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山东省2026年普通高中学业水平4月调研英语试题
注意事项：
1.答题前，考生先将自己的姓名、考生号等填写在答题卡和试卷指定位置。
2.回答选择题时，选出每小题答案后，用2B铅笔把答题卡上对应题目的答案标号涂黑。如需改动，用橡皮擦干净后，再选涂其他答案标号。回答非选择题时，将答案用0.5mm黑色签字笔写在答题卡上，写在本试卷上无效。
3.考试结束后，将本试卷和答题卡一并交回。
第一部分 听力(共两节，满分30分)
做题时，先将答案标在试卷上。录音内容结束后，你将有两分钟的时间将试卷上的答案转涂到答题卡上。
第一节(共5小题：每小题1.5分，满分7.5分)
听下面5段对话。每段对话后有一个小题，从题中所给的A、B、C三个选项中选出最佳选项。听完每段对话后，你都有10秒钟的时间来回答有关小题和阅读下一小题。每段对话读两遍。
1. What is the man doing
A. Playing sports. B. Trying on shoes. C. Shopping.
2. What does the man prefer
A. Fries. B. Free coffee. C. Onion rings.
3. What made the woman confused
A. The strong accent. B. The dead battery. C. The car fare.
4. What does the man want to do
A. Ask for a job transfer.
B. Recommend a job to Elliot.
C. Hire a new staff member.
5. Why does the boy mention his teacher
A. To invite his mother along.
B. To support his favorite team.
C. To get his mother's permission.
第二节(共15小题：每小题1.5分，满分22.5分)
听下面5段对话或独白。每段对话或独自后有几个小题，从题中所给的A、B、C三个选项中选出最佳选项。听每段对话或独自前，你将有时间阅读各个小题，每小题5秒钟；听完后，各小题将给出5秒钟的作答时间。每段对话或独白读两遍。
听第 6 段材料，回答第 6、7题。
6. Who might Mr Jackson be
A. A repairman. B. The building manager. C. The woman's advisor.
7. Where will the woman go
A. The dorm. B. The office. C. The bathroom.
听第 7 段材料,回答第 8 至 10 题。
8. What is the probable relationship between the speakers
A. Neighbors. B. Brother and sister. C. Colleagues.
9. What does the woman like about her new house
A. The big park in the front.
B. The beautiful window scenery.
C. The flowers in her yard.
10. What will the woman do on Friday
A. Host a party. B. Plant some flowers. C. Meet her manager.
听第 8 段材料,回答第 11 至 13 题。
11. Why has the picnic been canceled
A. It has been raining.
B. The man has another plan.
C. The woman dislikes the picnic.
12. What did the man do just now
A. He watched a game. B. He did an experiment. C. He played football.
13. How does the woman probably feel about the exhibition
A. Disappointed. B. Excited. C. Uninterested.
听第 9 段材料，回答第 14 至 17 题。
14. What did Paul do after he left school
A. He opened a supermarket.
B. He worked as a chef in a restaurant.
C. He did several different jobs.
15. What was Paul's first restaurant job like
A. Enjoyable. B. Beneficial. C. Well-paid.
16. What does Paul's current job involve
A. Managing the kitchen. B. Assisting chefs. C. Cooking every day.
17. What does Paul think makes a restaurant successful
A. Inventing new dishes.
B. Using quality food.
C. Creating less stressful environment.
听第 10 段材料,回答第 18 至 20 题。
18. What is the talk mainly about
A. A popular social software. B. Successful businessmen. C. Benefits of network.
19. What is Snapchat's main feature
A. Accessing news and sports.
B. Sending short-lived messages.
C. Posting articles and videos every few seconds.
20. What does the speaker say about the three founders
A. They are wise. B. They failed. C. They lack experience.
第二部分 阅读(共两节，满分50分)
第一节(共15小题:每小题2.5分,满分37.5分)
阅读下列短文，从每题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中选出最佳选项。
A
Looking for a meaningful way to spend your summer Our organization connects young people with community-driven projects around the world. Choose the path that fits your skills and passion.
