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2026届河北承德市强基联盟高三一模英语写作训练（邀请类邮件+读后续写之母女温情）
一、应用文写作（名著短剧邀请类邮件）
（一）题型核心考点
本题为应用文之分享邀请类邮件，核心考查“项目介绍+发出邀请”的清晰表达，兼顾礼貌得体的交际语气（对笔友）。评分重点：内容完整性、行文逻辑、格式规范及语法多样性。
（二）写作任务
假定你是李华，最近你正在策划一部根据中国四大名著之一改编的短剧。请你给英国笔友Michael写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.介绍该短剧内容；2.邀请他参加表演。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80左右；（2）请按如下格式作答。
Dear Michael,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
（三）语法亮点预判（可借鉴句式）
非谓语动词：作定语/状语，如“Adapted from one of China’s Four Great Classical Novels, the short play tells a classic story.”
宾语从句：表达邀请，如“I sincerely hope that you can join us and play a role in it.”
并列结构：介绍剧情，如“The play includes funny dialogues, exciting scenes and traditional cultural elements.”
（四）高分句子默写
我正在策划一部改编自《西游记》的短剧，讲述唐僧师徒西天取经的经典故事。________________________________________________________________
这部短剧充满趣味，还能展现中国传统文化，很适合舞台表演。________________________________________________________________
我诚挚邀请你加入我们，扮演其中一个角色，相信你会喜欢这次体验。________________________________________________________________
如果你感兴趣，请尽快告诉我，期待你的加入。________________________________________________________________
（五）拓展表达练习（同义替换）
策划：plan = _______ = _______
改编：adapt = _______ = _______
邀请：invite = _______ = _______
参加：join = _______ = _______
二、读后续写（母女温情主题）
（一）主题分析与续写思路
核心主题：母女情深、平凡中的爱意、知足与感恩、用心守护温暖，从失落遗憾到暖心释怀的情感递进。
伏笔呼应：前文Ana攒钱买礼物、妈妈常年穿旧灰裙、深夜缝补衣服，为续写“心意胜过物质、亲手改造礼物”铺垫。
续写思路：
Paragraph 1（Ana摊开手心）：描写Ana的愧疚不安→妈妈看到硬币后的反应→温柔安抚女儿，化解遗憾。
Paragraph 2（妈妈提议买彩线）：妈妈提出用彩线改造旧裙→母女合力制作礼物→爱意升华，凸显真情无价。
（二）写作任务
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The bell above the bakery door sounded, marking the end of another long day. Six-year-old Ana watched her mother, Elena, wipe flour-dusted hands on her apron (围裙)—the same faded blue one she wore every day. Her mother’s dress, a simple grey shift washed thin at the elbows, was as constant as the sunrise.
Tomorrow was Mama’s birthday. A secret, heavy with love, sat in Ana’s chest. Mama never bought clothes for herself. Her gifts were the warm bread on the table, the quiet mending of Ana’s socks, and the gentle song she hummed while making bread. Ana’s biggest wish was to wrap her love in something beautiful: a new dress, the color of the sky just after dawn.
But coins were for flour and eggs, not for dreams. As Elena locked the door, an idea started to form and grow in Ana’s mind. She would grow her gift, like the seeds in the window box.
The next morning, Ana became a tiny, determined entrepreneur. She gathered fallen flowers from the geraniums (天竺葵) by the step, threading them onto strings to make “necklaces”. She drew careful pictures of their bakery, selling them to kindly neighbors for a penny. She even offered to carefully dust old Mr. Henderson’s collection of tin soldier statues, her small face serious with effort. Her piggy bank began to whisper with a few lonely coins.
Days passed. Her piggy bank grew heavier, but not heavy enough. On the eve of the birthday, Ana poured the coins onto her blanket. It wasn’t enough for a dress, not even a scarf. Downstairs, she found her mother at the kitchen table, mending that same grey dress by lamplight. The sight was a quiet ache. “Mama,” Ana whispered, the coins held firmly in her small fist. “I wanted to buy you a blue dress for tomorrow. But I only have this.”
注意：（1）续写词数应为150左右；（2）请按如下格式作答。
Ana’s voice trembled (颤抖) as she opened her hand.
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“Oh, could you buy some multi-color threads for me ” Elena asked.
