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第八课时 Writing
单元主题
课标导向
本单元的主题是“自然奇观”，属于课标中的“人与自然”主题范畴，涉及“不同地区的生态特征与自然景观”“热爱与敬畏自然，与自然和谐共生”。
教材链接
本单元从探究自然界的神奇之处以及探索自然的原因两个方面来回答我们是如何与自然联系这个大问题。
写作目标
写作内容聚焦大自然的神奇景观，运用广告文体，学习用描述特色、列举活动等方式增强说服力，学会用英语有效传递信息、打动读者。
写作蓄势
一准确用词
地理描述
the northeastern coast of...……的东北海岸
be located on 位于……
be made up of 由……组成
stretch across 横跨
square kilometres 平方千米
over+数量 超过……
large/ the largest living structure
大型/最大的生物结构
活动体验
take a trip to 前往……的旅行
weather conditions 天气情况
宣传评价
be amazed by 对……感到惊叹
one of the natural wonders of the world
世界自然奇观之一
the dream of a lifetime 一生的梦想
二正确组句
Beginning(引起读者兴趣)
(1) Do you love the ocean Do you want to visit one of the natural wonders of the world If so，…(用疑问句引出下文，吸引读者兴趣)
(2) Have you ever dreamed of exploring a place where... Let me tell you about...(设问,引起读者兴趣)
(3) Located in/ on...,... is one of the world's most...(直接陈述，强调价值)
Body(环境描述与活动介绍)
(1) It takes up an area of 345,000 square kilometres and includes over 900 islands and numerous white sand beaches.(描写规模与构成)
(2) When you visit the Great Barrier Reef,you can swim in its clear water, dive to explore the colourful coral and large fish, or snorkel to get close to the amazing underwater world.(介绍活动体验)
(3) The Great Barrier Reef offers a variety of experiences; swimming in the sea, diving among the coral reefs to see large fish like turtles and sharks, and snorkelling to admire the beautiful underwater scenery.(活动体验)
Ending(总结评价)
(1) For people who love the ocean, visiting the Great Barrier Reef is the dream of a lifetime!(呼吁行动)
(2) In conclusion, the Great Barrier Reef onAustralia's northeastern coast is not just a natural wonder but a treasure that offers endless adventures and beautiful sights. It's a destination that should be on every traveller's list:(总结升华)
得分点 1. Have you ever dreamed of exploring a place9117where... 用设问引起读者共鸣。 2. When you visit the Great Barrier Reef, you can swim in its clear water, div e to explore the colourful coral and large fish, or snorkel to get close to the amazing underwater world. when 引导的时间状语从句使人身临其境；用动词的排比 swim、 dive 和 snorkel,表达活动的丰富性。
三布局参考
四以读促写
阅读下面短文，完成相应的任务。
Do you love beautiful mountains Do you want to see a breathtaking natural wonder ofChina If so, visit Mount Huangshan!
Located in Anhui Province, MountHuangshan is one of the most famous mountains to explore. It's renowned as a UNESCO WorldHeritage Site. Spanning a vast area, it's famous for its special pines(松树), strange rocks, and the Sea of Clouds. There are plenty of peaks,with the highest reaching over 1,800 metres.
Mount Huangshan is truly a living painting!When you visit it, you' ll be amazed by the special scenery. You can walk along the curvy paths,look at the old pine trees growing on the steep rocks, and be surprised by the strange rock shapes—————— they look like different magical animals.Early in the morning or after it rains, clouds wrap around the mountains. It feels like you' re in a magical place! For people who love natural beauty, a trip to Mount Huangshan is an experience of a lifetime!
任务：回答以下问题。
1. What makes Mount Huangshan so famous
2. What activities can you do in MountHuangshan
写作任务
假设你是一位拥有国际粉丝的旅行博主，在深度游览温州雁荡山后，你决定撰写一篇80词左右的英语推文,向外国游客推荐这个被誉为“东南第一山(No. I Mountain in Southeast China)”的奇幻之地。
What: Yandang Mountain
Where: Wenzhou, Zhejiang Province, China
Special fact: 450 km in size
Things to do: see strange-shaped rocks and volcanic rocks, visit wonderful waterfalls...
第八课时 Writing
四、任务：
1. Special pines, strange rocks, and the Sea of Clouds.
2. We can walk along the curvy paths, look at the old pine trees growing on the steep rocks, and watch the clouds wrap around the mountains.
写作任务
标准提分版：
Hey everyone!
Let me tell you about a great place— Yandang Mountain.It's in Wenzhou, Zhejiang Province, China. People call it“No.1Mountain in Southeast China”!
Yandang Mountain is big. It covers 450 square kilometres.There are many cool things to see here. You can find rocks in strange shapes— some look like animals! There are also special volcanic rocks. Don't miss the beautiful waterfalls, too.
If you love nature, you' ll have a good time e and visit Yandang Mountain!
进阶优化版：
Dear travellers,
Let me introduce a hidden gem in China— YandangMountain, known as“No.1 Mountain in Southeast China”.Tucked away in Wenzhou, Zhejiang Province, this natural wonder is waiting to amaze you.
It takes up an area of 450 square kilometres. Wander through its trails, and you' ll be captivated by the whimsical rock formations— some resembling mythical creatures, others telling stories of ancient volcanoes. The volcanic rocks, shaped by time and nature, add a raw, dramatic touch. And when you reach the waterfalls, their thunderous rush and misty spray will take your breath away.
Whether you' re a nature lover or an adventure seeker,Yandang Mountain promises an unforgettable journey. Pack your bags— this is one trip you won't regret!

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