Marine Conservation-Belize
Focus: Protect the barrier reef ecosystem.
Activities: Diving to monitor coral health, removing invasive lionfish, and educating local tourists.
Requirements: Must have a basic swimming certificate. Diving training is provided on-site.
Cost:$2,500 (covers accommodation and equipment).
English Teaching-Rural Thailand
Focus: Improve English literacy in remote villages.
Activities: Planning lessons, teaching basic conversation to children aged 6-12, and organizing cultural exchange events.
Requirements: Native or Cl-level English proficiency. No teaching license required, but patience is a must.
Cost:$1,200 (covers homestay meals and lodging).
Organic Farming-Tuscany, Italy
Focus: Sustainable agriculture and heritage preservation.
Activities: Harvesting olives, repairing dry-stone walls, and learning traditional cooking methods.
Requirements: Physical fitness is essential as the work involves heavy lifting.
Cost:$1,800 (includes farm-stay and cooking classes).
Tech Support for NGOs-Cape Town, South Africa
Focus: Digital empowerment for non-profits.
Activities: Building websites, setting up networks, and training staff on basic software use.
Requirements: Background in IT or Computer Science.
Cost:$2,000 (city apartment accommodation).
Note: Airfare is not included in any program fees. Scholarships are available for students who apply before March 1st.
21. Which program is suitable for students who have the advantage in physical strength
A. Marine Conservation. B. English Teaching.
C. Tech Support for NGOs. D. Organic Farming.
22. What is a shared requirement for the programs in Belize and South Africa
A. Specific skills. B. A university degree.
C. Previous volunteering experience. D. Fluency in the local language.
23. What is the main purpose of the text
A. To introduce tourist attractions. B. To promote summer programs.
C. To compare academic courses. D. To advocate ecological protection.
B
When I was twelve, my grandmother gave me an unusual task: to water her garden not with a hose(水管), but with a small, bent tin cup.“The hose is too fast,” she said, adjusting her straw hat.“It doesn't know when to stop. The cup makes you look at every leaf.”
I grumbled, naturally. It took an hour to water what could have been done in ten minutes. Imarched back and forth to the rain bucket, splashing water onto the thirsty soil. But as the weeks passed, the forced slowness began to change things. I started noticing the small dramas of the garden: the determined climb of a ladybug, the slight droop of a begonia(秋海棠) that needed extra care, the way the soil darkened when it had truly had enough to drink.
One afternoon, I found a cocoon(茧) attached to a tomato vine. If I had been blasting away with the hose, I would have knocked it off. Instead, I sat and watched. Over the next few days,I saw the miracle of transformation. When the butterfly finally emerged, drying its wings in the sun, I felt a sense of ownership. I hadn't just watered a plant; I had protected a life.
Years later, working as a high-speed data analyst, I often felt overwhelmed by the constant flow of information. It was like the hose —— too fast, too much, blindly covering everything.One day, stressed and burnt out, I remembered the tin cup. I turned off my monitors and printed out just one complex dataset. I sat with it, pencil in hand, looking at every“leaf” of data.
My boss was skeptical of my slow pace, until I found a critical error that the automated algorithms had missed.“How did you spot that ” he asked. I smiled, thinking of the tomato vine.“I stopped using the hose,” I said.
