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七年级下册 Unit 5 Amazing Nature
一、习作主题聚焦
本单元围绕“神奇的自然”展开，核心是多彩的青藏高原及自然奇观面临的问题的核心文章。涵盖介绍自然奇观、探索自然方面的内容。
二、写作维度及经典语料
Introduction：Introducing nature & its beauty
Nature is amazing and beautiful around us.（自然在我们身边，神奇又美丽。）
There are many wonderful things in nature.（自然里有许多美妙的事物。）
We can see mountains, rivers, forests and animals in nature.（在自然中我们能看见山川、森林和动物。）
Body：Describing nature, activities & feelings Describing sights
There are green trees and colourful flowers everywhere.（到处都是绿树和五颜六色的花。）
The sky is blue and the air is clean.（天空湛蓝，空气清新。）
The mountains are high and the rivers are long.（山很高，河很长。）
Describing activities
We can walk in the forest /by the lake.（我们可以在森林里 / 湖边散步。）
We can watch birds and lovely animals.（我们可以看鸟和可爱的动物。）
We can enjoy the beauty of nature.（我们可以欣赏自然之美。）
Sharing feelings
I feel happy and relaxed when I stay in nature.（身处自然中，我感到开心又放松。）
Nature is so amazing that I love it very much.（自然如此神奇，我非常热爱它。）
It makes me feel close to the world.（它让我感觉与世界亲近。）
Conclusion：Showing love and advice to protect nature
Nature is important to all of us.（自然对我们所有人都很重要。）
It gives us clean air and beautiful views.（它给予我们清新空气和美丽景色。）
We should love nature and protect it well.（我们应该热爱自然并好好保护它。）
Let’s keep nature clean and beautiful forever.（让我们永远保持自然干净美丽。）
三、 写作要点和指导
话题：Amazing Nature（神奇自然）核心内容：描写自然景物、动植物、自然体验、感受、保护自然的简单呼吁。
时态：描写景物、常态：一般现在时（最常用）；写一次自然体验 / 经历：一般过去时；呼吁、建议：should / can / must等情态动词的使用。
体裁：记叙文（描写 + 感受），简单说明文（介绍自然 + 呼吁）
人称：第一人称 I / We（写感受、体验）；第三人称 it /they（描写景物、动物）
结构要求：
开头：引入自然的神奇与美丽 → 点题 Amazing nature主体：描写景物 / 动物 / 活动 + 个人感受结尾：总结自然的重要性 + 呼吁爱护与保护
核心句型
There be…, so…, because…, It’s + adj. + to…, make sb. feel…
四、写作样本
范文一（基于课标 课文风格改编）
Amazing Nature
Nature is all around us, and it is really amazing. There are so many beautiful things to see and enjoy.
We can see high mountains, long rivers and green forests. The trees are tall and the flowers are colourful. The air is clean and fresh. Many lovely animals live happily in nature, like birds, rabbits and fish. Birds sing nicely in the trees. When I walk in the park or forest, I feel relaxed and happy.
Nature is important to us. It gives us food and clean air. It also makes our world beautiful. We should love nature and take good care of it. Let’s keep nature clean and amazing forever.
译文：神奇的自然自然就在我们身边，它真的很神奇。有太多美丽的事物可以看、可以欣赏。
我们能看见高山、长河和绿色的森林。树木高大，花儿色彩缤纷。空气干净又清新。许多可爱的动物快乐地生活在自然里，比如小鸟、兔子和鱼儿。小鸟在树上唱着动听的歌。当我在公园或森林里散步时，我感到放松又快乐。
自然对我们很重要。它给我们食物和清新的空气，也让我们的世界美丽。我们应该热爱自然、爱护自然。让我们永远保持自然干净、神奇。
范文二（基于课标 体验类课文改编）
A Wonderful Day in Nature
Last Sunday, I went to the hill with my family. We wanted to enjoy the amazing nature around us.
The sky was blue with white clouds. The trees were green and the grass was soft. We walked along the small road and saw many beautiful flowers. Some butterflies flew around them. We sat by a small river and listened to the water. My brother took many photos of the trees and birds. I felt so peaceful and happy.
Nature is so great. It makes us feel relaxed and close to the world. We must not litter or hurt animals. We should protect nature and let it stay beautiful for us all.
译文：自然里美好的一天上周日，我和家人去了山上。我们想欣赏身边神奇的自然。
天空蓝蓝的，飘着白云。树木翠绿，小草柔软。我们沿着小路散步，看见了许多美丽的花。一些蝴蝶在花旁飞舞。我们坐在小河边，听着水流声。弟弟拍了很多树和小鸟的照片。我感到特别宁静、开心。
自然太伟大了。它让我们放松，贴近世界。我们一定不能乱扔垃圾，也不能伤害动物。我们应该保护自然，让它永远美丽。
范文三（高于课标 议论 + 感受 适合期末 / 培优）
The Amazing World of Nature
Nature is one of the most amazing gifts in our life. It is not only beautiful but also important to everyone. We can always find beauty and surprise if we look carefully.
In nature, there are high mountains, quiet lakes and green forests. There are all kinds of plants and lovely animals. Every season brings new looks: spring is colourful, summer is lively, autumn is golden and winter is white. When we stay close to nature, we feel calm and relaxed. It helps us forget our worries and enjoy the simple happiness in life.
Nature gives us so much, so we must learn to protect it. We should plant more trees, save water and keep the environment clean. If we take good care of nature, it will keep amazing us forever.
译文：神奇的自然世界自然是我们生命中最神奇的礼物之一。它不仅美丽，对每个人也很重要。只要我们仔细观察，总能发现美与惊喜。
自然里有高山、宁静的湖泊和绿色的森林。有各种各样的植物和可爱的动物。每个季节都带来新面貌：春天多彩、夏天活泼、秋天金黄、冬天洁白。当我们亲近自然时，会感到平静又放松。它帮我们忘记烦恼，享受生活中简单的快乐。
自然给予我们太多，所以我们必须学会保护它。我们应该多植树、节约用水、保持环境干净。如果我们好好爱护自然，它就会永远带给我们惊喜。

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