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Unit 5 Saving animals in danger
Writing
（沪教版 2024）八年级
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Pre-writing
While-writing
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Post-writing
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Summary
Assessment
Homework
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Learning objectives
Lead in
By the end of the lesson, I will be able to...
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use subheadings for an endangered animal blog;
describe its appearance, home, food and danger reasons;
check and revise with a checklist.
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Learning objectives
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Think and share.
Lead-in
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What makes a good blog post
Facts about the animal (what it looks like, where it lives, what it eats, how it lives, how long it lives).
Dangers the animal is facing.
A call to protect the animal.
Simple, true words everyone can understand
A clear title and introduction to tell readers what the blog is about.
Beautiful pictures
.…
(1)_____________________
Asian elephants are huge and grey. They weigh up to 5,400 kilograms and can be up to 3.2 metres tall at the shoulder.
(2) _____________________
Asian elephants live in the grasslands and forests of South East Asia.
(3) _____________________
Asian elephants usually eat grass, leaves and fruit.
(4) _____________________
Asian elephants often move in large groups.
(5) _____________________
In the wild, Asian elephants may live for up to 60–70 years, but most do not live that long.
(6) _____________________
People are cutting down forests. They are also killing Asian elephants for their tusks. It is important for us to protect them.
Read and answer.
Pre-writing
02
Six parts.
Q: How many parts are there in the blog post What are they
Q: What tense did the writer mostly use
Present simple.
Read and match.
Pre-writing
02
(1)_____________________
Asian elephants are huge and grey. They weigh up to 5,400 kilograms and can be up to 3.2 metres tall at the shoulder.
(2) _____________________
Asian elephants live in the grasslands and forests of South East Asia.
(3) _____________________
Asian elephants usually eat grass, leaves and fruit.
(4) _____________________
Asian elephants often move in large groups.
(5) _____________________
In the wild, Asian elephants may live for up to 60–70 years, but most do not live that long.
(6) _____________________
People are cutting down forests. They are also killing Asian elephants for their tusks. It is important for us to protect them.
Appearance
Home
Food
Behaviour
Life
Why in danger
(1)_____________________
Asian elephants are huge and grey. They weigh up to 5,400 kilograms and can be up to 3.2 metres tall at the shoulder.
(2) _____________________
Asian elephants live in the grasslands and forests of South East Asia.
(3) _____________________
Asian elephants usually eat grass, leaves and fruit.
(4) _____________________
Asian elephants often move in large groups.
(5) _____________________
In the wild, Asian elephants may live for up to 60–70 years, but most do not live that long.
(6) _____________________
People are cutting down forests. They are also killing Asian elephants for their tusks. It is important for us to protect them.
Read and learn.
Pre-writing
02
A call to protect the animal.
Facts about the animal (what it looks like, where it lives, what it eats, how it lives, how long it lives).
Beautiful pictures
Appearance
Home
Food
Behaviour
Life
Why in danger
Dangers the animal is facing.
A clear title and introduction to tell readers what the blog is about.
Read and learn.
Pre-writing
02
What makes a good blog post
A clear title and introduction to tell readers what the blog is about.
Facts about the animal (what it looks like, where it lives, what it eats, how it lives, how long it lives).
Dangers the animal is facing.
A call to protect the animal.
Simple, true words everyone can understand
Beautiful pictures
Blog post
(1)_____________________
Asian elephants are huge and grey. They weigh up to 5,400 kilograms and can be up to 3.2 metres tall at the shoulder.
(2) _____________________
Asian elephants live in the grasslands and forests of South East Asia.
(3) _____________________
Asian elephants usually eat grass, leaves and fruit.
(4) _____________________
Asian elephants often move in large groups.
(5) _____________________
In the wild, Asian elephants may live for up to 60–70 years, but most do not live that long.
(6) _____________________
People are cutting down forests. They are also killing Asian elephants for their tusks. It is important for us to protect them.
Appearance
Home
Food
Behaviour
Life
Why in danger
Read the text and underline the useful expressions.
Pre-writing
02
Read and underline.
介绍动物外形
栖息地介绍
Food 食性介绍
Life 寿命介绍
濒危原因 & 保护呼吁
行为习性介绍
(1)_____________________
Asian elephants are huge and grey. They weigh up to 5,400 kilograms and can be up to 3.2 metres tall at the shoulder.
(2) _____________________
Asian elephants live in the grasslands and forests of South East Asia.
(3) _____________________
Asian elephants usually eat grass, leaves and fruit.
(4) _____________________
Asian elephants often move in large groups.
(5) _____________________
In the wild, Asian elephants may live for up to 60–70 years, but most do not live that long.
(6) _____________________
People are cutting down forests. They are also killing Asian elephants for their tusks. It is important for us to protect them.
Read the text and take notes.
Pre-writing
02
Read and take notes.
Appearance
Home
Food
Behaviour
Life
Why in danger
weigh up to 5,400 kilograms — 重达 5400 公斤
be up to 3.2 metres tall — 高达 3.2 米
live in the grasslands — 生活在草原上
move in large groups — 成群活动
live for up to 60-70 years — 寿命长达 60-70 年
cut down forests — 砍伐森林
Draw a mind map.
Pre-writing
02
What makes a good blog post
A clear title and introduction to tell readers what the blog is about.
Facts about the animal
Dangers the animal is facing.
A call to protect the animal.
Simple, true words everyone can understand
Beautiful pictures
Blog post
people cutting down forest
elephants are killed for their tusks
Home:
the grasslands and forests of South East Asia
Food:grass, leaves and fruit
Appearance:
huge and grey
Weight: up to 5,400 kg
Height: up to 3.2 metres at the shoulder
Behaviour: move in large groups
Life:
can live for up to 60–70 years in the wild
2 Refer to the example above and write a blog post about an animal in danger.
Writing a blog post.
