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2026届八省联考（T8联盟）2025-2026学年高三上学期12月月考英语写作训练（邮件写作+读后续写之书店守护）
一、邮件写作（建议交换生Peter选择志愿者活动）
（一）题型核心考点
本题为应用文之建议类邮件，核心考查“给出明确建议+阐释合理理由”的清晰表达，兼顾自然亲切的交际语气（对交换生朋友）。评分重点：内容完整性（明确建议+具体理由）、行文逻辑、格式规范、语气恰当及词数控制（80左右）。
（二）写作任务
第一节（满分 15 分）假定你是李华，你所在的城市有两个活动正在招募志愿者，一个为越野跑(cross-country running)，另一个为书法比赛(calligraphy competition)。你的交换生朋友Peter不知道选择哪一个参加，向你寻求建议。请你写一封邮件。
内容包括：1．给出建议；2．说明理由。
注意：1．写作词数应为80个左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答；3．开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I am thrilled to hear you’re interested in being a volunteer. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
（三）语法亮点预判（可借鉴句式）
建议句式：用于明确给出建议，如“I suggest you choose to be a volunteer for the cross-country running.”
原因状语从句：用于阐释理由，如“Because it can help you make more friends and experience the passion of sports closely.”
比较句式：用于突出建议的合理性，如“Compared with the calligraphy competition, it is more relaxing and suitable for you to adapt to the new environment.”
（四）高分句子默写
1. 我建议你选择担任越野跑活动的志愿者，因为它不仅能让你感受运动的魅力，还能快速认识更多志同道合的朋友。________________________________________________________________
2. 与书法比赛相比，越野跑志愿者工作更轻松有趣，也能让你更好地了解我们城市的风貌。________________________________________________________________
3. 我认为你适合参加书法比赛志愿者活动，因为这能让你近距离感受中国传统文化的魅力，提升你的文化认知。________________________________________________________________
4. 书法比赛节奏舒缓，工作内容简单易上手，能让你在轻松的氛围中完成志愿工作，收获成就感。________________________________________________________________
（五）拓展表达练习（同义替换）
建议：suggest = _______ = _______
适合：suitable = _______ = _______
感受：experience = _______ = _______
轻松的：relaxing = _______ = _______
二、读后续写（书店守护主题）
（一）主题分析与续写思路
核心主题：对传统文化与旧时光的守护、善意的共鸣与妥协，从“绝望不舍”到“圆满共赢”的情感递进。
伏笔呼应：前文书店对David的特殊意义（童年回忆、成长见证）、David收集的书店物品、Sarah想将书店改为潮流咖啡馆的想法，为续写“David努力劝说、双方达成共识”铺垫。
续写思路：
Paragraph 1（David努力发声）：David鼓起勇气上前→ 拿出收集的书店物品，诉说书店的意义→ 讲述书店对邻里、对自己的重要性，打动Sarah。
Paragraph 2（书店与咖啡馆结合）：Sarah被打动，改变想法→ 双方达成共识（书店与咖啡馆结合）→ 描写改造后的样子，凸显“守护与创新”的共赢主题。
（二）写作任务
第二节（满分 25 分）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Mr. Hopkins’ bookstore was a quiet island in the noisy stream of the modern city. For decades, it had been a shelter for book lovers. The wooden sign above the door, weathered but proud, read “Hopkins’ Books” in brick red. It had been a constant place where time moved slower with the first turn of a page. Now, it was closing.
The news felt like a physical blow to David, a quiet college student who had grown up reading in the cozy corners of the shop. The smell of old paper was the smell of his childhood, witnessing his growth. He couldn’t imagine the street without its warm, inviting light. When the news spread throughout the entire neighborhood, worry was written all over everyone’s faces.
The reason for the closure was a woman named Sarah Chen. Representing a large development company, she had made a generous offer to buy the building. She saw the space not for its shelves of stories, but for its potential as a trendy café, a profitable upgrade. To her, it was just business.
Mr. Hopkins, now old and tired, felt defeated. “Maybe it’s time, David,” he sighed, his hand resting on a dusty copy of his favorite novel. “The world has moved on.”
On the day of the final meeting, David arrived early, his backpack filled with items he had collected over the years from the store: a bookmark from his tenth birthday, a receipt from the first book he had bought with his own money, a photograph of himself and Mr. Hopkins taken during a summer reading program. He walked to the children’s section and drew a small, worn copy of The Adventures of Tom Sawyer. The cover was faded, the pages yellowed, but the spine still held strong.
Sarah arrived precisely at 2:00 p.m. She wasted no time getting down to business, reviewing the contract with Mr. Hopkins. David watched from the sidelines, his heart pounding in his chest.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150个左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: He couldn’t let this happen—not without trying to make his voice heard. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2: A decision was made to combine a bookstore and a café in one project, and the construction began, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（三）高分亮点预判
细节描写：通过动作（如“take out the items carefully”）、神态（如“eyes filled with tears”）、物品细节（如“faded bookmark, yellowed pages”）凸显情感。
语法结构：定语从句、分词作伴随状语、宾语从句，提升句式复杂度。
情感连贯：从David的不舍与努力，到Sarah的动容与妥协，再到最终的共赢，呼应前文书店的意义，升华“守护旧时光、融合新潮流”的主题。
（四）高分句子默写
描写类（场景与动作）
1. David深吸一口气，鼓起勇气走上前，小心翼翼地从背包里拿出那些珍藏的物品，声音带着一丝颤抖地诉说着书店对他的意义。________________________________________________________________
2. 改造后的空间里，旧书架整齐排列，咖啡馆的桌椅错落有致，阳光透过窗户洒进来，温暖了每一本旧书和每一个前来的人。________________________________________________________________
情感类（感悟与联结）
1. Sarah看着那些充满回忆的物品，听着David的诉说，终于明白，这个书店不仅仅是一个建筑，更是一代人的回忆与心灵的港湾。________________________________________________________________
2. 书店与咖啡馆的结合，既留住了旧时光的温暖，又融入了新潮流的活力，让文化的力量在时光中得以延续。________________________________________________________________
参考答案
一、邮件写作（建议交换生Peter选择志愿者活动）
（一）题型核心考点
本题为应用文之建议类邮件，核心考查“给出明确建议+阐释合理理由”的清晰表达，兼顾自然亲切的交际语气（对交换生朋友）。评分重点：内容完整性（明确建议+具体理由）、行文逻辑、格式规范、语气恰当及词数控制（80左右）。
（二）高分范文（80词）
Dear Peter,
I am thrilled to hear you’re interested in being a volunteer. I suggest you choose to be a volunteer for the cross-country running instead of the calligraphy competition.
