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介绍信
1.文本类型:介绍你钦佩的一个人,属于记叙文范畴。
2.要点内容:
　　在介绍你钦佩的一个人时,要重点突出三个方面,即人物生平介绍、事迹叙述和简短的人物评价。生平介绍往往包括该人物的出生日期、出生地、家庭背景、教育背景。事迹叙述也是人物写作的重要部分,主要是写人物作出的贡献或者取得的成就。人物评价是对所描述的人物进行评价,评价需客观公正。
1.介绍人物的背景信息。
...was born in.../ into a... family.../at the age of.../ when... was young...
2.介绍人物的爱好特长。
be good at/do well in/be expert in/have a talent for/have a gift for/be qualified for/be fit for/have a good knowledge/command of/with a great passion for ...
3.介绍人物的经历和成就。
be committed/devoted to.../insist on.../be determined to.../overcome many difficulties/make great contributions to.../contribute to...
4.对人物的评价。
set a good example to us /a model teacher/worker/be respected by all/think highly of.../be honoured as
5.常用来描写人物的形容词。
determined (坚决的)/warm-hearted(热心肠的)/easy-going(随和的)/energetic(精力充沛的)/generous(慷慨的)/intelligent(聪明的)/ambitious(有雄心的)/humorous(幽默的)/diligent (勤奋的)/attractive (有吸引力的)/patient (耐心的)/strict (严格的)/considerate(考虑周到的)/outstanding (杰出的)/optimistic(乐观的)/enthusiastic(热情的)/bad-tempered(脾气不好的)/reliable(可信赖的)/confident(自信的)/respectable(值得尊重的)
6.介绍人物常用句型。
(1)精彩首段。
My favourite teacher is...a responsible teacher with over 20 years’ teaching experience.
我最喜欢的老师是……一位有20多年的教学经验,有责任心的老师。
Abraham Lincoln,the son of a poor family,was born in Kentucky on 12 February 1809.
亚伯拉罕·林肯,一个贫苦家庭的儿子,于1809年2月12日出生于肯塔基州。
Born in Xiamen in 1901,Lin Qiaozhi was considered as one of the greatest doctors in China.
林巧稚1901年出生于厦门,被认为是中国最杰出的医生之一。
(2)正文描述。
Devoted to community activities,she was highly thought of by the people around.
她积极参加社区活动,深受周围人的好评。
When he was still a boy,he showed great interest in literature.
当他还是个孩子的时候,他对文学表现出了极大的兴趣。
Being optimistic and energetic,he often takes an active part in after-class activities.
他性格乐观,精力充沛,经常积极参加课外活动。
He went to college,during which he showed great interest in folk music.
他上了大学,在大学期间他对民间音乐表现出极大的兴趣。
Not only is he gifted in English but also he has a good command of French.
他不仅擅长英语,而且法语也很好。
(3)精彩结尾。
He set a new world record in the competition,for which everyone thought highly of him.
他在比赛中创造了一项新的世界纪录,为此每个人对他评价都很高。
He is still widely remembered for his skill,his kindness,and his deep love for his country.
他仍然因为他的技能、善良和对祖国的热爱而被广泛铭记。
We regard him as our model.
我们把他当作我们的榜样。
　　请根据下面的提示写一篇英语短文,介绍你所敬佩的一个人物。主要包括以下内容:
姓名 黄大年
生卒年月 1958年8月至2017年1月
职业 教育科研工作者
成就 对中国的教育和科研事业作出了巨大贡献,帮助国家在深度探测地球方面取得进展
评价 不计个人名利,把自己的科技成果和经验全部奉献给祖国,在国内外学术界享有很高的声誉
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
Ⅰ.对接话题词汇
1.committed adj.尽心尽力的;坚定的;坚信的
2.objective n.目标;目的adj.客观的
3.acknowledge vt.承认(属实、权威等);(公开)感谢
4.numerous adj.众多的;许多的
5.extraordinary adj.不一般的;非凡的;意想不到的
6.consequence n.结果;后果
Ⅱ.巧用核心句式、语法
1.黄大年是我最敬佩的人。他取得了非凡的成就,是公认的著名地球物理学家。
Huang Danian is the person I admire most.He made extraordinary achievements and he is acknowledged as a famous geophysicist.