While-writing
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Step 1 Plan Choose one animal from the list below, or choose your own animal. Do some research on it. Then make a mind map.
giant panda
South
China tiger
red-crowned crane
blue whale
While-writing
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2 Refer to the example above and write a blog post about an animal in danger.
Writing a blog post.
Step 1 Plan Choose one animal from the list below, or choose your own animal. Do some research on it. Then make a mind map.
模块 内容
Appearance（外形） black and white, cute, round body, big black eyes
Home（栖息地） bamboo forests in Sichuan, Shaanxi and Gansu, China
Food（食物） bamboo (eats 12-18kg of bamboo a day)
Behaviour（习性） good at climbing trees, likes to live alone
Life（寿命） 20-30 years in the wild, up to 30+ years in zoos
Why in danger（濒危原因） loss of bamboo forests, low birth rate
How to protect（保护方法） build nature reserves, plant more bamboo
giant panda
For example:
While-writing
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2 Refer to the example above and write a blog post about an animal in danger.
Writing a blog post.
Step 1 Plan Choose one animal from the list below, or choose your own animal. Do some research on it. Then make a mind map.
Facts about the animal
Dangers the animal is facing.
A call to protect the animal.
Simple, true words everyone can understand
Beautiful pictures
Blog post
loss of bamboo forests, low birth rate
Appearance:
black and white, cute, round body, big black eyes
Behaviour: good at climbing trees, likes to live alone
Life:
20-30 years in the wild, up to 30+ years in zoos
Home:
bamboo forests in Sichuan, Shaanxi and Gansu, China
Food: bamboo (eats 12-18kg of bamboo a day)
Step 2 Write Use your mind map to help you write the blog post.
While-writing
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Write an article.
Remember to:
use subheadings to help readers quickly find what they are looking for;
add a picture of the animal to attract readers' attention.
1 Appearance
2 Home
3 Behaviour
4 Food
5 Life
6 Why in danger
Step 2 Write Use your mind map to help you write the blog post.
While-writing
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Writing a blog post.
giant panda
1 Appearance
2 Home
3 Behaviour
4 Food
5 Life
6 Why in danger
… have ...
They are ...
… live in ...
They spend ...
They like ...
… eat ...
In the wild, … can live ...
In zoos, they ...
People ...
It is ... for / of people to ...
Our Cute Friend — Giant Panda
Appearance
Giant panda is black and white. They have big black eye. They look very cute. They weight up to 160 kilogram.
Home
Giant pandas live in bamboo forest in Sichuan, China. They like live in cool mountain.
Food
Panda love eat bamboo. They eat 12-18kg bamboo every day. Bamboo is they favourite food.
Why in danger
Now pandas is in danger. People cut down many tree, so pandas lose their home. We must help they.
Post-writing
04
Read and correct.
are
eyes
kilograms
living
pandas
their
are
them
Save the South China Tiger!
What is South China Tiger
South China tiger is a beautiful big cat. They have orange fur with black stripe. They are very strong and run very fast. They live in forest of southern China.
What do they eat
South China tigers is meat-eater. They eat small animal like deer and pigs. They usually hunt at night.
Why are they in danger
Long time ago, people kill many tigers. They also cut down forest, so tigers have no home. Now there is very few tigers in wild.
How to help
We must protect tigers. We should stop kill tigers and build more nature park. Let's help these amazing animal live happy!
Post-writing
04
Read and correct.
stripes
forests
are
animals
killed
are
killing
happily
I used subheadings to present the information.
I included interesting facts about the animal.
I added a picture of the animal to attract readers’ attention.
I used the words and expressions I learnt in this unit.
I used correct spelling, grammar and punctuation.
Tick (√) the boxes to check your writing, and then revise it.
Check and revise.
Post-writing
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The words we have learned
一、根据句意及提示填空
Asian elephants are h________ and grey. (外貌)
They live in the g________ and forests of South East Asia. (栖息地)
They usually eat grass, l________ and fruit. (食物)
People are c________ down forests, so elephants are losing their homes.
It is important for us to p________ animals in danger. (保护)
Summary
05
uge
rasslands
eaves
utting
rotect
The words we have learned
二、短语翻译
外貌特征 ________________________
栖息地 ________________________
砍伐森林 ________________________
濒危动物 ________________________
保护动物 ________________________
Summary
05
appearance features
habitat
cut down forests
endangered animals
protect animals
The words we have learned
三、句子翻译
亚洲象体型庞大，呈灰色。
_______________________________________________________________
它们生活在东南亚的草原和森林里。
_______________________________________________________________人们砍伐森林，还为了象牙猎杀亚洲象。
_______________________________________________________________对我们来说，保护濒危动物很重要。
_______________________________________________________________我们应该用小标题来组织博客内容。
_______________________________________________________________
Summary
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Asian elephants are huge and grey.
They live in the grasslands and forests of Southeast Asia.
People cut down forests and hunt Asian elephants for their tusks.
It is important for us to protect endangered animals.
We should use subheadings to organize the blog content.
Assessment
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Self-assessment
I can use subheadings for an endangered animal blog.
I can describe its appearance, home, food and danger reasons.
I can check and revise with a checklist.
Basic (基础)
Improving(提升)
Extend (拓展)
Homework
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整理本节课核心词汇（appearance, habitat, tusk, in danger），每个词造 1 个句子。
修改课堂初稿，完善博客内容，确保结构完整、语法正确，字数 80-100 词。
在博客结尾添加 1-2 句保护倡议（如 It is necessary for us to...），并为博客设计一个吸引眼球的标题。
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