Compared with the calligraphy competition, it is more relaxing and exciting, which can help you adapt to our city quickly. Besides, you can make more friends who love sports and experience the passion of the event closely. It will be a meaningful and unforgettable experience for you.
Yours,
Li Hua
（三）语法亮点解析
建议句式：I suggest you choose to be a volunteer for the cross-country running...（语气自然亲切，符合对朋友提建议的场景，简洁明了。）
比较句式：Compared with the calligraphy competition, it is more relaxing and exciting...（突出两个活动的差异，让建议更具说服力。）
非限制性定语从句：which can help you adapt to our city quickly（补充说明越野跑志愿者活动的好处，句式灵活，提升语法层次。）
（四）高分句子默写
1. I suggest you choose to be a volunteer for the cross-country running, because it can not only let you feel the charm of sports, but also help you quickly meet more like-minded friends.
2. Compared with the calligraphy competition, the cross-country running volunteer work is more relaxing and interesting, and it can also let you better understand the style of our city.
I think you are suitable for being a volunteer for the calligraphy competition, because it can let you closely feel the charm of Chinese traditional culture and improve your cultural cognition.
4. The calligraphy competition is slow-paced and the work is simple and easy to start, which allows you to complete the volunteer work in a relaxed atmosphere and gain a sense of accomplishment.
（五）拓展表达练习
建议：suggest = advise = recommend
适合：suitable = fit = appropriate
感受：experience = feel = perceive
轻松的：relaxing = easy-going = leisurely
二、读后续写（书店守护主题）
（一）主题分析与续写思路
核心主题：对传统文化与旧时光的守护、善意的共鸣与妥协，从“绝望不舍”到“圆满共赢”的情感递进。
伏笔呼应：前文书店对David的特殊意义（童年回忆、成长见证）、David收集的书店物品、Sarah想将书店改为潮流咖啡馆的想法，为续写“David努力劝说、双方达成共识”铺垫。
续写思路：
Paragraph 1（David努力发声）：David鼓起勇气上前→ 拿出收集的书店物品，诉说书店的意义→ 讲述书店对邻里、对自己的重要性，打动Sarah。
Paragraph 2（书店与咖啡馆结合）：Sarah被打动，改变想法→ 双方达成共识（书店与咖啡馆结合）→ 描写改造后的样子，凸显“守护与创新”的共赢主题。
（二）高分范文（148词）
Paragraph 1: He couldn’t let this happen—not without trying to make his voice heard. Taking a deep breath, David stepped forward bravely. He took out the bookmark, receipt and photo from his backpack carefully, and told Sarah the story behind each item. He said the bookstore was his childhood shelter and had witnessed the growth of many people in the neighborhood. His voice trembled with emotion, and tears filled his eyes. Sarah put down the contract, listened quietly, and her expression softened gradually as she watched the precious items.
Paragraph 2: A decision was made to combine a bookstore and a café in one project, and the construction began, With everyone’s efforts, the old bookstore regained vitality. The original wooden shelves were kept, filled with various books, while a small cozy café was added in the corner. When it opened, neighbors and book lovers gathered here, reading books and drinking coffee. David and Mr. Hopkins smiled happily, and Sarah also felt a sense of accomplishment. It was a perfect combination of old memories and new trends, letting the warmth of books last forever.
（三）高分亮点解析
细节描写：took out carefully, voice trembled with emotion, tears filled his eyes 等动作、神态细节，生动展现David的不舍与坚定，场景真挚动人。
分词作伴随状语：Taking a deep breath, David stepped forward bravely.（伴随状语简化句子，句式紧凑，提升语法层次。）
伏笔呼应：描写David拿出珍藏的书店物品，呼应前文他提前准备物品的细节；保留旧书架、加入咖啡馆，呼应Sarah想做咖啡馆的想法，情节连贯。
主题升华：以“a perfect combination of old memories and new trends, letting the warmth of books last forever”总结，凸显“守护与创新共赢”的主题，传递积极的价值观。
（四）高分句子默写
描写类（场景与动作）
1. David took a deep breath, summoned up his courage to step forward, took out those cherished items from his backpack carefully, and told Sarah the significance of the bookstore to him in a trembling voice.
2. In the renovated space, the old bookshelves were neatly arranged, the café tables and chairs were scattered, and the sun streamed through the windows, warming every old book and everyone who came.
情感类（感悟与联结）
1. Looking at those items full of memories and listening to David’s words, Sarah finally realized that this bookstore was more than just a building, but a memory of a generation and a spiritual harbor.
2. The combination of the bookstore and the café not only retained the warmth of old times, but also integrated the vitality of new trends, allowing the power of culture to continue in time.
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