24. Why did the grandmother ask the author to water the garden with a tin cup
A. To save water during a drought. B. To punish the author for laziness.
C. To encourage the author's patience. D. To replace the broken hose.
25. What does“the small dramas of the garden” refer to in the second paragraph
A. The conflicts between different plants.
B. The subtle and lively details of nature.
C. The fascinating behaviors of garden creatures.
D. The plays performed in the garden.
26. How did the author's childhood experience influence his career
A. It made him focused and detailed.
B. It directly inspired his career choice.
C. It inspired him to take up gardening.
D. It taught him to appreciate physical work.
27. Which is a suitable title for the text
A. The Joy of Slow Living B. A Lesson from the Tin Cup
C. The Challenge of Data Analysis D. The Way of Watering the Garden
C
In economics, there is a well-known idea called“signaling.” It explains why people often take seemingly unnecessary or expensive actions just to send a clear message. A common example is a university degree. Some economists believe that a degree does not directly prove that you have job-related skills. Instead, the difficult process of getting it --- going to classes;finishing homework, and passing exams —————— shows employers that you are disciplined,intelligent, and able to stick to long-term goals.
However, in the digital age, signaling is facing a trouble defined as“cheap talk.” In the past, sending a reliable signal required real effort. Writing a letter by hand took time and care,and publishing a book needed strict review and professional support. These costs worked as filters, making sure only valuable messages reached others. Today, things have changed greatly.Anyone can create a perfect life on social media or produce a good essay with AFin' seconds:When signals are cheap and easy to make, they gradually lose their ability to tell real ability from false appearance.
This drop in costly signals creates a widespread problem:“noise.” When everyone sends perfect, artificial messages at the same time, the result is chaos, and no one stands out.Employers receive thousands of similar, well-designed resumes. Consumers are flooded, with overly positive five-star reviews that may be fake or produced by tools.
In this situation, the future of trust is surprising: we may start valuing“costly” signals again. We may prefer experiences and efforts that are hard to copy: live shows instead of recorded ones, face-to-face interviews instead of online portfolios, and natural talks instead of prepared speeches. In a world of artificial perfection, real, unpolished, and difficult-to-copy human effort may become the new valuable quality.“Friction,” once seen as bad for efficiency,could become the best proof of authenticity in a world full of cheap signals.
28. What does a university degree signal to employers according to some economists
A. Essential personal qualities. B. Relevant work experience.
C. Job-specific technical skills. D. High academic performance.
29. Why does the author mention“cheap talk” in the second paragraph
A. To highlight AI's impact on job markets.
B. To criticize the decline in communication quality.
C. To illustrate how easy it is to fake competence today.
D. To encourage people to write more handwritten letters.
30. What may be valued in the future to rebuild trust
A. Authentic human effort. B. AI-assisted application.
C. Professionally designed online portfolios. D. Well-prepared interviews scripts.
31. What is the text mainly about
A. The history of economic signaling. B. The crisis and future of signaling.
C. The impact of digital tools on signaling. D. The value of university degrees.
D
The Namib Desert beetle is a master of water collection. Living in one of the driest places on Earth, it survives by leaning its back into the wind. Its shell has a unique texture —— bumps(隆起) that attract water (hydrophilic) and valleys that repel water (hydrophobic). Fog condenses on the bumps, forms droplets, and then slides down the waxy valleys into the beetle's mouth.
Scientists and engineers are now mimicking this beetle to solve global water shortages.This field, known as biomimicry, looks to nature's 3.8 billion years of“R&D”(research and development) for solutions to modern problems.
A team at a major technological institute has developed a“fog-harvesting” net based on the beetle's shell. Traditional fog nets are inefficient; they often lose water that is blown away by the wind. The new design, however, uses a pattern of chemical coatings to trap and channel water efficiently. In field tests in Chile, these new nets collected three times more water than standard versions.
The potential applications go beyond just drinking water. These surfaces could be used in power plants to recapture steam escaping from cooling towers, saving billions of gallons of water and energy. They could also be applied to self-cleaning solar panels, where condensation would wash away dust without using a precious water supply.
However, the challenge lies in scalability. Creating a beetle-inspired surface in a lab is one thing; manufacturing it cheaply by the square mile is another. Current production methods are expensive and require toxic chemicals. Researchers are now exploring eco-friendly 3D printing techniques to overcome this hurdle. If successful, the humble desert beetle could be the key to quenching the world's thirst.
