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第八课时Writing
单元主题
课标导向
本单元的主题是“业余活动”，属于课标中的“人与自我”主题范畴，涉及“丰富、充实、积极向上的生活”。
教材链接
本单元从谈论业余活动切入，呈现了青少年丰富的业余活动及他们从事业余活动的经历与感受，探索业余活动对个人成长的积极作用。
写作目标
介绍你最喜爱的业余活动。内容包括你最爱的业余活动、它的形成过程，以及该活动带给你的感受与收获。
写作蓄势
一准确用词
Free-time activities:
1. do calligraphy/ kung fu/ yoga
练书法/练功夫/做瑜伽
2. play tennis/ badminton/ the guitar/ the flute
打网球/打羽毛球/弹吉他/吹长笛
3. write poems/ stories 写诗/故事
4. collect coins/ stamps/ postcards
收集硬币/邮票/明信片
5. go hiking/ ice skating/ skiing
去徒步/溜冰/滑雪
6. painting/ programming/ dancing/ mountain climbing/...
绘画/编程/舞蹈/爬山/……
Process(过程):
1. start programming 开始编程
2. send it to me 送给我
3. talk to my instructor 告诉我的导师
4. ride a horse at this farm 在这个农场骑马
Feelings:
1. have fun/ have a great time 玩得开心
2. be happy/ lucky to...很快乐/幸运……
3.…a great way to...一种很棒的方式
4. calm down/ keep fit/ reduce stress 冷静下来/保持健康/减少压力
5. give sb such a sense of achievement 给某人这样的成就感
二正确组句
Beginning(交代活动)
(1)I love/ like painting pictures in my free time.
(2) My favourite free-time activity is horse riding.
(3) Among all the activities, I like doing kung fu best.
Body(叙述经历)
(1)I started this activity when I was a small child.
(2) When I first started dancing, I was scared to perform in front of others.
(3) My teacher encouraged me and I practised really hard.
(4) Now I am not afraid of it anymore and really enjoy doing it every weekend.
Ending(表达感受与收获)
(1)I think it's interesting to see the beautiful places and make friends at the same time.
(2) It was such an amazing experience!
(3) Painting is a great way to express myself and discover my creative side.
得分点 1. Painting is a great way to express myself and discover my creative side. 用不定式表达绘画的优点。 2. When I first started dancing, I was scared to perform in front of others./ 用 when 引导时间状语从句，具体表达时间背景。
三布局参考
四以读促写
阅读下面短文，完成相应的任务。
I have many free-time activities, like reading, writing poems and doing calligraphy.However, painting is my favourite.
I started this activity when I was 8 years old.At first, I was afraid to use bold colours,worrying about making the paintings look messy.But I kept practising. I would spend hours on weekends sitting in my small study, trying different brush strokes and colour combinations.That helped me get better and better.
When I put the brush to canvas, I can create scenes from my dreams or capture the beauty of nature I' ve seen. I enjoy the sense of calm and achievement when a painting gradually takes shape, like a little world born from my hands.It's not just a hobby but a way for me to communicate without words.
任务: What's the main idea of each paragraph
Paragraph 1:
Paragraph 2:
Paragraph 3:
Painting is a great way to express myself.
写作任务
健康的兴趣爱好会给我们的学习和生活带来很大的帮助。假如你是李华，你正在参与校英文报主题为“My Hobby”的征稿活动。请你根据以下导图提示，写一篇80词左右的短文。
注意：1.短文必须包括以下导图中的所有内容，可适当发挥；2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear editor,
Yours,
Li Hua
第八课时 Writing
四、 Paragraph 1: What is the writer's favourite free-time activity
Paragraph 2: When did the activity start and how did it grow
Paragraph 3: How does the activity influence the writer
写作任务
标准提分版：
Dear editor:
My hobby is gardening. I started it two years ago. One day, my mum gave me a' bag of rose seeds. I was excited and planted them in a big pot in the yard.
At first, I forgot to water them sometimes, and the soil got dry. My mum told me to be patient. Now I water them every
morning. Last month, the first pink flower bloomed. It was so pretty! Gardening makes me happy and teaches me to be careful.I like watching my flowers grow. It's a great hobby.
Yours,
Li Hua
进阶优化版：
Dear editor,
My hobby is gardening, which I picked up three years ago.It all began when I received a small pot of sunflower seeds as a gift. Watching them grow into tall plants filled me with joy, and soon I started growing more flowers and even some vegetables.
Gardening brings me peace. Watering the plants and removing weeds after a busy day at school help me relax. It also teaches me patience— waiting for a bud to bloom teaches me that good things take time. This hobby not only makes my room beautiful but also enriches my life in unexpected ways.
Yours,
Li Hua

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