一、逻辑关系类恰当地运用连接词把词与词、短语与短语、句与句之间连接起来,可以使语言表达更加准确、流畅。现将常用连接词总结如下:▲表示并列或选择关系:and, both…and…, not only…but (also)…,either…or…, as well as等。例如:Reading is interesting. Reading can make me get more knowledge.→Reading is not only interesting but also can make me get more knowledge.【仿写练习】1.These activities have helped me have a better understanding of our city. They lefta lasting influence on my heart and mind. (合并句子)______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________▲表示转折关系:but, while, however等。例如:Love can be expressed by gift, family dinner and phone call. None is better than goingback home and spending time with our families.→Love can be expressed by gift, family dinner and phone call. However, none isbetter than going back home and spending time with our families.【仿写练习】2.I'm not sure whether Mrs. Liu still remembers me. I want to tell her that she willbe in my heart forever. (合并句子)__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________▲表示因果关系:so, therefore, as a result, thanks to, because of, because等。例如:When I was in trouble, I asked my classmates or friends for help. We were at thesame age and we could understand each other easily.5 / 1342026 中考英语书面表达进阶→When I was in trouble, I asked my classmates or friends for help because we wereat the same age and we could understand each other easily.【仿写练习】3.She made every effort in studying. She got a high score in the final exam. (合并句子)____________________________________________________________________________________________________________▲表示条件或让步:if, unless, as long as, even if/even though, though/although等。例如:We have too much stress. We can't sleep at night and we may feel too tired.→If we have too much stress, we can't sleep at night and we may feel too tired.【仿写练习】4.My father is very busy. He always gives me a hand when I am in trouble. (合并句子)________________________________________________________________________________________________________▲表示目的或结果:so…that…, so that等。例如:I will keep practicing drawing/painting. I can go to an art college.→I will keep practicing drawing/painting so that I can go to an art college.【仿写练习】5.I'm going to do my best to get good grades. I can go to college to get goodeducation.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6 / 1342026 中考英语书面表达进阶二、框架搭建类行文连贯是衡量书面表达水平的重要标准之一。《英语课程标准》对五级写作的要求是“能使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系”,如何做到行文连贯呢?我们可以恰当使用连接词或短语,使全文条理清楚、结构紧凑。【技巧点拨】▲引出下文:first/firstly, to begin/start with, at first, first of all, above all 等。例如:(1)In order to win the competition, one has to make a good preparation. First ofall, he or she must do a lot of practice.(2)People can do much to protect the environment. To start with, turn off thelights when leaving the room.▲承上描述:second/secondly, third/thirdly, then/next, also, after this/after that,what's more/besides等。例如:(1)Sarah went to the office to finish her work in the morning. Then she entered thecanteen to have lunch where there is a lot of delicious food.(2)To fit in the new class, you can follow my tips. Firstly, be active tocommunicate with others sincerely. Secondly, find out someone who shares the sameinterest with you.(3)There are various advantages of shopping online. To start with, it provides a lotof convenience to our lives.What's more, it helps us save much time and money.▲结束话题:finally, lastly, last but not least等。例如:(1)Finally, if you follow my suggestions above, you will realize your dream in notime at all.(2)Last but not least, let's thank Tom for giving us an earthshaking speech.▲总结话题:in short, in a word, as for me, in my opinion等。例如:(1)In short, every problem has a solution.(2)In a word, communication is really important in making friends.【仿写练习】Passage 17 / 1342026 中考英语书面表达进阶secondly, thirdly, in a word, besides, last but not least, firstlyEnglish is important and useful to us. How can we learn it well Here are mysuggestions. 1. , we should often listen to the tapes, English songs and programs.2. , watching English movies is also helpful to us. 3. , we should speakEnglish in class as much as possible. Don't be afraid of making mistakes. The morewe speak, the fewer mistakes we'll make. We'd better join the English club andpractice with others. 4. , we can read more English newspapers and magazines.It's good for us. 5. , we should recite some good passages and keep diaries.6. , as long as we do more listening, speaking, reading and writing, we willlearn English well.Passage 2first of all, third, in short, what's more, finallyIn order to make more friends, I have some advice. 1. , we should know howto share. We can share delicious food, books and interesting things with others.2. , we should be helpful. When we are in trouble, we should help each other.3. , don't be afraid to admit(承认) mistakes. Nobody is perfect. What mattersis the bravery to admit the mistakes. 4. , we can't say bad words about others sothat we can get on well with each other. We should keep secrets.5. , if we can follow the suggestions above, we will make many friends.8 / 1342026 中考英语书面表达进阶技巧四 巧用高分句式一、使用固定句式写作中恰当运用固定句式不仅可以避免语法错误,还可以使表达更加多样化,从而使文章更加生动。现将初中英语写作中的常用句式总结如下,希望同学们熟记并学会运用。▲it代替动词不定式作形式主语,其常用句式有:1.It is important/(necessary, difficult, convenient, possible…) for sb. to do sth. 例如:It is necessary for us to have labor education.2.It's(+a/an+adj.)+名词+to do sth. 例如:It's a good idea to play basketball every day.【仿写】1.在这个迅速发展的世界里,对每个人来说,学好英语都是非常重要的。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.在互联网上分享日常生活也是外国人了解本地文化的好方法。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________▲it代替动词不定式作形式宾语。常用结构为“find/think/believe it+adj.+to dosth.”,意为“发现/认为/相信做某事……”。例如:I find it educational to watch the film Chang An(《长安三万里》), which wasdirected by Xie Junwei.【仿写】3.汤姆认为读《哈利·波特》那本书很有趣。__________________________________________________________________________________Harry Potter9 / 1342026 中考英语书面表达进阶▲“make+宾语+宾语补足语”,make为使役动词,宾语补足语可以是形容词、动词或名词等。例如:What he said in class made the whole class surprised.【仿写】4.它可以帮助提高我的语言技能,使我自信。________________________________________________________________________________▲形容词和副词的比较级形式:“as…as…”“比较级+than”“the+比较级, the+比较级”“比较级+and+比较级”等。例如:The harder you work at it, the more progress you will make.【仿写】5.世界越环保,我们享受的生活环境就越好。____________________________________________________________________________________________6.通过阅读我学到了很多,它让我变得越来越好。__________________________________________________________________________________________________▲动名词短语作主语。例如:Reading a good book is like talking to an intelligent person.【仿写】7.坚持写日记是提高写作技巧的好方法。____________________________________________________________________________________________二、使用含有较高级语法结构的句式特殊句式(强调句、倒装句、省略句、感叹句等)、各类从句(定语从句、名词性从句等)、非谓语动词、独立主格结构等都属于较复杂的语法结10 / 1342026 中考英语书面表达进阶构。这些结构的交替使用,可以使文章的语言充满层次感,从而较好地反映考生的语言运用能力。1.据说/报道It is said/reported/known/thought/believed(that)…2.众所周知As we know/As everybody knows/It is known to all that…3.那就是说……That is to say…4.基于这个理由For this reason…5.换言之In other words…6.更严重的是What is more serious is (that)…7.这/那就是……的原因This is the reason why+句子The reason why+句子+is that+句子That is because+句子 那是因为……That is why+句子8.在……的帮助下with the help of sb.=with one's help9.随着……with the development of… 随着……的发展with the increase of… 随着……的增长10.the+最高级+n.+that sb. have/has seen/heard/known/read/…例如:It's the highest mountain that I have ever seen.11.no matterwhat/who/when/where/how=whatever/whoever/whenever/wherever/however11 / 1342026 中考英语书面表达进阶12.It's+adj.(important/necessary/useful/dangerous/easy/difficult/…) for sb. to dosth.It's+adj.(kind/nice/polite/impolite/clever/…) of sb. to do sth.13.sb. find/think/make/… it+adj. for sb. to do sth.14.so/such…that… 如此……以至于……too…to… 太……而不能……15.not…until… 直到……才……16.运用倒装句,语言更活泼Books are not only shared but they can build up a bridge connecting readers fromdifferent parts of the world as well.→Not only are books shared but they can build up a bridge connecting readers fromdifferent parts of the world as well.【仿写练习】The children can be mentally and physically healthy only in this way.(用倒装句改写)_____________________________________________________________________17.运用省略句,行文更简洁Maybe you can take outdoor activities when you feel bad.→Maybe you can take outdoor activities when feeling bad.【仿写练习】Although they were faced with many problems, they didn't lose heart.(用省略句改写)_____________________________________________________________________18.运用感叹句,感情更强烈From the expression on the face, I knew my math teacher was surprised.→What a surprised expression was on my math teacher's face!【仿写练习】It is a very wonderful moment!(用感叹句改写)______________________________________12 / 1342026 中考英语书面表达进阶19.运用 with复合结构、分词(短语)等,结构更简明Our school lies at the foot of a mountain and there is a river flowing in front of it.→At the foot of a mountain lies our school with a river flowing in front of it.【仿写练习】The teacher came into the lecture hall and many students followed him.(用 with复合结构改写)_____________________________________________________________________20.运用复合句,句式更多变To our surprise,the little girl knows so many things.→What surprised us most is that the little girl knows so many things.【仿写练习】It was quite an experience for both of us, and I will never forget it for the rest of mylife.(用复合句改写)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________21.运用 it句式, 表达更丰富Personally, drinking plenty of boiled water every day is necessary.→I think it necessary that we should drink plenty of boiled water every day.【仿写练习】To master a foreign language requires a lot of practice.(用 it句式改写)_____________________________________________________________________技巧五 巧用俗语谚语在写作中合理地运用谚语会起到画龙点睛、深化主题的作用,是作文提分的有效途径。一、时间1.How time flies! 光阴似箭!13 / 1342026 中考英语书面表达进阶2.Time is the greatest teacher. 时间是最好的老师。3.Time and tide wait for no man. 时不我待。/时光不待人。4.Lost years are worse than lost dollars. 一寸光阴一寸金,寸金难买寸光阴。5.Never put off till tomorrow what you can do today! 今日事,今日毕。/明日复明日,明日何其多!二、学习1.Every minute counts. 分秒必争。2.It is never too old to learn. 活到老学到老。3.There is no end to learning. 学无止境。4.A young idler, an old beggar. 少壮不努力,老大徒伤悲。5.A good beginning is half done. 良好的开端是成功的一半。6.Knowledge starts with practice. 实践出真知。7.There is no royal road to learning. 学无坦途。8.Books and friends should be few but good. 读书如交友,应求少而精。9.Knowledge advances by steps not by leaps. 知识的获得是循序渐进而不是突飞猛进的。10.A man becomes learned by asking questions. 不耻下问才能获得学问。11.Reading is to the mind while exercise is to the body. 读书健脑,运动强身。12.Knowledge makes humble; ignorance makes proud. 博学使人谦逊,无知使人骄傲。三、习惯1.Habit is the second nature. 习惯成自然。2.Don't leave today's work for tomorrow. 今日事,今日毕。四、勤奋1.No pains, no gains. 没有付出就没有收获。2.Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。3.Rome was not built in a day. 伟业非一日之功。/冰冻三尺非一日之寒。4.Genius is nothing but labor and diligence. 天才不过是劳动加勤奋。14 / 1342026 中考英语书面表达进阶五、自信1.Great hopes make great man. 伟大的抱负造就伟大的人物。2.Confidence in yourself is the first step on the road to success. 自信是走向成功的第一步。3.Where there is a will, there is a way./Nothing is impossible to a willing mind/heart.有志者事竟成。/世上无难事,只怕有心人。六、成功1.Failure is the mother of success. 失败乃成功之母。2.The finest diamond must be cut.玉不琢,不成器。七、团结1.Two heads are better than one. 三个臭皮匠,顶个诸葛亮。2.People with one mind will remove Mount Tai. 人心齐,泰山移。3.When everybody adds fuel, the flames rise high. 众人拾柴火焰高。八、交友1.A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真情。2.Friendship is one soul in two bodies. 友谊就是两人一条心。3.He is rich enough who has true friends. 有真朋友的人是富翁。九、健康1.A good medicine tastes bitter. 良药苦口。2.Prevention is better than cure. 预防胜于治疗。3.It is not work that kills, but worry. 劳动不伤人,忧虑才伤人。