32. How does the Namib Desert beetle collcct water
A. By collecting morning drew on its leg.
B. By absorbing moisture through its shell.
C. By using its back's specific texture to trap fog.
D. By storing rainwater in a special internal pouch.
33. What does the underlined word“minicking” in Paragraph 2 probably mean
A. Rescuing. B. Capturing. C. Observing. D. Copying.
34. What can be inferred from the“fog-harvesting” net
A. Traditional fog nets were abandoned. B. Beetle's shell has been widely used.
C. Power plants mainly rely on this tech. D. The new nets show great promise.
35. What's the main challenge for the beetle-inspired technology
A. Harmful effects of 3D printing techniques.
B. Lack of eco-friendly raw materials.
C. Difficulty in mass production.
D. Unsatisfactory results in early field tests.
第二节(共5小题：每小题2.5分，满分12.5分)
阅读下面短文，从短文后的选项中选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多余选项。
Many people struggle with perfectionism in their daily life, firmly convinced that struggling for perfection is the only path to lasting success and recognition. 36 In the long run, it gradually gives rise to overwhelming pressure, constant self-doubt and even a fear of taking risks that may limit personal development.
To free yourself from the control of perfectionism, you should adjust your mindset fundamentally. 37 On the contrary, recognize that errors are unavoidable stepping stones that fuel growth and progress, and making mistakes never weakens your personal worth.
38 Not every assignment or detail deserves your full energy and pursuit of perfection.Direct your time and energy only to truly significant matters. By doing so, you can avoid wasting efforts on unimportant things and concentrate on tasks that bring real value.
Setting practical and achievable goals is another effective strategy worth applying. 39 Goals that are out of reach will only bring repeated frustration, while down-to-earth goals bring a steady sense of accomplishment and motivation.
Last but not least, practice gentle self-talk and self-acceptance. When you face failures or imperfections, speak to yourself the way you would comfort a close friend. 40 Critical and sharp self-judgment only tears down your confidence, while self-compassion builds inner
strength.
Letting go of perfectionism is not a one-time change but a long-term journey. With consistent efforts and patience, you will gradually embrace a more relaxed and authentic life.
A. Make sure they are actually possible to attain.
B. This rigid and extreme mindset can do more harm than good.
C. Chasing perfect results in everything is the key to excellence.
D. Quit the fixed belief that you have to be faultless at all times.
E. Master the skill of prioritizing tasks efficiently amid a busy schedule.
F. Ignore the mistakes your friend has made and pretend they never exist.
G. Remind yourself that you would not criticize a friend for small setbacks.
第三部分 语言运用(共两节，满分30分)
第一节(共15小题：每小题1分，满分15分)
阅读下面短文，从每题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中选出最佳选项。
After completing school in 2012, Simeon Shimwino's life tested him immediately. With no money for further education, his dream of a better future seemed to 41 . Survival became his top 42 , so he started working as a security guard. The job was challenging,with long hours and night shifts that left him physically 43 . People saw him as“just a security guard,” but Shimwino saw himself as someone striving for something greater.
During quiet night shifts, he returned to his childhood 44 —— drawing. Determined not to let his circumstances 45 him, he spent his modest earnings on art classes and 46 in art classes on his days off. The journey was 47 . He attended classes during the day and worked security at night, often 48 on little sleep. Many people teased him and 49 him, trying to make him feel insignificant, but he refused to let their words break his spirit.
50 , when he was accepted into university, years of efforts 51 . However, the challenge didn't end there. Balancing full-time study with part-time work required great discipline and 52 . There were moments when he felt like giving up, but each time he reminded himself how far he had come.
Today, Shimwino is a university graduate 53 his master's degree. His story serves as a powerful 54 that no one is inferior to others in chasing dreams. It's not where you start,but the 55 you make along the way that shape your life. Anyone can rewrite his own life.
