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第3节　结尾设计四大出彩
技法探究 强化意识
　　精彩的结尾好似画龙点睛, 不仅能够唤起读者的思考与共鸣, 而且还能够增强文章的感染力让人回味无穷。在表现手法上, 结尾还应与前文伏笔照应, 使人觉得在情理之中;与前文形成对比, 点明主旨, 深化主题。在塑造人物形象上, 结尾应表现人物的心理、性格、品质、经历、命运、能力等。在故事情节上, 结尾还可以照应标题和开头, 使故事结构完整。常见的结尾方式有首尾呼应式结尾、哲理性语言结尾、景物描写结尾、自然结尾、结尾留白、情感升华等。
出彩1 首尾呼应法
首尾呼应法也称回环照应式。结尾与开头照应, 有时可引用作者在开头的观点, 甚至以与开头语一模一样的字眼结尾。结尾回到文章开头阐明的中心思想或主题句上, 深化主题, 起到画龙点睛的效果。但是注意一点, 不要照搬开头的句子, 要变化句式或者用词来表达相同的主题。通过首尾呼应, 利用文章伏笔完成主旨的升华。
【典例展示】1
(2024·新高考Ⅰ、Ⅱ卷)
原文开头: I met Gunter on a cold, wet and unforgettable evening in September. (我在九月的一个寒冷、潮湿、难忘的夜晚遇见了冈特。)
续文结尾: It suddenly dawned on me that we should always have faith in kindness, and every time I think of that cold, wet evening, a warm current still flows through my body. (我突然明白了, 我们应该永远对善良有信心, 每当我想起那个寒冷、潮湿的夜晚, 一股暖流仍在我的身体里流淌。)
典例剖析: 原文开头提到“寒冷、潮湿的夜晚”, 续写的结尾部分呼应开头, 用了原词复现的方法进一步强调了那个夜晚的难忘, 回扣原文, 达到意味深长的效果。
【典例展示】2
(2021·新高考Ⅰ卷)
原文开头: The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. (想到为母亲节准备的惊喜, 这对双胞胎充满了兴奋。)
续文结尾: Father was standing in the doorway, recording this touching scene. The whole room was bathed in a happy Mother’s Day atmosphere. (父亲站在门口, 录下了这感人的场景。整个房间都沐浴在母亲节快乐的气氛中。)
典例剖析: 续写结尾处回扣原文开头, 这种处理首尾呼应, 内容完整, 结构紧凑, 保留了文章前后一致的逻辑, 进一步凸显母亲节这天这对双胞胎给母亲带来的惊喜与兴奋。
出彩2 哲理式结尾
哲理式结尾也称道理寓意结尾, 即在结尾使用富含哲理的语句, 总结全文, 升华主旨, 并给人以启迪。合理使用名言可以使续写文章锦上添花, 起到“言已尽而意无穷”的效果, 使文章的中心更突出。我们平常可以积累一些富含哲理的段落或句子。
【典例展示】
(2022·浙江1月高考)
One day I got word that he was admitted to hospital for a serious disease. I thought I should visit him in any case. He was a little surprised to see me when I stepped into his ward. I offered to do the rest work of our project and he invited me to share my ideas to perfect it. Our hard work paid off and Dr. Henderson was satisfied with our wonderful findings. From this project, we learned the significance of teammates. Just as the saying goes, one person can go fast, but a group of persons can go far.
典例剖析: 此段续写原文讲述了Dr. Henderson 给作者的心理学课指定项目伙伴的故事。作者和他在班上最想避开的一位同学分到了一个组。这个同学冷漠、高傲, 对作者不理不睬。作者在与他讨论项目时感觉很不自在, 但还是坚持了下来, 最终圆满地完成了课题研究。续写结尾采用谚语“一个人可以走得很快, 但一个团队可以走得很远。”点明本文的主题——合作的重要性, 使续写结尾更有说服力, 同时能提升人们的思想境界。
哲理式结尾佳句积累:
1. Be thankful for what you have; you’ll end up having more. If you concentrate on what you don’t have, you’ll never, ever have enough. 感激你所拥有的, 最终你会得到更多。如果你总是对那些没有得到的东西耿耿于怀, 那么你永远也不会满足。