4.An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 一日一苹果,医生远离我。5.Health is not valued till sickness comes. 病时方知健康可贵。15 / 1342026 中考英语书面表达进阶第二部分 写作类别全解析类别一 说理议论类命题分析该类文章通常要求考生结合题目所给的要点信息,针对某个问题或某个事件进行分析、评论,表明自己的观点、立场、态度、看法和主张。思路点拨初中阶段说理议论类文章的写作格式常为三段式,即开头、主体和结尾。一般写作思路如下:模板记背(1)观点看法型The topic of (主题) is becoming more and more popular recently. Thereare two sides of opinions about it. Some people say (看法 A) is theirfavourite. They hold their view for the reason of (理由一). What'smore, (理由二). Moreover, (理由三). While others thinkthat (看法 B) is a better choice for the following three reasons.First, (理由一). Second(Besides), (理由二). Third(Finally), (理由三).From my point of view, I think (个人观点). The reason is16 / 1342026 中考英语书面表达进阶that (原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain mychoice. For me, the former/latter is surely a wise choice.(2)解决问题型In recent days, we have to face a problem of (问题), which isbecoming more and more (具体情况). First, (现状一).Second, (现状二).Faced with this, we should take a series of effective measures to change thesituation. For onething, (解决方法一). For another thing, we'dbetter (解决方法二). Besides, we are supposed to (解决方法三).Personally, I believe that (以上解决方法的作用). As long as we takeactive action from now on, we can make a positive difference.类别二 写人叙事类命题分析该类文章通常要求考生结合题目所给的要点信息,针对某一人物或事件进行描述,并表达自己的感受。思路点拨此类作文通常采用三段式写作,答题时应注意认真分析要点,不要遗漏内容。一般写作思路如下:17 / 1342026 中考英语书面表达进阶模板记背In my life, many people helped and influenced me a lot. The person I want toexpress my thanks most is (引出人物). He/She is (身材). He/Shehas (五官特点).He/She is always (性格). He/She always helps me out whenever I am inneed. Once (事例描写). To my surprise, he/she (他/她的做法).He/She has a great influence on me. He/She is (我的看法).And Iwish (表达愿望和祝福).18 / 1342026 中考英语书面表达进阶类别三 说明介绍类命题分析该类文章通常要求考生根据题目所给的要点信息,对某一事物的概况进行介绍,帮助读者了解其基本信息,或对某一活动的计划安排进行说明。思路点拨此类作文通常采用三段式写作,答题时应注意涵盖题干所给的要点信息,不要遗漏内容。一般写作思路如下:模板记背(1)地点介绍型It's my honor to give you a brief introduction to (地名). Locatedin (地理位置), the weather here is pleasant, neither too hot in summer nortoo cold in winter.It is a place with many famous places of interest and tourist attractions. Not onlycan you pay a visit to (景点一), but you can also go (景点19 / 1342026 中考英语书面表达进阶二). (必去景点) is a must-see for tourists, as it is well-known at home andabroad. There are also many kinds of delicious food, such as (美食举例).It is very convenient for you to come to our city by (交通方式). You aresure to have a wonderful time in (地名) and I hope all of you will enjoy it.(2)具体事物介绍型Have you ever heard (事物名)?(事物名)has a long history. It's said that (相关人物) was thefirst to discover/invent it. (事物名) is produced in many different areas suchas (地名). There are lots of advantages of (事物名).First, (优点一). Besides, (优点二). It seems that people all over theworld (人们的态度).In a word, it is not only (特点一), but also (特点二). It is worthknowing by more people.(3)计划安排型The holiday is a special time for us to relax from the hard work at school. Somestudents like spending holidays with no plans, but I think making some plans isimportant and necessary. The (具体假期) is coming. Here are my plans.Firstly, as a student, I must finish my homework first, read some classical booksand exercise regularly to keep healthy. Secondly, I plan to visit (具体对象).I haven't seen them for a long time, so I miss them very much. Thirdly, I'm goingto (活动内容). It can not only (活动的意义) but also let me learnmore necessary skills.I believe that it will be a colorful and meaningful holiday, which will make me abetter self.类别四 看图写作类命题分析看图作文以记叙为主,要求学生根据所给的图画,写出一篇情节完整、句子通顺、语义连贯、符合图意的英语短文。20 / 1342026 中考英语书面表达进阶思路点拨通常英语看图作文的写作从整体上可分为两个过程:(1)感性理解过程,即通过画面直接获得信息的过程(究竟画面展示了一个什么情景);(2)理性理解过程,即针对画面发挥想象力,挖掘画面间的内在联系融入自己的思想与见解(画面的内涵是什么)。在实际写作过程中可将这两个过程具体渗透到五个环节(一“抓”,二“列”,三“变”,四“连”,五“检”)中去①“抓”。抓主题。首先,根据图片内容确定好题材与体裁,是写人还是写景,是说理还是叙事,是书信还是日记或其他应用文体。这个环节可采用求同法或者求异法。求同法即寻找画面中相同的人物、地点或时间等,来协助学生确定主线,不至于跑题;求异法即启发学生观察几幅图的不同之处,挖掘出它们之间的内在联系从而确定体裁。21 / 1342026 中考英语书面表达进阶②“列”。列要点。因为书面表达是以一定的情景为基础,考查具有一定的针对性,所以要点要全面,无遗漏。要点主要是结合图片中的情景,用自己熟悉的结构与词汇列出,忌用生疏的结构与词汇按汉语思维盲目罗列,原则“不求难,不求异,唯求准”。③“变”。变要点为句子。将第二个环节中所罗列的要点,先按一定的时间、空间及逻辑顺序排列;然后选定恰当的主语与人称,再根据动作发生的时间与主谓关系拓词成句。建议同学们尽量用自己熟悉、简单的结构来表达,避免因用长句和大量的复合句而出现过多的语法错误。如果遇到必须用长句表达时,可仿照、套用课本或各种阅读材料中出现的句型,切勿用汉语思维造句。④“连”。连句成篇。这个环节是最关键的一环。首先,要根据题目要求及画面展示确定好题材与体裁。其次,要确定好行文的人称与时态的基调。再次,要在句与句以及段与段之间加一些表转折、递进和因果等关系的关联词与过渡句,使文章前后照应,行文流畅。最后结合题目要点和字数适当加入一些表达自己思想、见解的内容,使文章丰满,显得有血有肉。⑤“检”。文章检查。检查这一环节可以有效帮我们规避文章中可能存在的语法错误。检查可从以下几方面入手:●文章的体裁格式是否准确;●要点有无遗漏;●句子(人称、时态、语态、主谓一致、结构、词语搭配等);●词汇(意义、拼写、时态语态,形容词与动词的形式,名词单复数);●标点符号是否有遗漏与错误。22 / 1342026 中考英语书面表达进阶第三部分 中考常考话题话题一 人物介绍分析全国近 3年中考真题可知,此话题通常还有以下命题角度:1.介绍自己想感谢的人以及对自己的影响; 2.写一封自荐信,介绍自己的基本情况、能力特长等;3.介绍自己心目中的英雄或榜样。典例剖析假如你是李华,通过你校外籍教师,你认识了一位英国的新笔友 Richard,他很想了解你的一些情况。请你根据下面表格中的信息,给他写一封邮件,向他介绍情况。Personal Information(个人信息) Personality outgoing, friendly…Hobby play basketball, listen to music…Family happy, warm…Dream(梦想) want to be, be going to…Friendship(友谊) learn from each other, visit…between you and Richard要求:1.邮件包括提示中所有的写作要点;2.条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;3.邮件中不能出现真实的人名和地名等信息;4.词数不少于 80,邮件开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Richard,I'm glad to know you.Yours,Li Hua第一步审题1.定主题:__________________________________2.定人称:__________3.定文体:给笔友写邮件,文体为________23 / 1342026 中考英语书面表达进阶4.定时态:介绍自己的情况用____________;说明未来的梦想和表达对两人未来友谊的期待用____________5.定要点:根据表格信息可知包括____、____、____、____、____________共5个要点第二步列提纲第三步填细节,巧升格,成篇章连句成篇 句子升格Dear Richard, ①用 be willing to do sth.I'm glad to know you. I heard that you wanted to 升格:know more about me. I am writing to tell you something______________________about myself.______________________I am outgoing and friendly. ①I am nice to everyone____________________and like to help others.②I like playing basketball and②用 be fond of升格:listening to music in my spare time. Basketball helps me______________________be strong and music makes me feel relaxed. I have a______________________happy and warm family and we love each other. My______________________father is a doctor and my mother is a teacher. I want to be______________________a teacher when I grow up. I am going to study hard.________Because③I believe I will become better if I study harder.③用“the+比较级, the+比I am glad to be your pen pal and I am sure we can较级”句式升格:learn a lot from each other. I'm looking forward to yourvisit to China. ______________________Yours,______________________Li Hua____________________________24 / 1342026 中考英语书面表达进阶第四步誊写Dear Richard,I'm glad to know you.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua提分佳句【开头亮句】(开篇点明要介绍的人物,引出后文)1.Looking back on the past three years, I'd like to say thanks to my mother.2.The person who I want to express thanks to is my English teacher. (用 who引导的定语从句引出想要感谢的人)3.The people we admire are like guiding stars that guide us to be better.4.There is always something unforgettable in my life, especially the storybetween my friend and me. (用 there be句型引出话题,开启叙述)5.My friend Daniel encourages me a lot in many ways. Now let me tell yousomething about him.6.I'm Li Hua and I'm very happy to stand here to talk about myself.7.Learning that the England Education Group is coming to our school, I am writingto recommend myself as a volunteer.【中间好句】(从不同的角度对人物进行具体介绍)1.Whoever needs a hand, she is there to offer.25 / 1342026 中考英语书面表达进阶2.What moves me more is his love for people around the world.(用 what引导的主语从句强调人物的高尚人格)3.However, he never gave up his dream and in the end he had a great success.4.He proved himself with his great performance.5.He is a helpful boy who often helps people around him.6.She is very popular in our school because she is polite to everyone.7.Like many other boys, I enjoy doing sports, but maths and science are my favorite.8.As for my dream, I want to be a teacher. I'll make friends with my kids.(用 as for短语完成论点的自然过渡)9.First and foremost, I am familiar with the situation of our school.【出彩尾句】(表达对人物的感情/对未来的期待)1.That person and that event will always remain in my memory like a shining star.2.She is truly an inspiration to us all, showing us the power of kindness anddetermination.(用动名词短语作伴随状语,说明人物之所以是榜样的原因)3.I am proud to have such a wonderful person in my life, whose qualities I willalways admire and try to emulate.4.I'm so grateful to her for her kind help that I will work harder and try to do better inthe future.5.There is no doubt that it would be difficult for me to win the prize without herhelp. (用 There is no doubt that…句型描写人物对自己的深刻影响)6.I havemade up my mind to follow his example and offer more help and love toanyone in need.7.I will appreciate it very much if I can get the valuable chance. I am lookingforward to your reply.(用高级词汇 appreciate及 it作形式宾语,表明对这次机会的珍惜)8.Let us follow in their footsteps and create a better future for ourselves and for others.佳句仿写1.我是一个对学习新事物感兴趣的人。(用 who引导的定语从句仿写)_____________________________________________________________________26 / 1342026 中考英语书面表达进阶2.有一个人,我非常想对他说声谢谢。(用 there be句型+who引导的定语从句仿写)_____________________________________________________________________3.这位伟人最让我们印象深刻的是他的勇气。(用 what引导的主语从句仿写)_____________________________________________________________________4.至于帮助别人,他总是第一个伸出援手。(用 as for短语仿写)_____________________________________________________________________5.我父亲每天都在努力工作,思考如何为我们的家庭提供更好的生活。(用动名词短语作伴随状语仿写)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6.毫无疑问,赢得奖牌的球员以他们的出色表现激励着我们。(用 there is nodoubt that…仿写)______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7.如果我能有机会在英语戏剧表演中演出,我会非常感激。(用 appreciate及it作形式宾语仿写)____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________写作自测同学们,你最想感谢的人是谁呢?最近你校校报英文版正在征稿。请根据思维导图提示,以“I Want to Thank ____________ Most”为题,用英语写一篇短文给你校校报投稿。27 / 1342026 中考英语书面表达进阶要求如下:1.结合实际,用适当的名词或名词短语补全标题;2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名;3.谈谈你要感谢他/她的理由;4.不少于 80词。I Want to Thank __________Most______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________28 / 1342026 中考英语书面表达进阶话题二 地点介绍话题探究分析全国近 3年中考真题可知,此话题通常还有以下命题角度:1.对比介绍家乡的过去与现在; 2.宣传介绍家乡。典例剖析假如你是李华,你校校报的英语专栏正在开展以“美丽的黄河风情线”(The Beautiful Yellow River Custom Tourist Line)为主题的英语征文活动,你打算参加。请根据以下内容要点用英语写一篇短文。1.风情线总览(the Yellow River, run through the city ofLanzhou, a famous road called Binhe Road, along the YellowRiver);2.聚焦景观(Zhongshan Bridge, waterwheel(水车), manyparks);3.休闲娱乐( fly kites, play chess…)4.特色游览[go sightseeing, sheepskin raft(羊皮筏子), water bus]。要求:1.80词左右;2.条理清楚,行文连贯,书写规范;内容上可适度发挥。注意:不得出现学校、姓名等个人信息(除所给身份外)。第一步审题1.定主题:参加校报主题征文活动,主题为__________________2.定人称:__________3.定文体:________4.定时态:____________29 / 1342026 中考英语书面表达进阶5.定要点:需涵盖题干信息包括的 4个要点第二步列提纲第三步填细节,巧升格,成篇章连句成篇 句子升格The Beautiful Yellow River Custom Tourist Line ①用 which引导的定语从句升The Yellow River is our mother river. Do you 格:know what scenic spots the beautiful Yellow River__________________________has Let me tell you!__________________________The Yellow River runs through the city of__________________________Lanzhou.①There is a famous highway called Binhe__________________________Road. It runs along the Yellow River. Along the②用 such as扩写活动:Yellow River there are many parks, as well as the__________________________Zhongshan Bridge, beautiful waterwheels and so on.__________________________②There are many activities for leisure and__________________________entertainment. There, you can enjoy special tours,__________________________such as sightseeing, sheepskin raft and water bus.__________________________The beautiful Yellow River is waiting for you!______第四步誊写The Beautiful Yellow River Custom Tourist Line________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________30 / 1342026 中考英语书面表达进阶_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________提分佳句【开头亮句】(开门见山,点明要介绍的事物内容)1.In recent years, great changes have taken place in our city with the help of thefavor policies of our country.