41. A. fade away B. give in C. put up D. live out
42. A. barrier B. adversity C. priority D. capacity
43. A. confused B. relieved C.comforted D. exhausted
44. A. talent B. resource C. profession D. virtue
45. A. modify B. define C. inspire D. support
46. A.competed B. involved C. evolved D. enrolled
47. A. exciting B. rewarding C. demanding D. relaxing
48. A. surviving B. focusing C. deciding D. insisting
49. A. defended B. offended C.comforted D. disturbed
50. A.Immediately B. Occasionally C. Abruptly D. Ultimately
51. A. paid off B. gave up C. took over D. set off
52. A. patience B. intelligence C. determination D. genius
53. A. pursuing B. reaching C. updating D. confirming
54. A. certificate B. reminder C. definition D. privilege
55. A.comments B. contributions C. promises D. choices
第二节(共10小题：每小题1.5分，满分15分)
阅读下面短文，在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。
Robots became one of the biggest talking points online after the 2026 CCTV SpringFestival Gala with multiple robot-related topics trending on social media and 56 (drive)a surge in consumer interest.
Within two hours of the broadcast, e -commerce giant JD com 57 (report) a 300percent surge in searches for“robots”, a 460 percent growth in customer inquires, and a 150percent jump in orders in 58 (compare) to the previous period.
The buying craze spanned over 100 cities, from first-tier metropolises to smaller counties.This remarkable response indicates that Chinese society has entered a stage 59 intelligent machines are embraced not as novelties, 60 as everyday household necessities.
Yu Lei, chief director of this year's Spring Festival Gala, said the team felt 61 (noticeable) relieved after the live broadcast, likening the experience to finishing 62 important exam and waiting for audience feedback. She added that the intention behind featuring so many robots in this year's gala was 63 (exhibit) the rapid progress ofChina's robotics industry through the performances.
Industry analysts predict that 2026 will mark a turning point for household robot adoption.Consumers 64 (impress) by the gala performances are now translating their enthusiasm 65 actual purchases, potentially transforming the robotics landscape inChinese homes.
第四部分 写作(共两节，满分40分)
第一节(满分15分)
假如你是学生会主席李华，你校将举办一年一度的校园科技节，请你写一封邮件邀请外教 Smith先生参加。内容包括：
1.发出邀请；
2.介绍科技节；
3.表达期待。
注意：(1)写作词数应为80个左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Smith, Yours sincerely, Li Hua
第二节(满分25分)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The annual marathon has long been the biggest and most beloved event in our small town.Every spring, crowds line the streets, bringing everyone together to celebrate courage and hard work. For as many years as I could remember, I had only ever stood on the sidelines, clapping and cheering as the runners passed by. I called myself a proud“couch potato” and had long believed that my own athletic days were firmly behind me. I was comfortable with my routine,never imagining I would ever join the runners myself.
But this year was different. My daughter, Lily, looked at me one evening and gently issued a challenge.“Just try the 5K, Dad,” she said softly.“It's not the full marathon, and I' ll run right beside you the whole way.”
I hesitated at first, feeling both nervous and unconfident. Still, I reluctantly accepted her challenge, determined not to let her down. The training turned out to be far tougher than I had expected. My lungs burned with every deep breath, and my legs felt so heavy that they seemed like lead. There were countless early mornings when I woke up tired and sore, wanting only to roll over and quit. Yet every time, Lily was already waiting by the door, her shoes tied and her smile bright. Her quiet persistence and faith in me pushed me to keep going, one step at a time.
Finally, race day arrived. The atmosphere was electric, filled with excitement, music, and the murmur of the crowd. We started slowly and steadily, careful not to rush. At the 3-kilometer mark, a steep, unforgiving hill loomed directly ahead. Halfway up, my strength began to fail.My breath came in short, painful gasps, and I had to slow to a shaky walk.“Go on without me,Lily,” I wheezed.“Don't let me slow you down.”