2. The best way to defeat your fear is to face your fear head-on.
克服恐惧最好的方法是直接面对恐惧。
3. Never underestimate yourself, for you have no idea what you are capable of.
永远不要低估自己, 因为你不知道你的能力所限。
4. Just as the famous saying goes, sunshine always comes after the rain. We will meet various challenges in life, but we should never give up easily. 正如名言所说, 阳光总在风雨后。人生中我们会碰到各种挑战, 但是不要轻易放弃。
出彩3 情感升华法
每一个故事的创作不止为了讲清楚一件事情的来龙去脉, 还要包含作者想要表达的寓意, 想与读者分享的感悟。在续写时, 我们可以通过表现人生感悟、生活真谛、生活哲理、人生观或价值观来达到结尾部分的情感升华。
【典例展示】
(2025·全国Ⅱ卷)
Through this interaction, I realized that by embracing my cultural identity, I was not only preserving my heritage but also enriching the lives of those around me. It was a small yet meaningful step towards fostering cultural understanding and appreciation.
典例剖析: 本篇故事讨论了作者作为国际学生在爱尔兰因中文名字发音难而遭遇挑战, 之后在一次课堂讨论中分享名字的含义, 意识到分享文化身份的重要性, 并借此与同学增进文化理解的故事。最后作者通过这种互动意识到, 通过拥抱自己的文化身份, 不仅保护了文化遗产, 而且丰富了周围人的生活。这是朝着促进文化理解和欣赏迈出的一小步, 但却很有意义。这是在感悟中达到了一种升华。
出彩4 留白式结尾
【典例展示】
(2021·新高考Ⅰ卷)
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. The instant she noticed the breakfast was brought in bed, a ripple of excitement flashed through her face. Her eyes wandered between the breakfast and the twins as if she was asking what happened. “Happy Mother’s Day!” the twins exclaimed with one voice. The mother’s face beamed and her shining smile lit up the room. “Thank you, my angels! Come here and give me a hug. ” The twins rushed into their mother’s arms and just at that moment, their father stepped behind them. “Hey!Look here!” “Click-click. ” Using the camera, the father recorded the memorable scene.
典例剖析: 文章讲述了双胞胎为了准备母亲节礼物, 自己动手做早餐, 但不幸的是, 他们连连失败。后来在父亲的帮助下, 他们成功把早餐献给亲爱的母亲, 母亲非常感动。由该段首句内容“这对双胞胎把早餐端到楼上, 叫醒了他们的母亲”可知, 该段可描写母亲收到孩子们的礼物早餐, 非常感动。结尾处通过对母亲语言和动作反应的描写体现母亲的感动, 并通过对父亲拍照的描写, 给读者以想象空间。作者在文章中为了更充分地表现主题, 而有意识地留出“空白”。这些空白可以给人留下丰富的想象空间, 体现出文章的“含蓄美”, 就如中国水墨画。
精练新题 提升素养
Passage 1
(2025·福建模拟)
The Do-It-Yourself Disaster
“Time for the demonstration and we’ll vote for the entries for the Science Fair. Who wants to show your project first ” Mrs Williams asked. For this project, we were allowed to do anything, as long as we did it ourselves. I buried my head in my sweater, just like my turtle buried his head in his shell to avoid notice.
The first volunteer was Ava. Unlike me, Ava just loved talking in front of people. She skipped to the front and showed us how to wire potatoes to produce electricity. It was cool, and I told her so when she passed my desk. My buddy Jayce got called on next. He demonstrated the Unpoppable Bubble. It was really good. I gave him a thumbs-up. “You did it, ” I mouthed.