(“with+名词短语”作方式状语,说明变化发生的条件)2.I'm honored to give a speech on the great changes that have taken place in myhometown.3.Welcome to my hometown and I'm glad to be your guide.4.There are three tourist attractions I want to recommend to you.5.Everyone has a place they call hometown. For me, my hometown is a wonderfulplace that I'm proud to introduce.【中间好句】(具体说明事物的客观信息和显著特征)1.The scene is as beautiful as a painting! (用 as…as…结构生动形容该地风景如画)2.I would recommend Tianshui for a family vacation.3.The old town dates back to the late seventeenth century.4.Located on the banks of the Yellow River, this beautiful old city has a populartourist attraction now.5.The environment in my hometown is becoming more and more beautiful, whichadds to our happiness.(用 more and more…结构表达事物的发展变化)6.It lies in the southwest of China and covers an area of about 485,000 squarekilometers.7.Jiuzhaigou is well known for its beautiful lakes, whose water is so clear that youcan see the bottom of them. (用 be well known for短语介绍事物最显著的特征)【出彩尾句】(总结全文,概括主题)1.I will study hard to make my hometown more beautiful in the future.2.All in all, the whole city has taken on a fresh look.31 / 1342026 中考英语书面表达进阶3.I'm sure the visitors will be amazed by the beautiful scenery in my hometown.4.It is no wonder that hundreds of thousands of visitors spend their holidays hereevery year.(用 It is no wonder that…句型表现事物对人们的吸引力,侧面展现其魅力和特点)佳句仿写1.在这些景点的帮助下,游客可以体验这座城市的魅力和历史。(用 with thehelp of…仿写)______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.我家附近的河水像玻璃一样清澈。(用 as…as…结构仿写)____________________________________________________________3.我们社区附近的图书馆越来越受欢迎。(用 more and more…结构仿写)____________________________________________________________________________________4.黄河风情旅游线以其美丽的风景和沿线独特的文化活动而闻名。(用 bewell known for仿写)__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5.在甘肃,到处都是美味的当地小吃。难怪美食爱好者想去游览这个地方。(用 It is no wonder that…仿写)______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________32 / 1342026 中考英语书面表达进阶写作自测(2025·广西·中考真题)你校英语报正在举办主题为“我爱校园”的征文活动。请你以“My SchoolLibrary”为题用英语写一篇短文投稿,介绍学校的图书馆或图书室(library)。内容包括:1.基本情况介绍(位置、环境、图书种类等);2.对你的帮助;3.你想为它做的事。注意:1.词数为 80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;4.开头已给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇 floor(n.楼层),bright(adj.明亮的),kind(n.种类)My School LibraryMy favourite place in my school is the library.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Last year, I went on a trip to33 / 1342026 中考英语书面表达进阶话题三 志愿服务话题探究分析全国近 3年中考真题可知,此话题还有以下命题角度:申请参加志愿者活动。典例剖析假设你是李华,你校广播站英文专栏以“Volunteering in Summer Holiday”为题,面向广大学生征稿,倡导同学们积极参与志愿者服务工作,鼓励大家度过一个愉快而有意义的假期。请结合以下要点,谈谈你对此的看法和建议,用英语写一篇短文并投稿。要求:1.短文应包括以上所有的写作要点;2.条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;3.文中不能出现真实的人名、地名等信息;4.词数 80左右,文章标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。Volunteering in Summer HolidayDo you want to spend your summer holiday in a meaningful way?第一步审题1.定主题:____________________________________2.定人称:谈论个人对志愿者服务工作的看法和建议,用__________3.定文体:________34 / 1342026 中考英语书面表达进阶4.定时态:____________5.定要点:根据导图内容可知共包括__________、__________、__________3个要点第二步列提纲第三步填细节,巧升格,成篇章连句成篇 句子升格Volunteering in Summer Holiday ①用 make full use of升格:Do you want to spend your summer holiday in a ________________________meaningful way Maybe volunteering is a good ________________________choice. ________________________①For us students, volunteering is really a great ________________________way to spend the summer holiday. Through helping ________________________people in need, we can get new experiences and make ②用 be busy with升格:new friends. There are many chances for volunteer ________________________service in our life.②Firstly, many parents have much ________________________work. And they have no time to take good care of their ______________kids. So we can play games with them and tell stories ③用 both…and…将两句合to them. What's more, the old people are always lonely并为一句:during the day. ③We can chat with them. We can also________________________take a walk with them on a nice day.35 / 1342026 中考英语书面表达进阶Every act of kindness has meaning. Let's make the________________________world better by starting with small things around us. ________________________________________第四步誊写Volunteering in Summer HolidayDo you want to spend your summer holiday in a meaningful way ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Do you want to spend your summer holiday in a meaningful way 提分佳句【开头亮句】(开篇表意,阐明写作意图或背景)1.I'm writing to invite you to join our volunteer service.2.It is my pleasure to work as a volunteer and join you in cleaning People's Park.(用形式主语强调想要加入志愿活动的强烈意愿)3.The summer vacation is coming, and I am going to do some voluntary work.4.May I have the honor to work as a volunteer at Confucius Institute(孔子学院) 5.I know you are fond of the volunteer work, so I'd like to invite you to go with us.6.We'll make every effort to serve the old people to make them feel happy andhopeful.(用高级短语 make every effort表明此行的目的)7.The volunteering spirit has spread among Chinese people in recent years, especiallyamong young people.36 / 1342026 中考英语书面表达进阶【中间好句】(展开介绍原因/计划/事件发展经过)1.As a volunteer, you can not only help people in need, but also learn a lot from yourexperience.(用并列连词短语有逻辑地点明了活动的多重意义)2.In order to help the children in poor areas and raise their spirits, we decide toorganize a voluntary activity next week.3.There we helped to do some cleaning and spent time chatting with them.4.We raised money for the community to help the children who couldn't attendschool.(用定语从句对被帮助者的情况进行了细节介绍)5.To our surprise, all the things were sold out in a short time.6.The reason why I choose this activity is that it is crucial(至关重要的) to reducethe waste and protect the environment.7.As soon as we reach the old people's home, we'll help the old to clean their roomsfirst. Then we'll have a talk with them.(用 as soon as引导的时间状语从句介绍活动的安排)【出彩尾句】(表达期待/总结感受和收获)1.I feel proud of being a volunteer, which means I am able to offer help.2.If there is anything that I can do, please let me know.3.Not only do I feel very happy about helping other people, but also I can spend timedoing what I love to do.4.Remember that everyone can do something to make a difference.5.Seeing their smiles made me feel joyful.(用动名词短语作主语直截了当地表达个人感受)6.As a teenager in the new era, we have the responsibility to serve society.7.This experience taught me that small acts of kindness can bring big happiness.8.It was amazing to see everyone coming together for a good cause.“参加活动的积极意义”常用表达:enrich our daily life 丰富我们的日常生活 make new friends 结交新朋友broaden one's mind 开拓某人的视野 get new experiences 获得新体验learn new skills 学习新的技能 bring people closer 拉近人与人之间的距离37 / 1342026 中考英语书面表达进阶be helpful to personal development 有助于个人发展 develop teamwork spirit 培养团队精神佳句仿写1.我很乐意把书捐给有需要的孩子。(用 It's my pleasure to…仿写)________________________________________________________________________________2.我们尽一切努力捡拾垃圾来让这个公园变得干净美丽。(用高级短语 makeevery effort表明此行的目的)______________________________________________________________________________________________________3.这次活动不仅让我们交到了新朋友,也让我们知道了帮助他人就是帮助我们自己。(用 not only…but also…仿写)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4.我们为那些初次来到兰州的游客提供导游服务。(用 who引导的定语从句仿写)____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5.我们一有空闲时间,就会参加志愿活动去帮助那些有需要的人。(用 assoon as引导的时间状语从句仿写)__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6.节约用水对保护我们的环境很重要。(用动名词短语作主语仿写)____________________________________________________________________________38 / 1342026 中考英语书面表达进阶写作自测(2025·天津·中考真题)请你根据以下内容提示,以“A Special Experience of Li Hua”为题,为校报英语专栏写一篇短文,介绍你班同学李华的一次特殊经历。(1)去年暑假,李华去天津科学技术馆当小讲解员。(2)李华为孩子们讲解科学知识,让他们对科学更感兴趣。(3)当孩子们提出问题时,李华认真解答。(4)李华告诉孩子们参观时注意安全。(5)你认为……参考词汇:天津科学技术馆 Tianjin Science and Technology Museum 小讲解员little guide要求:(1)词数:80~100个。(2)题目和开头已给出,不计入总词数。(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。A Special Experience of Li HuaLast summer holiday,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________39 / 1342026 中考英语书面表达进阶话题四 规则话题探究分析全国近 3年中考真题可知,此话题通常还有以下命题角度:1.校规; 2.交通规则; 3.家规或家风。典例剖析现如今外出旅游备受欢迎,但在旅游中我们也时常会看到一些不文明行为。某英文报旅游专栏正以“Traveling in Good Manners”为题,向广大学生征稿,倡导大家文明旅游。假设你是李华,请结合表格内的信息,用英文写一篇短文去投稿。Impolite behaviors Opinions Advicethrow rubbish everywhere impolite… put…into dustbins…pick flowers in a park … put up signs…speak loudly in public places … make rules…内容包括:1.简述表格中的不文明行为(任选其中两个);2.提出个人观点及建议;3.倡导文明旅游。注意:1.词数 80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯;3.文中不能出现真实的人名、地名等信息;4.文章标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。提示词:tourist attractions(景区)Traveling in Good MannersNowadays traveling is getting more and more popular.第一步审题1.定主题:________________________________________________2.定人称:__________40 / 1342026 中考英语书面表达进阶3.定文体:________4.定时态:____________5.定要点:根据题干要求可知共包括____________、__________________、________________3大要点第二步列提纲第三步填细节,巧升格,成篇章连句成篇 句子升格Traveling in Good Manners ①用被动语态进行升Nowadays traveling is getting more and more 格:popular.①However, there are still some impolite_____________________behaviors during trips. For example, some tourists throw _____________________rubbish everywhere. This is terribly impolite and also _____________________pollutes the environment.②Another impolite behavior is _____________________picking flowers in a park. It does harm to the natural ②用非限制性定语从句beauty and is not allowed.将两句合并为一句:In my opinion, we should always be polite whentraveling. For one thing, we are supposed to put rubbish _____________________into dustbins. For another thing, we can put up signs in _____________________tourist attractions to remind people not to pick flowers. _____________________And for those who speak loudly in public places, tourist _____________________areas can make rules to stop such behaviors. __________________________________________41 / 1342026 中考英语书面表达进阶Let's all travel in good manners and enjoy the beauty _____________________of different places while also protecting them. ___第四步誊写Traveling in Good MannersNowadays traveling is getting more and more popular.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Nowadays traveling is getting more and more popular.提分佳句【开头亮句】(介绍背景,引出话题)1.School rules play an important role in shaping our learning environment.2.For me, our school is a place where teachers educate students to be better persons.And school rules are the force that drives us to move forward. (用 that引导的定语从句介绍规则的角色和作用)3.While they enjoy the convenience, they should also pay attention to some rules oftrain-taking.【中间好句】(阐述看法观点以及原因)1.For instance, we are supposed to arrive at our school and hand in homework ontime.2.No matter where you go, no matter what you do, when you are in public places,you have to be in good manners. (用 no matter+疑问词(组)引导的让步状语从句强调遵守规则的重要性)42 / 1342026 中考英语书面表达进阶3.Some students may see the rules as a way which teachers and parents control them.4.I think I should be allowed to make this choice myself. Only then will I have achance to achieve my dream. (用“only+状语”置于句首时的部分倒装结构说明这一建议的意义)5.I suggest loosening this rule to create a warmer family atmosphere through openconversations.6.When we ride the bikes, we should neither ride side by side with our friends norlisten to music.7.If everybody follows the traffic rules above, we will make us safe when we goacross the road. (用 if引导的条件状语从句强调遵守交通规则的积极意义)【出彩尾句】(总结全文,重申对规则的看法)1.Although our school rules are strict, they are necessary for a good learningenvironment. Let's follow them.2.As the saying goes, “Nothing can be accomplished without norms or standards.”Instead of breaking the rules, we should obey them to be civilized students.