注意：(1)续写词数应为150个左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
山东省2026年普通高中学业水平4月调研
英语答案及评分标准
第一部分：听力
第一节(共5小题，每小题1.5分，满分7.5分)
1-5 CCABC
第二节(共15小题，每小题1.5分，满分22.5分)
6-10ABCBA 11-15ACBCB 16-20ABABA
第二部分：阅读
第一节(共15小题，每小题2.5分，满分37.5分)
21-23 DAB 24-27 CBAB 28-31ACAB 32-35CDDC
第二节(共5小题，每小题2.5分，满分12.5分)
36-40BDEAG
第三部分：语言运用
第一节(共15小题，每小题1分，满分15分)
41-45ACDAB 46-50 DCABD 51-55ACABD
第二节(共10小题，每小题1.5分，满分15分)
56. driving 57. reported parison 59. where 60. but
61. noticeably 62. an 63. to exhibit 64. impressed 65. into
第四部分：写作(第一节15分，第二节25分)
应用文写作评分标准(按照高考标准定档给分)
一、评分原则
1.本题总分为 15 分，按 5 个档次给分。
2.评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。
3.评分时，应注意： 1)内容要点齐全。2)应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性、准确性及上下文的连贯性。
4.本文体裁为邀请信。若体裁审错，应该在及格分以下。
5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
6.如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。
二、内容要点 1.提出邀请。2.介绍科技节的时间、地点、主要内容等。3.表达期待。
三、各档次的给分范围和要求
第五档(13-15)完全完成了试题规定的任务。
·覆盖所有内容要点。
·应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。
·语法结构或词汇方面有些错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。
·有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。完全达到了预期的写作目的。
第四档(10-12)较好地完成了试题规定的任务。
·覆盖主要要点内容。
·应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
·语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。
·应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
·达到了预期的写作目的。
第三档(7-9)基本完成了试题规定的任务。
·虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。
·应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
·有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。
·应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文内容连贯。
·整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。
第二档(4-6)未适当完成试题规定的任务。
·漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。
·语法结构单调，词汇项目有限。
·有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。
·较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。
·信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
第一档(1-3)未完成试题规定的任务。
·明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。
·语法结构单调，词汇项目有限。
·较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。
·缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。
·信息未能传达给读者。
0分
·未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。
读后续写评分原则(按照高考标准定档给分)
1.本题总分为 25 分，按五个档次进行评分。
2.评分时，应主要从情节内容、语言表达和篇章结构三个方面考虑，具体为：(1)创造内容的质量，续写情节的完整性、合理性以及与原文情境的融洽度。(2)使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性。(3)上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。
3.评分时，先根据作答的整体情况确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来综合衡量，或调整档次，最后给分。
4.评分时还应注意：(1)单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面，评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以。英美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。(2)书写较差以致影响交际的，酌情扣分。
各档次给分范围及要求：
第五档(21-25 分)
①创造了丰富、合理的内容，富有逻辑性，续写完整、合理，与原文情境融洽度高。
②使用了多样且恰当的词汇和语法结构，表达流畅，语言错误很少，且完全不影响理解。
③自然有效地使用了段落间、语句间衔接手段，句子结构清晰，前后呼应，意义连贯。
第四档(16-20 分)
①创造了比较丰富、合理的内容，比较有逻辑性，续写比较完整、合理，与原文情境融洽度较高。②使用了比较多样且恰当的词汇和语法结构，表达比较流畅，有个别错误，但不影响理解。