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（三）高分亮点预判
细节描写：神态、动作、心理描写，凸显母女间细腻温情。
语法结构：分词作伴随状语、宾语从句、并列句，提升句式复杂度。
情感连贯：呼应前文攒钱、缝补等细节，实现情感闭环，升华真爱无价主题。
（四）高分句子默写
一、描写类（场景与动作）
Ana声音颤抖地摊开手心，几枚硬币静静躺在掌心，她眼眶泛红，满心愧疚与失落。________________________________________________________________
妈妈轻轻握住她的小手，温柔地笑了，眼神里满是心疼与欣慰，丝毫没有失望。________________________________________________________________
二、情感类（感悟与升华）
妈妈的提议让Ana眼前一亮，原来最珍贵的礼物不是昂贵的衣物，而是满满的爱意。________________________________________________________________
母女俩一起改造旧裙子，一针一线都饱含深情，这个生日变得格外有意义。________________________________________________________________
参考答案
一、应用文写作（名著短剧邀请类邮件）
（一）题型核心考点
本题为应用文之分享邀请类邮件，核心考查“项目介绍+发出邀请”的清晰表达，兼顾礼貌得体的交际语气（对笔友）。评分重点：内容完整性、行文逻辑、格式规范及语法多样性。
（二）高分范文（80词）
Dear Michael,
How is everything going I’m planning a short play adapted from *Journey to the West*, one of China’s Four Great Classical Novels. It tells the classic story of Tang Monk and his three apprentices going on a journey for scriptures.
The play is fun and full of traditional Chinese culture. I sincerely invite you to join us and play a role. It will be a great chance to experience Chinese culture. Please let me know if you’re interested.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
（三）语法亮点解析
过去分词作定语：adapted from *Journey to the West*，简洁高级，介绍作品背景。
非谓语动词作结果状语：full of traditional Chinese culture，丰富内容，凸显文化内涵。
宾语从句：Please let me know if you’re interested，语气委婉，符合邀请语境。
（四）高分句子默写
I’m planning a short play adapted from *Journey to the West*, which tells the classic story of Tang Monk and his apprentices taking a journey to the West for scriptures.
This short play is full of fun and can show traditional Chinese culture, making it perfect for stage performance.
I sincerely invite you to join us and play a role in it, and I’m sure you will enjoy the experience.
Please let me know as soon as possible if you are interested, and I’m looking forward to your participation.
（五）拓展表达练习
策划：plan = organize = arrange
改编：adapt = rewrite = make an adaptation of
邀请：invite = ask = request
参加：join = take part in = participate in
二、读后续写（母女温情主题）
（一）主题分析与续写思路
核心主题：母女情深、平凡中的爱意、知足与感恩、用心守护温暖，从失落遗憾到暖心释怀的情感递进。
伏笔呼应：前文Ana攒钱买礼物、妈妈常年穿旧灰裙、深夜缝补衣服，为续写“心意胜过物质、亲手改造礼物”铺垫。
（二）高分范文（148词）
Ana’s voice trembled (颤抖) as she opened her hand. Several coins lay quietly in her palm, and tears welled up in her big eyes. She lowered her head, too guilty to look at her mother. However, Elena knelt down and held Ana’s small hands tightly, with a soft smile on her face. “Honey, your love is the best gift in the world,” she whispered, wiping Ana’s tears gently.
“Oh, could you buy some multi-color threads for me ” Elena asked. Ana nodded vigorously, her eyes lighting up at once. They went to the store together and picked colorful threads. That night, mother and daughter sat together, embroidering beautiful patterns on the old grey dress. The plain dress became unique and warm. It was not a new dress, but it carried the deepest love between them.
（三）高分亮点解析
细节描写：trembled、tears welled up、lowered her head 等神态动作，情感真挚细腻。
非谓语动词：wiping Ana’s tears gently，作伴随状语，句式更流畅。
情感反转：从愧疚失落到温暖开心，呼应前文伏笔，情节合理动人。
主题升华：点明心意比物质珍贵，传递亲情无价的正向价值观。
（四）高分句子默写
一、描写类（场景与动作）
Ana opened her hand with a trembling voice, several coins lying quietly in her palm. Her eyes turned red, filled with guilt and disappointment.
Mother held her little hands gently and smiled softly, with full of love and relief in her eyes, not disappointed at all.
二、情感类（感悟与升华）
Mother’s proposal lit up Ana’s eyes. It turned out that the most precious gift was not expensive clothes, but full of love.
Mother and daughter transformed the old dress together, with every stitch full of deep affection, making this birthday particularly meaningful.
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