佳句仿写1.当我们旅游时,我们应该尊重那些与我们不同的当地文化。(用定语从句仿写)____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.无论我们在旅途中遇到什么困难,我们都应该保持冷静和礼貌。(用 nomatter+疑问词(组)引导的让步状语从句仿写)______________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.只有遵守校规,我们才能创造一个良好的学习环境。(用 only+状语置于2026 中考英语书面表达进阶答案解析目录第一部分 写作提分技巧技巧一 丰富词汇、灵活表达...............................................1技巧二 扩写句子................................................................1技巧三 巧用衔接词............................................................1技巧四 巧用高分句式.........................................................2第三部分 中考常考话题话题一 人物介绍................................................................3话题二 地点介绍................................................................4话题三 志愿服务................................................................6话题四 规则.......................................................................9话题五 健康与安全..........................................................11话题六 学生学习与生活...................................................13话题七 环境保护..............................................................16话题八 人际沟通..............................................................18话题九 假期活动..............................................................21话题十 文体活动..............................................................24话题十一 传统文化..........................................................26第四部分 进阶训练一、2025 全国一模书面表达 20 篇...................................29二、2025 全国三模书面表达 19 篇...................................52第一部分 写作提分技巧技巧一 丰富词汇、灵活表达【学以致用】1. 【答案】 does harm to2. 【答案】 In my opinion/As far as I'm concerned3. 【答案】 A growing number of/An increasing number of4. 【答案】 No matter when5. 【答案】spares no effort to/makes every effort to技巧二 扩写句子1. 【答案】He is a cute boy with short straight black hair.2. 【答案】She works very hard in order to enter a good university and find a goodjob.3. 【答案】He likes different cultures. For example, he is interested in museums andlikes trying local food.4. 【答案】Hangzhou is a modern and international city which/that is famous for itsbeautiful sights and buildings of different styles.5. 【答案】I prefer living skill training because all the living skills I will get will beof great value to my later life.技巧三 巧用衔接词一、逻辑关系类1. 【答案】These activities have not only helped me have a better understanding ofour city, but also left a lasting influence on my heart and mind.2. 【答案】I'm not sure whether Mrs. Liu still remembers me, but I want to tell herthat she will be in my heart forever.3. 【答案】She got a high score in the final exam because she made every effort instudying.4. 【答案】Though my father is very busy, he always gives me a hand when I am introuble.1 / 755. 【答案】I'm going to do my best to get good grades so that I can go to college toget good education.二、框架搭建类Passage 1【答案】1.Firstly 2.Besides 3.Secondly 4.Thirdly 5.Last but not least6.In a wordPassage 2【答案】1.First of all 2.What's more 3.Third 4.Finally 5.In short技巧四 巧用高分句式一、使用固定句式1.【答案】It is very important for everyone to learn English well in the rapidlydeveloping world.2【. 答案】It is also a good way for foreigners to learn about the local culture by sharingeveryday life on the Internet.3.【答案】Tom thought it very interesting to read the book .4.【答案】It can help improve my language skills and make me confident.5.【答案】The greener the world is, the better living environment we will enjoy.6.【答案】I have learnt a lot through reading. It makes me become better and better.7.【答案】Keeping writing the diary is a great way to improve the writing skill.二、使用含有较高级语法结构的句式16.【答案】Only in this way can the children be mentally and physically healthy.17.【答案】Although faced with many problems, they didn't lose heart.18.【答案】How wonderful a moment it is!19.【答案】The teacher came into the lecture hall with many students following him.20【. 答案】It was quite an experience for both of us, which I'll never forget for the restof my life.21.【答案】It requires a lot of practice to master a foreign language.2 / 75第三部分 中考常考话题话题一 人物介绍第一步 审题1. 【答案】写邮件向笔友介绍自己的情况2. 【答案】第一人称3. 【答案】应用文4. 【答案】一般现在时; 一般将来时5. 【答案】性格; 爱好; 家庭; 梦想; 二人的友谊第三步 填细节,巧升格,成篇章【答案】1 I am nice to everyone and willing to help others.2 I am fond of playing basketball and listening to music in my spare time.3 I believe the harder I study, the better I will become.第四步 誊写【答案】Dear Richard,I'm glad to know you. I heard that you wanted to know more about me. I amwriting to tell you something about myself.I am outgoing and friendly. I am nice to everyone and willing to help others. Iam fond of playing basketball and listening to music in my spare time. Basketballhelps me be strong and music makes me feel relaxed. I have a happy and warm familyand we love each other. My father is a doctor and my mother is a teacher. I want to bea teacher when I grow up. I am going to study hard. Because I believe the harder Istudy, the better I will become.I am glad to be your pen pal and I am sure we can learn a lot from each other.I'm looking forward to your visit to China.Yours,Li Hua3 / 75佳句仿写1. 【答案】I am someone who is interested in learning new things.2. 【答案】There is a person who I want to say thanks very much.3. 【答案】What impresses us most about the great man is his courage.4. 【答案】As for helping others, he is always the first to offer a hand.5. 【答案】My father works hard every day, thinking about how to provide a betterlife for our family.6. 【答案】There is no doubt that the players who win medals inspire us with theirexcellent performances.7. 【答案】I will really appreciate it if I can get a chance to perform in the Englishdrama show.写作自测【答案】I Want to ThankMy MotherMostThe person I want to thank most is my mother. My mother is a worker and she isa common woman. She is not tall or beautiful. But I love her most and she is also theperson I want to say thanks most. Because she gave me my life and the deepest love.One day, I didn't pass an English test. I felt too sorry to talk with my mother. Ididn't want to let her down. I didn't feel like eating dinner and only stayed in my roomalone sadly. In fact, my mother knew me well. She was sure that I had failed the test.But she pretended not to know it at all. She knocked at the door and asked me to havedinner. After that, she smiled and encouraged me as if nothing had happened. I was sothankful that I wanted to hug my mother.Since then, I have studied very hard. I'll get good grades and go to university tomake her proud of me. I'll give her a better life in the future.话题二 地点介绍第一步 审题1. 【答案】介绍黄河风情线2. 【答案】第三人称4 / 753. 【答案】说明文4. 【答案】一般现在时第三步 填细节,巧升格,成篇章【答案】1 There is a famous highway called Binhe Road which runs along the YellowRiver.2 There are many activities for leisure and entertainment, such as flying kites,playing chess and so on.第四步 誊写【答案】The Yellow River is our mother river. Do you know what scenic spotsthe beautiful Yellow River has Let me tell you!The Yellow River runs through the city of Lanzhou. There is a famous highwaycalled Binhe Road which runs along the Yellow River. Along the Yellow River thereare many parks, as well as the Zhongshan Bridge, beautiful waterwheels and so on.There are many activities for leisure and entertainment, such as flying kites, playingchess and so on. There, you can enjoy special tours, such as sightseeing, sheepskinraft and water bus.The beautiful Yellow River is waiting for you!佳句仿写1. 【答案】With the help of these attractions, tourists can experience the charm andhistory of this city.2. 【答案】The river near my house is as clear as glass.3. 【答案】The library near our community is getting more and more popular.4. 【答案】The Yellow River Custom Tourist Line is well known for its beautifulscenery and the special cultural activities along the line.5. 【答案】In Gansu, there are delicious local snacks everywhere. It is no wonderthat food lovers want to visit this place.写作自测【答案】例文My School Library5 / 75My favourite place in my school is the library. Our school library is on thesecond floor of the teaching building. It is bright and quiet, with shelves full of booksof different kinds, such as storybooks, science books, and magazines.The library has helped me a lot. I often read there after class, which improvesmy reading skills and broadens my knowledge. It is also a perfect place to study anddo homework. To give back, I want to volunteer in the library, helping to organizebooks and keep it clean. I also plan to donate some interesting books to share withothers.I love our school library and hope it becomes even better!【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。[写作步骤]第一步,开头已给出,引出本文主题;第二步,介绍图书馆的基本情况,包括位置、环境、图书种类等;第三步,介绍图书馆对自己的帮助以及想为它做的事。[亮点词汇]①such as例如②give back回报③plan to do sth计划做某事[高分句型]①I often read there after class, which improves my reading skills and broadens myknowledge.(which引导的定语从句)②To give back, I want to volunteer in the library, helping to organize books and keepit clean.(动词不定式作目的状语)话题三 志愿服务第一步 审题1. 【答案】对志愿者服务工作的看法和建议6 / 752. 【答案】第一人称3. 【答案】说明文4. 【答案】一般现在时5. 【答案】你的看法; 你的建议; 你的期望第三步 填细节,巧升格,成篇章【答案】1 For us students, volunteering is really a great way to make full use of thesummer holiday.2 Firstly, many parents are busy with their work.3 We can both chat with them and take a walk with them on a nice day.第四步 誊写【答案】Do you want to spend your summer holiday in a meaningful way Maybe volunteering is a good choice.; For us students, volunteering is really a greatway to make full use of the summer holiday. Through helping people in need, we canget new experience and make new friends. There are many chances for volunteerservice in our life. Firstly, many parents are busy with their work. And they have notime to take good care of their kids. So we can play games with them and tell storiesto them. What's more, the old people are always lonely during the day. We can bothchat with them and take a walk with them on a nice day.Every act of kindness has meaning. Let's make the world better by starting withsmall things around us.佳句仿写1. 【答案】It's my pleasure to give away books to the children in need.2. 【答案】We make every effort to pick up rubbish to make the park clean andbeautiful.3. 【答案】This activity not only allowed us to make new friends, but also taught usthat helping others is helping ourselves.4. 【答案】We provide tour guide services for the tourists who come to Lanzhou forthe first time.5. 【答案】As soon as we have free time, we will take part in the volunteer activitiesto help those in need.7 / 756. 【答案】Saving water is important for protecting our environment.写作自测(2025·天津·中考真题)【答案】例文A Special Experience of Li HuaLast summer holiday, Li Hua had a special experience as a little guide at TianjinScience and Technology Museum.First of all, he explained science knowledge to children in simple English,making them become more interested in science. Also, when children asked questions,he answered them patiently with a smile. He even reminded everyone to watch theirstep and stay safe while visiting.I think Li Hua really did a great job. This experience not only helped others butalso made him more confident.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步,表明写作意图;第二步,具体介绍这次经历;第三步,表达感受。[亮点词汇]①answer them patiently 耐心回答它们②remind sb to do sth 提醒某人做某事③stay safe 保证安全[高分句型]①Also, when children asked questions, he answered them patiently with a smile.(when引导的时间状语从句)8 / 75②This experience not only helped others but also made him more confident.(notonly...but also...并列结构)话题四 规则第一步 审题1. 【答案】“Traveling in Good Manners”/文明旅游2. 【答案】第一人称3. 【答案】说明文4. 【答案】一般现在时5. 