“Michael, please. ” Michael. That was me. I guessed I forgot to keep my head buried. I walked to the front on shaking legs and set my birdhouse on the table. I swallowed the baseball-sized lump in my throat and started. “This is how to build a birdhouse. I looked online for plans and went to the woodyard with my dad, since I’m not old enough to drive. ” My classmates laughed and I could tell they appreciated my humor. Having gained some confidence, I went on with my words. “Someone there cut four pieces for the walls, and made the hole. ”
Luka’s hand shot up. “So what did you do ” he asked. I swallowed. The lump in my throat was now the size of a basketball. “I came up with the idea and I figured out how to hinge(加铰链) the roof so I can clean out the house after the birds leave. ” I lifted the roof to show everyone. Some kids stood up to see.
“Then I nailed all the walls together. ” I picked up the heavy hammer(锤子) borrowed from my dad: I had left one of the nails sticking out a little so I could demonstrate. As I gave the nail a mighty blow, the hammer came down on the roof instead of the nail. Smash!
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　　The roof caved in and the birdhouse fell apart. ______________________
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　　As the thunderous applause faded, Mrs Williams announced the start of the voting. _________________________________________________________
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【参考范文】
　　The roof caved in and the birdhouse fell apart. I stood there, rooted to the spot, my face flushing hot with embarrassment. I was sure that I was the laughingstock of the class. However, Ava quickly came to my rescue. “Look at this interesting roof structure!” she said, picking up a piece. Jayce chimed in, “Yeah, and those side panels are so well-designed. ” Encouraged by their kind words, I began to talk about the features I’d planned, like the special entrance size for small birds and the sloped roof to prevent rainwater buildup. The class listened intently, and I gradually regained my confidence.
As the thunderous applause faded, Mrs Williams announced the start of the voting. My heart was in my mouth. When she finally revealed that my project had won, I couldn’t believe my ears. “Michael’s project, ” Mrs Williams said, “reminds us that science is about creativity and the willingness to learn from failures. His courage to share, even after the setback, is what makes this project special. ” The whole class cheered for me. I sat down, feeling a sense of pride well up inside me, understanding that sometimes, unexpected turns can lead to the sweetest victories.
外刊原创 高考同源
Passage 2
I’d been considering the idea for weeks. But it wouldn’t work, would it Actually, I used to do similar things all the time. But with four small children, how could I make it happen I knew it would fail, and that it would be awful.
So, I tabled the idea, and as summer drew to a close, I prepared my two oldest to go to first and third grade. With twin babies at home, I was not very involved at school, only appearing for conferences and performances.
That’s why the idea felt so preposterous(荒谬的). A book club for moms at school I didn’t know any moms at school. A few friends from other fields whose children happened to attend the same school. But I could count them on one hand, and most of them had other obligations during the day. Where would I even start Who would ever want to come A book club for moms at school had “no way” written all over it.
In my former life, running a book club would have been a piece of cake. I’d probably have made a delicious cake and offered it to the book club. It would be perfect—candles lit, soft music playing, and well-prepared discussion questions. A thoughtful haven for my friends to discuss deep thoughts.
In my current life, a book club meant letting strangers see my messy house. Things wouldn’t be perfect. There would be store-bought snacks and no candles because of safety problems. There would be Mickey Mouse Clubhouse in the background. There would be distractions.
But the idea would not go away. Before I could think better of it, I grabbed all the class rosters from past school years and started texting down the lists.
“I’m starting a book club for school moms. . . ”SEND.
“. . . In my house, just a few miles from school. Are you interested ” SEND.
I invited everyone on the rosters.
Then, my phone started to buzz.
“Sure! I’d love to come this Wednesday!”
“YES! That sounds awesome!”
“Absolutely! What can I bring ”
注意: 续写词数应为150个左右。
The first Wednesday arrived.____________________________________
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　　As the months went on, we saw some of our book club ladies through tough times. _____________________________________________________
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【参考范文】
　　The first Wednesday arrived. I welcomed about a dozen strangers into my far-from-perfect home. As we sat down with our coffee, it was as if something subtly shifted. No longer were we just fellow school moms. Suddenly, we felt safe discussing everything. We laughed and cried as if we had known each other for a lifetime, when in reality it had been less than a half-hour for most of us. Something was happening here. . . something I didn’t expect. . . something beautiful. Something real.
