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第八课时Writing
单元主题
课标导向
本单元的主题是“健康成长和生命安全”，属于课标中的“人与自我”主题范畴，涉及“身心健康，珍爱命的意识”。
教材链接
本单元从健康问题切入，通过疾病症状描述、医疗建议、安全事故处理(如火灾/过敏)等角度，探讨如何保护身心健康。
写作目标
写作内容聚焦于如何保持健康、健康问题及相应建议，具体围绕“疾病的症状、应对和预防措施”展开.有利于青少年了解常见的基本健康知识，促使他们养成健康的生活习惯，增强自我保护和防范能力。
准确用词
Health problems:
have a flu 患流感
have a food allergy 食物过敏
suffer from a toothache 遭受牙痛
have a nosebleed 流鼻血
have a bruised knee 膝盖碰伤
have a headache 头疼
be allergic to peanuts 对花生过敏
Physical conditions/ symptoms(症状):
have a runny nose 流鼻涕
don't have much energy 没有精力
have a sore throat 喉咙痛
feel strange 感到不舒服
Advice on health problems:
press down on your nose 按压你的鼻子
rest at home 居家休息
take some medicine and drink enough water
吃些药，多喝水
avoid eating... 避免食用……
put something warm on your stomach
热敷肚子
see the dentist and get an X-ray
看牙医，照X光
正确组句
Beginning(描述问题现状，引入健康问题重要性)
(1) It is important to know how to deal with food allergies.
(2) Many people suffer from burns at home.Let's learn first aid!
(3) Mobile phones are useful, but you should use them wisely.
(4)I am sorry to hear that you had a headache.
Body(依据问题提出建议)
(1) You shouldn't eat so much next time.
(2) You should see the dentist and get anX-ray. You could eat some soft food for now.
(3) Be more careful next time! If we are not careful, we can easily hurt ourselves.
(4) In fact, you should avoid using your phone too often. You can listen to music instead of watching videos.
Ending(表达愿望)
(1) Take a rest, and you' ll be well soon!
(2) Remember your health is in your hands.If you take good care of yourself, you will get better soon.
(3) Let's protect ourselves by checking food ingredients carefully.
(4) Health is not everything, but you have nothing without it.
得分点 1. In fact, you should avoid using your phone too often. You can listen to music instead of watching videos. 给出否定建议的同时给出可操作建议。 2. Health is not everything, but you have nothing without it.① 15da 用哲理式语言，表达健康的重要性。
三布局参考
四以读促写
阅读下面短文，完成相应的任务。
What's wrong, Danny
It's 3:00 a. m. Danny wakes up his parents.
Mum: What's wrong, Danny
Danny: I don't feel well. 1.
Mum: You ate ten donuts for dessert! That's the problem.
Danny: (He starts to cry.) 2. My stomach has never hurt this much before.
Dad: (He sits up and feels Danny's head.)3. You look pale. You are sick,aren't you We should go to the hospital.
Danny's father gets dressed quickly. He andDanny get into the car, and they drive to the hospital. Soon they arrive.
Dr Ling: Hi! I'm Dr Ling. 4.
Danny: (He points to the right side of his stomach. ) I' ve got a pain here.
The doctor feels Danny's stomach. Danny starts to cry again.
Dr Ling: Pardon me, Danny. I know it hurts.
Mum: He also has a fever and a runny nose.Could he have caught a cold too
Dr Ling: Well, Danny needs to stay in the hospital tonight. 5.
Dad: (He takes Danny's hand. ) It's going to beOK. I' ll stay with you.
任务：补全对话(其中一项是多余选项)
A. I regret eating so many donuts now. B. How are you feeling C. My stomach hurts. D. We may need to make a blood test and take an X-ray. E. You' ve got a high fever. F. Did you eat anything bad
写作任务
假如你是李华，你的朋友 Jimmy由于长时间玩电脑游戏，长时间保持同一姿势，现在身体不适，出现了头疼、眼睛不舒服、腰背酸痛、睡眠质量差等问题。请写信给他一些康复建议。
内容包括：1. Jimmy身体不适的表现和原因(可适当发挥)；2.你的建议；3.祝愿早日康复。
写作要求：语句连贯，词数80左右。
Dear Jimmy,
Yours,
Li Hua
第八课时 Writing
四、1—5 CAEBD
写作任务
标准提分版：
Dear Jimmy,
I heard about your body's problems. I'm worried about you.
You feel uncomfortable because you keep playing the computer for a long time. You need to take breaks away from the computer.
As the saying goes,“The first wealth is health.” If you have a headache and have a sore back, you should see a doctor. When you can't sleep well, you'd better sleep early. It's important for us to have a good sleep.
Remember your health is in your hands. If you take good care of yourself, you will get better soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
进阶优化版：
Dear Jimmy,
I'm sorry to hear you' re feeling bad lately. When we play games too long without moving, it can make our head and eyes hurt. The back pain might even keep you awake at night.
Here's what might help: First, try to stand up and walk around for five minutes every hour. Look away from the screen to rest your eyes often. Second, it may make your back comfortable if you sit straight in your chair with both feet on the floor. Third, stop using phones or computers 30 minutes before sleep. Drink warm milk if you can't fall asleep.
Don't worry too much! Let's go for a walk in the park thisSaturday morning. Fresh air always makes us feel better.
Yours,
Li Hua

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