【答案】不文明行为; 个人观点及建议; 倡导文明旅游第三步 填细节,巧升格,成篇章【答案】1 However, some impolite behaviors can still be seen during trips.2 Another impolite behavior is picking flowers in a park, which does harm tothe natural beauty and is not allowed.第四步 誊写【答案】Nowadays traveling is getting more and more popular. However, someimpolite behaviors can still be seen during trips. For example, some tourists throwrubbish everywhere. This is terribly impolite and also pollutes the environment.Another impolite behavior is picking flowers in a park, which does harm to thenatural beauty and is not allowed.In my opinion, we should always be polite when traveling. For one thing, we aresupposed to put rubbish into dustbins. For another thing, we can put up signs in touristattractions to remind people not to pick flowers. And for those who speak loudly inpublic places, tourist areas can make rules to stop such behaviors.Let's all travel in good manners and enjoy the beauty of different places whilealso protecting them.佳句仿写1. 【答案】When we travel, we should respect the local cultures which/that aredifferent from ours.9 / 752. 【答案】No matter what difficulties we meet on the journey, we should keepcalm and polite.3. 【答案】Only by following the school rules can we create a good learningenvironment.4. 【答案】If we follow the rules in tourist attractions, we can enjoy a pleasantjourney.写作自测(2025·四川德阳·中考真题)【答案】例文The Power of KindnessAs we all know, kindness is a traditional Chinese virtue. It enjoys a history ofthousands of years. Kindness is so powerful that it leaves a strong effect on everyone.Kindness is also mutual. Being kind to others is being kind to ourselves. So we areexpected to carry out acts of kindness in our daily life. For example, we should treatour classmates and teachers kindly and care about our family at home. Helping peoplein need is also important, which fills our society with kindness.I do believe each of us should contribute to the power of kindness.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;②时态:时态为一般现在时;③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏要点,可以适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步,引出话题;第二步,介绍善良的力量以及如何表达善良;第三步,书写结语。[亮点词汇]①thousands of数千的②carry out执行10 / 75③care about关心④contribute to有助于[高分句型]①Kindness is so powerful that it leaves a strong effect on everyone. (so...that引导的结果状语从句)②Helping people in need is also important, which fills our society with kindness.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)话题五 健康与安全第一步 审题1. 【答案】讲述Mary在动物园走失的经过及她是如何应对的2. 【答案】第三人称3. 【答案】记叙文4. 【答案】一般过去时5. 【答案】事件发生的地点; Mary迷路前做的事; Mary迷路的过程; Mary看见妈妈时的场景第三步 填细节,巧升格,成篇章【答案】1 She was so interested in the animals that she looked at every smallmovement of them carefully.2 After a while, she wanted to tell her mother what she'd found about theseanimals.3 Seeing her mother, Mary was very happy and ran to her quickly.第四步 誊写【答案】Mary went to the zoo with her mother on a lovely Sunday afternoon.The zoo was crowded with visitors. Near the gate of the zoo stood two pretty giraffes.Mary had never seen such amazing animals before. She was so interested in theanimals that she looked at every small movement of them carefully.After a while, she wanted to tell her mother what she'd found about these animals.However, she noticed there was no one around. She was afraid and worried. But she11 / 75remembered that her mother told her not to move when being lost. So she waited forher mother just at the gate of the zoo.Soon after, she saw her mother walking to the gate anxiously. Seeing hermother, Mary was very happy and ran to her quickly.佳句仿写1. 【答案】Some dangerous things are not allowed in school, such as knives andmatches.2. 【答案】We are supposed to be careful when using electrical appliances to avoidaccidents.3. 【答案】It's necessary for us to learn to deal with mental problems in a properway.4. 【答案】It's very important for us to eat/keep/have a balanced diet.5. 【答案】Though using the Internet is common nowadays, we must be aware of allpossible dangers.6. 【答案】Keep calm in dangerous situations so that you can think clearly and takeproper actions.7. 【答案】So important is surfing the Internet safely that we should pay greatattention to it.8. 【答案】Only after having a healthy diet can we have enough energy to study.写作自测(2025·江西·中考真题)【答案】例文Eat WellEating well is important for health. In my daily life, I usually have a bowl ofporridge, an egg, and some vegetables for breakfast. For lunch, I prefer rice with fishor chicken, along with a bowl of soup. Dinner is similar to lunch, but I sometimesreplace rice with noodles.I have good habits like drinking plenty of water every day and eating lots offruits, which helps me stay energetic. I also avoid fast food because I know it’s high12 / 75in fat and salt. However, I have a bad habit of eating snacks late at night, especiallychips and chocolate. Sometimes I eat too quickly, which is bad for digestion.To improve my eating habits, I plan to cut down on snacks and set a fixed timefor dinner. I will also try to add more whole grains and less processed food to mymeals. Additionally, I’ll practice eating slowly to enjoy each bite and help my bodydigest better. I believe these changes will make my diet healthier and keep me in goodshape.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点。[写作步骤]第一步,介绍自己的三餐饮食;第二步,介绍好的和不好的饮食习惯;第三步,介绍如何改善自己的饮食习惯。[亮点词汇]①along with和②be similar to与……相似③replace...with...用……替代……④plenty of大量的⑤cut down削减[高分句型]①I have good habits like drinking plenty of water every day and eating lots of fruits,which helps me stay energetic.(which引导定语从句)②I also avoid fast food because I know it’s high in fat and salt.(because引导原因状语从句)③I believe these changes will make my diet healthier and keep me in good shape.(省略引导词 that的宾语从句话题六 学生学习与生活13 / 75第一步 审题1. 【答案】如何成为好的语言学习者2. 【答案】第二人称3. 【答案】说明文4. 【答案】一般现在时5. 【答案】五大第三步 填细节,巧升格,成篇章【答案】1 Good language learners can notice their mistakes and learn from themrather than hide them.2 It is useful to watch movies or listen to songs when you want to enjoy thebeauty of the language.3 In a word, the more good learning habits you develop, the better grades youwill get.第四步 誊写【答案】What makes a good language learner There are some things that goodlanguage learners do and some things they don't do.To start with, don't be afraid of making mistakes. Good language learners cannotice their mistakes and learn from them rather than hide them. In the second place,do group activities and use the language to communicate with others. Also, be sure touse a dictionary to check the meanings of the words you don't know. Don't forget tomake notes. What's more, have fun with the language. It is useful to watch movies orlisten to songs when you want to enjoy the beauty of the language. At last, it is helpfulto practice your spoken language as often as possible.In a word, the more good learning habits you develop, the better grades you willget.Don't forget that it's never too late to become a good language learner.佳句仿写1. 【答案】It is known that asking teachers for help when having problems is a goodhabit for students.14 / 752. 【答案】When I think of the school activities like art festivals and sportsmeetings, I feel excited and remember the importance of teamwork.3. 【答案】It is true that reading books can make students more knowledgeable.4. 【答案】The teacher's words remind me that I should study harder for the comingexam.5. 【答案】Unless we are willing to put in the effort and time, we will not be able toachieve good results.6. 【答案】I spend much time on study while I also make time for hobbies.7. 【答案】As long as we help each other, we can overcome difficulties in study.8. 【答案】If you want to learn painting well, you must put your heart fully into it.9. 【答案】The more you communicate with foreigners, the more confident you'llbecome in using the language.10. 【答案】It is by joining the English club that we make more friends who loveEnglish.11. 【答案】We should be grateful for the chance to study in school.12. 【答案】Not only do I help my classmates with their studies, but also I take partin various activities.13. 【答案】No matter when I feel tired, I always try to find a way to relax.写作自测(2025·江苏扬州·中考真题)【答案】例文:To present the beauty of our school, we plan to record the people. We willmainly focus on our teachers and classmates during their daily activities, like teaching,studying together, or helping each other. We plan to take photos and write short notesabout these heartwarming moments. Photos capture real expressions and feelingsinstantly, making the beauty vivid. Then, we will share them on the school website orour club’s social media page. This way, more people inside and outside school cansee the warm human spirit in our school.From this activity, we expect to understand our school community better andlearn to appreciate the kindness around us. We also hope to work better as a team.15 / 75【详解】[总体分析]① 题材:本文属于材料作文写作;② 时态:时态为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”;③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生需围绕“记录的内容、记录和分享的方式及原因、预期收获”展开叙述,注意使用第一人称,并适当添加细节。[写作步骤]第一步,开篇点题,明确记录的对象(people),并简要说明具体内容(teachersand classmates);第二步,具体阐述记录方式(photos and short notes)和分享渠道(schoolwebsite/social media),并解释原因(capture real expressions, spread warmth);第三步,总结预期收获(understand community better, appreciate kindness,teamwork),呼应主题。[亮点词汇]①heartwarming moments暖心时刻②capture real expressions捕捉真实表情③human spirit人文精神④appreciate the kindness感恩善意[高分句型]① Photos capture real expressions and feelings instantly, making the beauty vivid(. 现在分词作状语)话题七 环境保护第一步 审题1. 【答案】作为中学生应该如何保护环境并介绍其意义2. 【答案】第一人称; 第三人称3. 【答案】说明文4. 【答案】一般现在时5. 【答案】七条第三步 填细节,巧升格,成篇章【答案】16 / 751 To protect the earth, we can start by doing little things, such as saving water,planting more trees, reducing pollution and throwing the rubbish into the dustbin.2 Besides, choose to ride a bike instead of taking a car so that we can helpreduce the pollution.第四步 誊写【答案】【答案】The earth is the only home for everyone on it. It's crying for our help now. Asmiddle school students, it is time for us to make a difference and help save the earth!To protect the earth, we can start by doing little things, such as saving water,planting more trees, reducing pollution and throwing the rubbish into the dustbin. Wecan also save animals and recycle the wastes whenever possible. Besides, choose toride a bike instead of taking a car so that we can help reduce the pollution.As long as we do our part, we can make a positive impact on the environmentand create a better future for ourselves.佳句仿写1. 【答案】It is clear that riding bikes instead of driving cars is good for the air.2. 【答案】Some simple actions can make a big difference to the environment, suchas turning off the tap when brushing teeth and walking to school.3. 【答案】We are supposed to reduce waste to protect the environment.4. 【答案】We should not only stop polluting the rivers, but also clean them up.5. 【答案】We can make our school greener by growing flowers and grass.6. 【答案】We had better divide rubbish into different groups so that it can berecycled easily.7. 【答案】Our small actions can make a big difference to protecting theenvironment.8. 【答案】It's time for everyone to realize the importance of environmentalprotection.