③比较有效地使用了语句间的衔接手段，比较清晰，意义比较连贯。
第三档(11-15 分)
①创造了基本合理的内容，有一定的逻辑性，续写基本完整、合理，与原文情境相关。
②比较恰当地使用了词汇和语法结构，表达方式不够多样化，表达有些许错误，但基本不影响理解。
③使用了语句间的衔接手段，全文结构比较清晰，意义比较连贯。
第二档(6-10 分)
①内容逻辑有一些重大问题，续写不够完整，与原文有一定程度的脱节。
②所写的词汇有限，语法结构单调，错误较多且比较低级，影响理解。
③未能有效地使用语句间的衔接手段，全文结构不够清晰，意义欠连贯。
第一档(1-5 分)
①内容、逻辑上有较多重大问题，或部分内容抄自原文，续写不完整，与原文情境基本脱节。
②所使用的词汇非常有限，语法结构单调，错误较多，严重影响理解。
0 分
①未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判。
②写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。
评分参考：
1.评卷时注重内容、意义、逻辑与衔接。范文情节仅是参考，情节合理且能自圆其说的可根据上述评分原则适当给分。注意续写段落首句所蕴含信息的限制作用。
2.关注叙述、说明、描写的生动性，兼顾语言逻辑。注重意义的传达：语言的准确性，意义的丰富性(情节有发展)；避免使用单一词汇；合理体现交际意图的语言才是好语言；过分使用高级词汇，过犹不及。
读后续写思路分析：
第一段：转折+激励
动作： Lily 立刻停下、转身、跑回我身边，扶住我/拉住我的手。
语言：她温柔鼓励，让我不要放弃，强调一起跑比速度更重要。
心理：我被打动，从想放弃到重新鼓起勇气。
细节：擦汗、深呼吸、调整步伐，慢慢继续上坡。
我想放弃 → 女儿折返安慰 → 给我力量 → 重新起步。
作用：制造小高潮，推动情节。
第二段：高潮+升华
感受：疲惫但无比自豪、感动。
情感升华：不只是跑完5K，更是战胜自己、感受到女儿的爱与陪伴。
点题：明白真正的胜利不是名次，是坚持与亲情。
并肩冲线 → 内心感悟 → 点明主题。
作用：收束全文，升华亲情与成长。
立意&评分要点
核心立意(必须扣住)
亲情陪伴：女儿的鼓励是动力。
自我突破：从“沙发土豆”到完成比赛，挑战不可能。
坚持与勇气：过程比结果重要。
评分补充说明
1.鼓励创新：在符合原文设定和逻辑的前提下，对细节描写、感悟升华的创意表达应予以肯定。
2.警惕问题：对于严重违背常识、伦理道德，完全偏离主题(如幻想情节)、或人物行为前后矛盾的情节，应在“内容与逻辑”项中酌情扣分。
3.语言底线：明显的语法错误、词汇误用、字数严重不足或衔接生硬，会影响整体得分。
第一节
Dear Mr. Smith,
On behalf of our school, I am writing to sincerely invite you to attend our annual SchoolScience and Technology Festival.
The festival is scheduled to take place in the school lecture hall next Friday afternoon, with the theme of“Innovation Makes Life Better”. A variety of splendid activities are arranged,including students’ creative invention exhibitions, robot performances and interesting science experiments. Not only can these activities enrich our school life, but they will also fuel our passion for science and technology.
We would highly appreciate it if you could spare some time to join us. Your presence will surely add more color and pleasure to the festival. Looking forward to your favorable reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
第二节
Lily stopped immediately and turned around to me. I saw her eyes filled with warmth and determination. Without saying a word, she came to hold my hands tightly. Her face was calm and encouraging, not a sign of impatience.“We started together, so we’ ll finish together,” she said softly and confidently. Lily did not rush or pull me forward. Instead, she walked calmly beside
me until I regained my breath. Her quiet support gave me fresh strength, and I decided to keep moving forward with her.
Side by side, we crossed the finish line together. I was breathing heavily, my legs weak, but my heart was full of pride. Lily looked up at me, her face bright with a big, joyful smile. I felt moved and proud, not because of the race, but because of her. At that moment, I realized I had not only finished the race, but gained courage and the deepest love from my daughter. It is not always parents who encourage their children; more often than not, children can be the ones to inspire and support their parents.

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