2.他出生于1958年8月,毕业于长春地质学院。
He was born in August 1958 and he graduated from Changchun College of Geology.
3.1992年,他被派到英国攻读博士。他的目标是掌握物理领域的高端技术。
In 1992,he was sent to the UK to study for a doctor’s degree.His objective was to grasp the high-end technology in physical field.
4.2009年,他放弃国外优厚的待遇,回到母校,致力于科研和教学工作。
In 2009,he gave up well-paid reward abroad,returned to his mother college and committed himself to teaching and research.
5.他不计名利,把自己的科技成果全部奉献给祖国。
He cared little about fame and money and he devoted all his scientific and technical payoffs to the motherland.
6.正因如此,他在国内外享有很高的声誉。
As a consequence,he enjoyed a high reputation both at home and abroad.
1.用非限制性定语从句升级句1。
2.用with介词短语连接句3中的两个句子。
3.用过去分词作状语升级句4。
4.用非谓语动词作状语升级句5。
　　假设你是李华,你校英语报社正在开展以“The Person I Admire Most”为主题的征文活动,请用英语写一篇文章投稿。内容如下:
1.你最敬佩的人——袁隆平;
2.他的主要事迹;
3.你对他的评价。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。写作专项指导
介绍信
1.文本类型:介绍你钦佩的一个人,属于记叙文范畴。
2.要点内容:
　　在介绍你钦佩的一个人时,要重点突出三个方面,即人物生平介绍、事迹叙述和简短的人物评价。生平介绍往往包括该人物的出生日期、出生地、家庭背景、教育背景。事迹叙述也是人物写作的重要部分,主要是写人物作出的贡献或者取得的成就。人物评价是对所描述的人物进行评价,评价需客观公正。
1.介绍人物的背景信息。
...was born in.../ into a... family.../at the age of.../ when... was young...
2.介绍人物的爱好特长。
be good at/do well in/be expert in/have a talent for/have a gift for/be qualified for/be fit for/have a good knowledge/command of/with a great passion for ...
3.介绍人物的经历和成就。
be committed/devoted to.../insist on.../be determined to.../overcome many difficulties/make great contributions to.../contribute to...
4.对人物的评价。
set a good example to us /a model teacher/worker/be respected by all/think highly of.../be honoured as
5.常用来描写人物的形容词。
determined (坚决的)/warm-hearted(热心肠的)/easy-going(随和的)/energetic(精力充沛的)/generous(慷慨的)/intelligent(聪明的)/ambitious(有雄心的)/humorous(幽默的)/diligent (勤奋的)/attractive (有吸引力的)/patient (耐心的)/strict (严格的)/considerate(考虑周到的)/outstanding (杰出的)/optimistic(乐观的)/enthusiastic(热情的)/bad-tempered(脾气不好的)/reliable(可信赖的)/confident(自信的)/respectable(值得尊重的)
6.介绍人物常用句型。
(1)精彩首段。
My favourite teacher is...a responsible teacher with over 20 years’ teaching experience.
我最喜欢的老师是……一位有20多年的教学经验,有责任心的老师。
Abraham Lincoln,the son of a poor family,was born in Kentucky on 12 February 1809.
亚伯拉罕·林肯,一个贫苦家庭的儿子,于1809年2月12日出生于肯塔基州。
Born in Xiamen in 1901,Lin Qiaozhi was considered as one of the greatest doctors in China.
林巧稚1901年出生于厦门,被认为是中国最杰出的医生之一。
(2)正文描述。
Devoted to community activities,she was highly thought of by the people around.
她积极参加社区活动,深受周围人的好评。
When he was still a boy,he showed great interest in literature.
当他还是个孩子的时候,他对文学表现出了极大的兴趣。
Being optimistic and energetic,he often takes an active part in after-class activities.
他性格乐观,精力充沛,经常积极参加课外活动。
He went to college,during which he showed great interest in folk music.
他上了大学,在大学期间他对民间音乐表现出极大的兴趣。
Not only is he gifted in English but also he has a good command of French.
他不仅擅长英语,而且法语也很好。
(3)精彩结尾。
He set a new world record in the competition,for which everyone thought highly of him.