写作自测17 / 75【答案】Hello! I'm Li Ming. I want to share my opinions about environmentalprotection here.As we can see, our environment is badly damaged by what we human beingshave done. The polluted water, air and food have a great effect on our health.Therefore, it's high time that everyone should try their best to do what they can toprotect the environment.As middle school students, we can also do a lot of things for the environment.First of all, we should protect the environment by saving energy, including turning offelectrical equipment and taps in time. In addition, we must contact environmentalprotection departments secretly if we find factories are polluting our environment.Above all, we should also plant more trees and travel green. As for me, I often go toschool by bike to protect the environment. Besides, I pick up rubbish in the park onweekends.In a word, the effort from everybody can make a great difference to our world.话题八 人际沟通第一步 审题1. 【答案】介绍与父母沟通的技巧和做法2. 【答案】第一人称3. 【答案】说明文4. 【答案】一般过去时; 一般现在时第三步 填细节,巧升格,成篇章【答案】1 It is common to have disagreements, but we'd better not get too angry.2 Listening is a skill that must be learned and practiced by everyone.3 Last but not least, be sure to be polite.第四步 誊写【答案】Communication with parents is one of the first things we have donesince we were born. As we grow older, we'll find it's not easy to communicate withour parents openly and effectively. So what should we do when communicating withthem Here are some of my ideas.18 / 75Firstly, we can make a list of things our parents and we disagree about most. Tryto find out the reasons why we disagree with each other. Accept each other's ideaslittle by little. It is common to have disagreements, but we'd better not get too angry.Secondly, we should talk with them more! Sharing ideas can make us closer. Besides,we should also learn how to really listen. Listening is a skill that must be learned andpracticed by everyone. Last but not least, be sure to be polite. We are a family inwhich everyone is loved and cared for.In my opinion, let's try our best to communicate well with our parents and makeour family life better.佳句仿写1. 【答案】I'm sorry to hear that you don't know how to get along with yourclassmates.2. 【答案】A friend is someone who is willing to listen to you, offer you help, andgive you care and support.3. 【答案】My problem is that I am afraid to communicate with others.4. 【答案】If we do something wrong, it is really important to learn to say sorry.5. 【答案】I will not talk back to my parents anymore.6. 【答案】You'd better communicate with your friends face to face and explain thereason.7. 【答案】Why not take part in some activities with your new classmates 8. 【答案】You're supposed to leave more time for getting to know the peoplearound you.写作自测(2025·吉林·中考真题)【答案】参考例文:Kind Words Make a DifferenceWe can hear kind words everywhere in our life. They bring us warmth andcourage to keep fighting on.19 / 75Back in Grade 7, the minute I got the result of the English exam, I felt sad. Ifailed again. Ms. Hu came up to me and said softly, “I know you are hard-working.Please go on trying.” Her kind words moved me deeply. I went on studying hard andmy grades got better.Now whenever I meet trouble, I think of Ms. Hu’s kind words. They make adifference to me.Kind words have temperature, so say kind words and become a warm person.Kind Words Make a DifferenceWe can hear kind words everywhere in our life. Kind words make us relaxedand encourage us to become better persons.Last year, I felt nervous before a speech competition. I couldn’t eat well orsleep well. My mom found that and said,“My dear, I know the competition isimportant to you, but you are more important to me. No matter what prize you get,you are still my only one.” Her words made me moved deeply and I relaxed a lot.From then on, I knew my mother’s love would be always with me.So please say kind words to each other, and it can help us get better and better.Kind Words Make a DifferenceWe can hear kind words everywhere in our life. They can bring people courageto face difficulties.Last summer, my friend and I learned to ride horses. So afraid was he that hewasn’t brave enough to get close to the horse. I encouraged him,“Be brave andyou can do it.”My kind words made him trust himself. He climbed onto the horseslowly.It was my kind words that made my friend try with courage instead of fear.Remember to say kind words to others. It is worth making even a littledifference.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;②时态:一般现在时、一般过去时;20 / 75③提示:写作要点已给出,注意保证要点齐全,无单词和语法错误。[写作步骤]第一步,首先引入文章话题:表达善意的话语在生活中的重要性;第二步,具体叙述一件经历的与善意的话语有关的事并介绍对自己的影响;最后一步,提出倡议,倡议对他人说善意的话语。[亮点词汇]①go on继续②make a difference有影响,起作用③encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事④remember to do sth.记得做某事⑤be worth doing sth值得做某事[高分句型]①Back in Grade 7, the minute I got the result of the English exam, I felt sad.(theminute引导时间状语从句)②No matter what prize you get, you are still my only one.(No matter what+从句)③So afraid was he that he wasn’t brave enough to get close to the horse.(so…that…引导结果状语从句)话题九 假期活动第一步 审题1. 【答案】假期计划与安排2. 【答案】第一人称3. 【答案】说明文4. 【答案】一般现在时5. 【答案】什么是假期; 假期对学生的意义; 我的计划; 假期如何使我变得更好; 我的希望; 我是否能得到假期带来的收获第三步 填细节,巧升格,成篇章【答案】1 I also want to show my care for my parents by helping with householdchores, such as washing dishes or tidying up the house.2 It adds to my knowledge,helping me become better.21 / 753 By completing these plans with joy, I'm sure I'll return feeling happy andready for new experiences.第四步 誊写【答案】MyWonderful Holiday PlansA holiday is a special time for students to take a break from school andrelax. It's a chance to enjoy some free time after working hard in classes.During my holiday, I plan to spend wonderful time with my family by havingpicnics in the park, playing board games together, and cooking meals with my parents.I also want to show my care for my parents by helping with household chores, such aswashing dishes or tidying up the house. Additionally, I want to do much readingbecause reading is what makes a full man. Besides, travelling is another good choicefor such a long holiday. It adds to my knowledge, helping me become better. If I havetime, I also want to volunteer in our neighborhood. I can learn new skills, broaden mymind and make new friends through these plans.I look forward to creating lasting memories with my family, reading more,learning new things, and showing more love to the world during this holiday. Bycompleting these plans with joy, I'm sure I'll return feeling happy and ready for newexperiences.佳句仿写1. 【答案】My summer holiday was full of exciting water sports activities.2. 【答案】After a long term, she couldn't wait to start her summer holiday andtravel around.3. 【答案】In order to experience different cultures during the holiday, I chose totravel abroad.4. 【答案】The Mid-Autumn Festival is around the corner. We will have a familyparty.5. 【答案】I will never forget the days which/that I spent on the beach during theholiday.22 / 756. 【答案】What I am looking forward to during the holiday is that I can read manybooks.7. 【答案】Reading an interesting book is more relaxing than playing mobile gamesduring the holiday.8. 【答案】During the winter holiday, I plan to do some outdoor activities such asskiing, skating and making snowmen.9. 【答案】During the holiday, I not only read many interesting books but alsolearned to cook.写作自测1.(2025·四川达州·中考真题)【答案】例文:What will Tengfei High School Students Do in Their Summer Vacation Last week, we asked 100 students about their summer vacation activities. Ourquestions were about sports, art, cooking, reading and others. Here are the results.It is clear that sports are the most popular. 40% of students will do ball gameslike basketball and football. They think it is a great way to keep fit and have fun withfriends. Only 10% of them take up art activities like learning a musical instrument.20% of them prefer to cook. They want to make delicious dishes. 25% of them enjoyreading. Reading books or newspapers can open their minds. And the rest chooseother activities such as traveling and volunteering in summer vacation.In my opinion, these activities can make students’ summer vacations colorfuland meaningful. They can not only develop skills but also relax themselves.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏内容提示,适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步,表明写作意图,开门见山,引出下文调查内容;23 / 75第二步,具体阐述调查结果内容;第三步,阐述自己的观点,讲述暑期活动的意义。[亮点词汇]①such as比如②prefer to do 更喜欢③take up从事④ not only...but also...不但……而且……[高分句型]①It is clear that sports are the most popular. (主语从句)②They think it is a great way to keep fit and have fun with friends(. 省略 that的宾语从句)话题十 文体活动第一步 审题1. 【答案】我眼中的马拉松2. 【答案】第三人称; 第一人称3. 【答案】说明文4. 【答案】一般过去时; 一般现在时5. 【答案】政府; 跑者; 志愿者第三步 填细节,巧升格,成篇章【答案】1 It provided excellent services to make sure that all runners could have aperfect and unforgettable experience.2 Not only did they try their best to finish the marathon, but their spirit alsoencouraged more people.3 Last but not least, the volunteers also played an important role in the event.第四步 誊写【答案】This year, 2024 Lanzhou Marathon was successfully held. I feel proudof my hometown. I'd like to share my ideas with you.24 / 75To begin with, the government organized the event well. It provided excellentservices to make sure that all runners could have a perfect and unforgettableexperience. In the second place, the runners were welcome. Not only did they try theirbest to finish the marathon, but their spirit also encouraged more people. After theevent, they tasted some delicious foods. Last but not least, the volunteers also playedan important role in the event. They worked hard to support the runners. What theydid showed the true meaning of selflessness.In my opinion, the event was a great success. We should hold it every year. It isnot only good for our health, but also a wonderful way to bring people closer together.佳句仿写1. 【答案】As is known to all, doing morning exercises is an important part ofschool sports activities.2. 【答案】With the development of the Internet, we can watch all kinds of culturalperformances online.3. 【答案】My sister is fond of dancing to the music in her room.4. 【答案】She takes up basketball as her main sport and trains hard every day.5. 【答案】I am confident that this art festival will be more wonderful andunforgettable than ever before.6. 【答案】The purpose of doing morning exercises is to start the day with energy.7. 【答案】I read a lot of books so as to learn more about different cultures.写作自测(2025·山东烟台·中考真题)【答案】例文:Let’s get movingRecently, all primary and middle schools in Yantai have been required to carryout the“Double Long Breaks” activity. This new rule introduces two 30-minuteexercise breaks every school day, one after the second class in the morning andanother in the afternoon. It aims to improve our health through more physical activity.25 / 75I really enjoy these breaks. I usually play basketball with my classmates or dosome running. After moving around, I feel more energized and my mind feels freshfor the next class. It’s a great way to relax and have fun.So, let’s all join in! Make the most of these breaks to get moving. Exercise isgood for our bodies and minds. Let’s build a healthy habit together!【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;③提示:写作要点已给出,要注意不要遗漏材料中的内容,并适当增加细节,注意拼写和语法正确。[写作步骤]①第一步,表明写作意图,简单介绍“双大课间”活动;②第二步,具体阐述写作内容,描述具体活动及积极感受;③第三步,书写结语,呼吁同学们积极参与,鼓励同学充分利用时间运动。[亮点词汇]①aim to do sth 意图做某事②have fun玩得开心③join in参加④be good for对……有益⑤in one’s free time在某人的空闲时间[高分句型]①Make the most of these breaks to get moving.(祈使句)话题十一 传统文化第一步 审题1. 【答案】介绍其中一个传统节日及下阶段课题研究计划2. 【答案】第一人称3. 【答案】说明文4. 【答案】一般现在时; 一般现在时5. 【答案】节日习俗; 历史; 日期; 庆祝活动; 食物; 下阶段计划第三步 填细节,巧升格,成篇章26 / 75【答案】1 We've collected much information about the festival by doing some readingin the library and watching a lantern show.2 Small gifts are usually offered when they give right answers.