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高考英语应用文写作
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写作重点
1.书写Handwriting
（1）大小写 （2）比例 （3）间距
2.内容Contents
3.结构Structure
①整个文章布局：三段式（para1 2.5行，para2 6-8行，para3 2.5行。）
②段与段：衔接、过渡句
③句子与句子：主题句+拓展句
3. 语言Language
① 语气委婉
② 简单句 高级句（换词、换短语、名词前加修饰词）
③ 句式多变、长短结合
非谓语、强调句、主动变被动、doing作主语
4. 逻辑Logic
① 首尾两段紧密联系
② 主题句+拓展句
③在阅读中输入
Structure:
1. Beginning:20% （2.5行）
2. Body:60% （6-8行）
3. Ending:20%（2.5行）
书面表达：
假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Michael正在一家孔子学院学习汉语和中国文化，知道中国人很重视家风传承。请你根据以下要点给他回复一封电子邮件。开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
1.你家的家风；
2. 家风对你的影响。
3.你的看法
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：家风family spirit
Dear Michael,
I’m glad to know that you are learning Chinese language and culture. _____________
_________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
三审一列:
审文体-----书信/电子邮件（Email）, 属于应用文范畴，具有明确的交际目的和固定格式。
审人称----第一人称+第三人称；
审时态----一般现在时
列出要点：
1.你家的家风
2.家风对你的影响
3.你的看法
Beginning:2.5行
1.Dear Michael,
I’m glad to know that you’re learning Chinese language and culture. In response to your requirement to know Chinese family spirits, I’m writing to share something with you.
In response to /Regarding/With regards to/ Concerning/Considering … 关(介）于
Chinese family Spirits：
1. respect the elders尊敬长辈；
2. be kind and offer help乐善好施
3. be responsible 负责
4. never tell lies 不撒谎
5.Undo to others what you don’t want to be done to you.己所不欲勿施于人。
Body:6-8行 你的家风+影响 点+拓展
Our family spirits are as follows. First, respect the elders. 拓展While eating, the elders will take honor seats. Whenever we have tasty foods, the elders will enjoy the privilege to eat first. Second, be kind and offer help.拓展We are to taught to help anyone in need. As a saying goes, “When one is in trouble, help will come in from every direction.” Third, be responsible.拓展. We’ll take responsibility for it, if we do something, whatever the result may be. Last but not least, undo to others what we don’t want to be done to us, 拓展meaning We’ll never do something to others that we don’t want others to do to us. The core meaning is to respect others’ interests.
Body:6-8行 你的家风+影响 点+拓展
The spirits influence me greatly. Not only do they behave me in every respect, but they also teach me how to be a human being. They are an unseen moral power that shapes me during my growing process.
Endning:2.5行 自己的看法
From my perspective, it is a blessing to have such family spirits, which serve as light-houses for me. Now I’ve realized it is my duty to pass them on to younger generations.
Chinese family Spirits：抄背
1. respect the elders尊敬长辈；
2. be kind and offer help乐善好施
3. be responsible 负责
4. never tell lies 不撒谎
5.Undo to others what you don’t want to be done to you.己所不欲勿施于人。
Dear Michael,
I’m glad to know that you’re learning Chinese language and culture. In response to your requirement to know Chinese family spirits, I’m writing to share something with you.
Our family spirits are as follows. First, respect the elders. While eating, the elders will take honor seats. Whenever we have tasty foods, the elders will enjoy the privilege to eat first. Second, be kind and offer help. We are to taught to help anyone in need. As a saying goes, “When one is in trouble, help will come in from every direction.” Third, undo to others what we don’t want to be done to us, meaning We’ll never do something to others that we don’t want others to do to us. The core meaning is to respect others’ interests.
The spirits influence me greatly. Not only do they behave me in every respect, but they also teach me how to be a human being. They are an unseen moral power that shapes me during my growing process.
From my perspective, it is a blessing to have such family spirits, which serve as light-houses for me. Now I’ve realized it is my duty to pass them on to younger generations. Hopefully, my answers can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
Thank You!

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