As the months went on, we saw some of our book club ladies through tough times. Marriage issues. Job changes. A broken engagement. Infertility. Cancer diagnosis and treatment. Through it all, we were there for each other, offering words, meals, prayers, and encouragement. We were a group of former strangers turned supporters—no, sisters. Setting up the book club was a small, risky idea. But when I gave in, it changed my life. Because it was never supposed to be about books. It was about living unafraid and perfectly imperfect. . . together.
【备选习题】
Passage
(2025·广东模拟)
The lights shone above shelves that were lined with canned food. I took my place in line. Same routine, different week. The woman ahead of me coughed into her sleeve; the man behind shifted his weight from foot to foot. We all avoided eye contact, waiting in silence.
The groceries quieted my empty stomach but increased the ache I felt in my chest. Unemployment aid stopped three months ago. The red-inked warnings for rent popped up like mushrooms after rain. Watching a volunteer drying sweat off her face, I was happy that the staff at the food bank(食物救济站) were too busy to ask questions. Just show identity and take your bags of dignity.
But that Tuesday, something changed. A new volunteer came early twenties, wearing a coffee shop staff T-shirt. While others rushed, he arranged boxes of cookies like library books. His name tag read JOHN in capital letters. “Odd, ” I thought. “Who takes pride in sorting these ”
My turn to check out. “Mrs Thompson ” His voice held unexpected warmth, as if he had known me for years rather than seconds. “How has your week been ” The question caught me while I was reaching for my bags. No one here used names. My throat tightened. “Getting by, ” I said, my voice barely above a whisper. Then, to my amazement, I could not help adding that the bills were eating my savings alive as I had been unemployed for three months.
John’s eyes softened, and he moved closer. “That’s tough, ” he said, his voice steady. “Is there anything I can do to help ” I froze, caught off guard by his sincerity. My first reaction was to ignore it—I didn’t want to be a burden—so I forced a small smile and told him I would be fine. Before he could say more, I grabbed my heavy bags and hurried out.
注意: 续写词数应为150个左右。
　　I was struggling forward when someone called my name. _____________
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　　The next day, I came to the coffee shop for the interview. ______________
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【参考范文】
　　I was struggling forward when someone called my name. I turned to see John dashing towards me, panting heavily. “Mrs Thompson, ” he huffed and puffed, handing me a note, “here’s my coffee shop address and manager’s number. ” He added that the coffee shop was hiring cleaners and suggested that I might want to try. With a tired but sincere smile, he jogged back toward the food bank. Gripping the note, I felt its weight surpass even my heavy bags. Unemployment, along with the mounting rent and bill pressures resulting from it seemed to vanish instantly. Nightfall found my hands shaking as I called the manager. To my surprise, the manager responded immediately, scheduling an interview for the next day.
The next day, I came to the coffee shop for the interview. There stood John at the counter, arranging packaged coffees like library books. Spotting me, his eyes lit up with warmth. “Mrs Thompson, so glad you’re here!” he said softly, his steady voice wrapping around me like a cozy blanket, calming my interview nerves instantly. The interview process went smoothly—I started working the same day. Working with John provided me with more opportunities to observe how he took pride in his work, which deepened my determination not to be a burden on society but a contributor to this vibrant space. My encounter with John proved something greater: the unyielding force of compassion can light up the world like never before.
反复精读 识记积累
亮词 table v. 搁置 (Passage 2)
draw vi. 移动 (Passage 2)
美句 Luka’s hand shot up. (Passage 1)
分析: 动词短语 shot up 生动形象。
翻译: 卢卡猛地举起了手。
His voice held unexpected warmth, as if he had known me for years rather than seconds. (Passage)
此句是as if引导的虚拟语气的句子。
主题
升华句 I sat down, feeling a sense of pride well up inside me, understanding that sometimes, unexpected turns can lead to the sweetest victories. (Passage 1)
My encounter with John proved something greater: the unyielding force of compassion can light up the world like never before. (Passage)

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