第四步 誊写【答案】Dear classmates,I'm very happy to share our research with you. The subject we've chosen is theLantern Festival. We've collected much information about the festival by doing somereading in the library and watching a lantern show.; The Lantern Festival has ahistory of about 2,000 years. It falls on the 15th day of the first lunar month. Peopleget together to enjoy colourful lanterns and play riddle games. Small gifts are usuallyoffered when they give right answers. It's a tradition to eat tangyuan on this specialday.As for the next step, we will focus on designing lanterns and making Englishriddles, which will help us understand the meaning of the festival better.That's all. Thank you!佳句仿写1. 【答案】The Spring Festival is a traditional festival which is celebrated byChinese people all over the world.2. 【答案】As the autumn comes, many people go hiking and enjoy the beautifulscenery on Double Ninth Festival.3. 【答案】We are proud of Chinese traditional culture and think about how we canpass it on to the next generation.4. 【答案】Many foreigners believe that wearing5. is a good way to experience Chinese culture.6. 【答案】When we eat dinner with other people, it's impolite to point at otherswith chopsticks.写作自测27 / 75(2025·黑龙江·中考真题)【答案】例文My favourite traditional festival is the Spring Festival. Let me introduce it toyou.It is on the first day of the first lunar month. Family members usually gettogether to eat a big dinner. We can see red things everywhere, because they meanhappiness and good fortune. Children will get lucky money from their parents. Peoplealways have a long holiday to relax. It’s a new beginning of the year. It not onlymeans family reunion, but also shows Chinese traditional culture.I like the Spring Festival very much.【详解】[总体分析]① 题材:本文是一篇说明文,为话题作文;② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意介绍节日的时间、庆祝方式、象征意义等,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。[写作步骤]第一步,开门见山,点明最喜欢的传统节日;第二步,具体介绍节日的时间、庆祝方式、象征意义等;第三步,总结并表达对这个节日的喜爱之情。[亮点词汇]① get together 团聚② good fortune 好运③ lucky money 压岁钱④ family reunion 家庭团聚⑤ traditional culture 传统文化[高分句型]① Family members usually get together to eat a big dinner.(动词不定式作目的状语)28 / 75②We can see red things everywhere, because they mean happiness and good fortune.(because引导的原因状语从句)2025 全国一模 20 篇Passage 1【答案】参考例文I’m glad to talk about my expectation. What I expect most is to have my ownAI robot. I think it is a helpful assistant that can do everyday tasks, organize my time,and keep me company. Of course, it can clean my house, cook meals, and remind meabout things I need to do. I hope my AI robot can give me good advice when I haveproblems.I have this expectation because I love how technology can make life easierwhile also making it more meaningful. In today’s busy world, a personal AI friendwould not only save time, but also make me happier.I am waiting for the day when this dream becomes reality.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;②时态:以“一般将来时”为主;③提示:内容要点已给出,考生应按要求进行写作,不可遗漏任何信息提示,可适当添加细节,完善作文内容。[写作步骤]第一步,承接已给出的开头,简要引出自己对未来生活的总体期待;第二步,具体描述期待的未来生活场景;第三步,解释产生这种期待的理由并书写结语。[亮点词汇]① give sb good advice 给某人提出好的建议② of course 当然③ not only…but also… 不仅……而且……29 / 75[高分句型]①What I expect most is to have my own AI robot. (what引导的主语从句)② I think it is a helpful assistant that can do everyday tasks, organize my time, andkeep me company. (that引导的定语从句)③ I have this expectation because I love how technology can make life easier whilealso making it more meaningful. (because引导的原因状语从句)Passage 2【答案】例文:Volunteering is a good way to spend our free time. I would like to share myexperience as a volunteer.Last term, I took part in an after-school reading program. I met a girl namedLisa who was a slow reader. I tried different methods to help her. At first, I chosesome books which she was interested in and read with her patiently. Gradually, shebecame confident and began reading faster. I could see the joy on her face when shemade progress, which gave me a strong sense of satisfaction and achievement.From this experience, I’ve learned that being a volunteer not only brightensothers’ days but also enriches our own lives. So, let’s always be ready to spreadkindness and love!【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;②时态:主要采用“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;③提示:文章应该包括两个问题要点,要适当补充,使文章内容充实;注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误,注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。[写作步骤]第一步,提出写作目的是分享志愿者经历;第二步,详细介绍难忘的志愿者经历;第三步,描述此次经历的收获。[亮点词汇]①a strong sense of satisfaction强烈的满足感30 / 75②make progress进步③not only...but also...不仅……而且……④enrich our own lives丰富自己的生活[高分句型]I could see the joy on her face when she made progress, which gave me a strong senseof satisfaction and achievement. (which引导非限制性定语从句、when引导时间状语从句)Passage 3【答案】例文A good relationship between parents and teenagers plays a vital role in our lives.It provides a warm, pleasant and relaxing environment for our growth and helps usdevelop good mental health.Here are some practical suggestions to enhance the relationship between weteenagers and our parents. Firstly, it is of importance to make communication aregular habit between parents and children. Secondly, it’s a good idea to respecteach other’s opinions. When there are disagreements, we should listen carefully towhat our parents and express our own views in a polite way. More importantly,parents and children ought to spend time and have fun together such as having afamily dinner, going for a walk, or watching a movie.In conclusion, building a good parent-child relationship requires efforts fromboth sides. I truly believe these suggestions will make a great difference.【详解】[总体分析]① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;② 时态:以“一般现在时”为主;③ 提示:需涵盖“亲子关系重要性”和“两条建议”,适当发挥,注意逻辑连贯。[写作步骤]第一步,说明良好亲子关系的重要性;第二步,提出两条具体建议(如主动沟通、共同活动);31 / 75第三步,总结文章。[亮点词汇]① mental health 心理健康② ought to do sth 应该做某事③ in conclusion 总而言之[高分句型]When there are disagreements, we should listen carefully to what our parents andexpress our own views in a polite way.(时间状语从句)Passage 4【答案】例文:Will AI change the role of teachers In our English class, we discussed an interesting question: Will AI change the roleof teachers I believe AI will assist teachers but not replace them. Firstly, AI canhandle repetitive tasks like grading and providing online exercises, saving teachers’time. However, teachers play a unique role in inspiring students and offeringemotional support, which AI cannot achieve. Secondly, every student learnsdifferently. Teachers can adjust their methods based on students’ personalities,while AI mainly follows programmed rules. In the future, AI may become a powerfultool to make teaching more efficient. But the human connection between teachers andstudents will always remain irreplaceable.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;②时态:时态为一般现在时态和一般将来时;③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,突出写作重点,无语法和拼写错误。[写作步骤]第一步:承接开头,引出课堂上关于 AI是否会改变教师角色的讨论;32 / 75第二步:具体阐述观点及理由。一方面,AI能承担重复性工作,节省教师时间。另一方面,教师在激励学生、提供情感支持,以及根据学生个性调整教学方法上有着 AI 无法替代的作用;第三步:书写结语,展望 AI的美好前景,并且说明 AI虽能助力教学,但师生间的人文联系不可替代,AI与教师协同让教学更好。[亮点词汇]①play a role发挥作用②in the future在将来、在未来③between…and…在……和……之间[高分句型]①I believe AI will assist teachers but not replace them.(宾语从句)②However, teachers play a unique role in inspiring students and offering emotionalsupport, which AI cannot achieve.(定语从句)Passage 5【答案】例文Dear Mr Kevin,I am Li Hua, a student from Xinhua Middle School. I would like to apply to be avolunteer for 2025 Shenzhen International Cultural Industry Fair. The following aremy advantages. Firstly, I am outgoing, responsible and cooperative, so I’m alwaysready to help others and good at working with people. Additionally, my spokenEnglish is so good that I can communicate with foreigners fluently in English. Finally,with a deep interest in exploring different cultures to gain some creative ideas, I amsure that I’m suitable for serving this fair. I promise I’II try my best to makecontributions to the fair. And I would appreciate it if you could offer me the chance tobe a volunteer.I’m looking forward to your early reply.Yours truly.Li Hua【详解】[总体分析]33 / 75①题材:本文是一封自荐信,用于申请成为深圳文博会的英文志愿者。②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”,用于描述个人优势和申请意愿。③提示:写作要点已明确给出,包括个人优势、英语能力、对文化的兴趣以及参与决心。考生应确保这些要点都得到涵盖,并可以适当添加细节,使描述更加生动。[写作步骤]第一步,表明写作意图。可以通过“I would like to apply to be a volunteer for 2025Shenzhen International Cultural Industry Fair”等表述来引出接下来要介绍的内容;第二步,具体阐述写作内容。首先介绍个人性格优势,如外向、负责和合作;然后强调英语口语能力,能够与外国人流利交流;接着表达对探索不同文化的兴趣;最后,表达参与决心和贡献意愿;第三步,书写结语。可以表达“期待早日回复”的愿望,作为信件的结尾。[亮点词汇]①would like to想要②communicate with沟通③cooperative合作的④fluently流利地⑤creative ideas创意[高分句型]①Firstly, I am outgoing, responsible and cooperative, so I’m always ready to helpothers and good at working with people.(并列句)②Additionally, my spoken English is so good that I can communicate with foreignersfluently in English.(结果状语从句)③Finally, with a deep interest in exploring different cultures to gain some creativeideas, I am sure that I’m suitable for serving this fair.(介词短语作状语)④I promise I’II try my best to make contributions to the fair.(宾语从句)Passage 6【答案】例文:Dear teachers and fellow students,34 / 75AI is like a“golden key” that brings both chances and problems for ourlearning. I’d like to share some of my thoughts on this growing trend. First, many ofus may depend too much on AI. To solve this problem, we should manage our timewisely and think actively and critically. Don’t just rely on AI to get answers. Second,there is less communication with people. We can take part in various school activities,like group discussions and sports meets. By doing so, we can communicate more withour classmates. Also, some students may be addicted to AI-related entertainment,which is harmful to themselves. We need to set clear study goals and limit our time onsuch entertainment.In conclusion, with the right attitude and proper solutions, we can make gooduse of AI and develop ourselves better.Thank you!【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步,引出“如何应对人工智能带来的挑战”的话题;第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“遇到的问题、态度及解决方法”等方面进行介绍;第三步,书写结语,总结全文。[亮点词汇]①rely on依靠②take part in参加③be harmful to对……有害[高分句型]①Also, some students may be addicted to AI-related entertainment, which is harmfulto themselves.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)Passage 735 / 75【答案】例文School Breaks Are LongerThere are a lot of advantages of longer school breaks for students. First, longerbreaks are good for students’ health. Students have more time to go outside, breathefresh air and do physical activities. Second, longer breaks are also good for learning.After a good rest, students can focus better in class.During the 15-minute breaks, we have lots of choices to relax ourselves. I oftengo to the playground to play badminton or jump rope with my friends. Sometimes, Isimply take a walk around the schoolyard. These activities not only refresh my mindbut also make me feel more energetic for the next class.In my opinion, longer breaks are a great way to balance study and relaxation. Ifeel happier and more productive when I have enough time to relax during the day.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇话题作文。②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”。③提示:根据所给题干进行写作,注意行文连贯,逻辑清晰,无拼写和语法错误。[写作步骤]第一步:承接给出的开头,介绍课间休息时间延长的好处;第二步:介绍自己在课间休息时的活动;第三步:介绍自己对于课间休息时间延长的感受。[亮点词汇]①are good for对……有好处②take a walk散步③make me feel more energetic让我感觉更有活力[高分句型]I feel happier and more productive when I have enough time to relax during the day.