他在比赛中创造了一项新的世界纪录,为此每个人对他评价都很高。
He is still widely remembered for his skill,his kindness,and his deep love for his country.
他仍然因为他的技能、善良和对祖国的热爱而被广泛铭记。
We regard him as our model.
我们把他当作我们的榜样。
　　请根据下面的提示写一篇英语短文,介绍你所敬佩的一个人物。主要包括以下内容:
姓名 黄大年
生卒年月 1958年8月至2017年1月
职业 教育科研工作者
成就 对中国的教育和科研事业作出了巨大贡献,帮助国家在深度探测地球方面取得进展
评价 不计个人名利,把自己的科技成果和经验全部奉献给祖国,在国内外学术界享有很高的声誉
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
Ⅰ.对接话题词汇
1.committed adj.尽心尽力的;坚定的;坚信的
2.objective n.目标;目的adj.客观的
3.acknowledge vt.承认(属实、权威等);(公开)感谢
4.numerous adj.众多的;许多的
5.extraordinary adj.不一般的;非凡的;意想不到的
6.consequence n.结果;后果
Ⅱ.巧用核心句式、语法
1.黄大年是我最敬佩的人。他取得了非凡的成就,是公认的著名地球物理学家。
Huang Danian is the person I admire most.He made extraordinary achievements and he is acknowledged as a famous geophysicist.
2.他出生于1958年8月,毕业于长春地质学院。
He was born in August 1958 and he graduated from Changchun College of Geology.
3.1992年,他被派到英国攻读博士。他的目标是掌握物理领域的高端技术。
In 1992,he was sent to the UK to study for a doctor’s degree.His objective was to grasp the high-end technology in physical field.
4.2009年,他放弃国外优厚的待遇,回到母校,致力于科研和教学工作。
In 2009,he gave up well-paid reward abroad,returned to his mother college and committed himself to teaching and research.
5.他不计名利,把自己的科技成果全部奉献给祖国。
He cared little about fame and money and he devoted all his scientific and technical payoffs to the motherland.
6.正因如此,他在国内外享有很高的声誉。
As a consequence,he enjoyed a high reputation both at home and abroad.
1.用非限制性定语从句升级句1。
2.用with介词短语连接句3中的两个句子。
3.用过去分词作状语升级句4。
4.用非谓语动词作状语升级句5。
答案:1.Huang Danian is the person I admire most,who made extraordinary achievements and is acknowledged as a famous geophysicist.
2.In 1992,he was sent to the UK to study for a doctor’s degree with the objective of grasping the high-end technology in physical field.
3.In 2009,he gave up well-paid reward abroad and returned to his mother college,committed himself to teaching and research.
4.He cared little about fame and money,devoting all his scientific and technical payoffs to the motherland.
Huang Danian is the person I admire most,who made extraordinary achievements and is acknowledged as a famous geophysicist.
He was born in August 1958 and he graduated from Changchun College of Geology.In 1992,he was sent to the UK to study for a doctor’s degree with the objective of mastering the high-end technology in physical field.In 2009,he gave up well-paid reward abroad and returned to his mother college,committed himself to teaching and research.He also helped the country achieve advances in deep-earth exploration.
He cared little about fame and money,devoting all his scientific and technical payoffs to the motherland.As a consequence,he enjoyed a high reputation both at home and abroad.
　　假设你是李华,你校英语报社正在开展以“The Person I Admire Most”为主题的征文活动,请用英语写一篇文章投稿。内容如下:
1.你最敬佩的人——袁隆平;
2.他的主要事迹;
3.你对他的评价。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
One possible version:
Yuan Longping,acknowledged as the “father of hybrid rice”,is the person I admire most.
Born in 1930 in Beijing,he graduated from Southwest Agricultural College in 1953.As a researcher,insisting that hybrid rice was an effective way to fight the world hunger,he committed himself to developing hybrid rice despite numerous difficulties he encountered.Through his great efforts,the hybrid rice was finally developed,whose various strains later helped feed people at home and abroad,which earned him many awards.However,he cared little about fame or wealth,making large donations to support agricultural research.
Such was Yuan Longping,who had remarkable achievements but remained devoted and plain.

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