(when引导的时间状语从句)Passage 8【答案】例文一:36 / 75My Role Model—Yang LiweiMy role model is Yang Liwei, born in Liaoning in June 1965. He is a renownedChinese astronaut.Yang Liwei made history as China’s first man in space in 2003. During thearduous training, he endured extreme physical and mental stress but never flinched.When in space, despite potential risks, he remained calm and completed all tasksperfectly.His courage and dedication deeply inspire me. In my future life, I aim to be asfearless in the face of challenges and as committed to my goals as he is.例文二:My Role Idol—J.K. RowlingMy idol is J.K. Rowling, born in Gloucestershire, England in 1965. She is aworld-famous novelist.Rowling created the magical“Harry Potter” series. Before success, she facedpoverty and hardships, but she persisted in writing. Even when many publishersrejected her manuscript, she didn’t lose hope. Eventually, her works became aglobal sensation, influencing countless readers.From her, I’ve learned the power of perseverance and imagination. In thefuture, no matter how tough things get, I’ll hold on to my dreams and let myimagination soar.例文三:My Role Model—Yuan LongpingMy role model is Yuan Longping, who was born in Beijing in September 1930and was a distinguished agricultural scientist.Yuan dedicated his life to developing hybrid rice. Once, when his experimentalrice was damaged, he didn’t get discouraged but searched tirelessly for a solution.Another time, despite facing skepticism, he continued his research with unwaveringdetermination. His contributions have greatly increased global rice production andalleviated hunger.37 / 75From him, I’ve learned the qualities of perseverance and selfless dedication. Inthe future, I’ll strive to be as determined in my pursuits and as willing to makecontributions to society as he was.【详解】[总体介绍]①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,属于材料作文;②时态:采用“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;③提示:要求包含所有要点提示,内容完整,句子衔接自然,注意标点符号的使用。[写作步骤]第一步,开门见山,介绍自己的偶像是谁;第二步,阐述偶像的职业和贡献以及为什么成为你的偶像;第三步,从偶像身上学到了什么以及自己今后的期望。[亮点词汇]①a renowned Chinese astronaut一个著名的中国宇航员②remain calm保持冷静③in the face of面对[高分句型]①When in space, despite potential risks, he remained calm and completed all tasksperfectly.(时间状语从句)Passage 9【答案】例文School Life in the Past Three YearsHow time flies! It’s time to say goodbye to my dear school. I would like to say somethingabout my school life in the past three years.Firstly, I developed a strong interest in basketball. Joining the school team notonly improved my skills but also taught me teamwork. Besides, I actively took part indifferent activities, such as the English speech contest and charity sales, which mademe confident. Over the years, I’ve made great progress in both study andcommunication. For example, I learned to express my ideas clearly in classdiscussions.38 / 75Moreover, I’m grateful to my friends and teachers. My friends always cheeredme up when I felt stressed, and my teachers patiently guided me through challenges.Their support made my school life meaningful.Although saying goodbye is hard, I feel lucky to have such unforgettablememories. I’ll remember and value every moment forever. (Words:120)【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为校园生活征文投稿;②时态:时态为“一般过去时”和“现在完成时”为主,因为描述过去三年的校园生活,涉及过去发生的事情以及到现在为止取得的进步;③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中关于过去三年校园生活的介绍要点,包括爱好或兴趣、参加的活动、取得的进步、朋友和老师以及感受,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步,表明写作意图。开篇点题,引出要回顾过去三年校园生活这一主题;第二步,具体阐述写作内容。按照提示,从“爱好或兴趣、参加的活动、取得的进步、朋友和老师”几个方面重点介绍过去三年校园生活的具体情况,并表达自己的感受;第三步,书写结语。可简单总结或再次表达对校园生活的难忘等情感。[亮点词汇]①developed a strong interest in 对……产生了强烈的兴趣②not only...but also... 不仅……而且……③take part in 参加④such as 例如⑤be grateful to 对……感激⑥cheer sb. up 使某人振作起来[高分句型]①Joining the school team not only improved my skills but also taught me teamwork.(“not only...but also...”连接两个并列的谓语动词,表示“不仅……而且……”)39 / 75②Besides, I actively took part in different activities, such as the English speechcontest and charity sales, which made me confident.(“which”引导非限制性定语从句,修饰前面的整个句子,表示“这使我变得自信”)③My friends always cheered me up when I felt stressed, and my teachers patientlyguided me through challenges.(“when”引导时间状语从句,表示“当我感到压力时”;“and”连接两个并列的句子,表示“并且”)Passage 10【答案】例文How to be a good teenagerHello, everyone! It is my honor to make a speech here. Teenagers are the hopeand flowers of a country. How can we be good teenagers First, we should set up correct values, love our motherland, and spread Chineseculture. Second, we should keep fit, do more exercise and get enough sleep. Third, weshould study hard and join various clubs actively. Fourth, we should get along wellwith others and help those in need. Fifth, we should protect the environment. What’smore, we shouldn’t waste water, food and so on. We should try our best to be a goodteenager.I’m sure each of us will be a good teenager.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;②时态:主要为“一般现在时”;③提示:写作提示已给出,可适当增加细节,不要遗漏,注意上下文的逻辑关系。[写作步骤]第一步,引出主题;第二步,具体介绍如何成为一名好的青少年;第三步,书写结语。[亮点词汇]①set up树立②keep fit保持健康40 / 75③get along well with others与他人相处融洽[高分句型]①First, we should set up correct values, love our motherland, and spread Chineseculture.(并列结构)Passage 11【答案】例文Save Food, Save the WorldThe global food crisis is currently in a serious situation. In many poor areas, people areliving on the verge of hunger. However, in our daily lives, food waste is common. Weoften order too much food in restaurants and throw away the leftovers. At home, webuy more food than we need, and some of it goes bad before we can eat it.Saving food is important for several reasons. First, it helps to reduce waste andsave resources. Second, it can help to alleviate the food shortage problem in poorareas. Third, it is a way to show respect for farmers and their hard work.To save food, we can take several actions. In restaurants, we should order onlyas much food as we can eat. At home, we should plan our meals carefully and buyonly what we need. We should also learn to preserve food properly so that it does notgo bad quickly.In conclusion, saving food is a simple but important action that each of us cantake to help save the world. Let us all do our part to reduce food waste and make adifference.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇倡议书,为材料作文;②时态:一般现在时;③提示:内容要点已给出,考生应按要求进行写作,不可遗漏任何信息提示,适当添加细节,使行文连贯。[写作步骤]第一步,简要描述当前全球粮食短缺的现状(已给出),列举日常生活中常见的粮食浪费现象;41 / 75第二步,说明保护粮食的重要性;第三步,提出具体的节约措施;第四步,总结全文,并呼吁大家共同行动。[亮点词汇]①throw away扔掉②alleviate the food shortage problem缓解粮食短缺问题③ In conclusion总之④do our part to...尽我们的一份力量做某事⑤reduce food waste减少食物浪费⑥make a difference产生影响[高分句型]① At home, we buy more food than we need, and some of it goes bad before we caneat it.(时间状语从句)② At home, we should plan our meals carefully and buy only what we need.(宾语从句)③We should also learn to preserve food properly so that it does not go bad quickly.(so that引导的结果状语从句)Passage 12【答案】As the saying goes,“Thinking is the soul of learning.” In my view, thinkingis the key to unlocking our potential. Good thinking skills can improve our learningefficiency and help us get well prepared for our future.When I was in Grade 8, I once had a tough time understanding a difficult mathproblem. Instead of giving up, I took a step back and thought about different ways tosolve it. I tried breaking it down into smaller parts and using various methods I hadlearned. After thinking and trying many times, finally I found the solution. I was soproud at that time. Later on, every time I met the same type of problem, I was able towork it out easily.To improve our thinking skills, we should read widely to expose ourselves todifferent ideas. Also, asking questions and having discussions with others can help us42 / 75see things differently. By doing these, we can develop better thinking skills andachieve more in life.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇材料作文。②时态:主要采用一般现在时和一般过去时。③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容,适当增加细节,并且突出写作的要点。[写作步骤]第一步,表达自己对思维能力的观点。第二步,介绍自己使用思维能力解决实际问题的经历。第三步,陈述如何提高思维能力的建议。[亮点词汇]①in my view在我看来②the key to...……的关键③instead of而不是④be able to能够⑤have discussions with sb.和某人讨论[高分句型]When I was in Grade 8, I once had a tough time understanding a difficult mathproblem. (when引导时间状语从句)Passage 13【答案】例文Sharing Life OnlineNowadays, many young people enjoy sharing their lives online, postingeverything from daily activities to travel experiences. They often share photos ofmeals, selfies, or updates about their hobbies and achievements.This trend has both advantages and disadvantages. On the plus side, it helpspeople connect with friends and family, allowing them to stay updated on eachother’s lives. It also provides a platform for self-expression and creativity. However,43 / 75sharing too much personal information online can lead to privacy concerns, and somemay feel pressured to present a perfect image.In my opinion, sharing life online is a great way to stay connected, but weshould be cautious about what we post to protect our privacy and mental health.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步,表明写作意图,介绍通常人们在网上分享的内容;第二步,介绍在网上分享自己生活的利与弊;第三步,表达自己对这一现象的看法。[亮点词汇]①enjoy doing sth.喜欢做某事②help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事③lead to导致[高分句型]In my opinion, sharing life online is a great way to stay connected, but we should becautious about what we post to protect our privacy and mental health. (what引导的宾语从句)Passage 14【答案】例文Dear Peter,I’m excited to invite you to our School Science Day on January 21 from 8:00to 17:00 on the playground. My favourite thing on show is a robot made of iron. It’sused for serving the drinks to the people. I think the show is creative and interesting.The things are beautiful and wonderful. If you come, it’s important to be on time.When you meet someone for the first time, you’re supposed to shake hands withthem.I know you’re interested in science, so come to join us. Hope to hear from yousoon.Yours,44 / 75Li Hua【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步,交代写作意图,表明想要邀请笔友参与;第二步,具体从四个方面介绍科技节的相关情况;第三步,再次发出邀请并期待回复。[亮点词汇]①invite sb. to do sth.邀请某人做某事②from…to…从……到……③be supposed to应该[高分句型]①If you come, it’s important to be on time. (if引导的条件状语从句)②When you meet someone for the first time, you’re supposed to shake hands withthem. (when引导的时间状语从句)Passage 15【答案】Dear fellow students,Our environment is becoming worse and worse. As students, what can we do toprotect the environment Here are some simple steps we can take to make adifference.First, let’s choose green travel. Walking, cycling, or taking publictransportation instead of driving can reduce air pollution and save energy. It’s notonly good for the environment but also good for our health. Second, we should saveelectricity. Turn off lights, computers, and other electronic devices when they are notin use. Small actions like these can help reduce energy consumption. Lastly, let’s45 / 75recycle paper and other waste. Reusing items and separating recyclables from trashcan greatly reduce the amount of waste we produce.By doing these small things, we can contribute to a healthier planet. Let’s starttoday and make a difference together!【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步,写作意图开头已给出,写作时可直接引出下文。第二步,具体阐述写作内容,主要围绕“绿色出行”、“节约用电”以及“循环使用纸和废品”展开,适当补充,丰富细节。第三步,书写结语,提出强烈倡导。[亮点词汇]①make a difference有影响②green travel绿色出行③public transportation公共交通④instead of而不是⑤not only…but also…不仅……而且……⑥air pollution空气污染⑦Turn off关闭⑧energy consumption能力消耗⑨the amount of大多数的⑩contribute to贡献[高分句型]①Here are some simple steps we can take to make a difference. (定语从句)②Turn off lights, computers, and other electronic devices when they are not in use.(when引导的时间状语从句,祈使句)Passage 1646 / 75Yours,Li Hui【答案】例文 展开更多...... 收起↑ 资源列表 2026中考写作进阶(全国彩色版) .pdf 2026中考写作进阶(答案) .pdf